Final Hearts 69

This is an interesting song...but like JTD95 said 'we all have our own taste'. I happen to like whatever it is that interests me, this song has good rhythm and beat to it...its the first I heard this song though and I think it's alright. It is an interesitng song, but not enough to interest me into listening to it a second time. We all have our preferances, so it doesn't shock me that you love this song.

Went to take a peek and found a story that has potential. From what I have read this will be a great story can't wait to read more and finds out what happens. Keep up the great work.

I love where this is going keep it up. It's so fascinating to read. You have extreme talent, by what I have read keep it up. I am enjoying every word you write.

As he was making is way to his room again, Demyx spots someone up head talking to someone else. Thinking that it was Marluxia, Demyx quickened his pace only to find out that it was Vexen and Lexeaus talking about something that he didn't want to get involved with. So he then continued on his way and instead of entering his room he went outside and walked around the world that never was. Hoping that he would find something interesting to do besides going on missions. "What a nice day for a walk outside the castle." He said to himself, even though it was pouring rain and was dark enough for him and the other organization members to blend in and sleathly make their way to wherever it was they needed to go. He sighed again and found a tree to relax under. He then took out his sitar and started strumming it out of boredom, but at the same time keeping himself entertianed.

Realizing that the Superior was there and was talking to him, Demyx stopped in his tracks and looked at him. "No, Superior, I haven't seen Marluxia...but Zexion is in the grey room if you want him." Demyx answered. "If I see Marluxia I'll tell him that you're looking for him though." He added as he started to walk away.

That's what I meant.

I've seen these videos already . they crack me up. I love the part where Demyx comes in and talks trash about how he takes out the enemies with his music-which is true. I really believe that he could beat Roxas' and Axel butts at gutiar hero.

Interesting intro, that had gotten me captivated for more. Great work and keep it up.

"Sounds great, I'm a good singer...with practice I'm sure I'll be a great singer. A duet is always a nice way to show talent among us whether its vocals or inrstrumental. The practice should tell us our strengths and weaknesses, but we could always make our weaknesses stronger. That was a good move on your part, now that we have a place to practice we need the day and time to practice." Lin said. "Now that part is covered, i would like your guy's input on the design of our name." Lin said as she turned away from Sanchez and looked at the others.

Demyx woke up from his unexpected nap and decided to walk around the castle. Not at all having the intention of going anywhere or running into anyone, Demyx just walked around aimlessly. He went to find people and ended up in the grey room. Where he had spotted Zexion reading his book. Demyx went over to him and sat down then sighed out of boredom. he then tried to figure out which book Zexion was reading. Since he knew that Zexion had a lot of them in his room. apparently he was destiracting Zexion from his book. "Could I help you with something Demyx?" Zexion asked. "Uh...I was just wondering what book you're reading." "Why do you want to know?" Zexion stated uninterested. "No reason, just bored." Zexion just ignored the comment and continued reading his book. Demyx then got up and left. "Fine, I'll just go somewhere else." Demyx mummbled to himself and continued to walk around the castle aimlessly again.

He then remembered what Xordal had said to him and went over to find Xenku for the information. "Xenku...what kind of information have you, Xordal and the others have found out from the computer that you had found? I had asked Xordal about it and he said to come and talk to you. So could you show me the information that you had found?" Dexan had called up to Xenku when he found her sitting in one of the chairs.

Wow can't believe I missed that much of the story. it is an awesome story so far. especially with the music that you added to it. I can't wait until I could read what you have to dish out next. keep it up, becuase I'm loving this story. Agreed, I was listening to Caramelldansen when i was reading chapters 19prt2-21 and it didn't go at all. I changed the song to something else and the song deffinitely went with the story. the song in chapter 22 went extremely well. it actually made it seem like i was listening to the soundtrack of the book. I love it when the songs I listen to sound like they actually belong to the story. it makes reading the story all the more interesting to read. keep up the fantastic writing.

(hey guys, sorry I haven't been on lately. I'll do my best and come on more often than I had.) After class was over, she spotted Mark and the others over at the table where they all had meet and went over to them. "Hey guys,I was thinking over a few things during class and I thought that I would run them by you first. First I took in the thought of what you had said before we all left for class, Sanchez. I like the idea. We could alternate with each song we sing or if you like we could have our own songs and have a few of them in a row...know what, I just realized how stupid that was. how about this instead...we sing whatever song we like to sing as long as we both have a chance with the mic." Lin said. she then took out her notebook and opened it up to where she had drawn some designs in the margin. "Alright, during class I was designing what our name could look like. "We could have it just plain, or we could have it stand out like it is on here..." she pointed to one that had a colored background- the color is black- and the writing of 'Forsaken Youth' in spiked writing-looks like the kind you see on the title of Harry Potter- "or we could have the band name in cursive with it almost blending in to the drum head." She added as she pointed out the one that she had talked about. " I like them all, but it's up to you guys on what will be going on the drum head for our band. So what do you think?" she paused for a short while then added. "If you guys don't like any of them I could always come up with some new ones or we all could come up with our own and combine them. I am not really picky on what it looks like. I just thought that this was a good idea."

