BlackKitten

Oh, you don't have a reason to be sorry. I like criticism, It challenges the mind to it's most possible capacity. I'm always open to helpful tips.

~Chapter One~ Elizabeth, sat, Knees to her chest. She twirled her Kunai looking over The Sea of Despair. She sighed, Longing for Life to improve. Longing for her return of home. She shook her head rapidly at the thought. "No." She said, Her voice cracking. She realized. The land. That she had trained on, Lived on...Survived on, Was her home. She had now lived on The land of Nightmares for, Ten years of her life. And, She was now, Sixteen. When she was Six that is when her world started crashing. She lived on a part of earth that was never known of. It had a small tribe that was supported by only the highest of governments. They were supported by, The United States, Great Britain, Germany and China. But, During that time. The United States and Germany were at each other's throats. But, Neither one had enough soldiers to end this with a war to settle. So, The village was able to raise their children to the age of six then they were sent to the land of nightmares. Never able to return unless in a body bag or the war has ended. Elizabeth had been here for so many years, being challenged in the wilderness. She hadn't been picked to go into the war yet. Yet, It seemed everyday was a war to stay alive. Lost in her thought she heard foot steps across the cold snow, clear as day. She flinched as they came closer. She mumbled and out of the water she pulled a katana. Her eyes traced the ground as the steps came closer. She looked up and was surprised to see a human instead of an blood-thirsty animal. She looked at the human specifying whether he was indeed humane or not. He caught her eyes by a thread. "Yes, I am a human." He answered before she could even form her lips to ask. She narrowed her eyes at him as he took out his bowie. "I am Luke, Luke Johnson." He said staring across the sea. He sat down. "What is your name, Miss?" He asked swiftly. She brushed her hair out of her face threw the Kunai into the water as it made a deep purple cut that soon disappeared. "Elizabeth, Elizabeth Motorola." She said softly. She got up and walked away into the wilderness. He sighed as she walked away only to hear a deep growl. It came from the direction she went in. He got up and walked after her. Only to see, She was against a rock, Unarmed at the mercy of a Cougar. He backed up slightly. The cougar then pounced at her. Elizabeth only short time to do such she jumped on the rock and flipped frontward as the cougar went under her she went over it. She then grabbed it's fur, yanking it back over her into the ground, her landing on it's back. She whispered something and it whimpered and limped away as she got up. Luke had so many thoughts going through his head. "Who was this girl?" was the most important one.

At the time they didn't know whether the kids could have been playing or true terror. They wouldn't know because they were occupied with the responsiblities of Olympus. They wouldn't be able to had guess or...such say know the scream of the boy. They would guess that they were in a sort of game. They answered "Happily" Because they had their thoughts that their kids were actually having fun like normal kids also but also there is the point of doubt they choose not to think about in these circumstances. And also they were twins, I form them as god and goddess of day and night because also Helios and Selene were the god and goddess of the sun and moon, But in some forms the four gods traded places at certain times

(Note: Hey guys, I wanted to start something new.I am studying greek and egyptian mythology. So, I had a few Ideas. Tell me what you think.) (Chapter one) A Goddess Gets Killed.. In the wooded area of Olympus, Played a little girl and boy. Seven yearold Artemis and Ten yearold Apollo. They were brother and sister, Yet to find out what was their "Secret Identity." Artemis ran around the forest as her brother chased her. "I'm gonna get you,Artemis!" He yelled happily. Artemis screamed and ran away. She had her auburn hair in a ponytail. And her eyes that shined pale as the moon. She laughed as her brother tackled her. They rolled around, being exposed to the winter air. A strange man then walked up to them. "Hello, Children." He said sternly. He reached out and grabbed Artemis. "Let my sister go!" Apollo screamed. The man dragged Artemis a few feet and stabbed her in the stomach then dropped her. "No!" Apollo screamed, He grabbed a knife and tackled the man. "I will kill you!" Apollo screamed. He repeatedly stabbed the man in the chest. The man slowly disintegrated. Apollo stood and walked to Artemis who was passed out on the ground. He sat down and put her head on his lap as the blood covered him. "Its okay, Sissy." He said softly. "Everything is okay..." He said softer. Her breathing slowed and slowed. He got up and ran. "Mom!, Dad!' He screamed. Zeus and His wife Leto. "Yes, Son?" They said in a panic. "Artemis, Got stabbed by someone and she is dying, Help!' He said with tears in his eyes. They looked at his pants drenched in blood and ran into the woods, Searching for Artemis. (Note: I am making a version of how Apollo and Artemis became god and goddess of light and the night. So tell me what ya think.. Have a nice day/night.~BlackKitten)

Hey, Guys. Today I am starting a new story. Chapter one will be done tonight. Fingers cross atleast. Have a nice day/night.~BlackKitten

I don't know why, But I am not a happy person and I don't know how to write happy things But I think I am not going to rehab.

I was broken, But I didn't know it. I was hurt, But I didn't show it. One wishes lies and pain away. But, They always come back the next day. Though I look at the world as a horrible place. That feeling..Never seems to stay. I realize now, why I was sad. It's because I ran away from my past. So, Listen now to the words I care to speak. Never run...Or the pain will repeat. I still feel the empty void. And I will until the day my life is destroyed.........

Thanks...He forgave me and things worked out.

