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Introduction:

When Sora was on his journey to save Terra, Aqua, Ven, Axel, Roxas, Xion, and Namine, there was another keyblade weilder beginning his journey to become a keyblade master. The boy's name was Aero. He was in training in the Land of Departure along with his female friend Mizu (means Water in Japanese) and his male friend and rival Tsuchi (means Earth in Japanese). Aero, Mizu, and Tsuchi are training under their master, Master Hinote (hinote means fire in Japanese). Aero was about 17, Mizu was about 18, and Tsuchi was about 19 and Master Hinote is about 59. Little did they know that new enemies await to destroy the keyblade weilders of the light. His name was Ankoku. He too was a keyblade weilder but of the dark.

 

 

Prolague: Aero, Mizu and Tsuchi were in the palace of Land of Departure. Master Hinote was in the palace and said "We are ready to begin the training for our keyblade apprentices: Aero, Mizu, and Tsuchi. They all are formidable keyblade weilders and are all very talented. "Let's begin the Keyblade Master training! As you know, only two can become the keyblade master out of you three. Let the training begin!" exclaimed Master Hinote shouted. He summoned orbs of light. Aero summoned his Kingdom Key, Mizu summoned her Flames of Bond, and Tsuchi summoned his Way to Dawn. "Guys are you ready?" asked Aero to his two friends. Mizu smiled "Of course" said Mizu. Tsuchi smirked "Of course, shrimp, Mizu and I are gonna become keyblade masters while you, shrimp can try out next year" Aero smiled a little bit at his name "shirmp" "Heh, not a chance, Mizu and I are gonna become keyblade masters" said Aero. Meanwhile, unseen, a man, who looked like he was about 25 snuck into the arena and turned the orbs of light into orbs of darkness. "What's going on" asked Mizu. "I'm not sure" said Master Hinote. "Whatever, let's get this over with" said Tsuchi. Aero smiled cunningly. All 3 of them charged at the orbs of darkness

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I like it so far (: I can't wait for Chapter 1! ^^

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The Training of the Keyblade Weilders Chapter 1:

Aero gripped his Kingdom Key tightly. (I can't believe that this is my chance to become a keyblade master. I cannot fail no matter what.) thought Aero. Mizu got out her Flames of Bond. (This is my dream. I have to become a keyblade master. I'm not sure about the other boys but I need to become a keyblade master.) thought Mizu. Tsuchi summoned his Way to Dawn. (I have to become a keyblade master no matter what. It's been my dream for a long time. Now that I'm here, I can't fail right now. I'm so close)) thought Tsuchi. Aero charged at the orbs of darkness and Aero sent blizzard to defeat one of the orbs. Tsuchi slashed a orb to defeat it. Mizu sent fiagra at the orb to defeat it. But for some reason, after the defeated seven of them, more of them kept on coming. Aero used aero to force the orb up in the air and then he slashed the orb. Tsuchi used earth shaker to defeat 2 of the orbs. Finally, Aero defeated the last orb. Master Hinote, once he saw the keyblade weilders defeat the orbs was ready for his final announcment. "For the final test, Aero, Tsuchi, Mizu, you must battle each other. All weapons are allowed. Except for 2 things. Dual weilding of course. And for sure, without darkness. If you use any of those 2 things, you are immediatly disqualified from the competition from the keyblade master competition." said Master Hinote. "Let the final battle of the keyblade weilders begin!" exclaimed Master Hinote. Mizu, Aero, and Tsuchi got into a spaced out triangle and got into their fighting stances.

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End of Chapter 1

Another really good chapter. ^^ I think it'll be Aero and Mizu who get to become Keyblade Masters.

I think it'll be Aero and Tsuchi.

Great story!! Keep writing!

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The Keyblade Masters Chapter 2:

Aero, Mizu, and Tsuchi clashed weapons. (I have to win at all costs) thought Aero. (Becoming a keyblade master is my destiny. It has been my dream for a long time. I can't loose right now!) thought Tsuchi. Mizu used thundagra on Tsuchi and Aero, but both of them dodged it. Aero used blizardagra on both of them, but only Mizu could dodge it; however, Tsuchi got hit by it. Outside the palace, Ankoku was watching the keyblade weilders battle each other. He was interested in the fight but he was interested the most in Tsuchi. Mizu kicked Aero and then sent a wave of water at him and Aero got hit to the ground. Tsuchi used earthagra which was a huge rock pillar that hit Mizu. Mizu got thrown to the ground. (That... was his strongest attack!) thought Mizu. Mizu got up and sent water waves at both of them and both of them got thrown to the ground. Aero used Aeroagra and both of them were thrown up in the air and Aero slashed them both to the ground. Tsuchi got up very slowly, and there was a tiny speck of darkness at his hand. Master Hinote examined Tsuchi closely but decided it was just nothing. Tsuchi used earthagra on Aero and Aero was thrown flying to the wall. (Ugh!) thought Aero. (That was a strong attack) thought Aero. Mizu charged at Tsuchi and slashed him with her Bond of Flame, but Tsuchi blocked it and counter attacked and sent her flying to a wall. Mizu clenched her fist. (I need to become a keyblade master no matter what!) thought Mizu. Mizu put away her Bond of Flame. Master Hinote, Aero, and Tsuchi were stunned for a moment and all thought (Is she giving up?) but suddenly, Mizu summoned a different keyblade. It was the Thunder Blade. It looked like a regular keyblade, but the key chain had a huge thunder bolt. "I'm not giving up Aero and Tsuchi. I'm not sure who one of you will be a keyblade master but I know that other one... will be me!" exclaimed Mizu. Mizu sent thundagra at Aero and Aero was shocked really bad. Aero looked like he was about to be finished. (... I can... barley... go... on... any...more) thought Aero. Aero got up slowly and charged at Mizu and used meteoragra on both of them. (... What... is that?) thought Mizu. (...Is that... his strongest attack?) thought Tsuchi. Aero clenched his fist. (I need to use this attack to become a keyblade master... but what if I hurt them... no, I need to use this attack) thought 'Aero. "Sorry, Mizu and Tsuchi, but I need to become a keyblade master. At all costs. I'm not sure which one of you wll become a keyblade master, but I'm the one who will become a keyblade master!" exclaimed Aero. Aero sent meteors at the two of them. Mizu was hit by half of the meteors and Tsuchi was hit by half of the meteors. Tsuchi used earthagra on both of them and they were thrown to the ground. Master Hinote stepped in. "The time of training is up guys. I will re evaluate how you guys did, and when I come back, I will decide which 2 of you will become a keyblade master. Would you 3 please step out" asked Master Hinote. The 3 of them went to their rooms.

