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  1. Hey there!!! Nice to meet you, your Majesty! Just kiddin! Welcome to the best kingdom hearts site ever! Hope you'll have fun here . I'm hawk, but you can call me Hawkie. I'm a writer with wings, so if you have too much time, check my kh stories at writing. Soon I'll post chapters for my christmas related story!!! Well, nice to meet you princess and don't worry, I don't bite, so you can chat with me any time you want.
  2. Story of Ven - The Fallen Angel is always in my head. So much that I'm making little sketches of Ven in my notebooks during the class hours!!! The first one was drawn during Biotechnology hour, when teacher was talking about stuff that I have already known from primary school. I kinda like this one... how's Venny peeping from that picture. The next one was drawn during German hour ( where I completly suck ). Here I managed to draw wings too, hope you like it. PS: Sorry if you thought that I posted the new chapter, but I will soon. The next two chapters will have christmas's theme!
  3. Poor Kuma... hope he'll survive... Your chapters are getting more and more interesting!!! Keep writing! Can't wait to see what happends next!
  4. "Kingdom Hearts hear my call and streak those two idiots down!" (Xoline and Vanitas) Just kiddin! Story totally rocks! Keep writing!
  5. I know there's still one week... but I might not be able to do this on a day before christmas. So I wish everyone Merry Christmas, Happy New Year and a lot of great moments with Kingdom Hearts and Disney. I especially wanna say Merry Christmas to DChiuch and all stuff members, who created this site and connected all our hearts, just like Sora did in entire Kingdom Hearts series. I also wish Merry Christmas to my best friends: replika 13, sorakingdomhearts, Lu Xun, Nisie, PikminVentus, king of hearts and everyone else who are giving me motivation for writing. I promise I'll update my stories as fast as I can to show how much that means for me, if somone likes something that somone put a lot time and energy to do it. Thank you so much all of you. I also wish merry christmas to Destati_Dream_XIII , member who is unable to be here anymore. But she will always be in my heart, cuz she inspired me to draw again and also gave me motivation for writing. And for the end I have very beautiful disney's christmas song. Hope you'll enjoy! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZy7JNFJ82U Merry Christmas and Happy New year everyone!!!
  6. Yeah!!! Just one more week and.... Christmas is here!!! Yay! I'm gonna decorate christmas tree today! It will be so awsome!!! We have a big plactic one, cuz when we had a real one, spruce needles were all over the living room. Anyway which one do you prefer? Real or plastic one? I also care a lot about nature and I kinda don't know which one is the best. Plactic trees are made of oil, gas and some other things that hurt nature, but it can last for over ten years. Real ones are taken from the nature and can only last for one year.
  7. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa... this is so freaking awsome!!!! Phoenix!!!!
  8. Weather is going crazy over here!!! I can clearly hear the wind's scream!!!

  9. Awsome!!!! Write more! Man, this story is so freaking epic!
  10. I been just wondering... what was your biggest pain and biggest fear? Mine bigest fear was when one older boy, from the school, threw a firecracker right in front of me! It exploded so laud that I still have a fear of loud noises. And biggest pain... when I had a small injury and I needed to go on operation. It was really painful and I remeber that a cried from the pain that lasted for an hour. So what was your greatest fear and pain?
