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Hunter Hawk

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  1. Well, this story is something special. I been carry it in my head for a long time and i think i need to post it. Main characters are Ventus, Terra and Aqua, but in this story they're somehow different. They live in the village, where all young keyblade chosens train to become keyblade masters. Aqua, Terra and Ven are also related (Ven is Terra's and Aqua's younger brother). They live a perfect live, until dark forces tear them apart.. Chapters: ( 1 ) Flames of Destruction - Done ( 2 ) Net - Done ( 3 ) Pure Ones - Done ( 4 ) Wayfinder - Done ( 5 ) Kyrllion - Done ( 6 ) Melissa - Done ( 7 ) Young Keyblade Chosens - Done ( 8 ) Meeting - Done ( 9 ) Kyran - Done ( 10 ) Who's Xyle? - Done ( 11 ) Reunion - Done ( 12 ) Searching - Done ( 13 ) Another Reunion - Done ( 14 ) Sleeping Blade - Done ( 15 ) Setting - Done ( 16 ) Portal - Done ( 17 ) Crystal Island - Done ( 18 ) Ritual - Done ( 19 ) In the Dark - Done ( 20 ) Things That Has to be Done - Done ( 21 ) Forgotten memories - Done ( 22 ) Shadow Eyes - To Be Posted As Soon As Possible Chapter One: Flames of Destruction Aqua sensed something strange. It was something dark, powerful and scary. She decided to warn Ven and Terra about it. Village seem peaceful and quiet, but she still had the same feeling. “Where are you going?” Aqua's friend asked. “Have you seen Ven or Terra?” Aqua asked. Brown haired girl thought for some time. “I think they're training at Waterfalls. Is something matter?” “Hope not” Aqua answered and ran towards the Waterfalls. They were several clouds on the sky, ready for a storm. Her feeling was getting stronger and stronger. She finally reached the Waterfalls. Ven was swinging his keyblade around, but then he casted some thunder spells and totally mess up everything. Terra was laughing at that. He noticed Aqua. “Hey Aqua, I think our little brother learn how to cast a Thunder spell” Ven didn't seem to mind much. “How was I? Did I hit the rock? Was I good?” Ven asked. Terra started laughing even more than before. Ven looked at Aqua, who nodded and then at Terra, who was still laughing. “You still need some training” Aqua answered. Ven nodded. “Wanna see my Fire spell? I'm master at this one!” Ven asked Aqua. “Maybe later, but I came with a different reason...” Terra stopped laughing. Aqua drew a deep breath. “Something dark is going to destroy the village.” Ven and Terra were surprised. “Are you sure?” Terra asked. “No, but we still have to be careful. You'll never know what is going to happen.”Aqua answered. “So, what are we going to do?” Ven asked. “I think it's the best that we return to the village and be ready for everything.” Terra answered. Ven and Aqua nodded. They all went towards the village. Ven walked faster than Terra and Aqua. He reached the village first. But when he reached it, he turned pale. “What's wrong?” Terra asked. “See for yourself.” Ven answered. Aqua and Terra looked at village and turned pale as well. Village was surrounded by black and red flames, who slowly turned it into an ash... Well that's the first chapter. I'll write the second as soon as I can. PS: English is not my native language so correct me if I wrote something stupid.
  2. I'm big fan of kingdom hearts and final fantasy. But, have you seen some resemblances? I found some. 1. You all know this one: Axel and Reno (same hair colour, same voice actor, same personality...) 2. Marluxia and Lightning (from FF XIII) (same hair colour, roses around them...) 3. Roxas and Xion ; Cloud and Zack (Xion and Zack both have black hair, Roxas and Cloud have blonde hair, Xion and Zack are both dying when Roxas and Cloud are watcing them, Roxas and Cloud don't understand what exactly is happening with their best friend and in the end they both show saddness: Roxas cries, Cloud sreams) 4. I don't know for sure: Ventus and Hope (from FF XIII) (they're both kids, they see their best friends as older brothers or sisters (Ven see that in Aqua and Terra, Hope see that in Lightning and Snow), they're both in danger, they both become stronger, they both learn something new) Well that's it. If you got any other ideas, please post. PS: English is not my native language, so correct me, if a wrote something stupid.
  3. Sora meets Vanitas Sora: You look... just like me! Vanitas: No, my hair is black and I've got more muscles than you. Sora: So you're my twin brother! Come here! (sora hugs vanitas) Vanitas: Stop hugging me!!! I'm not your brother! Sora: But, there is something different about you and me... Vanitas: At last... Sora: I'm more cuter than you! Riku meets Sephiroth Sphiroth: Welcome to the hell, child... Riku: Daddy! Sephiroth: For the 4856146th time!!! I'm not your father!
  4. I was thinking for some time: where did Ventus come from? Aqua and Terra lived in Land of Departure since then, but Ven didn't. I found out on wikia that Master Xehanort "found" Ventus, but where? And then i made up one very crazy theory. Ventus's homeworld is Radiant Garden and Ansem the Wise is his father ( I thougth about that, becuase they both have the same hair colour). Master Xehanort was searching for "new vessel". He visited many worlds, but couldn't find it. Then he found out the Radiant Garden. There he met Braig and talked with him. Braig told him about Ansem the Wise and his apprentices. Youngest of them is Ansem's son Ventus (imagine little Ven in Ienzo clothes). Master Xehanort saw strong light within him and decided to take him. With a help of Braig, he kiddnaped him and erased all his memories. He also gave him new clothes. Ansem the Wise was very sad becuase of it. He couldn' t just leave his world becuase he was a ruler. Then he found Ienzo and took care of him. He imagined Ventus in Ienzo and cared for him like for his own son (you can see this in blank points, how Ansem the Wise and Ienzo eat ice cream together). When Sora was put into sleep, Ansem might found Vens heart inside him. That's was the reason why he wanted to woke up Sora. He could brought Ventus back. But for that he needed Roxas. Maybe he was saying all those cruel things ("A nobody can not feel anything", " It's a fate of nobody", "A nobody doesn't have a right to know, neither have a rigth to be") just becuase he wanted to fool himself. To not think about Ventus. Well thats all. Please, write me what you think about it. P.S.:English is not my native language, so correct me if I write something stupid.
  5. Well hi there. (English is not my native language so correct me if i write something stupid.) I very like Kingdom hearts. I never acctualy play it, but i watched all cutscenes and walktroughts. It's very cool. I even started to write a book with a story similary to kingdom hearts. I've got some crazy ideas for kingdom hearts 3d and kh iii, and also about characters. Well thats me.
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