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End of Chapter 2

I liked this chapter. ^^ I still think it'll be Aero and Mizu.

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The Examination Chapter 3:

Master Hinote took out the video cameras that were inside the room and viewed the fight once again. (I'm not sure who to choose) thought Master Hinote. Master Hinote watched Tsuchi, Aero, and Mizu all do well in the final challenge. Master Hinote watched all thoroughout the fight but stopped when he saw a speck of black on Tsuchi's hand. He watched through the rest of the fight. Secretly, Ankoku watched the fight as well. Master Hinote opened up a portal and called Merlin and Yen Sid to come in. "All right Merlin and Master Yen Sid. We are here to evaluate who will become the keyblade master. Here is the tape for the whole entire fight" said Master Hinote. Master Hinote handed Merlin and Yen Sid the video camera that took the video of the training. "Interesting" muttered Yen Sid. "I thought that all 3 of them did really well" said Merlin. Yen Sid paced around slowly. "I think that Aero, quite honestly, did better later, but was bad at the beginning, but he did really well at the end. At the end, he reminded me of one person that I knew, who was Ventus." said Yen Sid. "I think that Girl, Mizu did well. But, I think that she didn't do so well at the end. She was pretty much the opposite as Aero, who was bad at the beggining, great at the end." said Merlin. "And I think for Tsuchi, I thought that he did the best out of the three. He was the most consistent." said Master Hinote. "Did you guys catch anything eye balling?" asked Master Hinote. "Yes" said Merlin. Yen Sid nooded. "I think we've reached our decision" said Master Hinote. "I'm set" said Merlin. "Yeah" said Yen Sid. Master Hinote rang the bell and Mizu, Aero, and Tsuchi walked back into the palace. "Tsuchi, Mizu, Aero... we have reached our decision" said Master Hinote. "I have to hand it to the 3 of you, you guys are so good" said Yen Sid. "Unfortuantly as you know, only 2 can become a keyblade master" said Merlin. (I have to win this. I'm so close. I think I've got this in the bag) thought the 3 of them. Master Hinote looked at the 3 of them. "Aero..." said Master Hinote. "Congratulations, you have become a keyblade master" said Yen Sid. Aero sighed with relief. "Thank you masters" said Aero. Master Hinote looked at Mizu and Tsuchi. "You two have the qualities of becoming a keyblade master but unfortuantly, we can only crown one of you to become the 2nd keyblade master..." said Merlin. "Tsuchi..." said Master Hinote.

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End of Chapter 3.

Yes I am aware that in this chapter that I did not say wether Tsuchi became a keyblade master. Come on! I'm trying to keep this interesting. If you want to find out who will become the other keyblade master keep on reading!

No!!!!! Darn you!!!!! You better write me another chapter fast!!!!

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The Darkness Chapter 4:

Master Hinote looked at Tsuchi. "Tsuchi..." said Hinote. (This is it! It's either I become a keyblade master or not) thought Tsuchi. "... I'm sorry Tsuchi. You will not become the next keyblade master" said Master Hinote. Tscuhi looked devestated. (I can't believe it. I thought that I did the best out of the 3.) thought Tsuchi. "Good job Mizu" said Tsuchi. "You too Aero" said Tsuchi. "Thanks" said both of them. "Congratulations Mizu." said Master Hinote. Yen Sid looked at Tsuchi. "Tsuchi, you actually did the best out of the three. You are a very skilled keyblade master; however, at some point in the exhibition battle, we saw some darkness on your hand... and that's why you have not become a keyblade master" said Yen Sid. Tsuchi looked somewhat uncomfortable. "Well, thank you, Master Yen Sid, Master Hinote, and Master Merlin" said Tsuchi. Tsuchi went outside and he saw a hooded man. "Who are you?" asked Tsuchi. "I've watched your growth very closely. Tsuchi" said the hooded man. "Remember this, darkness cannot be destroyed, it can only be channeled." said the hooded man. "We will talk sometime later" said the hooded man. The hooded man left. (Well that was weird. What did he mean by darkness cannot be destroyed, it can only be channeled? And how did he know me?) thought Tsuchi. Master Hinote rang the bell and Tsuchi came back in. "We are here to make a announcement. Chaos has struck the worlds. The Universed, Heartless, and Nobodies have returned. And also, Master Sora, Master Riku, Master Kairi, and all the other masters have gone missing" said Master Hinote. Aero, Mizu, and Tsuchi all looked shocked. They have studied Sora, Riku, Kairi and the other keyblade masters. Yen Sid looked at the 3 of them. "We need you 3 to defeat the Universed, Heartless, and Nobodies and find the masters." said Yen Sid. Master Hinote looked at Tsuchi. "Tsuchi, if you are able to find Master Sora, Master Riku, and Master Kairi, then you will become a keyblade master" said Master Hinote. Tsuchi looked stunned. He couldn't believe that he could get a 2nd chance. "Don't worry sir! I won't fail" said Master Hinote. Merlin nodded. "Alright then, you 3 are permitted to go to the different worlds." said Merlin. Tsuchi walked out first and went on his Way to Dawn Keyblade Rider and went to Enchanted Dormain. Aero went to Drawf Woodlands on his Kingdom Key Keyblade Rider. Meanwhile, Mizu was talking to Master Hinote. "Mizu, if Tsuchi's powers and his hunger to become a keyblade master proves to be too much for him, then I want you to bring him to me at once" said Master Hinote. Mizu looked sad. "He's not as weak as you think" said Mizu. Mizu went on her Thunder Blade Keyblade Rider and went to Traverse Town.