  11. All right!!!! Keep doing your awsome work!!!
  12. Chapter Six: Abby Memory of the past seemed like a long lost dream. Even thought it already happened once, it seemed like something entirely new. Girl with two long pony tails, black haired boy and smaller brown haired boy were running through the rainforest along with three hawks who were flying above their heads. They were chased by at least fifteen men, led by a woman named Lam. She laughed, while shooting at them with gun. Suddenly one of the hawks was shot in the leg. Smaller boy screamed from the pain, when his hawk fell on the floor unconscious. Black haired boy quickly placed him on the back, while his hawk changed into wolf and picked wounded hawk. “Get Dimi out of here! I’ll buy you some time” girl said. “Are you sure about that?” boy asked. “Definitely!” girl shouted while running towards the men. That was the last time, when she saw black haired boy, carrying his younger brother. After that she managed to beat up all the men. But that woman, Lam disappeared without the trace. Girl had no idea that Lam followed black haired boy in secret. Without a warning she attacked both of the boys and totally beat them off. But in the end she only took younger one along with his hawk. Lam’s evil laugh was the last thing that black haired boy saw, before passing out. Roxy loudly woke up from her memory dream. She was in abandoned mansion, not in forest like she remembered. Spark was also there, sleeping with bandaged wing. Girl’s arm was bandaged too. “Glad to see, that you’re ok.” boy’s voice said. “Leo? What are you doing here? I thought you were looking for Dimi.” “A simple thank you would be enough, you know. Taking a bullet from Spark wasn’t exactly easy.” “Oh, sorry… I mean thank you for helping me. What were you doing here anyway?” “I was about to leave this city, when I heard a gunshot. I followed it and found you, bleeding like torrent. And while bringing you here… I saw your memory dream….” Girl was quiet. She knew that was Leo’s saddest memory. But she wanted to change subject. “Where’s Cloud?” she asked. “Outside, checking the area. He said that he senses men in gray. Are they the ones who shot you? And why?” “I was here on mission… to protect new Rookie. But… I failed… they captured him.” she said sadly. “I know how you feel… but you must know… accidents do happen.” he said while sighing. Spark suddenly woke up. She happily went to girl who gave her a big hug. Soon after, black wolf came whispering something on Leo’s ear. “By the way… did you check your cell phone by any chance?” he asked. Roxy quickly looked in her little bag where she always kept her cell phone. Cell phone wasn’t there. When she was about to panic, Leo took it from his pocket with a smile. “Hey! Give it back!” she said kinda angrily. “It rang for like five times. I answered once and guess who called… Os.” “Jeez! He’s gonna kill me!” she said and quickly typed phone number. Person on the other side sure picked quick. “What the hell happened to you? I called you for like five times and the only time it was picked up was by a guy who left four months ago!!! Plus he didn’t want to tell anything! What were you thinking!!!!” boy’s voice shouted from the phone. “Os… I… didn’t know you called… and… sorry… it’s kinda hard to explain.” Boy’s voice sighed. “Sorry… I was just worried. Since that last call yesterday... and then when Nai sensed men in gray… I didn’t want you to get hurt.” “I know how you feel… but the things didn’t turn out as we thought… “ “Please just talk… I’ll listen.” “Men in grey knew who the next Rookie is. I tried to hide him until that portal appears. But Lam appeared on the train. I fought with her while Spark led him to the hiding place. But I didn’t realize Lam called backup. So, they captured him and shot Spark.” “Holy Jesus!!! Are you ok?” “I’m alright now, really. Soon after Leo appeared and treaded my and her wounds.” “Can you give him on the phone?” She passed it to Leo. “Eh Leo? I’m really sorry for…” “… yelling on me because of your worried mind? No problem.” “Do you really mean it?” “Yes, you worry head. Is there anything else?” “Well… what are you planning for now?” “I found out about new abby. Dimi might be there.” “And how is Roxy planning to save Rookie?” Roxy already had a plan. “Just before we left I gave him Searcher. It was hidden in that necklace around his neck. Maybe I can found a signal… but I don’t have Quick Think Do set.” “Don’t worry, I brought some reserves.” Leo said while showing on little bag, next to the door. “I broke into three different abbies. You can easily go in if you know how to meddle with cameras.” “Then I’ll go… oh, what about you Leo?” “I already found the signal of Rookie. But I was there about three