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  1. Hi there, nice to meet you! You're going on college for English Language? That's sounds so awsome! I'm planning to study English as well and I can tell you this is good idea you joined. It's so good exercise to speak with people here. It also helps a lot of you're writing all sorts of stories. If you have time to spare, check my stories on my profile. Anyway welcome again and feel free to chat with me anytime you want!
  2. A-W-S-O-M-E chapter pal! Key is a traveling machine? Really interesting!
  3. First chapter of Last Keyblade Wielder is already written. http://kh13.com/forum/topic/39573-hawkies-stories-last-keyblade-wielder/ For Keyblade School Of Hearts I unfortunately think I don't have time. And what do you mean being in story?
  4. Chapter Three: Long Stories After a breath taking runaway, golden wolf found himself in different world. That world felt a way batter than a hell that he has visited before. “I know this world…” kitty in Os’s mouth quietly said. “My master’s friend lives here. Let’s go inside.” Kuma turned into his human form as Os putted him on the ground. Red haired started walking when he realized wolf didn’t turned back in the boy. “Why won’t you turn into your human form? You’re giving me the creeps in this one.” Os sadly looked down for reply. He couldn’t take his original form, because Crace done something to him when she had captured him. Kuma partly understood it must be something like that. He had seen spells that prevent you from changing back in the human before. So he just let him follow him as a wolf. Together they entered huge building that reminded them on tower. Kuma had heard about that tower before, but he has never actually visited it. As they walked through corridor, wolf didn’t say a thing. Red haired was also quiet because he thought wolf wants so. But the truth was that Os couldn’t talk in his wolf form. Reason for that was his joined body with Hydro’s. True he was still human, but being joined by wolf didn’t allow him talk. Wolf’s mouths aren’t made for talking duo to not having developed talking organs. Pair soon reached huge room, decorated in magical and oriental style. Most of the room was filled with all sorts of weird objects and countless shelves with books. Os nearly thought it was empty when he saw a person on the floor, meditating. It was a woman, quietly sitting on the rug while some sunshine gently shone on her face. Kuma stepped in front of her and politely bowed as she looked at him. “Welcome to my tower. If I’m not mistaken you’re Kuma, Magma’s apprentice.” she said. “Yes, Master Cynthia. Over there is my friend Os who helped me escaped from Black Manor.” “I know. I was the one who created the Spirit Window that brought you here. Now that you escaped, Umbra will search every world to found you. But his dark corridors won’t work here. I protected it enough.” “Yeah, thank you so much for that. But what should I do now?” “We can start with your friend.” Cynthia went to the golden wolf who bowed just like Kuma did before. “If I’m not mistaken, he’s an Ial. Did you know that?” Wolf was a bit surprised duo to her knowledge. He didn’t tell anyone that word, so why does she know that? Quietly he watched how she gently stroked his fur. As she removed her hand, he suddenly felt difference in his inner power. With a breath from inside he turned back in a blonde haired boy with a wolf by his legs. Red haired was a bit confused of what just happen, so he decided to leave Os to the word. “How… what… just happened? Either way thank you.” Os stutterly said. “And how come you know about us?” “I know many things, but this is the first time that I met an Ial. I only heard about you.” “So who are those Ials?” Kuma interrupted. Blonde haired sighed as he began o talk again. “Those are the people, mostly kids who died once, but got a second chance to live. I’m one of them.” “Wow, so that means you died once?” “Yeah, but I rather don’t wanna talk about it. I came from a second dimension of our world.” “What’s a dimension?” Kuma asked. “It’s kinda like world within the world. It’s called Realm of Spirits right?” Cynthia continued. “Yeah, there we train to get well with our powers. Mine is controlling water.” “Then what’s the deal with your changed forms and that wolf you have there?” “You mean Hydro? He’s actually me, because when I died my soul has been separated on two parts. One part took a form of Trinity animals. That’s why I could also take a form of hawk. Other stayed in me and was gifted by ability of inner power.” “I understand you have a lot to say, but I still don’t know why you came here.” “Well… me and couple of friends had mission which took us beyond our world. We’d suppose to just do research on one mystic object when suddenly something came. I only remember some kind of smoke and then I woke up at that world where I found you.” “So what are you going to do now?” Kuma asked. “I have to find my friends. They’re probably in trouble and thing that split us up is bad news.” Os said as he wanted to leave. “No wait! Let me go with you. I can help, like when my mom caught you.” Boy tried to knock the thought of getting captured out. It was not his style to get captured on so easy way. Os sighed while thinking if he should take Kuma with him or not. “It’s going to dangerous. Don’t you wanna go home when you’ll be safe? That lady can do Portals or Spirit Windows like you said.” “If I go home, this will be the first place where those two will look for me.” “He’s right, why don’t you take him with him? Both of you will be able to look after each other’s backs.” Cynthia said. “Alright, but be careful.” blonde sighed. Kuma happily followed him and Cynthia who opened new Spirit window. “You can start looking here. If you don’t find your friends there, I’ll open another one leading back.” “Thank you for your help ma’am.” boys waved their goodbyes as they went in another world. In some other world, Gake was walking towards big hillside area. Wind was gently flowing through all those hills, making everything so fresh. He was about to think how peaceful area is when suddenly nose was heard. Big flying machine with four wings flew above sky. Gake haven’t seen such huge machine to fly. As he looked deeply, he could saw four people ridding it. All of them seemed to enjoy when something ruin their day. Something hit front part of machine, which sent them crash landing on near hill. Gake rushed to see if they’re alright. Major part of the flying machine was ruined. Teens inside didn’t seem injured a lot, but they were shocked about their flying machine. “Hey, are you alright?” Gake asked as he helped them out of their machine. “I think so.” girl introducing as Aer said. “I wouldn’t say same for the plane.” boy Clouth mumbled. “We were building it for so long.” boy Flit said sadly. “And now it’s destroyed…” Widh looked at damage. “Do you know what caused it to crash?” Gake asked. “I think something crashed into front part…. wow what’s that?” Aer said shockly and pointed her finger on something feathered. It was something alive duo to its breathing. Teens looked closely as they see what it actually was. Unusual big hawk with light brown feathers and two long tail feathers was lying right next to them. It seemed very injured, as it was dead. But it was still breathing. “We need to get this stuff back to our house.” Clouth said. “Do you need a hand?” “We could use one.” Gake helped them carry pieces of machine back in town. While going down, he looked back for the bird. But it was gone. Brown haired watched how four of them started putting flying machine together. Seeing he won’t be any use there made him go back. Either way bird wasn’t there anymore, he still wanted to see view of the hills again. He managed to come back, seeing another unusual thing. Two teens, girl and boy were holding hawk as it was a toy. They kept throwing it in the air until Gake shouted them to stop. “Hey what are you doing?” “Nothing, just playing. Catch it Kirt. “Got it Herd.” “Knock it of!” Gake summoned his keyblade. “Oh, you wanna play too.” “But we won’t give it to you.” In that moment hawk woke up, biting boy’s hand. Even though it hurt, he still didn’t release it. Hawk closed its eyes, using his special power. Suddenly, wind started blowing right from the hawk. Both of them were scared, quickly running from small tornado that was forming. Gake only confusedly watch hawk that started fixing its wings. “How did you do that?” Hawk only smiled and started glowing. Next moment, brown haired boy who looked kinda like Kuma stood in front of him, with almost the same hawk on his shoulder. “Hi, I’m Dimi!” boy said cheerfully. “Fellow here is Whirl. What’s your name?” “I’m Gake… but how could you…” “… make that wind? It’s my special power. But now I think I have to go. My friends aren’t on this world either.” “If you want you can come with me. I’m traveling around worlds too and I saw you know how to fight as well.” “Would you really take me with you? Gosh, thank you!” Both boys were about to go when suddenly, horde of black creatures surrounded them. “What are those?” Dimi asked scared. “Xioblivians! Hope you’re ready to fight!”
  5. Here's my entry! http://light-13-hawkie.deviantart.com/art/Ultimate-Kingdom-Hearts-3D-Artwork-In-Your-Heart-321767733 I really hope I have any chances for this... if not, well... this drawing will be at least nice for my sketch book collection. And I noticed... none before me had drawn Xion... guess she's really forgoten...