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End of Chapter 4

Another great chapter (:

Mizu = Aqua

Aero = Ventus

Tsuchi = Terra

Right? Yay! I really like Tsuchi right now.

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Chapter 5 The Traveling of the Worlds:

Tsuchi walked around Enchanted Dormain. (There's darkness... inside me?) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi saw some Universed and Tsuchi summoned his Way to Dawn. Tsuchi used earthagra and pointy rocks were summoned out of the ground and most of the Universed were defeated except for one Universed who was going to the castle. "No you don't!" exclaimed Tsuchi

Meanwhile at Castle of Dreams...

Aero was stuck in some mouse trap. Aero walked all around the mouse trap but couldn't find a way out. "HELP ME!!!!!!!!" exclaimed Aero. A brown mouse came to where the mouse trap was. "Oh my god! This dude is in a mouse trap! I have to help him!" exclaimed the mouse. "Don't worry, I'll get you out" The brown mouse started to scramble to where the servant girl was.

Meanwhile at Traverse Town...

Mizu walked around the 1st District. (It doesn't seem there's any heartless, universed, or nobodies over here) thought Mizu. Mizu saw some heartless near a door. (There's some!) thought Mizu. Mizu used blizzard on the heartless and the heartless were defeated. Mizu knocked on the door. A elderly man came out of the door. "Are they gone?" asked the elderly man. "Yeah" said Mizu. "Thank you!" exclaimed the old man. Mizu saw some boy inside the door. "Hey, what's his name?" asked Mizu. "Oh, thats the boy puppet, Phincoio" said the old man. "I'm like the father of Phinocio, I'm Gepetto" said Gepetto

Meanwhile at Enchanted Dormain...

Tsuchi saw the Universed, and it was approaching the castle. Tsuchi slashed through the Universed to defeat it. He also saw some person there. She looked like a witch. She had a thin brown staff and on top of the staff, was a green thing. Tsuchi approached her. "Who are you?" asked Tsuchi. The woman turned. "I'm Maleficent" said Maleficent. "What's your name?" asked Maleficent. "I'm Tsuchi, have you seen anyone by the name of Master Sora, Master Riku, or Master Kairi?" asked Tsuchi. Maleficent kept a straight face but thought (Hmm interesting. This boy not only has darkness inside him, but he seems to be very convinced easily) thought Maleficent. (I've seen Sora up here, and another man) thought Maleficent. "I've seen Sora up here in the castle" said Maleficent. "Thank you" said Tsuchi. Tsuchi ran up to the castle and Maleficent smiled. (Perhaps I can use Tsuchi like I did to Terra and Riku) thought Maleficent.

Meanwhile at Castle of Dreams...

The mouse scrambeled to where the servant girl was. "Cinderella! Cinderella! Hurry! Hurry!" exclaimed the mouse. "What's happened?" asked Cinderella. "There's a boy... inside a mouse trap!" exclaimed the mouse. Aero walked around inside the mouse trap but couldn't find any way out. "THERE'S NO WAY OUT!!!!" shouted Aero. Cinderella entered the room where the mouse trap was. Aero saw the girl and scrambeled to the end of the mouse trap. Cinderella opened the mouse trap. "There you go... huh?" asked Cinderella. She saw Aero not moving and Aero opened up hie eyes and looked embarassed. Cinderella gently dropped the mouse trap. The mouse walked into the mouse trap. "Good to see you out of the mouse trap. I'm Jaq" said the mouse. "I'm Aero" said Aero. "Thank you" said Aero to Cinderella. "Your welcome" said Cinderella. Aero and Jaq walked out of the mouse trap.

Meanwhile at Traverse Town...

Mizu walked inside the house. "Oh! Mizu, the weapon that your weilding, the keyblade isn't it?" asked Gepetto. Mizu looked alarmed at first. "Don't worry, I'm not a heartless. I've met another boy before who had a keyblade." Gepetto said. Mizu looked at Gepetto. "Was the boy's name, Tsuchi, or Aero by any chance?" asked Mizu. "No." said Gepetto. "His name was... I believe Sora... I met him a few years ago. He saved us from a whale" said Gepetto. "What?! Do you know the whereabouts of Sora?! I'm looking for him! My master assigned me a mission to look for Sora, Riku and Kairi." said Mizu. "No, I'm sorry Mizu, we do not know the whereabouts of Sora" said Gepetto. "Five people are looking for you. Their names are Leon, Aerieth, Yuffie, Merlin, and Cid. They're looking for keyblade weirlders. In fact... don't get your hopes up, but it is possible that they might know where Sora and the others are" said Gepetto. Mizu stood up. "Please, where can I find those people?" asked Mizu. "Ehh, I think they're up on the 2nd district" said Gepetto. "Thank you Gepetto" said Mizu. "Your welcome. Thank you for saving us from the heartless" said Gepetto. "No problem" said Mizu. Mizu left for the 2nd District.

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End of Chapter 5. Well want to find out if Sora is still in the castle of Enchanted Dormain? Will Aero find anybody in Castle of Dreams? Will Leon and the others know where Sora is? If you want to find out, read chapter 6 which will be published by the latest of tomorrow! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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Another awesome chapter

D: how dare you make so many cliffhangers!

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The Result of the Worlds Chapter 6:

Tsuchi fought some more heartless by sending huge rocks out of the ground. (I have to find Master Sora here somewhere) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi slashed the rest of them. (There's still nothing here. Master Sora is no where to be found) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi saw a door that was covered by a purple barrier and in the middle, there seemed to be a lock that seemed as if there was something behind the door. Tsuchi leaped back and used his keyblade to unlock the door. Tsuchi entered the door.

