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  1. black x feather
    THIS IS MILKSHAKE PRISON!!!
  2. black x feather
    Because... u.... number 8, that is all. Can you really slip on a banana while driving?
  3. black x feather
    and the result is the fruit
  4. black x feather
    Nope he isn't. Harharhar.
  5. black x feather
    So is this whats on the agenda of the internet these days? And I'm back, do I get a cookie? forget the cookie I want a win medal. and maybe some frozen coffee would be nice.
  6. black x feather
    oreo's are cookies too. The power of this cookie gives me strength to wi- oh hey look another cookie. The tree would also like to win. *tree munches cookie...somehow*
  7. black x feather
    por que no? cookies are a good source of win you know. and the care bear, well it's just a care bear so I win although that tree outside of stewie's window does deserve to win this game.
  8. black x feather
    Como no, and now to retrieve my winning cookie.
  9. black x feather
    Ahh yes my brother is good at distracting assassins with his featheryness(word I made up just now). That vid never gets old.
  10. black x feather
    I keep seeing commercials on that episode. They sure put alot of into it
  11. black x feather
    yes! good feather! oh and "this" feather is approved so I win.
  12. black x feather
    ...fast so not I win.(apparently I come back every week or 2 for this )
  13. black x feather
    My boredom has returned to this thread... "To w1nz a cooki3z!"
  14. black x feather
    When I woke. It was empty. No one was around. Did I do this..?......................... Who cares I won. x3
  15. black x feather
    I see you brought hypno toad back. and fools, my legend begins in the 12th century, therefore i win.
  16. black x feather

    Back from the depths of school work... hi peoples.

    1. Ultimate Oblivion

      Ultimate Oblivion

      hi.lol

    2. Naroco

      Naroco

      HI -waves like an idoit- (lol)

  17. black x feather
    wait wait wait...(reads the final results) sorry folks the real winner is black x feather!
  18. black x feather
    Wow just took a break from mine and started reading yours for the 1st time. This is just amazingly detailed. Aside from that I noticed a few typos such as in the 1st chapter, I recall ventus being a "he" not a "she" but its not a big deal I guess. Can't wait for more though.
  19. black x feather
    Exactly. Cause I did.
  20. black x feather
    Luckily there's a family guy.
  21. black x feather
    Nyoooooooooooooooo... It's all about super tacos from outer space. (The hell did hypnotoad go man? he was so fun to look at)
  22. black x feather
    It's not that i didn't win, it's that I didn't lose.
  23. black x feather
    NO NO NO NO! I win.
  24. black x feather
    Oh I guess you haven't seen (click it- warning side effects such as constant nyaning, annoyance, or win may occur)
  25. black x feather
    Nice I like your style of writing. It has a good amount of background detail, although It can be more interesting if you can add more depth to your details such as a feeling before "DARKNESS". Was something going through his mind or something. And for the "black things" attacking as we can obviously refer to as heartless, did Mark have a strange feeling before they appeared and how did they appear. Idk this is just my thoughts. Don't get me wrong, I like your story so far and I'm not forcing you to change it. Just some thoughtful criticism. Can't wait to see more.
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