  6. New chapter! Sorry cuz I couldn't post it sooner, but my sis's boyfriend kept "borowing" my laptop. Here it goes! Chapter Nineteen: Escape While You Can In some place around North’s America desert, building was hidden. None knew it was there, in fact only a few scientists claimed to be research center. That kind of center would usually researching weather, desert’s wild life, flora…. but it didn’t. If inspectors walked deeper, from all laboratories with ridicules fake experiments they could suspect something isn’t right. If they didn’t get amazed by cages with normal lab animals like rats and listen to ventilations, they would hear a truth. Much floors lower, under huge rooms with supplies and transportations was different story. There floors weren’t designed as researching laboratories but as worst prison on earth. Prison wouldn’t be right word to use. Usually people who did something wrong were there. People here… no kids and teens who were there, didn’t do anything wrong. Only one thing was wrong – in eyes of white coats they only existed to be used as test subjects. In cell floor used to be a lot of innocent kids. From really young ones to nearly full aged teenagers. All of them were slowly disappearing. From white coat’s reports: Most of C and D subjects are dead duo to failing turning into Dreamers. Dreamer… that’s how Ial was called in reports. Almost six years of focusing on those experiments brought a lot of information. Even though some kids plucked courage to ask why scientists are doing this, same actions answered them. Those who struggled were even more voluble. Because they had inside power that wanted to live. But for now… only one experiment of Artificial Dreamer was successful. And it escaped right in front of their eyes. “Damm those idiots! How could they let just twelve year old boy escape?!” Sat hit table fiercely. “Some more Dreamers appeared and escaped… also police arrived.” leader of grey group talked on the phone. “Don’t you have guns and oh yeah… blast machines! Big deal if police arrive! You got plenty of reasons to chase subjects!” “I’m really sorry sir… it won’t happen again.” “You better hope so!” Sat threw cell phone against the wall. Scientist around early thirties again checked reports from failed mission. Sat’s main work was around Case C9 and he already saw boy was turned into Ial. He could see his powers of creating illusions just after he injected boy with deadly drugs. Now he had prepared everything to represent C9 case to man who supported their entire nature research. That man wasn’t an actual scientist. He was just a leading boss of a lot of companies. After white coats showed him how much useful Ials can be, he began borrowing them money. Man named Zeren was old, but still seeking power. From time to time he came to check new cases. Case C9 was perfect subject to represent. That’s also reason why Gray Group went to pick him. Now that he was gone, Sat needed to make new plan. “Get lab ten get for B1 case!” he shouted to some white coats standing near him. Meanwhile, much floors lower small group of kids was talking. One was brown haired boy Dimi with Spirit Mate Whirl by his side. Next to him was blond haired girl Roxy, having little dark haired girl named Alicia in her arms. “How did you get here Alicia? Did someone take you?” Roxy asked gently. “I don’t know… I just went in school and then I was here.” “Were you the only one?” Dimi joined. “No… there were other kids too… mostly old as same as me… I only saw big ones once.” While little girl talked Roxy carefully looked in her eyes. She was looking for Ial mark, hoping to see it. When she didn’t find it blonde couldn’t understand. Why are they taking ordinary kids as well? Can’t they see those aren’t Rookies? More thoughts entered her mind as Alicia started crying. “What’s the matter?” blonde asked. “I wanna go home! Why can’t I?” “We wanna go home too, but… it’s because of them we can’t. They want us here.” Little girl hid her face in Roxy’s shirt that was wetter by every minute. She really didn’t know what to say to just eight year old girl. Alicia didn’t deserve to be here nor did she or Dimi. Blonde clenched her fists in anger as she again thought about white coats. They can hurt her as much as they want, but she won’t let them hurt innocent children! Just when she wanted to tell Alicia the truth, door of the cell opened. Three white coats entered, seriously looking at the kids. When one of them got closer to little brown haired, Roxy quickly hid her in her own arms. “Don’t touch her!” blonde nearly shouted. One of scientist started laughing as other two went to Dimi and Whirl. Dimi’s rings stuck together as Whirl got lead at his collar. They took frightened boy outside the cell, leaving Roxy and Alicia alone. After some time of silence, brown haired broke it. “Why did they take Dimi and doggie? Is he coming back?” “Alica… I don’t know how to say it to you, but some things are too complicated for your little head.” “Please, tell me what’s going on. Those men won’t tell me and what if they take you too? I’ll be alone again…” In that moment blonde could felt Alicia’s brave heartbeat and even sparkles in her eyes. “She deserves to know…” Roxy thought. “Okay… I’ll tell you, but you have to promise to me that you won’t tell this to anyone. Especially the white coats.” “I promise.” “You see Dimi and I aren’t ordinary kids like you are. We’re Ials, special ones with powers.” “Powers? You mean like in movies?” “Yeah, but it’s a bit different like you think. We don’t magically snap with fingers or something. Our bodies are made like that.” “What kind of power do you have? Do you move objects? Can you make spider webs? Can you make fire with your eyes?” Alicia excitedly listed powers from movies like Superman and Spiderman. “No…” Roxy smiled “My power is a bit different. See my pony tails?” “Yeah?” “Inside of them I have tiny shards that can make electricity. But right now my powers are bit worn off.” “Why don’t you use your super powers to escape then?” “Wish I could, but those metal rings around my wrists and ankles can hurt me if I try to.” “Why am I here if I’m normal?” “I don’t know sweetie… I really wish I could.” Outside in corridor, Dimi was dragged towards big room. Before they entered, Sat came straight in front of him. With his deadly eyes he looked directly in his terrified eyes. “Listen B1 case! Today you’ll behave as I’ll tell you. Do one foolish thing and you’ll spend your next week in Dry Cell!” Dimi knew what Dry Cell is. That was the room that was directly connected with desert’s heat. There was no ventilation, only extremely dry air. This was bad duo to his inner power. Dryness was his next weakness beside EMB. Usually next weakness was based on their inner powers. He, with powers of wind being in totally dry room would definitely left him some days of suffering if not falling in coma. So brown haired just silently nodded. Sat dragged him in much bigger room, almost bigger than a gym. More white coats were in, along with a lot of equipment. Also another man Dimi has never seen before was there. Older man was looking at some papers when brown haired with stuck wrists was brought in front of him. “Is that the boy?” he looked away from the papers. “Yes, Mr. Zeren. The one that can makes wind.” “May I see his powers in action?” “Of course. B1! Get in glass cage!” Dimi could now see almost invisible building in the middle of the room. When he in Whirl got inside, Sat removed rings on his wrists. “Just one try to escape…” Sat started. “ …. and I’ll go in Dry Cell.” Dimi finished. “Shut up, you little.” Sat slapped him. Rings on ankles stuck together as something was brought inside glass building. Giant ventilator! Scientist got outside, as one of them took megaphone. “Join together.” was shouted from megaphone. Brown haired nodded to Whirl who took form of the hawk and flew through him. Their minds were joined together in bigger brown feathered hawk. He took flight around glass building. “No more playing around, show how fast can you fly.” Boy did as he was ordered to. With fast moves he convinced Zeren about speed as his main ability. Man was really impressed by him. “Can I see how fast can he fly against the wind?” “Turn the ventilation on. 60 km/h for start.” Suddenly, strong wind started blowing. Dimi got in the center to fly better. When Sat saw that wasn’t big deal for him, he turned it on 90 km/h. That was a bit harder but still flyable for other Ials as well. Then ventilator was turned on wind power of 120 km/h. Normal Ials couldn’t fly against that strong wind. Dimi could still fly duo to his inner power of wind. “Is this glass building, wind proved?” Zeren asked. “Yes, wind power over 400 km/h can’t destroy it. Should I raise it on 160 km/h?” “Yes please. His power sure is amazing.” Hawk still flew, trying to imagine Realm of Spirits for just one time. How he flew with his friends against pure wind. How he played Acceorbi. How his brother always waited for him. Suddenly he could felt stronger pressure against him. Wind power was now already 250 km/h. His wings felt harder than before. Probably because he haven’t flown for some time. More wind was released. Over 300 km/ h was almost pushing him against wall. “B1, move on the center.” order was shouted. He tried hard, but sprains almost started damaging his wings. Painfully he moved on the center. He felt like somebody is pulling him back and pushing him forward at once. Zeren noticed that. “Is 350 km/h the fastest speed he can fly against?” “He can take much more.” Sat turned it on exactly 400 km/h. Sudden acceleration pushed Dimi back. He luckily focused on his flying and tried hard to come in the center again. But all this flying strongly damaged his wings. Not just because of the wind pressure but also because he haven’t flown for months. Using so much strength for hard flying was the same as not warming up before doing hard sport. “Wonderful! I haven’t seen such powerful flying!” “So what do you think of the deal you read before?” “I accept it. As long as this one flies so fast you’ll get all the money you need. Could you bring him in