Meanwhile, at Castle of Dreams...

Aero defeated some heartless by using aeroagra. Aero slashed through the rest of the heartless. Jaq approached Aero. "Wow Aero! You're really strong." said Jaq. "Thanks" said Aero. "Speaking of which, there are a bunch of those creatures in another room" said Jaq. "I'll go check" said Aero. Aero ran into the room that Jaq was talking about.

Meanwhile at Traverse Town...

Mizu went to the 2nd District. (I think that this was the 2nd District that Gepetto was talking about.) thought Mizu. Mizu saw a dead end. "Weird, is this the 2nd district?" asked Mizu. Mizu saw one brick that was pulled out in front more than the others. "This must be some type of secret entrance. Maybe Leon, Aerieth, Yuffie, Merlin, and Cid are here" said Mizu. Mizu pressed the brick that was out of place and some bricks formed a door which Mizu entered.

Meanwhile at Enchanted Dormain...

Tsuchi entered the door which he unlocked. He saw a woman sleeping. "Who is this person?" asked Tsuchi out loud. "That is Princess Aurora, the one princess of 7 hearts" said someone. Tsuchi turned around and saw Maleficent. "What is the princess of 7 hearts?" asked Tsuchi. "The princess of 7 hearts have the power to complete Kingdom Hearts once their hearts are all together, but first, before Kingdom Hearts is opened, the keyblade is needed." said Maleficent. Tsuchi summoned his keyblade looking alarmed. "How do you know the keyblade?" asked Tsuchi. "You question too much" said Maleficent. "Tell me! Where is Master Sora???" asked Tsuchi glaring at Maleficent. "Release Princess Aurora's heart, then I will give you the answers" said Maleficent. "Do you think that I'll actually do that?" asked Tsuchi. "I've heard your quite obidient." said Maleficent. Her staff startedto glow. "I can see darkness in your heart just waiting to be awakened" said Maleficent smirking. Suddenly, Tsuchi started to grow green. "I don't have darkness... within me" said Tsuchi. "Surrender to darkness. Let the darkness consume you. Darkness is not your enemy." said Maleficent. Tsuchi doubled over and stopped glowing green. When he stood back up straight, he looked hypnotized. Tsuhch summoned his Way to Dawn and released Princess Aurora's heart.

Meanwhile at Castle of Dreams...

Aero fought some heartless by using aeroagra and then sliced through the rest of them. (I guess Jaq was right, there are so many heartless) thought Aero. Aero kicked some heartless and they were thrown into the nobodies.

Meanwhile at Traverse Town...

Mizu saw a waterway path and saw 5 people. "Are one of you Leon?" asked Mizu. A taller man with a black jacket looked at Mizu. "Yeah, I'm Leon." said Leon. "I'm Mizu." said Mizu. "So, do you have the keyblade?" asked Leon. "Yeah" said Mizu. "The keyblade is a powerful weapon. You must weild it wisely. As long as you weild it, the heartless universed and nobodies will stop at nothing to obtain your heart" said Leon. "I know that." said Mizu. "Do you know anyone named Sora?" asked Mizu. "Yeah" said Leon. "We..."

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End of Chapter 6. Well, does Leon know where Sora is? Will the heartless nobodies and universed prove to be too many of them? Will Tsuchi side with Maleficent? Keep on reading!

watch your spelling & grammar, and double-enter when you want a new paragraph so its easier to read.

 

'Aero defeated some heartless by using aeroagra. Aero slashed through the rest of the heartless. Jaq approached Aero. "Wow Aero! You're really strong." said Jaq. "Thanks" said Aero. "Speaking of which, there are a bunch of those creatures in another room" said Jaq. "I'll go check" said Aero. Aero ran into the room that Jaq was talking about.'

first two sentences are kinda run ons and you can combine them.

'Aero defeated some heartless by using aeroga, then slashed through the remaining heartless.'

 

for the next part, remember to add periods add the end of statements.

' "Thanks." Aero said. '

also enter after speech, and add more than just said because that gets annoying.

"Wow Aero, you're really strong!" Jaq exclaimed.

"Thanks." Aero replied.

"Speaking of which, there are a bunch of those creature in another room." Jaq said.

"I'll go check." Aero told him, before running into the room that Jaq was talking about. '

 

also, maybe add some description in between speech, like 'Aero blinked at Jaq before replying, "Thanks." ' etcetc

the room part was very vague as well and i dont know how aero knew which room it was when jaq only said 'another room'?

 

other than that, it seems pretty good. C: keep writing.

^ The stuff Cella said, and I think you've got the creativity going (:

OHMAHGAWSH WHAT IS WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!? xD I go crazy wondering what's going to happen. xD

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@Cella: Thanks for the critisism! I really needed some :D :D :D

 

 

 

The Darkness Chapter 7:

 

At Enchanted Dormain...

 

The heart of Princess Aurora floated up in the air and went over to Maleficent. Maleficent grabbed the heart and it dissapeared in green flames to a different place. "Finally, I'm one step closer to Kingdom Hearts!" exclaimed Maleficent laughing. Tsuchi finally woke up from his hypnosis. Maleficent looked at Tsuchi. "Now, I believe that you waned information of who was here in the castle right? Well, Sora, was here, and another man" stated Maleficent. Tsuchi glared at Maleficent. "Tell me!"demanded Tsuchi. "Where is Master Sora????" questioned Tsuchi. "Sora is not here anymore. He left for another world" responded Maleficent calmly. "Come with me Tsuchi! Collect the hearts of the 7 princesses, so we can rule the worlds together!" exclaimed Maleficent. "Do you think that I would do that???" asked Tsuchi summoning his Way to Dawn. Suddenly there was a tremble in the small room that the two were in and Tsuchi looked shocked. (What was that???) thought Tsuchi. "HA! Universed, heartless, and nobodies! Such a nusiance!" stated Maleficent. "Very well then, if you won't join the darkness, then you will eventually fall to darkness itself." stated Maleficent. Maleficent was about to disapear in flames. "Wait!" shouted Tsuchi. Tsuchi charged at her and tried to slash her with his Way to Dawn, but unfortuantly he could hear her laughing as she disappeared. The room started to shake some more. "I better go find the sourse of this! Perhaps it's somewhere else, amongst this castle." said Tsuchi hastily as he ran outside the door to find the sourse.

