Hey guys. I finished chapter 3 of my story. Could you guys please leave a comment saying if you liked it or not. Also tell me if there was something that you enjoyed specifically, or something that you didn't like. This could help me for future chapters. Enjoy!
I already said this chapters 1 and 2, this is not originally my idea, but from the youtubers HMK and Skywardwing from this video:
Master Riku and Master Lea entered the castle’s hidden, underground prison where it only held 4 prisoners, who were a part of Xehanort’s organization. These being Braig, Isa, Emyd (Demyx’s somebody) and Lorud (Luxord’s Somebody).
“Remember, they may not have their weapons or Keyblades, but they still have their powers,” said Riku. “Which was why we’re gonna give them a visit while the sun is still out.”
Lea knew who he meant and simply looked to the ground with sadness and hatred.
“I’m sorry Lea,” said Riku.
“No, it’s ok.”
“You ready?” asked Riku while summoning his Keyblade.
Lea didn’t say a word. He simply looked at his right hand and watched it burn with fire while forming his Keyblade as well.
Riku unlocked the prison door and found four prison cells. These cells had no bars, but had blue energy fields, specifically designed by the town’s main computer A.I. Tron.
Lea ignored all but one of the cells. This cell held the eye-patched sharpshooter: Braig.
“Long time, no see!” cried Braig.
Braig noticed that they were not impressed by his joke and that they remained silent while staring at him with rage.
“Ok Braig, spill it,” said Lea. “You know that three of you escaped after the war, including Vanitas.”
“How could I forget?” replied Braig. “Those cowards high-tailed and ran away, leaving us behind to fend for ourselves.”
“What are they up to?” asked Riku.
“How should I know?”
“Come on Braig!” cried Lea. “Xehanort always had a back-up plan to make things go his ways! Who are the other two with Vanitas and what are they up to!?”
“And you expect me to tell you anything? As if!”
“Lea! You know what to do!” cried Riku.
Lea wasn’t sure if he should have done it, but he saw the look in his commander’s eyes and knew that he had no choice.
“Why do I always get stuck with the icky jobs,” said Lea.
Lea then took off his right glove, grabbed Braig arm and started burning it. Braig cried in pain and begged Lea to stop.
“Not until, I have answers!” replied Lea. “I won’t ask you a second time. WHO AND WHERE ARE THEY?!”
“I ain’t telling you anything!”
Lea was tired of this. He let go his hand and started to burn his face. Braig screamed even more now. “TELL ME!” cried Lea.
“OK, OK, I’LL TALK. JUST PLEASE STOP!”
“Not until get some answers!” replied Lea.
“OK, OK. FIRST, THERE’S THE RIKU REPLICA! XEHANORT’S YOUNG SELF SAVED HIM AFTER YOU BEAT HIM AT CASTLE OBLIVION RIKU!” screamed Braig.
“Who’s the other?” ordered Riku.
Suddenly, the three of them heard the main prison door open. Riku turned and saw Xion outside it, watching with terror in her eyes. Riku saw tears falling down her cheeks and ran away. Riku told Lea to stay where he was and he chased after her.
“And then there were two,” said Braig with great pain after Lea finally let go of him.
Riku finally caught up to Xion and managed to stop her. Xion was still crying and tried not to look at her very husband.
“How could you do such a thing?” cried Xion. “Not only were you torturing a man, but you also turned one of my best friends into a monster!”
“Xion you don’t understand,” replied Riku.
“No, I know what’s going on!” said Xion. “I heard you two days ago talking to Lea. I heard him say that he saw Vanitas, but you did not have to end up torturing someone! Is this how you wanted to raise our son!?”
“Xion, I’m so sorry. I didn’t want you to see that.”
“What difference does it make!?”
“It’s just I don’t want anything bad to happen again, especially not to my family.”
Xion managed to stop herself from crying and she ran into Riku’s arms.
“I promise,” said Riku. “I will not let anyone hurt you or our son. I’ll protect you, always.”
Riku then kissed her on her lips and she kissed him back.
Hey guys. I finished chapter 3 of my story. Could you guys please leave a comment saying if you liked it or not. Also tell me if there was something that you enjoyed specifically, or something that you didn't like. This could help me for future chapters. Enjoy!
