Text Kingdom Hearts: Awakening

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

No this isn't my old GMV, this a story I'm writing featuring character's I've picked up from other people on this site. PM me if you have a character(s) you'd like to add.

Table of contents:

 

 

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1

 

 

http://youtu.be/y6WXY42d17Y&autoplay=1

 

 

 

“There they are.” Vanity said. The dark being was dressed in her normal attire, a tight black outfit with a pattern of purple lines across her torso. She had a skirt-like piece of white cloth strapped behind her waist by a purple belt. Her pale face framed by pitch-dark hair parting to the right and extending down to her neck.

“Yup, that’s them alright.” Another dark being floated down onto the orange roof beside Vanity. He was dressed similarly but with a yellow color scheme. He stood a good few inches taller than his ally and his jet-black hair was short and spiked. “Perfect. Just perfect.”

“You’ll be taking the boy, Riven.” Vanity said, sharply.

He laughed. “You know I only have eyes for you, my sweet.”

Vanity blushed. “Y-yeah.”

“That’s enough you two.” Out of a dark corridor exited a third dark being, this one being a girl, like Vanity, she stood just as tall, her dark hair tied back in a braid. Her color was green. All three of them had golden-yellow eyes. “What are the details, Vanity?”

Riven sighed. “Always the party pooper, Vanessa.”

Vanity smiled at the distaste her friends seemed to have for each other. “The girl has a pure heart. It’s not light, it’s... something different. Whatever it is, it’s rubbed off on her brother.”

“Good enough for me!” Rivan declared. He summoned his Keyblade, Pride Gear, with teeth and and a guard taking after it’s name, the edges of the gears teeth were laced with yellow. At the hilt and the center of the head was each a blue reptilian, symbolizing the weapon’s darkness. “We’ll take them over and all that will be left will be getting you Aura.”

“Don’t be rash, Riven!” Vanessa said. “We can’t just jump into this.”

 

 

 

http://youtu.be/9IYZGuZi8uI&autoplay=1

 

“I certainly can.” The three darknesses turned to see the boy that was just sitting at the clock tower not moments ago before them, Keyblade in hand. He stood only slightly shorter than Riven. He had plain, short brown hair and was dressed and a pair of beaten jeans and grey jacket unzipped to show a faded yellow shirt. His Keyblade was a luminous purple made up of intersecting purple lines leading up to three teeth. An orange charm hanging off the end as a keychain.

 

“We certainly can.” His sister was now beside him. Just barely shorter than her brother, making her slightly taller than Vanity and Vanessa. She wore dark leggings, a yellow skirt, and a blue shirt with baggy sleeves at the end. Her Keyblade was identical but with the purple and orange reversed.

Vanessa grimaced with disgust. “They think they can take us?” She summoned her Keyblade, Envy Gear, identical to Riven’s but with green as opposed to yellow. She charged at the sister.

“Who’s jumping into things now?” Riven teased. “Stay back, Vanity.” He followed in the charge.

The boy blocked Vanessa's attack and easily redirected himself around her, opening her up to a strike from his sister and opening a path for him toward Riven. They clashed.

“Why you little- urgh!” The girl lunged at Vanessa and in a burst of light she was shot back.

“Vanessa!” Vanity caught her friend. “You wait here.” She summoned her purple Void Gear and went to fight the girl in her friend’s place.

“Vanity no! Gah!” Vanessa clutched her side. “The little brat.” That blast put her in no condition to fight.

Riven was striking furiously at the boy. He blocked everything but fired no retort. “Why. Not. Stike. Back?!”

He swung around Riven’s next strike and hit him in the back with the flat of his Keyblade.

“Gah. How dare you strike me! And with such intentional weakness!” In his rage, his attacks grew sloppier and sloppier so he continually opened himself open to the boy’s counters.

“Riven!” Vanity barely blocked the girl’s strike. White and purple flames began to engulf her Void Gear. “I’ll teach you two to hurt my friends!” She knocked her Keyblade aside and struck her in the chest where the flames spread across her body.

“Cas-” The boy was cut short when he noticed Riven’s Keyblade sticking into his chest. He stumbled back. A glowing sphere drifted out of him. “Wait... is that my...” He collapsed.

Vanessa looked at the sister. Or... what remained of her that is. Her body had been burnt away and her heart floated there. “I guess that’s mine then.”