 

 

In Castle of Dreams...

 

 

Aero was still inside the large room. In fact, the large room made Aero look really small. There were some book shelves, tables, chairs, and couches inside the room. Aero was fighting some heartless but then, a Large Body hit Aero and sent Aero flying to a ball of yarn, but Aero landed safely on the ball of yarn. "I better get off of here!" exclaimed Aero. Aero started to walk, but instead, the ball of yarn was moving with Aero. "Wait I have a idea." stated Aero. Aero started running on the ball of yarn and the ball of yarn kept him from falling, and also, as Aero and the ball of yarn were moving, it crushed all the heartless, universed and nobodies that were inside the large room. Aero saw all the heartless defeated because of the huge ball of yarn. Jaq came inside the room and was about to congratulate Aero but suddenly they both heard a noise. "MEOW!!!" shouted someone. Aero and Jaq looked up and they saw a huge brown cat and the cat looked REALLY hungry. "Aero get ready! The cat, Luficer is above you!" shouted Jaq. Aero nodded. "It's not safe for you Jaq! Go somewhere else, while I hold off the cat!" commanded Aero. Jaq didn't argue as he scrambeled into a room that only mice could get into. Luficer growled and was about to pounce Jaq before he got inside the mouse hole, but Aero got in front of him. "Time to teach you a lesson!" shouted Aero.

 

 

At Traverse Town...

 

 

"So, you want to know the whereabouts of Sora, the keyblade wielder right?" asked Leon. "Yeah." replied Mizu. This time, another girl spoke up. She wore pink-ish clothes. "We don't know the whereabouts of Sora right now." stated the girl. Mizu looked depressed. "Oh." said Mizu, sounding a little melancholy. "Sorry for not knowing where he is" said the girl. "Anyways, I'm Aerieth, the person with blue clothes is Merlin, the person with white clothes is Cid, and the other person is Yuffie" said Aerieth. "Nice to meet you guys and nice to see you again, Master Merlin" said Mizu. "It's a honor, Mizu" stated Merlin. The man with white clothes was typing on his laptop. "Wait hang on." commanded Cid. "Because of this computer, we can track his gummi ship!" exclaimed Cid. "Wait can you check right now please?" asked Mizu. "Sure" said Cid. Cid started typing on his computer. "It says he's in Radiant Garden. I can call him to tell him to stay there for a while" stated Cid after reading his information. "I'll call him right now. Just one little favor" said Cid. "Sure, what is it?" asked Mizu. Yuffie spoke up this time. "Well, there's this huge heartless here in the 3rd district. We were wondering if you could defeat it for us?" asked Yuffie. "Sure, I'll be right back" stated Mizu. Mizu got out of the secret pathway and she headed up to the 3rd District.

 

 

At Enchanted Dormain...

 

 

Tsuchi headed downstairs and saw a HUGE black heartless. It looked like as if it was a combination of thousands, upon thousands of Shadows. Tsuchi summoned his Way to Dawn. "Wow! This thing is huge!" exclaimed Tsuchi being surprised. Before Tsuchi could react, the huge heartless grabbed Tsuchi and started choking him. (Ugh! He's choking me! At this rate, I'm not going to make it) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi concentrated on some of his energy, and a huge light blinded the heartless and the heartless let go of Tsuchi. Tsuchi sent rocks from the ground to hit the heartless and then slashed it. The heartless punched the ground and Tsuchi was forced to jump. After the shock wave of the impact of the heartless hitting the ground dissapeared, Tsuchi attacked the heartless multiple times until it was defeated. "Wow, besides the fact of the heartless choking me, that was pretty simple!" exclaimed Tsuchi. Tsuchi ran ouside of the castle and went on his keyblade rider and went to a diferent world.

 

 

In Castle of Dreams...

Aero tried to slash Luficer with his Fresh Breeze, but instead, Luficer jumped onto a book shelf out of Aero's reach. Luficer started to growl and jumped to the ground trying to pounce Aero, but instead, Aero jumped onto Luficer. Luficer, trying to shake off Aero, moved in a bunch of different directions trying to get Aero off, but instead, Aero kept on holding onto Luficer's tail and Luficer hit a table and was knocked out momentairly. Aero jumped off of the brown cat's tail and then slashed through it multiple times. When Luficer woke back up again, Aero used strike raid, but something weird happened. His Fresh Breeze started to grow crystals and it froze Luficer into ice and then Aero called back his Fresh Breeze. (That was a different effect of Strike Raid then I expected.) thought Aero. Aero used fiagra and there was good news and bad news for Luficer. The good news was that Luficer thawed out. The bad news was that Luficer was wounded badly. Luficer, when he saw his wounds was scared and ran away. Jaq, who was watching the whole fight from the mouse hole came out. "Thank you so much Aero!" exclaimed Jaq very thankfully. "Your welcome, I hope that you do well. I have to leave, I have to find my friends." replied Aero. "Alright, goodbye Aero, be sure to visit us soon." replied Jaq. "Don't worry, I will." Aero went on his keyblade rider and opened a portal and left for a different world.

 

 

In Traverse Town...