weeks ago… Dimi wasn’t there. I’ll go to the new abby.” “Ok, be very careful… both of you! And especially you Roxy! This is your second time mission!!!!” “Cut the worries! I’ll be ok!” “Well, I’ll go now. Cloud is very nervous you know!” “Right! Bye Leo!” In that moment Leo merged with Cloud. Black wolf was now bigger, darker and had Leo’s eyes. “Farewell Roxy, good luck. You’ll need it.” “You too Leo. Hope you’ll found your brother.” “I will.” wolf said and ran from the house. Roxy said good bye and took Quick Think Do set. “Are you up for this Spark?” “You bet I’m!” After being injected by weird liquid, Alex lost consciousness. Now he was slowly waking up. “Where the heck am I?” he asked himself. He was lying on metal bed covered by sheets. Someone took his clothes off and replaced them by bright white shirt and pants. He also noticed steel rings on his both wrists and ankles. While looking around the room he almost completely freaked out when he saw another person on another bed. “So, finally decided to wake up… that’s nice.” boy’s voice said. Alex took a deeper look on the boy, sitting there. He seemed around thirteen years old with messy brown hair and brown eyes. Boy also wore the same clothes and steel rings. “Who are you?” Alex asked. “I’m Dimi. You?” boy answered. “I’m Alex and… wait… you’re Leo’s brother!” “You met Leo?” “Sort of… he was a wolf when I saw him…” “Then he’s still looking for me…” Dimi said sadly. “What are we doing here anyway?” “We were both captured to be test subjects. Men in gray are doing terrible experiments just to get some certain answers. I’ve been captured for about four months and… as you can see… they didn’t actually tread with me nice…” Alex could now see what Dimi meant. Dimi’s face was full of bruisers as well as his both arms had several deep cuts and wounds from injects. But the worst part of his body, were his eyes. They seem so empty with only a bit brown color that proved he’s still alive. “What did they do to you?” Alex said shocked. “Experiments… if I struggle, they punish me.” “What kind of people are they anyway?” “I don’t know for sure…” Dimi said while sighing “I miss Whirl.” “Who’s that?” “My Spirit Mate… don’t you have it too?” “You mean hawk or wolf or something? No…” “Then you’re still Rookie… that’s not good…” “Why?” “Cuz you still didn’t receive your powers. Without them you’re weak... they will overpower you in second. Also without your spirit mate… you’ll...” “Could you at least tell about that spirit thing? Is that bird or something?” Boy took a deep breath. “When you die your soul leaves your body. But ‘cept disappearing, it goes to the Realm of Spirits. There it waits until it’s reunited with its person, receives powers and gets a name by it. Mine was Whirl and I could use… ahhh… chu!” Dimi sneezed so much that he totally trashed the whole room. Wind from his sneeze was incredibly strong! “Jeez! Guess your powers are oversized sneezes.” Boy started laughing as well as Alex did. “You could say that but… I’m not that strong to run away. They took Whirl much away from me and I’m weak without him.” Suddenly door opened. The man, who injected Alex, was there along with three men dressed in lab coats. Dimi started shaking when that man look at him laughably. But his eyes were soon pointed into Alex. “Bring him into lab number six.” he said to the men, while pressing on button. Alex’s rings suddenly stuck together like magnet. He was unable to move while two man carried him towards the lab. PS: Word abby, which is the place where men in grey keep captured ones, is taken from the word Abaddon that means destruction in Greek.
  13. Wow!!!! So cool!!!! Keep writing!!! And your grammar is better by each chapter you write!!!
  14. Keep going!!! This is getting better by each chapter!!
  15. Awsome chapter!!!! Make more!!! Please http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cool.png
  16. Awwwwww!!!! So, glad that Roxas is ok!!!!
  17. Wow, this is getting interesting by every minute!!! Keep going!
  18. My head gonna explode!!! So many ideas for writing, but no time to put them on paper. I have to study!!!!! :'(

    1. Oishii

      Oishii

      I know the feeling. It's like borderline insanity x.x

    2. Sora!

      Sora!

      i have tha same but with animation :(

  19. Hi omi, I'm Hawkie! Nice to meet you . Welcome to the coolest kingdom hearts fan site in entire kingdom hearts history. Hope you'll have a great time here and if you have too much free time, check my stories at writing. Nice to meet you by the way and feel free to chat with me. Don't worry I won't bite you.
  20. Drak!!! Such awsome name and cool personality. It will always stay in my heart. I kinda imagine you as Drak. And we readers are your Religion!!!