my wind power station in a week?” “Sir… Dreamers aren’t meant to be used like that.” “It’s first time for everything. Remember that!” As Sat was thinking about deal, something went wrong. Dimi was really tired from all that flying. Even though he tried hard to, his wings didn’t listen to him anymore. Suddenly they stopped flapping by themselves which sent him hardly against glass wall. Wind was pushing him so hard that glass wall couldn’t take it anymore. Wind literally sent him crushing through the wall directly on the ground. Wind quickly used crack in glass to filled room with itself, totally messing everything in it. White coats needed to hold on something or wind could blow them away. In the end Sat managed to turn ventilator off. As everyone in room slowly stood up, Dimi noticed something. Duo to his fall, metal rings broke along with collar. He was free! Just like this. None else could press the button and hurt him. Brown haired quickly looked around to see any possible exits. Wind damaged major part of the room, along with ventilation system. With powers that he wasn’t allowed to use for so long he used them to get there. Creating small spinning winds was one more power he could use. When he entered small hole from which wind was coming, somebody angrily yelled. “B1! Get back here at once!” Sat pressed on button which would send shocks in Dimi’s body. “Not this time.” Dimi smiled as he took his human form. Boy began to crawl until he reached next empty room. There he went in different ventilation system, using his human form again. While crawling towards exit, out of abby, his arms hurt. Pain was probably from all this damage he got from that experiment. He tried to use his legs more instead of his hurt arms. Soon, ventilation turned up. There were also some bars capable of holding like ladder. Just little more and he’ll escape. But then another thought broke his thinking. Roxy and Alicia… those two girls were locked up in cell. What if he escapes when those two are still captured? He couldn’t just leave them there, but he couldn’t waste his chance either. While deciding his next move, some kind of smoke filled ventilation. Whirl carefully sniffed it which caused boy sudden spinning in head. White coats must have figured how to put paralyzing drug into gas. Brown haired used some of his powers to blow it away as he kept climbing up. More smoke came when he finally found end of ventilation. Dimi came in unknown laboratory which was luckily empty. He kept thinking what to do. Lab was filled with a lot of cages and tables. Maybe that was lab where all experiments begin. Scientists take samples and tests on lab animals and compare them with Ial ones. But this still didn’t make any sense on what they try to find out about them. How they make difference from normal humans? How they’re born? Or how their powers work? “Dimi, look.” Whirl whispered. Hawk showed on map of an abby. It sure was a way bigger than his home town. But map showed only two floors with usual labs. There were signs of cell rooms or labs where scientists done experiments on him. Even he wanted to he couldn’t help Roxy and Alicia escape too. He had no idea where they were or even where he was. Only thing that he could do was to escape and run away as fast as he can. “Forgive me Roxy… for leaving you behind. But as soon as I get out I’ll tell others where you are.” Brown haired took the ID card he found on table. Usually white coats wore those to get in different labs and cells. If cards can unlock cells they can probably unlock exits too. Carefully he stepped in the corridor as Whirl kept himself hidden under his shirt. Even though hawk’s feathers tickled him big time, he tried to stay serious. Map said to turn twice on right, then go forward and take left fire emergency doors. He took exactly those steps when he got in front of that door. It was colored all red, with fire symbol in the middle. On upper part was also small glass window. Boy stepped on his fingers to look outside. His brother Leo often joked how short he was, which didn’t exactly help him right now. Outside he could see desert with some rare tufts of grass and bushes. Sun was practically melting his view as he looked for any roads. He managed to open tiny window a bit, only to get hit by sudden heat. Weather outside was so hot and dry that wind outside made him dizzy. He’ll really have hard time outside. Brown haired put ID card on lock which to his surprise didn’t open. In fact, after reading tiny text next to the door, he realized that door unlocks only automatically in fire. “Let’s go back. Maybe there’s another one.” Whirl suggested. “I think there was another one. I just hope nobody else is there.” Much to his surprise, that was answered pretty fast. Sat appeared with some white coats holding his metal stick. “You won’t get away you lab rat!” Sat shouted. “Says who…” Dimi tried to say when he needed to dodge from man’s attack. Dimi began to run through corridor as ropes rushed from men’s sticks. Those were the same ones that got him in this hell. His wind powers almost worn out as he tried to use it against those ropes. He needed to run, he needed to hide, anything just to get a hell out of here. As he ran he noticed an empty room. There he hid and used ID card to lock it. Luckily, this room could be only unlocked from inside. “What will we do now?” Whirl panicked as hawk. “I don’t know, maybe if try that ventilation again, but…” Before he could finish, door was literally blown from hinges. It looked like as men used explosion device to open it. Boy now ran off chances what to do. Ventilation was too small even for his snake form and door was crowded by white coats. In front of whole crowd, Sat was pointing his stick directly into boy. If boy didn’t join with Whirl in hawk form, ropes would probably capture him. Hawk flew around, trying to find any other way to escape. But that was pointless. Soon, he could felt tying rope around his hawk leg. Sat pulled him on ground so rough that he practically hit it. Hit damaged his back bones so hard that most of them broke. Dimi wasn’t able to do anything, not was even able to take his human form. As he was brokenly on ground Sat angrily came closer. “No matter how many times you try, we’ll always catch you. You belong here!” Sat shouted. Even though Dimi was all weak and wounded, he could still struggle. “No I don’t! I have family, I have friends and I have my home!” Dimi shouted, but none understood his hawk squeak. Sat only angrily trampled down his wing. “That’s for escaping!” Sat looked in Dimi’s eyes full of pain “And that’s for losing the deal with Mr. Zeren!” man shouted as he trampled down his other wing. Boy has been through a lot of pain, but this one was the most painful one. Both of his wings were broken as well as his back bones. All this was too much for him. He soon fainted. Dimi woke up some time later in unknown room. Lights weren’t very strong, just enough to have friendly light in space. When he woke up, he changed back in the human form to see he’s lying on bed. That wasn’t the one from cells or labs. This one seemed so fresh and soft. Almost as the one in his room, back home. He tried to move a bit, but that only gave him bellow of pain. What is going to happen to him now? He had tried to escape for couple of times before and he was always punished for that. What kind of punishment he’ll get now? Or he has already got it? While moving his fingers, he didn’t feel any rings on. Was that because he wasn’t able to move? “Are you awake Dimi?” voice asked. Weird… none of the white coats ever called him by his real name. Except for… “Phil?” boy asked weakly. “Hold on for a sec.” man used sheets under him to move him and Whirl on medical bed with wheels. Scientist pushed it down to corridor. “Where are you taking me?” Dimi asked as man entered totally black room with him. “I need to give an X-ray. If you don’t go for an X-ray I won’t know which of your bones I will need to treat.” Boy was carefully put on machine which was going to check his bones. Strong lights passed through him from different positions. Soon, machine was finished. Man took him from there and took him back in previous room. Dimi wanted to say something, but man was faster. “Try not to move until X-ray is finished. Sat sure gave you strong hit.” “Phil… what happened? And what are you doing here?” Scientist in front of him was one of the rarest men in gray who didn’t want to hurt him. His name was Phil and Dimi hasn’t seen him for weeks. “You had unsuccessful try to escape, but you got caught. You broke many of your bones and I’m here to treat them.” Phil said and left. Man returned with some big black pictures. After putting them on light board he sighed a lot. “I’m gonna need a lot of braces…” Phil opened closet to take braces, bandages and other medical stuff out. “I’ll turn you on front to put brace on your back, okay? Don’t be scared.” For the rest of an hour Dimi was silent, waiting for Phil to finish treating his broken bones. When man finished, he again looked straight into his eyes. “Why are you trying to escape so hard? Can’t you see it’s pointless?” “I must…” “Why must?” Dimi was suddenly really angry. Can’t he see how men are treating him like lab rat? Can’t he see that he doesn’t belong here? “Phil, I have a brother who cares about me. He’s my family along with all of my friends who’re waiting for me at home. Just because I died once doesn’t mean I don’t have home. We all live in special place where all Ials belong! Don’t think I have no other place to go just because I’m Ial!” After this speech, boy didn’t have any more strength left. He fell back in sleep, for his fractures to heal up. Phil looked at him with an interest. “You have never mentioned this kind of place to exist. We always thought Dreamers wonder all over the world…” Somewhere else, green haired Carl was shocked when he did some reports on older news papers. “No way…” he sighed as Nate came. “Mr. Silver wants to see your report.” “I don’t know if that’s right.” he showed on papers. Nate didn’t know what to say on that report. All didn’t make any sense when some did.