@Domynatyr Clau-demyx, I like the fact that you had hid Demyx's name in your character's name that was very clever. the only problem i seem to have with your bio is the rank. Someone already has the rank. If you could change that for me you'll have a spot in the org. @Xion---424 Accepted. I like the fact that you added decimals to the rank catagory, also liked how creative your profile was. Welcome to Organization 69. As a reminder of the rules 1. Respect the kh13 rules for rp 2. Don't use names from Organization 13 but you can combine them to make a name. --for example: Zexel (Zexion +Axel) {if you do use a combination please show us how you got it... as shown}--- 3. ****No duplications of rank please**** 4.can use abilities of Organization 13 or combine them 5. Be creative 6. Be respectful to other rp'ers 7.please keep ages from 13-10 (this will be the age that your character had turned into a Nobody) 8. Don't use nicknames from organization 13; they must be original or combination of them. --- for example: melodious Schemer (melodious nocturne + cloaked schemer){if you do use a combination please show us how you got it...as shown}--- 9. have fun with this. 3. ****No duplications of ranks please.**** Seems like almost everyone seems to overlook this rule. Look at the rules more than once when you make your character bio.If I must I will be really strict and say that the sign ups are closed. Please don't let me do that, even though the spots i needed filled are filled I believe that everyone should get a chance at this and have fun. If a rank appears and someone else already has that rank, I'll see to it that the sign-up will be closed. Also take note at what Rikunobodyxiii has post up there as well that way there will be no duplications of rank.

( http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png I'm very sorry about not coming on more often. I'll try and do my best on coming on more then this ....and axgrce if your typing out of character please put () around the words so we know that it's not part of the rp thanks . Again Sorry for being the one that seems to keep this in a standstill when my part is needed :unsure:... http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cry.png .) He went over to Xordal "The plan...well...first we need everyone here for the meeting. Next you said that you had found the computer that the other organization had used. What kind of information did you collect from the computer? The information about the organization members will be very useful in the meeting. I'll go out and get a new computer to replace the one that was broken after the meeting so don't need to stress over that." Dexan answered, then looked around and saw how many people were there. "Only three people here out of sixteen or seventeen..." he muttered to himself. "Xordal...could you search the castle for the others and find out where they could be at? This meeting is very vital to what we need to be doing.I think that this Organization 13 has the answers to the questions that we all have." He then went over to a chair and sat down to relax.

Dexan turned around and realized that one of the members had spoken. He then realized that the member had their hood up to cover their face. "Excellent...I was beginning to worry that no one would get the notices." he then paused. "Anyways, welcome and make yourself comfortable." The member handed over the notice and walked over to one of the chairs and sat down. He sat the paper down on the table that he had set up while he was waiting for the members to show up.

"Actually, I play the piano...and i could sing also. But I'll sing the backups, if you like...and i don't mind sharing the instrument either." Lin then looked down at her watch. "I got to go, lunch is almost up and I need to be clear across campus for my theater class."She then got up, grabbed her bag. "the name is perfect, I like it very much." She stated and then walked off in the direction of where the auditorium is at. When she got there the bell rang to start class, Lin was thinking over what had happened at lunch and started drawing the design of the name in the margins of her notebook as she was taking notes. halfway through the class, she got up and did her assigned piece for the class.The bell then rang for the end, though the last time that she had looked at her watch it was only ten minutes into the class.As she was walking out of the class Lin was caught up in a daydream about the band that she automatically had placed together with other students. she was so caught up that she was late by five minutes to her last class for the day.

(When you have the chance, have your character make their way to the round room for that long over due meeting I said we were going to have. If your character is already at the castle have them make their way to the room, please and thank you.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3JjfH_0TzXk (I had to put this one in, I just love this song.) my votes are: One step closer Sanctuary Monster All for you Worth fight for

here's my song list to chose from: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BD9YX0rdMoc http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LpjkHQxEMd4

"Yeah, I agree. I'm getting tired of this classical music. I like the Genre, don't get me wrong. But what about doing something modren for us kids. You know what I'm saying right?" Lin asked after a few bites of food. Then an idea struck her. "Hey guys....I judt got a brillaint idea...." Lin stated as everyone looked at her. "What if we start our own band here in school? I mean, we could play our personal instruments and hold little concerts for the rally's...we'll have to come up with a name though, but at least we'll be playing with our instruments. What do you guys think about that?" Lin then looked down at her phone and saw that lunch was almost up. She got up and threw away her trash and went back to the table.

I love it. keep it going.