(Guys....I know I don't come on as a social, talkitive...or even valued person...but I hurt someone.....And I feel bad...I hope he finds it in his heart to forgive me) I'm sorry...for the mess I made.. I'm sorry for leaving you astray.. But now....I have realized...Sorry just ain't gonna pay.. I don't what to do.... I know I wasn't true. Just please, Zack..Forgive me. Thats all I ask of you. ~Chorus~ I'm sorry for the mess I made.. I'm sorry for leaving you astray. But now that I realized, Sorry just Ain't gonna, Ain't gonna pay.. Oh...It's not..Gonna pay... I know I hurt you. I know I wasn't true.. But, Please just forgive me thats all I ask of you.. ~Chorus~ I'm sorry for the mess I made.. I'm sorry for leaving you astray.. Now that I realize...Sorry just Ain't gonna, Ain't gonna pay.. Oh...I'm sorry...I am...I really am..I just got lost...I just got confused. Zackary, Forgive me...Thats all I would ever ask of you... But, Now that you're gone. I know what I lost! I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! ~Chorus~ It ain't gonna pay.. It ain't gonna pay.. It ain't gonna pay.. It ain't gonna pay.. It just isn't gonna pay... (I am sorry Zack......I really am....Please..forgive me...)

(Chapter Eleven) I have a Conversation with a wolf.We ran like a couple of little kids through the woods jumping in trees, Struggling to keep up with eachother. You can't keep up, Kat? Michael said challengingly. I looked at him Smirkingly.Hm..Maybe, Maybe not. I said chuckling under my breath. He looked at me and jumped into the trees. I kept running on the ground. Then I saw a wolf. Oh god! I said soflty. I slid to a stop. Everything in my mind was telling me to run but something kept me from moving. Michael ran up behind it. Get! He said harshly. The wolf looked at me. As if saying Come to me, child. walked torwards it. No! Michael screamed. But it was to late I was already walking to it.Get on my back, child. We are going on a little journey.It said in my mind. Yes, Sir. I said Blankly. I sat on it's back and suddenly I was gone. Mentally that is. I saw myself standing in damp woods. I walked around. Hello? I called. Hello!? I called once more. Hello, Child. The wolf walked out from between two oak trees. I backed up. Uh........Hi.. I said slowly. I stood.Where are we? I asked slower. We are in...I would say Russia. I twirled quickly. Russia?! I screamed. Send me back! Now! I screamed even louder causing a few birds to fly away. Well. I can't till we talk. He said growling. We talked, Now take me home. I said Aggervatingly. No.We must talk about your future. He said Growling with each word. I know my future, I know I am gonna die in my future. I said softly. They are gonna catch me and kill me...and my family will be safe. I said so softly it could have been a whisper. No, They won't. They will never be safe. Ever. He said so harshly it caused tears in my eyes. Take. Me. Home. Now. I said trying to fight the tears back. Look. He said angrily. If you kill yourself, Mark's Army won't stop till your family and friends are dead too. You need to stop him. Before it's to late...He said looking down. Fine. I said. Just send me back. I closed my eyes and when I opened I was back. Before I did anything I convienced myself of one thing: No more emotion. Mark was going to die. Before anyone gets hurt.

I am sick of trying, Sick of crying. I may be smiling but inside...I'm dying. Dying that I know that love is a lie. Mistaken by one's blind eye. Decayed by saddness through and through. And you expect me to say: "I love you too." Death is my exit, My pal, My friend. Until love is gone. My heart's wound will not mend. Though sometimes I fall, Most times I will stand. I am strong enough not to let love take my hand. I stay quiet even now. And wait for love to pass me. For that beast is so addictive but also so fowl. (Note: I just got really bored.And I just thought of some things I don't hate love so Yeah. Have a nice night/day~BlackKitten)

(Chapter Ten) Sam, Katy, Who will win? Michael ran up. No! Katy! He screamed. He ran to the edge and Sam grabbed him. Michael. I realize how much you care about, Katy. But, You can't save her. I can't allow it. Michael turned his head and glared at Sam. If you can't save your sister, Thats your problem. But I am going to save her or die trying. He said fiercly and shook Sam away. He then jumped in and grabbed Katy. I got you. He said squinting his eyes to the lava. Then they froze midstream, they were floating. They then landed on the side of the volcano. Are you crazy?! Sam screamed. You put yourself, And others in harm's way because of your stupid stunt. I had enough. I turned to him. You know, Ever since mom died you have been on my case about everything. If I had to I could take care of myself. Without you. I said angrily. He thought about it a minute. Okay. He said. You think you can go without me. Go ahead. But know, When dad walked out, I was the only thing you had. He said as if he were royalty. I looked at him and he got blasted backwards. I haven't talked to you or depended on you for ten years, I think I have gotten pretty good at it. I said angrily. I turned around and and tried to walk away when he grabbed my arm. Then he whispered: You leave. You won't be alive by morning. They will find you, And I am not gonna help sense you can "be on your own." I looked straight ahead and shook his arm off mine. I turned around and slapped him. Never put you hands on me, Samuel. I screamed and ran down the volcano. As soon as I hit the ground I ran. Then I felt someone beside me. It was Michael. I wasn't mad at him but I wanted to be alone. So I ran faster. So did he then he tackled me to the ground. I tried to struggle against him but he held me down smiling. I couldn't help but laugh. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see Sam and Nadia talking. I got up grabbed Michael's Hand and ran. I didn't know where I was going. But I didn't stop for anything.....As long as I was with Michael everything was Okay......For Now..