  7. As promised I start with a story that got most voices - Last Keyblade Wielder. Hope you'll enjoy this epic story! Chapter One: Fatal Past Once upon a time… jeez I’ll skip that! Anyway our story begins a long time ago. Time when Keyblade Wielders were protecting the balance of Light and Darkness. If someone needed their help, they always came. They travelled all around the world until they completed their goals. Some of them were known as the Keyblade Masters, who thought their apprentices until they became Masters as well. Many of them were very legendary duo to their heroic acts. However not anyone could be able to wield Keyblade. Only those chosen ones with pure hearts and power. But one single day changed their fates forever… In the land called Saphiria was a beautiful kingdom ruled by Master Ximen. He was one of the most skilled Keyblade wielders and many apprentices came to train under his eye. Many of them became great Keyblade Masters. Ximen was happy about everything and one day made him even happier. His wife Lyna gave a birth to his first son, Nazar. He had black hair and brown eyes. Like his father he also had an ability to wield Keyblade which was red and black. But his father decided to lock it away until Nazar reaches at least 5 years. Three years pasted and Ximen’s second child was born. He was different from his brother. Unlike Nazar he had white hair and bright blue eyes. Child was named Ailan. His brother was very happy to get a younger brother, because he felt lonely as a single child. But soon after Ailan’s birth, queen Lyna gone very sick. Many healers tried hard to cure her, but in the end illness took her life. Just before forces of death took her, she begged her husband to protect her sons from darkness. Ximen kept the promise as Nazar and Ailan grew. As Nazar reached ten and Ailan seven years, their father taught them how to use the Keyblade. In a serious ways of light, boys saw how weapon of magic and strength can protect the balance. Father closely watched how his two sons learned to wield those majestic weapons. Nazar had interesting style, taking training like test or even challenge. In the other hand Ailan was more relaxed, learning as important goal in his life. Even though their Keyblade training was important, both boys still had some free time. Nazar mostly spent it in library, studying even more when Ailan mostly went playing with friends. His friends were really nice. One day they even invite Nazar to play with them. “Come on bro it will be fun!” Ailan dragged his brother out. “But, I wanna read that book. Let me go back.” “You can read it tomorrow. It’s not every day to get invited by my company.” “Fine but just for one hour.” black haired sighed. Outside group of five kids around their age was waiting for the two of them. Nazar who was twelve that time decided to play with them for an hour for his brother’s sake. But his mind changed when he saw one member of Ailan’s company. It was blond haired girl, around ten years old with those bright blue eyes. As he spend entire day playing with company, he only played with her. She was his light, making his heart wild. When he was going home, girl introduced herself as Elia and gave him small peck. That tiny peck stayed in his heart forever. But as the years kept passing Nazar was getting even busier. His main goal in life was to become ultimate Keyblade Master. For that he needed to study hardest books, cast hardest spells and beat strongest opponents. He kept training as his brother still took everything relaxed and still had time for his friends. Even though black haired fell in love with Elia for the first time, he never again had time to be with her. His keyblade training came first. More years passed when Nazar reached eighteen years and finally had his Mark of Mastery Exam. Leading Master of his exam was no other than his own father. Master Ximen was proud to see his own son becoming master. There were many tests to pass and boy successfully did every single one. But there was another extra one, test which will show true heart. Boy took deep breath when another Master entered. Father told him to clash in fight with him and after it he’ll decide if he’s true Master or not. Blades clashed together as both wielders fought. Black haired only thought about becoming a master, nothing else. As he thought about only this goal, his powers began worn off. Suddenly other master came rushing towards him really fast. He was too weak to cast any spells to attack neither for defense. His body was prepared to dodge when he felt something inside him. In that moment dark fog surrounded him completely, making him dodge ten times faster. Next moment he was next to his opponent, knocking him down. “That’s enough!” Ximen shouted. Nazar stood still as his father ran towards him. Time man when he got to his son, black fog disappeared. “Son… why did you use darkness? Didn’t I teach you not to?” “I didn’t! It came by itself!” boy shouted back. “But it was your heart that called for it! I’m disappointed by you, son… just look what you did.” man showed on keyblade wielder on the floor while two men were slowly dragging him away “If I didn’t stop you, you could kill this man.” “Dad… I didn’t mean to…” “It’s too late! Come to the throne room to discuss about it.” With those words Ximen left. Boy was completely down. What made his heart to call for darkness? His Keyblade was in his hands as nothing happen. Nazar sighed when he turn towards the door. What is going to happen with him now? Does he even have a chance to become Master? He doubted it. When he was going towards throne room, somebody crashed in him. It was no other than Ailan. His little brother must have been watching how he had fallen l his chance to become Master. “Bro… I’m so sorry… I really thought you’ll make it.” “Just leave me alone. I need some time.” “But Nazzy, what if you…” “Don’t call me like that!” he shouted as he threw Ailan against the wall. Boy was scared to death when he saw his brother’s face. Those yellow eyes, filled with such rage made him run away. Black haired only angrily went towards the throne room to hear what father decided for him. One day later he was shivering from the cold. His feet were freezing from the snow in which was stepping. In the end Ximen decided to banish him for one month. Place where he will spend his next month was deep in kingdom’s mountains. Banishment would teach him never again to call for darkness. Even though Ailan begged father it was just an accident, Nazar was banished either way. White haired sadly watch how his brother, covered by coat hardly walked towards the mountains. He didn’t want to end it this way. The way that’s gonna change fate of the whole kingdom. That was also the last time he still saw his light. Next time they met, light in his heart was gone. Five years passed since messenger was sent to bring Nazar home. Messenger came back alone, informing the king about his son. Black haired wanted to stay longer, training for getting better. Father was surprised at first but after thinking some time he was proud of his son. Even after more months, messenger came back with same answer: boy will come back when he will be ready. Ailan was also getting married at age of twenty, with no other than Elia. Even though she liked Nazar, she loved Ailan. Together they spent a lot more time that she did with black haired. Messenger was again sent to inform about wedding. But this time messenger didn’t find keyblade wielder. Not a single trace was found. King quickly sent ten more messengers to find his son. But none ever found him. In fact all messengers were missing shortly after they start with search. This still hasn’t stopped the wedding. White haired was sad, but he couldn’t let his future bride waiting. The event was really big and a lot of people from other kingdoms came to visit him. Sadly that was the last happy event that happened. After three years, fate began making its way. Peaceful night turned in merciless battle between Keyblade wielders and normal people. Ailan gave a good night kiss to Elia as they were going in bed. Couple was sleeping when suddenly unknown shadow passed through walls. It gave Elia the creeps so she decided to see what it is. She put her morning gown on to check one other room in the end of the corridor. Shadow reached exactly that room and revealed its appearance. Body hidden under black cape, face covered by mask and mysterious keyblade, completely wrapped in black aurora like rest of his body was. Man walked towards the wall to see some posters on. Ximen’s son Ailan became Keyblade Master when he was only fifteen years old. With succeeded goal he protected kingdom from all kinds of danger. He’s hero of Saphiria. He couldn’t believe what he had just read. His little brother… the one who rather play with his friends instead of training became Master? How could he? Nazar spent all of his life studying, training to become one and yet he failed. With anger in his eyes, he destroyed every single poster on the wall. That caused a lot of noise that woke somebody up. “Daddy?” little voice asked. Black haired turned towards small bed in the corner. In it, little boy was rubbing his eyes. Boy didn’t seem more than three years old. As man took deeper look on him, he could so awful resemblance to his brother. That white hair, in completely same color, but those blue eyes… were from someone else. “Skyle?” woman’s voice called. Elia entered her son’s bedroom and freaked out when she saw long lost friend. “Nazar? Where have you been all this years? Messengers never found you.” Man was silent, only looking in boy’s face. “Where’s father? I need to talk with him?” he asked with voice that gave her creeps. “King Ximen? He’s… he’s