BlackKitten

Oh, you don't have a reason to be sorry. I like criticism, It challenges the mind to it's most possible capacity. I'm always open to helpful tips.

~Chapter One~ Elizabeth, sat, Knees to her chest. She twirled her Kunai looking over The Sea of Despair. She sighed, Longing for Life to improve. Longing for her return of home. She shook her head rapidly at the thought. "No." She said, Her voice cracking. She realized. The land. That she had trained on, Lived on...Survived on, Was her home. She had now lived on The land of Nightmares for, Ten years of her life. And, She was now, Sixteen. When she was Six that is when her world started crashing. She lived on a part of earth that was never known of. It had a small tribe that was supported by only the highest of governments. They were supported by, The United States, Great Britain, Germany and China. But, During that time. The United States and Germany were at each other's throats. But, Neither one had enough soldiers to end this with a war to settle. So, The village was able to raise their children to the age of six then they were sent to the land of nightmares. Never able to return unless in a body bag or the war has ended. Elizabeth had been here for so many years, being challenged in the wilderness. She hadn't been picked to go into the war yet. Yet, It seemed everyday was a war to stay alive. Lost in her thought she heard foot steps across the cold snow, clear as day. She flinched as they came closer. She mumbled and out of the water she pulled a katana. Her eyes traced the ground as the steps came closer. She looked up and was surprised to see a human instead of an blood-thirsty animal. She looked at the human specifying whether he was indeed humane or not. He caught her eyes by a thread. "Yes, I am a human." He answered before she could even form her lips to ask. She narrowed her eyes at him as he took out his bowie. "I am Luke, Luke Johnson." He said staring across the sea. He sat down. "What is your name, Miss?" He asked swiftly. She brushed her hair out of her face threw the Kunai into the water as it made a deep purple cut that soon disappeared. "Elizabeth, Elizabeth Motorola." She said softly. She got up and walked away into the wilderness. He sighed as she walked away only to hear a deep growl. It came from the direction she went in. He got up and walked after her. Only to see, She was against a rock, Unarmed at the mercy of a Cougar. He backed up slightly. The cougar then pounced at her. Elizabeth only short time to do such she jumped on the rock and flipped frontward as the cougar went under her she went over it. She then grabbed it's fur, yanking it back over her into the ground, her landing on it's back. She whispered something and it whimpered and limped away as she got up. Luke had so many thoughts going through his head. "Who was this girl?" was the most important one.

At the time they didn't know whether the kids could have been playing or true terror. They wouldn't know because they were occupied with the responsiblities of Olympus. They wouldn't be able to had guess or...such say know the scream of the boy. They would guess that they were in a sort of game. They answered "Happily" Because they had their thoughts that their kids were actually having fun like normal kids also but also there is the point of doubt they choose not to think about in these circumstances. And also they were twins, I form them as god and goddess of day and night because also Helios and Selene were the god and goddess of the sun and moon, But in some forms the four gods traded places at certain times

(Note: Hey guys, I wanted to start something new.I am studying greek and egyptian mythology. So, I had a few Ideas. Tell me what you think.) (Chapter one) A Goddess Gets Killed.. In the wooded area of Olympus, Played a little girl and boy. Seven yearold Artemis and Ten yearold Apollo. They were brother and sister, Yet to find out what was their "Secret Identity." Artemis ran around the forest as her brother chased her. "I'm gonna get you,Artemis!" He yelled happily. Artemis screamed and ran away. She had her auburn hair in a ponytail. And her eyes that shined pale as the moon. She laughed as her brother tackled her. They rolled around, being exposed to the winter air. A strange man then walked up to them. "Hello, Children." He said sternly. He reached out and grabbed Artemis. "Let my sister go!" Apollo screamed. The man dragged Artemis a few feet and stabbed her in the stomach then dropped her. "No!" Apollo screamed, He grabbed a knife and tackled the man. "I will kill you!" Apollo screamed. He repeatedly stabbed the man in the chest. The man slowly disintegrated. Apollo stood and walked to Artemis who was passed out on the ground. He sat down and put her head on his lap as the blood covered him. "Its okay, Sissy." He said softly. "Everything is okay..." He said softer. Her breathing slowed and slowed. He got up and ran. "Mom!, Dad!' He screamed. Zeus and His wife Leto. "Yes, Son?" They said in a panic. "Artemis, Got stabbed by someone and she is dying, Help!' He said with tears in his eyes. They looked at his pants drenched in blood and ran into the woods, Searching for Artemis. (Note: I am making a version of how Apollo and Artemis became god and goddess of light and the night. So tell me what ya think.. Have a nice day/night.~BlackKitten)

Hey, Guys. Today I am starting a new story. Chapter one will be done tonight. Fingers cross atleast. Have a nice day/night.~BlackKitten

I don't know why, But I am not a happy person and I don't know how to write happy things But I think I am not going to rehab.

I was broken, But I didn't know it. I was hurt, But I didn't show it. One wishes lies and pain away. But, They always come back the next day. Though I look at the world as a horrible place. That feeling..Never seems to stay. I realize now, why I was sad. It's because I ran away from my past. So, Listen now to the words I care to speak. Never run...Or the pain will repeat. I still feel the empty void. And I will until the day my life is destroyed.........