 

 

Mizu went up to the 3rd District and saw a heartless. It was purple and had a head, a body, 2 legs, and 2 arms. It was the Guard Armor. Mizu used fiagra and then slashed one arm to defeat it. Mizu sent blizzardaga to defeat the other leg and then slashed it's other arm hard. Mizu used strike raid to defeat the body. (That was simple. I don't understand why it was such a huge threat.) thought Mizu. Mizu went back to the 2nd District and said her farewells to Leon and co and went on her keyblade rider and went to Radiant Garden.

 

 

 

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End of Chapter 7.

Another great chapter ^^

 

Also, just pointing out, when you're writing something, such as

2 legs, and 2 arms.

for it to be "proper", it should be two legs and two arms. The number, being described, should be written in word form (:
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(thanks for the criticsism ^^)

 

The Revenge of the Fallen One's Chapter 8

 

 

Tsuchi was on his Way to Dawn keyblade Rider. (Hmm, I wonder how the others are doing. I hope they're doing okay.) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi landed at a place, it was Radiant Garden. When Tsuchi landed in Radiant Garden, he took off his armor. (Maybe Master Sora, Master Riku, or Master Kairi is here) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi saw a keyblade lying on the ground and he picked it up. There was a note on it.

 

Dear whomever found this,

I see you have found this keyblade. You may keep it. Be sure to use it for better use. It is called Rock Shaker.

Waiting for you, Riku.

 

Tsuchi was astonished by the note. "Perhaps Riku is here!" exclaimed Tsuchi. Tsuchi picked up the keyblade. (Rock Shaker... a interesting keyblade indeed.) thought Tsuchi. Tsuchi examined Rock Shaker. It looked exactly like the Kingdom Key except it was all brown and the key chain was a symbol of a rock.

 

 

Meanwhile at Space...

 

 

Aero saw a place. (Maybe Master Sora, Master Riku, or Master Kairi is there. Hopefully Tsuchi and Mizu are there too.) thought Aero. Aero went on his keyblade rider to Radiant Garden. When Aero took off his keyblade armor, he walked around. He was inside a lab, or at least that's what he thought. What made Aero think that he was in a lab was that it was a huge room and there were hundreds of thousands of test tubes with a weird liquid in them. "IENZO!!!!" shouted someone. (I better hide, someone's comming.) thought Aero. Aero hid in a corner where no one could see him. A boy appeared. "Yes Master Even?" asked the boy. The boy looked about 11. He had purple hair and had a lab coat on. A man, who looked about 45 at the very least approached the boy. "Are the potions ready?" asked the man. "Yes Master Even, all of them are ready for Xehanort." replied Ienzo. "Good, once Xehanort takes the potions, all of us shall destroy Sora! We shall have our revenge against him!!!" shouted Even laughing. (Plan??? What plan???) thought Aero. (Are they the reason of the dissapearance of Master Sora???) thought Aero.

 

 

 

Mizu was on her keyblade rider. (I should be able to find Master Sora in Radiant Garden.) thought Mizu. (I might find Tsuchi and Aero as well.) thought Mizu. Mizu landed in Radiant Garden. When she took off her armor, she saw what she was surrounded by. She saw a woman, who looked about 5 or 6 years older than her. The woman was talking to a elderly woman. "Yes, heartless. They're the creatures from your stories grandma! So as the Unversed and nobodies" said the woman. The woman had a pink clothes on, she had amber hair, and she had blue eyes. (Heartless?? Nobodies? Unversed?) thought Mizu. (Is she a keyblade wielder?) thought Mizu. The elderly woman, who was supposed to be the woman's grandmother had gray hair, and a purple shirt and she was nodding. Suddenly, heartless surrounded all of them. "Gradnma, go somewhere safe!" shouted the woman as she summoned her keyblade. It had some flowers on it and a flower as the keychain. It was other wise amber brown like the woman's hair. The woman noticed Mizu. "Please, hide as well, these are heartless unversed and nobodies." commanded the woman. Mizu summoned her keyblade, the Thunder Blade. "Wow a keyblade! Alright, are you ready to fight?" asked the woman. "Heck yeah." replied Mizu. Mizu and the woman charged at the heartless, nobodies and unversed.

 

 

Tsuchi walked around Radiant Garden. He saw some Shadow heartless attacking a duck with a crane. The duck was actually doing fairly well, holding off the heartless from attacking with his crane, but Tsuchi knew that the duck couldn't hold on much longer. "DANGER!" exclaimed Tsuchi. Tsuchi used strike raid with his Rock Shaker. "ACK!" shouted the duck. The heartless were about to attack the duck but they were all destroyed by Tsuchi's Rock Shaker. Tsuchi approached the duck. "Are you okay?" asked Tsuchi. "Thank you so much! I thought they were going to kill me!" exclaimed the duck. "I'm Uncle McScrooage." said the duck. "I'm Tsuchi, do you know where anyone is by the name of Sora, Riku, Kairi, Aero, or Mizu?" asked Tsuchi. "Why yes! In fact, I believe that Sora, Riku, and Kairi are still here in town! I can lead you to Riku!" exclaimed Uncle McScrooage. "Could you??" asked Tsuchi. "Why of course! Look as it for my debt for you saying me!" replied Uncle McScrooage. "Thank you!" exclaimed Tsuchi thankfully. "This way lad!" exclaimed Uncle McScrooage. Tsuchi followed Uncle McScrooage into the alley. Tsuchi saw a man. He was wearing a black coat and wearing a hood over his head. He saw Tsuchi and took off his coat. The man had yellow and purple-ish clothes and he also had silver hair and these aqua eyes. "Nice fighting... so I see you can wield the keyblade." said the man.