not around anymore.” “What do you mean?” “About a year ago… he got hard illness. He’s dead, Nazar… I’m sorry.” “Who’s king now then? Who got the throne?” he kept asking as more of his darkness filled the room “Don’t you see I’m asking you? Tell me!” “King… he sent messengers to find you, but none did. So he left throne to Ailan.” Elia trembled. That moment his whole rage clashed with darkness within him. He again looked at the white haired boy who began to cry. “This child… is he his son?” he asked angrily when she nodded “This isn’t right! Didn’t you tell me that you loved me?” “We were together for just one day… how could I know you had feelings for me too? You never came back from your training. Ailan… he was always so nice when you were hard.” “Enough!” he yelled “Child should be mine and yours! If he can’t be mine, he won’t be his as well!” Nazar raised his dark keyblade in rage and pointed him at little boy. Dark aurora form itself in black shard, ready to kill the boy. Man discharged it, only to get revenge on his brother who was always better than he was. Boy Skyle covered his eyes from horror that was about to come. But that horror has never happened. Skyle opened his eyes to see his mother holding him in her arms. “Honey… are you hurt?” she asked quietly. “Mommy?” he trembled. “I’m glad… please stay alive for me.” she smiled as she fell on the floor “I’m sorry… that I won’t be able to raise you.” Dark shard stabbed her instead of a boy. Deadly weapon of darkness killed her shortly after it touched her heart. Nazar was shocked by what have just happened. He didn’t want it end this way. Desperately, he ran to her as he pushed boy away. As he was holding her in hands, room’s door opened. Ailan didn’t know what he was staring at. There was Skyle lying against the wall, with eyes filled with tears. His long lost brother was holding Elia who was fine just ten minutes ago. But now her life was taken. “Brother… what have you done?” he asked terrified. Nazar was still silent as his rage kept growing. “It’s… it’s your fault that happened!” black haired dropped Elia’s lifeless body and summoned his keyblade. “Brother… why are you doing this? We’re family… we shouldn’t battle each other.” “You wanna know why? Because you took everything from me! You became Master, got loving bride, were the hero and had a son… now I will take everything from you! Including life!” He sent more of his dark shards. White haired dodged them really fast while picking Skyle who was completely scared about whole situation. Without thinking Ailan ran towards secret passage. He needed to escape. Whatever had happened to his brother was terrifying and he couldn’t let him pass through people in the castle. He knew that every single person who would get in his way would end up killed. Staircase behind hidden wall was soon in front of his eyes. Stairs led all the way to castle’s secret cellar. There another man was sleeping on the chair. “Miroy? Are you awake?” Ailan shook man’s shoulders. “Mmmm… oh your Majesty! I’m terribly sorry for…” “It’s alright. Listen! Are escape clothes and supplies still here?” “Think so… wait, are we under attack?” “Not kingdom. It’s just me and Skyle being targeted.” “Gosh… what happened?” “Nazar is back… and something made him think to get revenge on me. That’s why we need to escape as fast as we can.” “Clothes and food are in box over there. And I’ll prepare Strela for ride… but where will you go?” “I’ll find one place to hide and come back when I’ll be ready. But in case I won’t make it back…” he gave Miroy star shaped object “Use this to find Skyle. I can’t lose him in the same way I lost Elia.” “Wait your wife… is the queen…” “Nazar killed her when she was protecting Skyle. She’s gone…” Ailan’s tears started coming out. Miroy didn’t know what to say so he just went in cellar’s barn where young filly was standing. Man put saddle and all other equipment on it. Strela was after all one of the fastest horses in whole Saphiria. Meanwhile Ailan was putting traveling clothes on himself and his son. Over those clothes, both of them put on black capes to prevent them from seeing themselves in dark. “Daddy? Where are we going? And where’s mommy?” “I’ll tell you everything once we get on safe.” white haired was explaining when Miroy came with white filly Strela. “Go towards north. You will be able to hide in woods.” “Thank you for all your help Miroy.” he put Skyle on horse “Hope we’ll see each other again.” “Have save escape your Majesty.” Strela ran towards the door that led outside. They appeared much lower from the castle. He thought they were on safe, when shadow balls quickly changed his mind. Nazar was pointing his keyblade at him as well as ten other guards were pointing arrows. Most of the people would freeze unable to decide what to do. But not Ailan. He charged his horse right towards the forest that was deep. While escaping, rain of black shards and arrows followed him. With one hand he held rein as he blocked deadly weapons with keyblade in other hand. It seemed like they’re going to make it when something again changed his fate. One of the shards was about to hit Skyle and he automatically protected him with his arm. White haired could felt pain in his arm. This was not good. Soon deadly poison will spread all the way to his heart, killing him. He needed to protect his son until that happened. People would be scared to death if they were going to die. But he wasn’t. In his head was only one plan to complete until that happens. Strela accelerated as it knew what needs to be done. Filly stopped in front of small house. Ailan weakly took Skyle from the horse, putting him on doorstep. His keyblade was soon summoned, making something what he regretted but needed to do to protect him. Little white haired boy suddenly felt dizzy and he fainted. Slowly his body began to disappear. “I’m sorry son… but one day you’ll understand. When you were born, Owl’s Prophecy foretold that one day you’ll make things right.” he sat back on Strela “Go girl, deeper in forest.” Horse ran towards rank part of the forest. For some time they were alone, then some company appeared. Three royal guards were running towards him prepared to finish him off. But instead of running away, Ailan raised his keyblade, pulling darkness for their hearts. He knew those guards and they would never attack him like that. Only explanation for that was mind control from darkness. With removing this darkness from them, keyblade wielder used last of his powers. Exhausted from deadly poison and destroying the darkness, young king fell off his horse. As he fell on ground, guards began to realize the situation. “Your Highness! Are you alright?” one of guards picked him. “It’s too late to help me now… I’m sorry… but soon I’ll die.” “You can’t! You stared in death’s eyes for some many times. Why would you die now?” “Saphiria needs you!” “My royal comrades… Nazar came back, covered by darkness. You must listen to my words clearly.” Ailan coughed “You must come back to Nazar who will definitely take the throne. Act like you’re still under his control and tell him that you killed me along with Skyle. I hid him somewhere and when time is right you must send two members of Train Clan to find him. Those two will teach him ways of the keyblade. One guard named Miroy has object that will find him and please… take Strela back to the castle. After I die use my blood to make fake proof I died on horse. If Nazar asks about my body, tell him that wild beasts ripped it on small pieces. That’s all what I’m asking you to do my friends…” Guards wanted to protest at first but accepted his death. They all sadly watched how he stopped breathing with eyes wild open. All three of the guards were once part of his company. Sometimes they role played, performing battles. But that wasn’t a play. Their friend was dead. Guards gently closed his lifeless eyes and dug him a grave. On it they put sign instead of tombstone. Here is resting the one and true keyblade wielder. His name won’t be forgotten. But if he will, he’ll always be known as Friend. After some time of silence, they took horse towards castle. When they arrived, they quickly retell Ailan’s fake story in which he believed. But guards never expected the next order that new king told. “Go in all four directions of the sky. Find all keyblade wielders and finish them off. If I can’t be one and only Ultimate Keyblade Master then none will. So go and don’t come back until I’m last Keyblade wielder on the whole world!” PS: Strela means lightning in my language. And if you didn't see: Skyle - Sora ( jap. Sky ) PPS: So what you guys think? Should I continue it?
  8. Here's mine http://light-13-hawkie.deviantart.com/gallery/32795262#/d4vof38 and maybe I'll do some more drawings as well.
  9. O_O gosh so much happened! This is getting really epic!
  10. Lol bro! You really did my day! Either way I liked kitty Kuma, but when dog appear.... :D :D :D :D gosh I thought I'll die laughing! And yay KH Ancient's version of Mr. Armstrong!!!! Please continue! *whispears* I have internet and I'll be online in the evenings!
  11. Lol I like Blood! And I nearly died laughing at photographer being too drunk cuz Chaos made clones!
  12. Yay! More of FMA! I nearly died laughing at Crace's new name!
  13. I'm not big fan of Sonic, but in this story he sounds pretty interesting. It's also very well written, good job!
  14. Aww such a nice chapter! Hope you'll make more! I really liked how you described characters and talking as you were there!
  15. It's very well written, I really liked it. Maybe it will be a bit better if you also describe what's happening around, for story not be just made from converstation. But I can't wait to see another chapter!