“I’ve got my prize!” Riven declared. Gripping the glowing sphere of light that came from the boy. There was a flicker of black in it. That flicker expanded to to take over the entire heart and it shattered. “Dang... What was that?”

The girl’s heart zoomed over and into her brother. In a flash of light the boy’s body was gone. As was his sister’s heart. I

Vanity sighed. “I guess it’s back to square one.”

 

Edited May 14, 2013 by Sikota Urinakano

[SoraBlade 832]

 

No this isn't my old GMV, this a story I'm writing featuring character's I've picked up from other people on this site. PM me if you have a character(s) you'd like to add.

 

 

 

Chapter 1

 

 

“There they are.” Vanity said. The dark being was dressed in her normal attire, a tight black outfit with a pattern of purple lines across her torso. She had a skirt-like piece of white cloth strapped behind her waist by a purple belt. Her pale face framed by pitch-dark hair parting to the right and extending down to her neck.

“Yup, that’s them alright.” Another dark being floated down onto the orange roof beside Vanity. He was dressed similarly but with a yellow color scheme. He stood a good few inches taller than his ally and his jet-black hair was short and spiked. “Perfect. Just perfect.”

“You’ll be taking the boy, Riven.” Vanity said, sharply.

He laughed. “You know I only have eyes for you, my sweet.”

Vanity blushed. “Y-yeah.”

“That’s enough you two.” Out of a dark corridor exited a third dark being, this one being a girl, like Vanity, she stood just as tall, her dark hair tied back in a braid. Her color was green. All three of them had golden-yellow eyes. “What are the details, Vanity?”

Riven sighed. “Always the party pooper, Vanessa.”

Vanity smiled at the distaste her friends seemed to have for each other. “The girl has a pure heart. It’s not light, it’s... something different. Whatever it is, it’s rubbed off on her brother.”

“Good enough for me!” Rivan declared. He summoned his Keyblade, Pride Gear, with teeth and and a guard taking after it’s name, the edges of the gears teeth were laced with yellow. At the hilt and the center of the head was each a blue reptilian, symbolizing the weapon’s darkness. “We’ll take them over and all that will be left will be getting you Aura.”

“Don’t be rash, Riven!” Vanessa said. “We can’t just jump into this.”

“I certainly can.” The three darknesses turned to see the boy that was just sitting at the clock tower not moments ago before them, Keyblade in hand. He stood only slightly shorter than Riven. He had plain, short brown hair and was dressed and a pair of beaten jeans and grey jacket unzipped to show a faded yellow shirt. His Keyblade was a luminous purple made up of intersecting purple lines leading up to three teeth. An orange charm hanging off the end as a keychain.

“We certainly can.” His sister was now beside him. Just barely shorter than her brother, making her slightly taller than Vanity and Vanessa. She wore dark leggings, a yellow skirt, and a blue shirt with baggy sleeves at the end. Her Keyblade was identical but with the purple and orange reversed.

Vanessa grimaced with disgust. “They think they can take us?” She summoned her Keyblade, Envy Gear, identical to Riven’s but with green as opposed to yellow. She charged at the sister.

“Who’s jumping into things now?” Riven teased. “Stay back, Vanity.” He followed in the charge.

The boy blocked Vanessa's attack and easily redirected himself around her, opening her up to a strike from his sister and opening a path for him toward Riven. They clashed.

“Why you little- urgh!” The girl lunged at Vanessa and in a burst of light she was shot back.

“Vanessa!” Vanity caught her friend. “You wait here.” She summoned her purple Void Gear and went to fight the girl in her friend’s place.

“Vanity no! Gah!” Vanessa clutched her side. “The little brat.” That blast put her in no condition to fight.

Riven was striking furiously at the boy. He blocked everything but fired no retort. “Why. Not. Stike. Back?!”

He swung around Riven’s next strike and hit him in the back with the flat of his Keyblade.

“Gah. How dare you strike me! And with such intentional weakness!” In his rage, his attacks grew sloppier and sloppier so he continually opened himself open to the boy’s counters.

“Riven!” Vanity barely blocked the girl’s strike. White and purple flames began to engulf her Void Gear. “I’ll teach you two to hurt my friends!” She knocked her Keyblade aside and struck her in the chest where the flames spread across her body.

“Cas-” The boy was cut short when he noticed Riven’s Keyblade sticking into his chest. He stumbled back. A glowing sphere drifted out of him. “Wait... is that my...” He collapsed.