 

 

 

Aero tried to get more intel on these mysterious men who were obviously scientists in the lab. The man left and then the boy left. (I better get out of here. If I can find Master Sora or Master Riku or Master Kairi about this, then maybe they'll know exactly what's going on.) thought Aero. Aero opened a door and he was back outside. He saw tons and tons of citizens. Aero walked over and saw a cliff. There was a man there. In front of the man was a huge castle. "I remember this place... this was where they were" muttered the man. The man turned around to see Aero. The man had black, yellow, and red clothes and he had blue eyes, and spikey hair. "Who are you?" asked the man calmly. "I'm Aero, who are you?" asked Aero. Suddenly, there was a huge boom, a explosion somewhere. "Do you know how to fight? Do you have a keyblade?" questioned the man. "Yeah!" exclaimed Aero. Aero summoned his Kingdom Key. The man nodded. "Good, let's see what was down there" stated the man. The man summoned a light blue keyblade and the keyblade looked very powerful, for it was the Ultumia Weapon. Both Aero and the man charged down to see what the sourse of the explosion was.

 

 

 

Mizu was surrounded by a bunch of heartless unversed and nobodies, and the woman had a battle of her own to fight. She was also surrounded by heartless, unversed and nobodies. Mizu used thunder and around her formed lightening which defeated most of the enemies surrounding her. The woman sent fiagra and defeated the most of them as well. Mizu defeated more heartless that attacked her and the woman slashed through the final heartless and all of them were defeated. The woman looked at Mizu. "Wow, you're a really good fighter!" said the woman. "Thanks, so are you!" replied Mizu. "So, what's your name?" asked the woman. "I'm Mizu, what's yours?" asked Mizu. The woman looked at Mizu. "I'm...

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End of Chapter 8. I know that I left the woman hanging of who she is! It's called a cliff hanger. Which I've done throughout almost all the chapters so far Who is the woman? Who is the man? What was the explosion? What is Even's and Ienzo's plans with Xehanort? Who was the man who talked to Tsuchi? Keep on reading to find out! :D :D :D

I have a pretty good guess of who the woman is :D

Yay! I liked this chapter, too (:

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Chapter 9: The Reunion

 

 

Tsuchi looked at the man. "Who are you?" asked Tsuchi calmly. The man calmly put the hair that was in his eyes out of the way. "Me? My name is Riku." said the man. "Wait? Riku??" asked Tsuchi. "Yeah," responded Riku. "Where have you been? Master Hinote said that you, Sora, and Kairi have been missing!" exclaimed Tsuchi. "Well, we were investigating a few worlds where no one has found yet, so that's why we haven't been heard of," said Riku. "Is there anything that we can help you with?" questioned Tsuchi. "Well, we have some problems," responded Riku. "You see, Tsuchi, we have to save some people. Their names are Ven, Terra, Aqua, Ansem the Wse, Roxas, Namine, Axel, and Xion from their sufferings. I do not know most of them, all the people I know are Ansem the Wise, Roxas, Axel, and Namine." said Riku. "Alright, me, and my friends can search for some of them." said Tsuchi. "Alright thanks, but we have another problem." stated Riku. "What is it?" interrogated Tsuchi.

 

 

 

Aero and the man ran down to where the explosion was. They saw a man, who looked a lot like Lexaeus and another man who looked a lot like Xaldin. The man looked at the two men who were in the way. "Xaldin???" questioned the man. "I thought that I killed you!" exclaimed the man. The man who looked like Xaldin snickered. "Sora, you are a fool." said the man who looked like Xaldin. Aero was stunned. (Sora???!!! What's he doing here?) thought Aero. "Haven't you heard? Once my heartless and nobody is defeated, which you have gratefully defeated for me, the somebody comes back. I am Dilan, the somebody or my nobody Xaldin!" exclaimed Dilan. "And I am Eleaus, the somebody, of my nobody, Lexeaus, which Riku has also greatfully defeated" smirked Eleaus. Aero and Sora looked at the both of them, and suddenly a horrible thought occured to Sora. "Wait! If a somebody's heartless and nobody is defeated and the somebody can come back, does that mean that Xehanort came back???" asked Sora.

 

 

 

Mizu looked at the woman. "I'm Kairi" stated the woman. "Wait Kairi??? Master Hinote said that you guys have vanished!" exclaimed Mizu. "Along with Sora and Riku!" exclaimed Mizu. "Well, Sora, Riku, and I were traveling to worlds that keyblade masters have never seen before, so people didn't know where we were." said Kairi. "Is there anything that me and my friends can do to help you?" asked Mizu. Kairi looked at Mizu. "Well, we have suspicions that the heartless are over running the worlds." stated Kairi. Mizu nodded. "Well some worlds are dissapearing" agreed Mizu. "We also have another problem. You see, we have to save some people. Their names are Ven, Terra, Aqua, Namine, Ansem the Wise, Roxas, and Axel" said Kairi. "Do we know where they are?" asked Mizu. "We sadly do not know where any of them are, nor do we know the most of them. The people that I know are Namine, Ansem the Wise, Roxas, and Axel" said Kairi.

 

 

 

Tsuchi looked at Riku. "What is the other problem?" asked Tsuchi. "Well Tsuchi, you see, we have some suspicions: Sora, Kairi, and I, that the somebodies, our worse enemies have come back to life. We've heard from someone that they have seen some people who look a lot like Organization XIII but they seem more emotional." said Riku. "Wait Organization XIII??" asked Tsuchi astonished. He has heard of Organization XIII and they seemed really powerful. "Yeah, we've heard that once the heartless and the nobody of a somebody is defeated, then the somebody can come back to life, although we are hoping that is not true." said Riku. "Oh, so that means that Xehanort and the others can come back?" asked Tsuchi. "Yeah, unfortuantly for us. And if they can come back, Sora Kairi and I think that they want some revenge." said Riku. "Sora's investigating right now about if that's true or not." said Riku. "So what can I do?" asked Tsuchi. "Well, you your friends, me, and Sora, and Kairi can go investigate if it's true about if they can come back to life and if that's true, then we have to defeat them once and for all. And also, we should also look for Ven, Terra, Aqua, Ansem the Wise, Namine, Roxas, Xion, and Axel." said Riku.