  16. Chapter Eighteen: New Home Most of the people would think that spending the night at abandoned house is the scariest thing on earth. But this night, when everyone set their sleeping bags around new Rookie, they all felt save. Even though Piko’s last weeks weren’t exactly nice, he slept like a baby. He had never felt so peaceful before. In times when he was locked up in cage, tied on table or even somewhere in house, he always felt extremely scared and lonely. Now that those teens came, treated his wounds and promised him to take him on safety, he felt like in a family. Also those dogs and birds they had with seemed friendly. With closed eyes he spent first peaceful night after so many months. Countless hours soon turned night into a morning. Piko woke up with others, surrounded by boxes of food. “You hungry?” Os asked him as he handed him some sandwiches. Boy nodded and took offered food. Moment he put it in his mouth he realized how hungry he was. He hasn’t got a proper meal for so many months. Just thinking about sickly sweet swill and tablets he was forced to eat just made him even hungrier. Soon after, he emptied the full box of sandwiches. Party only smiled on his big appetite. When others ate their breakfast as well, Carl and Nate brought some of their equipment inside. With all kinds of cables they connected device on Piko’s ankle to their laptop. Computer showed breath taking results which made everyone worried. “What’s wrong? Is something wrong with me?” Piko asked a bit scared. “It seems like device is more attached on your body then we thought. Not just nerves on your leg, but nerves from entire body are connected to it. Even brain veins and spinal cord.” “Can you take it off? Please! I don’t want it!” “We can’t remove it right now, but we can take you to our doctor who can remove it surgically. For now we’ll just try to lower shocks.” Green haired typed all kinds of codes in computer, which stated making weird sounds. Boy could felt scraping inside of the ankle that soon spread up to his body. Next more minutes it began to hurt, like somebody was hitting him inside. “It will be very painful very soon. I’m sorry but without that step we can’t lower shocks.” Carl said. “Can you hold it for some minutes?” Nate asked. Piko quietly nodded as Nate pressed some more buttons. Boy’s body was soon trembling from the pain. Even though it hurt like hell, Rookie gritted his teeth and waited until boys finished. After some painful minutes, Piko finally felt smaller pressure on his ankle. His leg was a bit red, but he still felt pain it. Right when his tears were about to come out, another of those dogs came closer. Its fur was golden just like other dog which was sitting next to the blonde. Golden dog friendly laid its head to his knees. He could felt soft fur that was gently touching his skin. As he looked around, all of them had their own dogs. This one was alone, just like he was. “Whose dog is that?” Piko asked. On that question everyone replied with a sad sigh. Os even left the room. “That’s Spark, Roxy’s spir… I mean dog. When she was taken, Spark managed to escape.” Nikki said. “Poor thing… you must really miss her.” boy said as he hugged her. Spark let the boy hug her. It seemed so long ago since she last felt this by Roxy. Others then started taking the rest of their things out. Most of it was already in van, but sleeping bags and things they used last night were still there. Piko helped too, carrying some boxes towards the door. Nate and Os took the rest of the things towards the van that was hidden in bushes. “Where exactly are you going to take me? Is this place near?” boy again asked. “Unfortunately no, it’s pretty far away but we know the shortcut.” Nikki replied. “I’m sure you’ll like it.” Alex joined. New Rookie was again happy that he was about to leave the place. All those memories gave him the feeling of being here for years. No, worse. As he was born captured. He took the last empty box and headed towards Nikki, Carl and Alex. It felt like a final escape from jail. Too bad it wasn’t true. Just about when party was ready to leave, ankle device started making electromagnetic shocks. But they were still in the house. Device only activated if they were outside of it. Sudden shocks made everyone fall. Spirit mates quickly took forms of wolves to protect their owners. They felt their great pain, but still knew they needed to protect them. Even Spark joined, protecting the Rookie. Carl took his cell phone, typing the orders. “Cute! What is causing this?” he shouted while trembling from the pain. “Sensing life forms. 100 meters. Getting close.” computer voice responded. “Men in gray came to check on their C9 case! We need to get out of here!” Alex shouted. “But how? Our van is at least a mile away from the house. Os and Nate have no idea we’re attacked!” Carl responded. “I’ll tell them! My inner power will prevent them from seeing me. You try to find another exit.” Nikki stood up with Misty. Raven haired quickly joined with Misty, taking the hawk form. With inner power she covered herself with invisible gas, disappearing in process. As she left the house, she could see huge number of men in gray. Somehow they knew that Ials came to take the Rookie. With goal of warning her brother and Nate, she accelerated her flying. But nearly a mile away, two boys had no idea of situation. Together they went to pick a box that fell from huge pile of boxes they had carried before. As they were heading back, group of grey coated men silently brought special metal sticks. In secret they stuck them together which created blast that only Ials felt. Blast sent both of them against the rock. For Nate blast was so strong that he roughly landed on his foot, bending it under weird angle. But he still fought. Orange haired used his fire powers to create a fire circle around himself and Os. Blonde was luckily fine, preparing his Arrowblade to fight. His inner water powers had already worn off. He could store water in his body but he couldn’t create it. Normal water arrows were now only way to escape from suits. Nate tried his best to keep flames up as Os shot some men with arrows. It seemed they going to make it when suddenly three ropes broke fire circle. All three of them erapped around blonde, tying him while pulling him from the safe fire zone. He tried to escape by joining with Hydro, but ropes got him too. One of strong – looking men picked him with strong grip. “Well, well it looks we got another Ial. I think this one will be called A4.” men smiled as he looked on tied boy. Other men started laughing as another brought something grey and small. Steel rings! Thing that changed word freedom into imprisonment. Blonde again tried to break free, but it was no use. Hydro was tied up as well as his Arrowblade was held by men in gray. Steel rings were preparing to be stuck on his wrist and ankles. Just a moment more and it would happen. Luckily man with rings tripped and started yelling from pain. Suddenly three other men did the same. All of them tried to find out what hit them when another stroked down the fourth man. Guy who was strongly holding Os in his grip stepped few steps away. Boy plucked up the courage to again try to escape. “Oh, no you won’t!” man slapped him. He was about to call backup when three sudden hits knocked him down as well. Os managed to roll away from him as man tried to catch him. But something appeared in his way. “You bastard! Was my little sister not enough for you? Get your claws off my brother!” Nikki said as Misty growled in her wolf form. “Oh, forget you don’t have claws. Luckily, I have them!” Raven haired joined with Misty, turning in bright black wolf. She took down the rest of gray group while freeing her brother and Hydro from the ropes. Blonde could also now see her invisible arrows, stabbed in men’s limbs. “What’s going on?” blonde asked while picking his Arrowblade. “They came to pick new Rookie. We need to get back to house as fast as we can. Otherwise they’ll get Piko along with Carl and Alex.” Nikki took her original form. “Nate’s injured. I’ll get the van while you watch over him.” “But bro… you can’t drive…” “… cute can. I downloaded it on my cell phone so it won’t be a problem.” “Right, then hurry. I think this gray group was just a small part of predominance.” Boy quickly took hawk form to get there as fast as he could. Nikki got closer to the fire circle, seeing Nate leaning against the rock. His Iggy was lying as hawk in Nate’s free arm. “It’s alright, I beat them off. How big is your injury?” she asked as he revoked his flames. “I think I broke my ankle. Otherwise I think I’m okay.” “Os went to get the van. We must hurry back… can you walk while being supported by me?” “Yeah… let’s go then.” Meanwhile, party in house ran towards upper floor. Duo to the broken door, they couldn’t wait in living room while holding it. Piko was supported by Carl duo to his current weak position. Spark helped too. Alex was the last one and now he really needed to remember all his training with Nikki. That was because, some men break into the house and his light powers were useless. Using Arrowblade was only chance to get on safety. “Make it more left… no more right…” Blaze complained while watching his arrows. “I’m freaking realizing that! Gee so that how it is, when your smart voice comes out of your head. “Alex, come over here!” Carl shouted from corner of the staircase. “What’s the matter?” “Nothing… I just need to tell you the plan.” “Then let’s hear it.” “Piko’s device is now off but moment we get outside the house it will cause much greater blast. So, I decided to get on the roof where we can wait for the van.” “But won’t be standing on wide open roof dangerous?” “We’ll have more chances there than here. Come on.” Green haired led Rookie through another staircase as Alex watched over their backs. Soon they managed to climb on an old roof. They really needed to be careful duo to the sliding tiles. On the back side of the roof was a