I already said this chapters 1 and 2, this is not originally my idea, but from the youtubers HMK and Skywardwing from this video:
Chapter 1:http://kh13.com/forum/topic/72277-kingdom-hearts-iv-the-extreme-purifier/
Chapter 2:http://kh13.com/forum/topic/72294-kingdom-hearts-iv-the-extreme-purifier-chapter-2/
Chapter 3-Suffering
Master Riku and Master Lea entered the castle’s hidden, underground prison where it only held 4 prisoners, who were a part of Xehanort’s organization. These being Braig, Isa, Emyd (Demyx’s somebody) and Lorud (Luxord’s Somebody).
“Remember, they may not have their weapons or Keyblades, but they still have their powers,” said Riku. “Which was why we’re gonna give them a visit while the sun is still out.”
Lea knew who he meant and simply looked to the ground with sadness and hatred.
“I’m sorry Lea,” said Riku.
“No, it’s ok.”
“You ready?” asked Riku while summoning his Keyblade.
Lea didn’t say a word. He simply looked at his right hand and watched it burn with fire while forming his Keyblade as well.
Riku unlocked the prison door and found four prison cells. These cells had no bars, but had blue energy fields, specifically designed by the town’s main computer A.I. Tron.
Lea ignored all but one of the cells. This cell held the eye-patched sharpshooter: Braig.
“Long time, no see!” cried Braig.
Braig noticed that they were not impressed by his joke and that they remained silent while staring at him with rage.
“Ok Braig, spill it,” said Lea. “You know that three of you escaped after the war, including Vanitas.”
“How could I forget?” replied Braig. “Those cowards high-tailed and ran away, leaving us behind to fend for ourselves.”
“What are they up to?” asked Riku.
“How should I know?”
“Come on Braig!” cried Lea. “Xehanort always had a back-up plan to make things go his ways! Who are the other two with Vanitas and what are they up to!?”
“And you expect me to tell you anything? As if!”
“Lea! You know what to do!” cried Riku.
Lea wasn’t sure if he should have done it, but he saw the look in his commander’s eyes and knew that he had no choice.
“Why do I always get stuck with the icky jobs,” said Lea.
Lea then took off his right glove, grabbed Braig arm and started burning it. Braig cried in pain and begged Lea to stop.
“Not until, I have answers!” replied Lea. “I won’t ask you a second time. WHO AND WHERE ARE THEY?!”
“I ain’t telling you anything!”
Lea was tired of this. He let go his hand and started to burn his face. Braig screamed even more now. “TELL ME!” cried Lea.
“OK, OK, I’LL TALK. JUST PLEASE STOP!”
“Not until get some answers!” replied Lea.
“OK, OK. FIRST, THERE’S THE RIKU REPLICA! XEHANORT’S YOUNG SELF SAVED HIM AFTER YOU BEAT HIM AT CASTLE OBLIVION RIKU!” screamed Braig.
“Who’s the other?” ordered Riku.
Suddenly, the three of them heard the main prison door open. Riku turned and saw Xion outside it, watching with terror in her eyes. Riku saw tears falling down her cheeks and ran away. Riku told Lea to stay where he was and he chased after her.
“And then there were two,” said Braig with great pain after Lea finally let go of him.
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Riku finally caught up to Xion and managed to stop her. Xion was still crying and tried not to look at her very husband.
“How could you do such a thing?” cried Xion. “Not only were you torturing a man, but you also turned one of my best friends into a monster!”
“Xion you don’t understand,” replied Riku.
“No, I know what’s going on!” said Xion. “I heard you two days ago talking to Lea. I heard him say that he saw Vanitas, but you did not have to end up torturing someone! Is this how you wanted to raise our son!?”
“Xion, I’m so sorry. I didn’t want you to see that.”
“What difference does it make!?”
“It’s just I don’t want anything bad to happen again, especially not to my family.”
Xion managed to stop herself from crying and she ran into Riku’s arms.
“I promise,” said Riku. “I will not let anyone hurt you or our son. I’ll protect you, always.”
Riku then kissed her on her lips and she kissed him back.
Chapter 4:http://kh13.com/forum/topic/72425-kingdom-hearts-iv-the-extreme-purifier/?p=1394456
Edited by Master Eraqus