I'll read stories

[Tom 437]

Free of charge.

 

If anyone wants me to read any of their stories, then feel free to post links here and I'll respond to them to the page. Just remember that I'll give out my personal critisim and my honest opinion of the story, so don't feel offended if they're something negative about (which isn't really negative, it's to point out the problems of the story and see if we can correct them).

 

Please try not to post a brand new story and have me read only what you have. I can't really get too much out of an introduction and/or Chapter 1. Work on it for a bit and then perhaps ask me.

 

Also, no poems. Sorry >.<

 

If I posted on your story, without acknowledge of you asking me to read it, it just means I got bored and I took a break from writing mine.

[Godot 513]

awshit, I had one that I need critique on, but it's only a chapter long, atm. .w.

 

I'll ask you again once I've gotten off my lazy ass and updated.

[Think Pink 1,967]

/isboredashell

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12011&pid=269270#pid269270

[Tricia-chan 42]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5698225/1/What_Youre_Sorry_For

 

I wrote this last January, all in one day. I didn't get as much reviews as I hoped for. ._.'

[Koko 3,944]

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12111

 

DO IT.

[Antrium 10]

It's in my sig man, knoc yourself out!

[Hige Unari 5]

its right here!!!!!!!!!!!! its longish....so far http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=10857

[Sorage55 10]

I'd ask, but I think you might have read them already mate. But whatever:

 

Masked (The Inevitable Trio)

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12347

[heartless101 83]

Can you please read this story: I need some criticsism (take in mind that if there are some problems with my grammar, it's because that my teacher for English hasn't taught much of grammar so far this year and I'm only 12)

 

 

 

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=9192

 

 

Thanks in advance

[Cyber Shaman 990]

I dont know how to put an link but go to writting and if you see kh1000 years ago. that's mine

 

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12359&pid=275000#pid275000

[heartless101 83]

I dont know how to put an link but go to writting and if you see kh1000 years ago. that's mine

 

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12359&pid=275000#pid275000

 

Please try not to post a brand new story and have me read only what you have. I can't really get too much out of an introduction and/or Chapter 1. Work on it for a bit and then perhaps ask me.

 

*sigh*

 

Also, you don't have to do it, if you do't want to but can you read this story also, sorry if I'm being pushy

 

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=6449&page=1

[Cyber Shaman 990]

 

I dont know how to put an link but go to writting and if you see kh1000 years ago. that's mine

 

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=12359&pid=275000#pid275000

 

Please try not to post a brand new story and have me read only what you have. I can't really get too much out of an introduction and/or Chapter 1. Work on it for a bit and then perhaps ask me.

 

*sigh*

 

i didn't know =(

[Tom 437]

Ok, well I totally forgot about this thread.

 

Anyways, I posted on most of the links you guys provided me. I haven't gotten all of them, so be patient or whatever.

 

I got to say, some of the stories are looking good so far.

[Cyber Shaman 990]

Which one?

[khoathkeeper13 429]

http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=11536

It's my version of KH3D dang it! I still need to finish the next chapter.... err I got hooked on reading Percy Jackson >.<

[sota9 4]

I've got one but only one chapter.

[DragonMaster 1,166]

Hope you don't mind me reviving this thread.

 

Anyway, I just completed my story, Dark Heart. It is a KH fan-fiction, and I tried to make it as loyal to the story as possible. I am already aware of some of my problems (which are especially obvious in early chapters, eg. excessive use of dialog) but I would love a second set of eyes to help me out. All the chapters are linked to in the first post. Be forewarned, it is rather long, and some of the chapters are in the same post.

 

You can get to my story by clicking here, clicking the link in my signature, or by going into the Writing section and finding it.