Songbird Rebel

Epic

Awesome job *gives you a thumbs up*

Even though Xehanort was defeated, but If I was in that scenario... I am so gonna make the old coot pay!

That looks really cool (no pun intended...ok, maybe a little pun intended)

Nice

Impressive job Well fitting, too

All of them looked pretty cool

Any of the following would be really nice, please: "Dearly Beloved" "Eternal Moments" "Tears of the light" "Roxas" "Ventus" "Aqua" "At Dusk, I'll Remember You" Thanks

I like the idea, but didn't YX said, and I quote "You can only move forward as per the laws of time"? So maybe (this is only a fan-based theory) that the sixth follower was not Master Xehanort, but perhaps one of his ancestors. Even though there may be a possible chance that Master Xehanort was reincarnated from the sixth follower (see the following link: http://forums.khinsider.com/kingdom-hearts-iii/194630-rebirth.html )

Awesome Job

Awesome You should go for it

It looks pretty good so far I can't wait till I see the completed version

Beautiful and sad at the same time

All of them looks impressive, and I have a deviantart account, too (catcrazygurl94)! I would be honoured to check yours if you could tell me yours

I know this is a little late; but for those who don't know me, I go by the pen name I use on my fanfiction and fictionpress account, Songbird Rebel. My birthday is on May 3rd, 1994, and I'll be turning twenty within one month and one day starting tomorrow. You may have recognized me on my deviantart account, catcrazygurl94. Please feel free to check any of the accounts that I have mentioned above.

Hey guys, This is Songbird Rebel here, dropping by with a little food for your thoughts and a little challenge for your knowledge of all things Kingdom Hearts. For those who don't know what Loveless is, it is a poem/epic recited by Genesis Rhapsodos throughout Crisis Core. And although I haven't played any of the Final Fantasy, especially Final Fantasy VII where the poem is found or heard of, but I do know that (*spoiler alert ahead*) at the end, Zack gave the Buster Sword to Cloud when the former sacrificed himself to protect his best friend. And for those who have already played 385/2 Days, you may have noticed the similar manner that Roxas have retrieved his two signature Keyblades from Xion. Or say the story behind Birth by Sleep and the appearance of Zack in Olympus Coliseum. Anyway, I digress. When I first heard and read Loveless, my mind was blown away as well as have a feeling that it sounds more like a prophecy. So I decided to give you two versions of it (the original one and a modified version created by yours truly) and you see if there is any connection to the Kingdom Hearts series or see if you can interpreted the poem from your knowledge of the Kingdom Hearts series. Without any further ado, I'll give you the original version of Loveless: Prologue When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting Act I Infinite in mystery is the gift of the goddess We seek it thus, and take to the sky Ripples form on the water's surface The wandering soul knows no rest Act II There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh Act III My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises, Nothing shall forestall my return. Act IV My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely Act V Even if the morrow is barren of promises, Nothing shall forestall my return. To become the dew that quenches the land To spare the sands, the seas, the skies I offer thee this silent sacrifice -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- And now for the second version; but before I could go on, I would like to share with you my thought of the original version that have allowed me to change the wording a bit. First off, when I heard the "War of the Beast", I instantly figured that it's the Keyblade War. and the "Wings of Light and Dark" would be the Keyblades. I would continue on, but I would be spoiling the challenge for y'all. So with out any further ado, here is my version of Loveless: Prologue When the Keyblade War bring upon the world's end The Goddess descends from the sky Her wings of twilight spread afar She guides us to light, her gift everlasting Act I Infamous in mystery is the gift of the Goddess We seek it thus, and take to the sky Ripples form on the water's surface A seeker's life knows no rest Act II There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by Her Grace Hero of the light, Healer of all worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh Act III My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that condemn you and I? All that awaits in a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the Goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return Act IV My friend, Destiny is cruel Neither dreams nor honor remains The arrow has left, the bow of the Goddess My soul, corrupted by darkness Hath endured torment, to fulfill the heart's desires In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at the world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Silently, yet strong Act V Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return To become the light which bathe the world To spare the land, the sea, the sky I offer thee this secret sacrifice -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So there are the versions of Loveless and please feel free to voice your honest opinion on it. See if you can interpreted the poem from your knowledge of the Kingdom Hearts series. Until next time, This is Songbird Rebel, signing out

It sounds almost like a prophecy :biggrin:

I am still sure about the name change to my pen name, Songbird Rebel

Happy Birthday :biggrin:

Thanks for showing me this due to me being new. I was wondering if you could change it to the pen name I use in my fanfiction.net account, Songbird Rebel? That would me much obliged. With sincere regards, ~Songbird Rebel

A friend on Deviantart introduced me to the site, TheWaytotheDawn.