perfect spot where could they wait. It almost seemed like a perfect hideout when boys could see actual number of the grey group that came. Grey coats were in numbers to fill three whole vans with some cars around. Luckily they didn’t see them on roof and if they would, it would probably turn out really bad. “Man, where are others with that van? Even if we manage to get on, we still have at least ten miles towards the nearest Force Scratcher.” green haired mumbled. “Wait, force what?” “Another name for portals…” Carl started talking when they could both felt strong shock. It came from the lower part of the house and they could also see what caused it. “Six years of having it… and it didn’t got a single scratch! Man, if Os is driving I’m gonna kill him!” Front part of the van sure got a big hit. From the car’s window Os’s hand waved. Carl, Alex and Piko tried to get closer. They almost got off when another problem appeared. Ropes that almost captured Os now wrapped around them, pulling them away. Green haired quickly focused on his inner powers, creating force field that kept them on roof. Men kept pulling as Carl was gradually losing his strength. Alex along with Rookie tried to get free, but it was pointless. Party in van was also unable to do anything. If they showed up on roof, men gray would realize their escaping plan. So everything seemed pointless. Everyone knew that as soon as Carl’s force powers worn off, man in gray will catch them and others will have hard time saving them. Nikki, Os and Nate were ready for the moment this will happen. But none had predicted what will actually happen. As his force powers were slowly becoming weak, Carl could hear noise drawing nearer. He forced himself to look in the sky a bit, to see dot that was becoming bigger. It was getting closer, revealing white and blue colors with noisy propeller. “Put your hands in the air! This is local police.” sound from speaker shouted. It really was there, downright police helicopter. Older policeman in chopper pointed gun towards gray group as well as his other associates did. “You’re using violence against children! Put your hands in the air immediately!” policeman again shouted. Gray group took it so serious that they did as policemen said. With raised arms, ropes were released. Ial boys reacted quickly, taking ropes off and running towards the van. But that wasn’t everything that happened. As Alex came to Piko, his eyes were closed. “Piko! Wake up!” red haired shook boy’s shoulders. “He fainted. Can you carry him?” Carl gasped “I don’t I have enough strength to do so.” “Don’t worry…” Alex put him on his back “ He’s lighter than he looks.” Together they finally reached Carl’s half – destroyed van. “You evil – dark Oskari! Why did you drive my van and nearly destroy it?! You can’t even drive cars in video games.” Carl shouted on blonde behind wheel. “First – cute was the one driving. Second – none else was able to. And third – let’s get the hell outta here!” Os closed Carl’s mouth. Computer bunny C.U.T.E. again appeared, driving van with at least 120 kilometers per hour. Sudden acceleration threw everyone including all Spirit Mates and Os. After some time, van finally reached highway where all could finally talk. “So Nikki… I see you managed to find those two.” Carl started. “Yeah, but one gray group almost captured them. Nate also got injured.” “I’ll be fine… I just need some elastic bandages… which I don’t have here.” “We’ll all stop at Realm of Spirits. Say… what’s wrong with Piko?” Os asked. New Rookie was still unconscious, lying in Alex’s arms. Some of his bandages were newly covered by blood. Device on his ankle was still glowing as drops of blood were coming under it. “We need to get that device off him as fast as we can.” Nikki worried. “How much long cute?” Os asked computer. Program accelerated for reply. This time Ial’s managed to hold on something. “How many extra things did you put in cute exactly?” blonde smiley lectured Carl. “Oh, shut up. We can talk about this stupid van and bunny when we get home.” Nate held Carl before he could launch himself towards Os. Their argue was soon interrupted by portal, hidden behind some big rocks. It was so big that whole van could get in. Party closed eyes from the burning sunlight as they appeared near the Main Shed. Elaborately, van appeared on so – called outside realm parking space. Alex took Piko in his arms as he followed Nikki and Os towards ambulance. Ial doctor Kiara just finished wrapping bandage around one girl’s arm. She seemed to get it from arrow, duo to another girl that was keep apologizing to her. When girls left ambulance, Kiara needed some time to realize what was Alex holding in his arms. “What… who’s that?” she said shockingly as she saw boy’s tortured body. “He’s a new Rookie. Man in gray did some terrible experiments on him.” Nikki explained. “Put him over here.” braided girl said as she listened to his pulse. “Nai didn’t mention anyone new. Are you sure he’s Rookie? Oh, my…” “What’s wrong?” Alex panicked at her reaction. “Normally Ial’s have faster pulse than normal humans. But this boy… his pulse is extremely slow for one minute and really fast the other one. This makes no sense – he’s stuck between.” “Aren’t Rookies having that kind of pulse?” Alex asked. “No, it’s completely the same as Ial’s have.” Kiara then slowly lifted his eyelid, to see his sleepy brown eye. “I don’t understand. If he has an Ial mark of hawk, why didn’t Nai get his other spirit part? Anyway we can’t leave him like this.” Her brown hawk Leaf quickly brought her handcart with bandages and medicine. She also helped herself with special bracelets around her wrists. From beads, climbers grew, holding her gear as she had five more hands. “Is that her inner power?” Alex asked. “Yeah, she can make plants grow faster. Those beads on bracelet are actually climber seeds.” Os reply. Even though boy’s wounds were already treated, new ones appear. After disaffecting and bandaging all of his wounds, she looked deeply on device on ankle. Now much more blood covered almost half of his foot. “Carl and Nate wrote down everything they found out about it.” Nikki handed some papers. “You need to remove it surgically.” “Then help me move him there.” Kiara moved curtains of another ambulance bed surrounded by much more medical gear. “This will take a while. I haven’t seen such connecting device. It’s almost like part of his body.” she put her sterile coat on and prepared medical gear. “Can you stay outside meanwhile? Don’t get me wrong, but I really need to be focused on that if I don’t wanna damage his nerves.” Kiara said as she closed the curtains. Outside the ambulance, Carl and Nate were sitting on bench. Os handed Nate some elastic bandages so he could treated his broken ankle. Nikki took the copy of their notes. “How’s Piko?” Carl asked. “Kiara is currently removing device from him. She also said that his pulse is changing.” “Then we were both right about him.” Nate mumbled. “About what?” Alex joined. “That he isn’t a right Rookie… but Artificial Ial.” “What do you mean by that?” Alex again asked. “You’re new so will keep it simple for you. You do know how Ials are born right?” “When someone dies but has second chance to live.” “That’s right… but what if death is against all laws, forcing someone to be killed and be alive at the same time?” Nate started. “If that extremely rare phenomenon happened to him… then it means that men in gray tried to create an Ial. But I can only assume how many kids were killed on that way… Artificial Ials can’t be created on the first try.” Carl continued. “You mean Piko wasn’t the only ordinarily kid, who was captured by them?” Alex said shocked. “I’m afraid much more of them are still captured. We already contacted Order of Silver, but we’ll start searching in two days duo to information and locations.” “Do you know anything else important about Artificial Ials?” Os asked. “His Spirit Mate is still inside him which means he already has the powers. It will be hard to get him out of him duo to the struggle between inner powers and Spirit Mate. That had already caused him some internal bleedings, but duo to being Ial he didn’t die from it.” “We’ll need to talk with Nai then… do you know his cause of death at least? So we can know his inner powers.” “All I got is that some strongly combined drugs caused his heart to stop. I have no idea what kind of powers he will have, but it’s clear those drugs came from men in gray.” Carl said, when some person passed by. Party was silent when they realized person was no other than Naiser himself. He was moving gently straight to the ambulance as his Spirit Mate Fluc was creeping beside him as big white snake. White haired entered ambulance just when Kiara was about to remove device. “Oh, Nai I didn’t realize that you’re here. I’m in the middle of the…” “No need to say, I know. Now I need to do my part.” “But I haven’t finished with removing.” “If I don’t do this your removing will be pointless. His Spirit Mate is still captured within him and if I don’t release him, device will still be chained to his Spirit Mate, even if you remove it surgically from his body.” “Right, then do your part.” she stepped away. Nai looked at the boy with gas mask over his face. He could also see his inner part of soul that was trying to get out, hurting him in process. With one hand he touched his forehead, with other he touched his heart. Changing pulse kept beating in his heart as Spirit Mate wanted to come out of his body. White haired man was focusing on all pieces, gathering them together. Slowly, pieces were slowly coming from him. “I’m really sorry, but I can’t make it differently.” Nai sighed when he saw Piko in pain. “You have to take it a bit more…” Pieces were forming into a shining ball, until last ones joined together. As pieces clashed, animal was forging for it. Land form – wolf, silvery brown with unusually big brown eyes was born as Piko’s Spirit Mate. Nai gently put him on another bed, right next