  21. Chapter Five: Men In Gray Roxy quickly picked her cell phone. She talked very quickly and in the end she cursed a lot. When the call ended, she threw her backpack to Alex. “Put your most important things in! We’re leaving in ten minutes!” Alex was confused. Why do they have to leave all the sudden? But he trusted her and ran upstairs. He took his new sketchbook, some small matters and his favorite book. There was nothing else that he could take, so he went down the stairs. Roxy put her finger on lips, showing him to be quiet. “Listen. I don’t know why, but those guys know that you’re here.” she whispered. “You mean, right here in this house?” he whispered back. “No, they know that you live somewhere in this city. They also know that you have red short hair.” “What’s the plan then?” “We’ll go out of that city. There’s an abandoned mansion, somewhere much away from here. We’re gonna go there and hide, until portal will appear. I just have one question for you.” “And that is?” “Do you trust me and are you up for this?” “Absolutely.” “Then wear this.” she said while putting a necklace around his neck. “Maybe it will bring luck.” Alex looked at it. It was in a shape of the moon, made from wood. “And one more thing. Put your hood on and try to act normal. I’m sure they’re everywhere.” “What should I do if they appear? And how exactly do they look like?” “Leo said that they’re wearing normal jeans and grey coats with sunglasses. If they appear, just hold my hand. You’ll become uninterested just like me.” “Ok, but what about Spark? Speaking of which where she is?” “In air, flying towards the mansion. It’s safer for her and me. Now, let’s go already.” “Ok.” Roxy took a backpack and along with Alex left the house. While going out, Alex felt sad and thought a lot about message he left on the table. Thank you so much uncle, to spend all those years with you. I know you’ll forget me, but I won’t. You were like a dad for me and even if you remember about me, don’t be sad. I met a really good friend and I’m sure for where I’m going is better place. Your nephew Alex His thinking was broken by a train station where they both just arrived. Roxy bought tickets and they both went on train. “We’ll get out of the train in about half of hour. That’s the last station.” she whispered. Train was full, but they still managed to find two free seats. When train left the station, Alex looked around the train. There weren’t any men, wearing jeans and grey coats or even sunglasses. By each station some of the people went out, leaving more space on train. After twenty minutes, the only station left was the last one. Almost everyone got off the train. Only one woman stayed, reading a newspaper in the end of the railcar. Alex felt nervous about her, so he grabbed Roxy’s hand. Roxy looked deeply on woman with sunglasses who starred on them, like she seen ghost. Woman got up and went closer. “Excuse me young man, but do you know where library is? I’ve been searching for it the whole morning.” she asked. “Answer her.” Roxy whispered. “It’s back in the city, right in front of the high school.” “Well thank you… Alex!” woman said loudly, when she took off Alex’s hood. Alex freaked out, when woman was about to hit him. Roxy downed him and took a hit instead. Woman only laughed and removed her hat to reveal her dirty blond hair. “Nice to see you Roxy. It’s been a long time since we met.” “Shut up you freak!” Roxy yelled while kicking her. “Now let me remember that time, hm. I know! When we took that friend of yours! We’re really taking good care of him.” woman laughed while dodging. “Alex, go to the exit and wait there until the train stops. I’ll make her busy.” “Ok…” Alex said frightened. Woman suddenly took metal stick from her pocked, pointing it at him. But Roxy reacted quickly, knocking it from the hand. Then she got closer, hitting woman in the chest and stomach. “Have you heard about reserves, my dear?” woman said while bringing another metal stick. With it, she punched Roxy away. Girl landed on two sits with a huge bruise on her chest. “Fine, you’re leaving me with no other choice.” Roxy said and took her triangle necklace off. For a moment she held necklace, but in the next one she held the bow. Bow was silver with a green snake around it. “So, you finally summoned your Arrowblade. How nice.” “I’ll show you nice!” Roxy yelled. She ran towards her, holding her bow like a sword. Woman defended herself with two metal sticks, while Roxy was attacking her very quickly. “Alex, when does the train stops?” “In about three minutes.” “You hear that? You have a time limit.” “Shut up Lam!!!” Roxy yelled. Woman with name Lam only smiled and looked straight in Alex’s eyes. “Play time is over. I’ll show you the right fight!” In that moment she put both of the metal sticks together, making one long one. When they both clashed together, unknown force hit both Alex and Roxy on the ground. “Now which one should I defeat first? I know!” Lam said and hit Roxy so hard that she flew through the window off the train. “No! Roxy!” Alex screamed. “Don’t worry. I won’t be that hard with you.” Lam said sweetly. “Get away from me!” Alex protested. Lam