Vanessa looked at the sister. Or... what remained of her that is. Her body had been burnt away and her heart floated there. “I guess that’s mine then.”

“I’ve got my prize!” Riven declared. Gripping the glowing sphere of light that came from the boy. There was a flicker of black in it. That flicker expanded to to take over the entire heart and it shattered. “Dang... What was that?”

The girl’s heart zoomed over and into her brother. In a flash of light the boy’s body was gone. As was his sister’s heart. I

Vanity sighed. “I guess it’s back to square one.”

 

CooL!

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

CooL!

Not to be picky but did you really need to quote the entire thing? -_-

[Squidcannon 24]

Awesome ! I can't wait to see more!

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Awesome ! I can't wait to see more!

Kai will appear in the next chapter or two X)

[Squidcannon 24]

Kai will appear in the next chapter or two X)

really? Cool!

[Javelin434 3,164]

This looks promising! Can't wait to see the next post!

[KHUndertaleFan25 2,858]

Yay! My characters are in the first chapter ! Who were those other two characters? Also, will Kiana (who I still think should be Sora's sister) look like Vanity? And also, when I see this trio, I keep thinking of this: Vanity as Larxene, Riven as Axel, and Vanessa as Marluxia (haha ).

Edited April 24, 2013 by KingdomHearts25

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Yay! My characters are in the first chapter ! Who were those other two characters? Also, will Kiana (who I still think should be Sora's sister) look like Vanity? And also, when I see this trio, I keep thinking of this: Vanity as Larxene, Riven as Axel, and Vanessa as Marluxia (haha ).

The other two siblings were mine. Kiana and Vanity are more than likely are going to resemble each other. As for the trio... I don't really see much relation... just originality. Thanks for these characters, they'll definitely be a driving force through this entire thing.

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Chapter 2

Aura woke with a start. She sat up. A part of her light brown hair naturally falling to the right. She looked out her window. Ven, Terra and Aqua were walking from the courtyard. She sighed. "Guess I missed out again."

 

 

 

http://youtu.be/IW5tItT5v-w&autoplay=1

 

 

Down outside the courtyard, the three friends were talking with each other before returning to bed before the big test the next day. "It's too bad, Aura missed out on that." Ven commented. The boy held a striking resemblance to his sister. As to be expected of course, his light brown hair spiked up towards the right. He wore relatively short, off-white pants coupled with a short-sleeved jacket split down the middle, one side black, the other being that same off-white, held together by two strips of dark green cloth forming an X over his torso centered with a cross-shaped emblem topped with a heart, and his right shoulder padded with various shades of green armor.

"Yeah, I made a good luck charm for her too." Aqua replied. The young woman had short blue hair and was dressed in a black, sleeveless top with a corset and and dark shorts. She had detached white sleeves with blue and silver armor along the center of her arms; and a white scarf tied around her waist. Two strips of pink crossed over similarly to Ven.

"Don't worry." Terra commented. "It's not like we'll never see her again." Terra was the tallest of the three. His messy, long, brown hair extended down to the back of his neck. He was dressed in a form fitting, slate-colored shirt with loose-legged khaki colored pants. Two strips of red crossing over his chest. The same emblem his friends wore was belt buckle for him. The length of his left arm was clad in armor in different shades of maroon, brown and gold.

 

 

 

http://youtu.be/jlm1GkvIXjE&autoplay=1

 

 

“I’m sorry, but you won’t.” Riven stepped out of a dark portal behind the three friends.

“Who are you and what are you talking about?” Ven demanded, he summoned his Keyblade. Wayward Wind, a peculiar weapon. The handle and dull-gold guard were offset from the rest of the dark-green blade. A rather miniscule shaft leading up to the five teeth growing in size as they line up toward the end. They were almost gear like. The green Keychain resembled a tornado. All these peculiarities made the green and gold Keyblade perfect for Ven’s backhand wielding style.

“What he’s trying to say is that neither of you all will be seeing Aura anytime soon.” Said Vanessa who had appeared behind them.

The dark beings were too fast, before Terra and Aqua could go on the offense, they were incapacitated their enemy. As Aqua fell to the ground, she muttered her final words to her young friend. “Ven... run.” She collapsed.

A third dark being, dressed similarly with a red color scheme, his face covered in a reflective black helmet appeared out darkness behind Ven. “Don’t worry, Ventus. It’ll be like this never happened.”