to the one on which Piko was lying. He stroked his soft fur as he was looking in his eyes. “Glad you’re finally where you belong. You sure like tricks don’t you? Like the corridor in cellar, right? You have already known about your powers and used them.” “I haven’t found out about his inner powers? All I know is that he was killed by mixture of dangerous drugs.” “All those ingredients cause a lot of side effects, right? But did you find out the strongest one?” “Well yeah… it causes really strong… hallucinations?” “That’s right hallucinations. But what if he can makes them with that power? I already have seen some of it. Duo to the fear he had, he used it on corridor’s walls, creating countless illusions of the things he feared the most. Or the other illusion he created when he was afraid and started calling for help.” “Carl wrote something about helicopter…” “Yeah, police helicopter wasn’t really there. His illusion was so powerful that even men in gray believed it. This is his inner power.” “Are you sure?” “You don’t believe it? Just look at him.” Doctor again looked on sleeping boy and his Spirit Mate. As she looked deeply on both of their backs she could see something glowing. Both had wings on their backs, as illusion. “See? This illusion is created by his dreams. In his dreams, he’s free with wings that carry him through highest mountains and clearest forests. Wish that he had when he was captured.” “He really is a dreamer… but do you know the name of his Spirit Mate?” “I think he can tell it yourself, right Piko?” Nai looked to the boy who opened his big eyes. “M… Mi… name Mir… Mirgy kept rushing in my head.” boy mumbled. “Are you Mirgy?” he asked lying wolf next to him that nodded. “I see. That’s why they had those dogs around them.” boy smiley fell in sleep. Nai gently stroked his head as Piko’s illusion wings became bigger. “I done my part, now you can continue with yours.” he said as he left. Outside, party was all time looking through the small ambulance window, amazed at new powers of newly born Ial. When white haired came out, everyone quickly sat back on the bench. He only smiled and went towards his tree house. As he passed by, Alex could hear his whisper. “Go the waterfalls. Someone important wants to talk with you. And you better hurry, you don’t have much time.” With those words in his head, he ran outside, leaving confused faces on others. “You better hurry… important person… not much time…” He joined with Blaze as a hawk, flying really fast towards the place where beautiful falling water was creating countless rainbows. Next to the waterfall, Ial was standing. He could know that from golden wolf next to it… but why did it look like some blond haired girl he knew. Alex could also notice blond pony tail and green – white jacket. With joy he landed next to it, but disappointed when he realized it wasn’t Roxy. Ial was a blond haired boy with long hair, tied in pony tail. His eyes were hiding behind sunglasses. “You really hurried, didn’t you?” boy smiled. “Who are you? And what do you want to talk about?” “Then Nai really told you only to hurry here? How typical.” “Won’t you tell your name?” “Oh, how impolite I am. I’m Svit and this is Shine. I wanted to talk about you.” “Me? Why me?” “You possess inner power of light, just like I do. Do you know there are only three Ials with power of light?” “No…” “Those who have power of light are destined to do great things. You will too.” “What do you mean?” “You have already made connection with a person you care about. From my vision I can see you two together, twice.” “Why twice?” “It means you’ll safe her.” “Really? When?” “This I can’t tell, but if you will need to find her, find me first.” “Why? Aren’t you here?” “Who says? I can only send part of me here. And looks like I need to go now. Let’s meet again someday.” Svit was slowly disappearing. “Wait, won’t you help me?” “I will in your light this time and by your side next time.” Svit fully disappeared in flock of glowing butterflies. As they were flying away, Alex could hear his voice. “If you lost yourself and need my help, follow my flying light friends.” Svit laughed. One glowing butterfly stayed and got into Alex’s pocket. As butterflies nearly disappeared he could see image in the sky – lighting. “Don’t worry, Roxy I swear this time I’ll save you. My light will find you.” Somewhere else those sentences was heard by one girl. PS for coolwings: Thanks for idea from your user name PS: Svit means Twilight in my language. Wonder what was he babbling about? Unfortunately this will be clear in the end of the story, but will play important role. I'm sad to say his next appearence will come in Power of Nature's sequel and maybe in epilougue.
  17. Girl could hear something... blades hitting everywhere, flames, explosion, cry... but then was silence. Sheath with sword was still tight around her belt. But why was there if the sword she fought with was in her arm? Where she was anyway? Her open eyes could only see darkness all around. Ears heard silence. She took a breath, only to swallow salt water. Was she in ocean? With her strong legs, she swam towards the ocean. Her breath was running out as she finally reached the surface. No wonder why it was so dark, it was in the middle of the night. As her slim body left the ocean, it felt great exhaustion. Even though she forced herself to get to the beach. There warm sand was waiting for her to rest in. Girl fell on the sand as tears slipped down her face. Why is she crying when she sees such peacful place? Becuase all peacful places soon got destroyed. That's how it is if you only knew war since childhood. As she turned around, sword in sheath mysteriously glowed. Why does boy's face appear everytime she looks at it? That was the mystery she wanted answer for. But first she needed to rest. Fight she had before this, took a lot of her strenght. Before closing her eyes, star shaped fruit was deposited in front of her eyes. "What dose the fruit has to do with war and boy?" she asked as she fell in sleep. PS: Was that okay?
  18. While creating my profile I was often looking around my room when.... I saw an old photo of mine. On it was nine year old me with a hawk... I was kinda inspired by that photo...
  19. Only Keyblade School of Hearts is related to actual kh series and Love of the Sunrise has kh characters.
  20. I kinda don't understand what do you want to say... I mean I'm not sure which fanfiction should I WRITE, not READ.
  21. Yeah... I'M FREAKING REALIZING THAT I'M WRITTING A LOT OF STORIES, BUT I JUST CAN'T HELP IT! Okay, calm down Hawkie and explain what do you want to ask. The thing is, that now I have some more time to start with a new story. I know a lot of people can't wait to see another chapter of other stories ( like Power of Nature, KH3, Fallen Angel Ven, Wooden Star... ), but I really want to write another one. The thing is... I have everything prepared - ideas, charaters, designs, story lines... I'll even create some drawings... but I have this prepared for three different KH fanfictions ( only one has actual KH charaters and one other mentiones them ). So please read those summaries and help me decide with which story should I start: LAST KEYBLADE WIELDER: Nazar is an evil ruler of magical land Saphiria. He's a Keyblade wielder, who ordered his guards to find and kill all keyblade wielders, so he can be the one and only Ultimate Keyblade Master. But sudden prophecy tells him that somewhere out there is still one more wielder who will clash with him in battle. The winner of that battle will rule all Saphiria along with other magical lands. Wielder seems to be Nazar's own nephew, Skyle who Nazar think is dead. Just before Skyle's father Ailan was killed, he hid Skyle somewhere. Now it's up to warrior Sean and magician Lana to find Skyle and prepare him to fight before Nazar's guards can kill him. Epic story with a lot of action. And if you didn't realize: Skyle ( Sora - jap. Sky ) , Lana ( Riku - jap. Land ) and Sean ( Kairi - jap. Sea ) KEYBLADE SCHOOL OF HEARTS: ( inspired by one of Tom's ( kh13 member who was DeathSkull3000 before ) stories ) Tari and her little brother Sila are just simple adoptive kids until mysterious package changes their destinies forever. They both find out they're keyblade wielders and are accepted on KWHS ( Keyblade Wielding High School ). There they learn a lot about new skills, enemies, missions and also about friendship. Their new life seems perfect, until older boy named Tai starts stalking Tari. As this begins all school seeme to be turning into something darker. But why only Tari sees the difference? Why is Tai nice for one day when on other day seriously hurts Sila? And why is new type of dark creatures appearing in worlds of light? Lots of action, some mentioning of actual KH, bit of romance, friendship... LOVE OF THE SUNRISE - VEN X NAMINE FANFICTION: After death of their parents, Kairi and her sister Namine move to dormitory of their new high school that lies beside great ocean. Kairi quickly befriends one of the students, Sora, leaving Namine all alone. Still recovering from trauma, blonde takes walks on the beach that make her a bit better. Everything changes when sudden storm forces her to stay inside for almost a week. While being inside, she keeps having weird dreams where is mysterious boy's voice calling her. When storm finally clears off, burning sun arises. Namine again takes a walk on the beach when she finds net with captured dolphin who's slowly dying from the heat. She feels sorry for it, releasing it from the net. But she's shocked it wasn't a dolphin that she released but a real... merman! After that day she decides to find him as well as he swears that he will protect her. Sunrise join two lives from different worlds. Lots of romance and adventure, joined in warm kh fanfiction. So help decide which story should I start and continue. If you have anything to say, leave a comment below!
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