strongly held his arm and took her cell phone. “Sat! I got the kid…. There was another one, but I already took care of it… If he... just give me a sec.” Alex still tried to get off her grip, but the woman was incredibly strong. She took off his jacket, looking on Roxy’s necklace. “Yeah, there’s something, but it’s not a Trinity… Spirit Mate? I don’t think he haves one… wait there’s something…” “Spark!” Hawk broke the window, rushing directly in the woman. Lam screamed while Alex managed to get off of her grip. Spark look at him, like she asked: Are you ok? “Yeah, I’m ok. Thank you so much.” But there was something different about her. She was bigger and her eyes looked like… Roxy’s? In the same moment she started glowing. Alex covered his eyes from the glow and after it… Spark and Roxy were there! “Roxy! You’re alright! But how did you get here?” he said while hugging her. “I can infuse with Spark. When I fell from the train, she came in the right moment to merge with me. I nearly hit the ground.” she smiled. “I’m not done with you two!” Lam shouted while standing up. “Alex! Train will stop right now. You get out and follow Spark. She’ll lead you to the mansion where you’ll wait. I’ll buy you some time. Got it?” “Got it! But what about you?” “I can take care of myself, don’t worry.” In the moment train stopped, Alex jumped from it along with Spark. Roxy summoned her Arrowblade again. “Let’s dance.” Roxy smiled. “No this time!” Lam said angrily. Lam quickly ran right in front of her, grabbing her collar. “How do you like that?” Lam laughed. Roxy only smiled and snapped with her fingers. Her entire body was covered by electricity. Lam yelled as electricity burned her hand and released Roxy. Girl started attacking her and woman was unable to do anything. But she still laughed. “Your friend won’t make it.” “Just what do you mean by that?” “Sat and his men are chasing him as we speak. I called some backup.” Roxy was frightened. What if they’ll catch him? She quickly summoned ice arrow and shot Lam with it. Arrow stabbed her in arm and girl used that moment to get off the train, trying to find Alex. Lam wasn’t kidding. Soon after Alex left the train, at least six men appear, chasing him. One of them stood out. He was a way taller than others, wearing black coat instead of grey. Spark managed to knock out two of them, but that didn’t helped much. Mansion that he was heading was deep in the forest. The moment they enter the forest, men took metal sticks, pointing them at him. “Oh, great!” he said. Metal sticks seemed to have ropes, cuz they were shooting him with the ropes. After some time passed, forest seemed like a giant spider net. Alex really needed to dodge them. Suddenly, one moment changed everything. Man in black coat took a gun and shoot Spark. Hawk sadly fell on floor, with wounded wing. Alex completely frightened, stood still. Spark was lying on ground with closed eyes and wing, covered by blood. Suddenly ropes rushed into him, tying him on the tree. Soon after, two other ropes rushed, tying him even more. His body couldn’t move. He even breathed heavily. Man in black coat came closer, looking straight in his eyes. “We finally caught you Alex. How does it fell, to be all alone, unable to do anything?” man said laughably. Two other men came closer, looking at his neck, eyes and arm. “No Trinity or Change.” one man said. “This bird isn’t his Spirit Mate either.” other one said. “Great, we caught a Rookie. Bring the helicopter here and you there… give me the case.” “Right away, Mr. Sat.” Man named Sat, opened the case that was brought by one of his men. Case was awfully similar to scientist’s or doctor’s. It was full of disgusting liquids, scissors, sharp things and weird instruments. Sat took an injection, filled it with white liquid and slowly drew it near to Alex’s arm. “Don’t worry, it will hurt little on begging, but then it will become worse.” man laughed. Alex never liked injections and that one seemed ten times sharper than usual one. Pain appeared at begging and became worse by any minute. Boy felt like his body is burning and freezing at once. He also felt dizzy as he collapsed. Soon after that helicopter arrived. Men already took off the ropes from him and cleaned the sights of battle. They threw unconsciousness Alex on helicopter and disappeared without a trace. Roxy hardly walked through the forest. Her arm was bleeding like a worst horror movie. She was looking for Alex, when she saw a helicopter. It didn’t bring any bells that Alex was there. Her legs moved her deeper in the forest. Spark was there, still bleeding. “What happened? Where’s Alex?” “They… got him… I’m so sorry.” Spark said quietly. “It’s alright… we’ll find him. It’s my fault… I should realize that Lam called backup.” “What… are we… gonna do?” “First we’ll rest… then we’ll save Alex.” Roxy said as she collapsed on the ground. PS: Names of the bad guys - Lam and Sat are taken from words Lamia, which means vampire in latin and Satanas which means enemy of god in greek. PPS: Wish me luck. On Monday, I have to fight with my scariest enemy ever - German test!!!!
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