A surge of exhaustion suddenly hit Ven. “Why am I... so...” He collapsed alongside his friends.

“Why not go ahead and merge now, Vanitas?” Riven asked the newcomer.

“Because his heart is still weak.” He replied. “According to Xehanort, if we can remove Aura from the equation, it’ll strengthen the both of them.” He looked up toward the castle. “My sister should be taking care of her part now.”

Edited April 26, 2013 by Sikota Urinakano

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

Wow, I really like this story, and I like how you describe the respective characters clothing, it really brings in a lot of detail into the moment.  I also like how you've effortlessly put your characters to fit in with Birth By Sleep's story!  Well done, Sikota, I'll be sure to follow this story!

[Javelin434 3,164]

I.. need to start learning this kind of writing style. I wanna do a fan-fic of my own...

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

I.. need to start learning this kind of writing style. I wanna do a fan-fic of my own...

You should write a fan-fic, it's a really fun process, believe me, I made a Kingdom Hearts story here.  Just write what comes into your imagination.

[Javelin434 3,164]

You should write a fan-fic, it's a really fun process, believe me, I made a Kingdom Hearts story here.  Just write what comes into your imagination.

Believe me, I have a story planned out for my OC, but my writing sucks compared to most others. If I really want to do a fanfic, then I want it to be a GOOD one.

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

Believe me, I have a story planned out for my OC, but my writing sucks compared to most others. If I really want to do a fanfic, then I want it to be a GOOD one.

Then just practice your writing skills, and I'm sure you'll be able to make your plan of writing a fan-fic bear it's results.  You'll see. ^_^

[Javelin434 3,164]

Then just practice your writing skills, and I'm sure you'll be able to make your plan of writing a fan-fic bear it's results.  You'll see. ^_^

I guess so. The storyline is perfect, now I just gotta find out how to convey it in a decent and/or awesome manner...

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

I guess so. The storyline is perfect, now I just gotta find out how to convey it in a decent and/or awesome manner...

Very good.  And lol, I suggest we stop the random comments here, this is, after all, Sikota's story thread, so we shouldn't occupy too much comment space.

[KHUndertaleFan25 2,858]

 

Chapter 2

Aura woke with a start. She sat up. A part of her light brown hair naturally falling to the right. She looked out her window. Ven, Terra and Aqua were walking from the courtyard. She sighed. "Guess I missed out again."

 

 

 

http://youtu.be/IW5tItT5v-w&autoplay=1

 

 

Down outside the courtyard, the three friends were talking with each other before returning to bed before the big test the next day. "It's too bad, Aura missed out on that." Ven commented. The boy held a striking resemblance to his sister. As to be expected of course, his light brown hair spiked up towards the right. He wore relatively short, off-white pants coupled with a short-sleeved jacket split down the middle, one side black, the other being that same off-white, held together by two strips of dark green cloth forming an X over his torso centered with a cross-shaped emblem topped with a heart, and his right shoulder padded with various shades of green armor.

"Yeah, I made a good luck charm for her too." Aqua replied. The young woman had short blue hair and was dressed in a black, sleeveless top with a corset and and dark shorts. She had detached white sleeves with blue and silver armor along the center of her arms; and a white scarf tied around her waist. Two strips of pink crossed over similarly to Ven.

"Don't worry." Terra commented. "It's not like we'll never see her again." Terra was the tallest of the three. His messy, long, brown hair extended down to the back of his neck. He was dressed in a form fitting, slate-colored shirt with loose-legged khaki colored pants. Two strips of red crossing over his chest. The same emblem his friends wore was belt buckle for him. The length of his left arm was clad in armor in different shades of maroon, brown and gold.

 

 

 

http://youtu.be/jlm1GkvIXjE&autoplay=1

 

 

“I’m sorry, but you won’t.” Riven stepped out of a dark portal behind the three friends.

“Who are you and what are you talking about?” Ven demanded, he summoned his Keyblade. Wayward Wind, a peculiar weapon. The handle and dull-gold guard were offset from the rest of the dark-green blade. A rather miniscule shaft leading up to the five teeth growing in size as they line up toward the end. They were almost gear like. The green Keychain resembled a tornado. All these peculiarities made the green and gold Keyblade perfect for Ven’s backhand wielding style.

“What he’s trying to say is that neither of you all will be seeing Aura anytime soon.” Said Vanessa who had appeared behind them.

