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  1. Sora shadow
    Oh ok it great pleas keep writing i want to see more of this.
  2. Sora shadow
    WHY it was so interesting i was wating for your next chapter.
  3. Sora shadow
    Great i like your story i be here waiting for more.
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    sorry it took me so much i dont was in the mood to write but now i am so here the next chapter. Chapter 2 escape When the four of us woke up they were in front of a King without their weapons and with hands tied. Then the King ask to us how are we and from where we came? Then I answer my name is Zeza and those are my friends Nina Daryl and Jenica and we came from an island far away from here. Well because you don
  5. Sora shadow
    Chapter 3 fugitive Then I take a bath and went for breakfast. In these moments while I
  6. Sora shadow
    sorry it took me so much to post this chapter i buy a new game and im little obsessed with it so i dont use the computer so much. Chapter 1 the adventure begin It passes 1 year and 6 month and the ship is complete. The ship has 5 rooms four of them are bedrooms and the other room is for storing food. Now they are preparing for explore and remember their past. They because don
  7. Sora shadow
    i think is a great intro im not a great writer but for me is fine i be waiting for se more of this.
  8. Sora shadow
    You really know how to do a great story i willnever could write like you do. Great story.
  9. Sora shadow
    Zexa adventure: journey seeking for lost memories Introduction Take place after the explosion that kill Viel and restore the kingdoms in a far island without habitants. Our four warriors don
  10. Sora shadow
    Great its so interesting i be waiting for see more about this great story.
  11. Sora shadow
    Chapter 2 it was a dream or not? It was like 11: 50 on clock when go to sleep. But I begin to dream with a secret laboratory. I see a scientific working on a formula but it look like something go wrong because an explosion occurred let the scientific injured and with scars but at the same time I see a baby. It looks like it was created during the explosion because no one was in there except the scientific and me. But at the same time I not was in there because it is a dream. Then the man take a potion named cure and drink it all. I was wondering what that potion was. Well whatever it look like it
  12. Sora shadow
    Great story i think is interesting you write what you think yours ideas i guess.
  13. Sora shadow
    Thanks i will do it for the next chapter. i hope there is more persons post in here.
  14. Sora shadow
    I think is look great i like it.
  15. Sora shadow
    Thanks write it right now Chapter 1 after adoption Their past 25 years after Erik was born. Now he is working in a pharmacy in Chicago. He never has to go to a doctor. He always was a healthy person with a great knowledge, he can learn fast and do all type f work. When he have free time he go to a silent place and draw or write how he feel. One day he express that he feel different form the other person like he was created by accident. He just ignores that feeling and keeps with his life. The next day he was on the work and a man appears getting out his weapon and saying to the he want all the money. Erik was calm down and when their where giving the money he jump over the delinquent disarmed and let him unconscious. Then he calls the police. The police finally reach the pharmacy and go. The next week when he goes to work they give him a medal for his valiantly act. When the pharmacy closes him and his work companions go to celebrate his valiantly act. This celebration finish like 11:15 P.M. the next morning he receive a call of his young brother that have 20 years and say that mom and dad are dead. In the work give him a free week for go to the funeral. His parents die because in an accident involving a car crashes their car. Now that the funeral is finish he go to Chicago but because it too far from where he is he pass the night on a motel. Sorry if it not have action. It will begin like in chapter 2 or 3.
  16. Sora shadow
    i change the intro a little bit so please read it and coment.
  17. Sora shadow
    I think it is a great beginning.
  18. Sora shadow
    I think he use Rikus body so then he can wield a keyblade
  19. Sora shadow
    sorry dont know how to make an extence introduccion and i dont see anime so i dont know it look like one.
  20. Sora shadow
    Here a new story hope you like it. A new form of life: Introduction: This is the story begin because the scientific Charles try to make the cure for all of the diseases. This cure it supposes to make the human body immune to all type of toxin or virus that exist or can be created. Also it can give the person over natural powers without the exact concentration of it. In his experiment with animals it was a success but when he tried on humans it was a failure. He was trying to know what go wrong. One day he was so stressed so he change a little the formula and by mistake he do it without the correct process and the experiment went wrong and an explosion occurred bringing life a baby. He examined the baby and see he was all right. But the he was injured so he use his old formula of cure but that not help him in the moment so because he don
  21. Sora shadow
    Interesting chapter it make me think what will happen next. It a great one.
  22. Sora shadow
    He will die this is the final chapter Chapter 11 army and end of Viel Now they camp in the night for have the power to defeat Viel. In the morning they go inside the palace and in there they feel the pure essence of darkness. Once inside there no way out unless the man that awake the darkness is defeated (this man is Viel). But to reach him the four needs to kill a lot of creatures that was making of darkness for protect his new leader. They don
  23. Sora shadow
    Nither I. we better begin our search for thet guy, but first, who is that guy?
  24. Sora shadow
    No I dont know him.
  25. Sora shadow
    I was listening to your conversation and want to help if you let me.
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