 

 

 

Dilian smirked. "Yes, Xehanort has come back and he is pretty angry with you, Sora." said Eleaus. Sora frowned. "Oh no, he's come back. Now what can we do?" asked Sora. "Come on Aero, let's go, we need to talk about some things." said Sora. Aero nodded and followed Sora. Once they were away from Dilian and Eleaus, Sora looked at Aero. "I'm sorry if I haven't introduced myself, I am Sora." said Sora. "I'm Aero, so is there anything that me and my friends can help you with?" asked Aero. "Well, we have to save people named Ven, Terra, Aqua, Namine, Roxas, Axel, Ansem the Wise, and Xion" said Sora. "I do not know anyone except for Roxas, Axel, and Ansem the Wise" said Sora. "Also, we have another problem" said Sora. "What is it?" asked Aero. "Well as you heard, once a heartless and nobody is destroyed the somebody comes back. So, Xehanort and the others have come back, so we must defeat them since their nobodies were apart of the Organization. So here's the plan. Since their somebodies come back and we need to save those people, we need to work together, you and your friends, me, Riku, and Kairi need to defeat the somebodies and find the others" said Sora. Aero nodded. "Alright, me and my friends will do our best." said Aero.

 

 

 

Mizu nodded. "So what should we do?" asked Mizu. "Well, you and your friends and me and Sora and Riku can team up and travel across the worlds to defeat the heartless and save the people from their sufferings." said Kairi. "Also, we have one final problem." said Kairi. "What is it?" asked Mizu. "Well, once the heartless and nobody is defeated, it has been rumored that the somebody can come back. Sora is investigating that right now. If that's true, then the someobdies of the Organization will surely look for revenge." explained Kairi. "Ugh, that's a problem" muttered Mizu. "So we can team up and this mission will be succesful." said Kairi. "Alright I'll help you guys." said Mizu.

 

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End of Chapter 9

Another really good chapter, besides a few minor spelling and grammatical errors ^^

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The Plan Chapter 10

 

 

 

Sora, Aero, Mizu, Kairi, Tsuchi and Riku finally met up. "Guys, I have some bad news to report." said Sora. Riku looked at Sora. "Well what is it?" asked Riku. Mizu, Kairi, Riku and Tsuchi looked pretty worried. "Well, me and Aero have found out that it's true." stated Sora. "When the somebody's heartless and nobody is defeated, the somebody comes back. So, Xehanort and all the others have came back." explained Sora. "Crap..." muttered all of them. "So, we should all team up if we want to save the others from their sufferings as well as keep alert of Xehanort and the rest" explained Sora of his plan. Aero and the others nodded. "So, me and Aero will team up to look for some people." said Sora. "Me and Tsuchi will go together," stated Riku. Tsuchi nodded. "And me and Mizu will go together" said Kairi. Mizu nodded. "Alright, let's go guys." said Sora. Sora went on his Kingdom Key Keyblade Rider and Aero went on his Fresh Breeze Keyblade Rider and went to look for different worlds to explore. Tsuchi went on his Rock Shaker Keyblade Rider and Riku went on the ship that he and Sora used once and they went to different worlds to explore, and finally, Kairi went on her Destiny Place Keyblade Rider and Mizu went on her Thunder Blade Keyblade Rider and they went to different worlds. A mysterious figure came out. The mysterious figure summoned his weapons and they looked like etheral blades. The mysterious figure went into the lab where Even and Ienzo were. The mysterious figure went up to a man. "We have reported sucsess, Xehanort. Sora and the others have fallen right into our trap." said the mysterious figure. "Good, now we can set up our trap and everyone will die" said Xehanort smirking. "Number XV, go and destroy Kairi and Mizu first." ordered Xehanort. Number XV bowed. "I won't fail Master Xehanort." stated Number XV and went into a dark portal.

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(Note, the mysterious figure, I'm just asuming that he's Number XV in the Organization. That does not mean he is Number XV. Remember, this is a fan fic.)

Nice ^^

The shorter chapter makes it look less like a wall of text xD

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(Yeah, from now on, I'll do more short chapters if thats ok. Part of it because I want to bring more drama and the other part of it is because I'm too lasy xD) (Oh, btw, sorry for not writing for so long ;) too much school work :()

 

Chapter 11

 

The Battle:

 

 

Kairi and Mizu were on their keyblade rider. "Where should we go Mizu?" asked Kairi. Mizu looked around of where they were in space. "Maybe we should go to Land of Departure." suggested Mizu. "Sure, I'm up to that" said Kairi. The two of them rode on their keyblade riders to Land of Departure.

 

 

Once they landed, the two went inside the palace where Mizu took her keyblade master examination. But they didn't see Master Hinote. "Hm, master isn't here. Maybe we should go to the summit" suggested Mizu. Kairi nodded as the two of them walked up to the summit. Once they reached the summit, they looked around and saw a man in a hood. The man in a hood appeared behind them. "Hey I feel as if something is following us." said Kairi. Kairi looked behind her but didn't see the man. The man appeared in front of them. The man summoned his dual blades. Kairi and Mizu summoned their Destiny Place and Thunder Blade.

 

 

"Who are you??" questioned Mizu. The man just charged at them. "Mizu! It's two on one! We should corner him" exclaimed Kairi. Mizu agreed. The two sliced at the man and the man leaped back into the corner. Kairi and Mizu both thought that they could beat him easily but the man wasn't finished. In fact he just started.

 

 

The man summoned clones of himself as they attacked relentlessly with their dual blades. Kairi and Mizu leaped back and both of them used strike raid as the clones were defeated. Mizu used magic hour on the mysterious figure and Kairi sliced through the man but suddenly, time froze for everyone but the Mysterious Figure. Kairi and Mizu could only think as their legs couldn't move, nor their arms or mouths as they looked stunned. The mysterious figure, when he took the hit of the magic hour, and the slash by Kairi, froze time and he rewinded time, thus not taking any dammage.

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