The dark beings were too fast, before Terra and Aqua could go on the offense, they were incapacitated their enemy. As Aqua fell to the ground, she muttered her final words to her young friend. “Ven... run.” She collapsed.

A third dark being, dressed similarly with a red color scheme, his face covered in a reflective black helmet appeared out darkness behind Ven. “Don’t worry, Ventus. It’ll be like this never happened.”

A surge of exhaustion suddenly hit Ven. “Why am I... so...” He collapsed alongside his friends.

“Why not go ahead and merge now, Vanitas?” Riven asked the newcomer.

“Because his heart is still weak.” He replied. “According to Xehanort, if we can remove Aura from the equation, it’ll strengthen the both of them.” He looked up toward the castle. “My sister should be taking care of her part now.”

I wonder who's gonna save Aura.

Edited April 27, 2013 by KingdomHearts25

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

I wonder who's gonna save Aura.

No one. Supposedly...

Edited April 27, 2013 by Sikota Urinakano

[KHUndertaleFan25 2,858]

No one. Supposedly...

Aw, crud. BTW, will Kanixa look like Aura? Y'konw, since you said Kiana will look like Vanity.

Edited April 27, 2013 by KingdomHearts25

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Aw, crud. BTW, will Kanixa look like Aura? Y'konw, since you said Kiana will look like Vanity.

Yeah, most likely.

[KHUndertaleFan25 2,858]

 

As to be expected of course, his light brown hair spiked up towards the right.

Shouldn't Ven have golden blonde hair? Just saying. I already noticed.

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

 

 

Shouldn't Ven have golden blonde hair? Just saying. I already noticed.

Meh, I don't care. I see it as light brown.

[KHUndertaleFan25 2,858]

Meh, I don't care. I see it as light brown.

Okay. It's just my opinion.

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Chapter 3

Aura decided to get dressed and greet her friends below, oblivious to the chaos that had ensued. She checked herself in the mirror. Her lace dress split down the middle, one side purple, the other white. Two blue strips across her torso held together by that very same emblem her friends bore. Black and blue armor padding her left shoulder. She slipped on her mismatched sandals coordinating with her dress. She exited into the eastern courtyard, on her way to the main one to see her friends.

“Hold it right there, Aura.”

 

 

http://youtu.be/QHaeGXOGLug&autoplay=1

 

 

Whatever it was, it was dark. She jumped back and turned, summoning her purple and blue Wayward Wind. Vanity stood before her. “Who are you?” She demanded.

Vanity summoned her Void Gear. “I’m what’s missing.” She lunged.

Aura jumped over her and swung the point of her Keyblade behind her. Vanity dissolved into shadow, avoiding her attack. A clutch of purple, draconic beings with oversimplified features emerged from the dark girl’s shadow and darted toward Aura. In a flurry of attacks, they were dispelled. She jumped back, dodging Vanity’s overhead strike. Switching her Keyblade to a forehand grip, Aura launched a concussion of air at her opponent. Vanity’s Keyblade became engulfed in purple and white flames once again and dispelled the attack.

“Why don’t you just give up already?” Vanity taunted.

Aura caught her off guard and disarmed her, the next thing she knew, Wayward Wind was pointing at her chest. Aura’s Keyblade dematerialized at her will. “Why don’t you explain this to me, first?”

http://youtu.be/tzxU70AyGp0&autoplay=1

“Why not?” Vanity replied. “My backup will be here soon enough. “You remember Xehanort, don’t you?”

Aura shook her head.

“Course not. He was your old master, you trained with Ventus. He had a goal in mind. Things didn’t turn out too well so as a result, my brother and I were born. However, Xehanort favored the boys more and I was cast off myself while he left you with your brother. Wandering in the dark realms, I came across a couple of friends. Vanitas decided that he could use us for Xehanort’s benefit. Even without his consent. You and Ventus rely too heavily on each other. We’re here to remove you from the equation, as if you never existed.”

Aura summoned her Keyblade back. “And you think I’m just going to let that happen?”

More of the draconic creatures appeared out of nowhere and wrapped themselves around Aura, immobilizing her. “Because of the connection you two share, I could easily lock Ventus’s memories and that of those closest to him. To everyone here... it’ll be like you never existed.”

The consciousness was being squeezed out of her. “No... you... can’t.”

“Oh yes we can, Aura.” Her dark counterpart replied. “Sweet dreams.”