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Naminé15

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  1. Well I tough you deserved a place among the winners mostly beacause of you rimprovement - in my poinion this last poem of yous was better than Red Moon. It must have been harder to write red Moon, since it's longer and involves historical referencies, but I still think you showed more emotion, confession in your entry for the second round -But it's just my opinion, both of your poems are great :D:D I tought your poem was fantastic, I really liked it :D:D:D:D
  2. cool i'm not only one who likes Toboe in here - when drew those at school people started saying Toboe was gay but they even know wolf's rain, so why couldn't they shut up? To be a poet you have to see the world on a special way, and, to see the world like this you have to have "poet's eyes". I can consider one of my eyes is a "poet's eye", but my other is ordinary, as a result I can say weird things a few poetic phrases, but I can't write like the ones whose both eyes are of this kind, I can't write like true poets do. :'(:'(
  3. I msut say, it must be realy for Reikon to chose the winner :D:D:D:D:D:D Since author's War round one I've been folowing this contest, in my silence, keeping my toughhts to me only -how selfish - Now, when the last poem has been posted in the last round, I 'm finally, showing my existence in here: :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D May the winner be revealed!!!! -------------------- And, as for Reikon who was at the hospital, hope she's already better :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D -------------------- I should shut up for now, I going a bit off-topic...
  4. Here I am sis :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D and you forgot your other nicknames: - demon eyed (but it's true, your eyes are WEIRD... SCARY... like ademon's) - mad one (cuz you're not very normal) - murderer (cuz you can be cruel sometimes *evil laugh* ) -cdf -nerd ---------------------- Well, now it's my turn. Those are the nicknames you and some other people keep calling me (some of them i don't know why ) - emo (butI'm not!!!) - poet (although i'm not a real one) -nun (this one I never understood ) -homemade corn cake ()
  5. thanks for such a coment, Antrium :D:D:D Chapter III: Ladgia
  6. Sounds interesting: something near reality: A III World War lead by north korea and its friends + something completly differnt from reality: special abilities and cyborgs Good job, your description of feelings is great, but i tought your description of Robert, julie and dominic breaking into the enemies' place was a bit confusing, though. I aso can't see much resemblance with Fullmetal Alchemist, but maybe it's becuase this is just the story's beginnig. Anyway the plot seems well done, just keep writing 'cause I'm waiting for more. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  7. Yep, my drawing teacher said I would learn about shading, and he also said I should make more "delicate" hands, because the ones I draw are huge. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nobody is born knowing how do to do something. We learn it as we do it over and and over again, day after day, year after year. and I, I can't wait for my time to come when i'll finally make this dream -being PERFECT at drawing - come true. Why? Why such a meaningless dream? I do't know. This weird addiction keeps forcing me to want to ...draw... So stupid and won't lead me anywhere - or maybe it will - I don't know Well, i shold just shut up about my mad toughts for now, or sis wil keep saying I'm crazy (even if sometimes I really am) or that I'm a poet (I wish i was)
  8. Sounds cool :D:D can't wait ofr the rest. Hope this is as good as that story of yours :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  9. Cool!!! The story keeps getting even better :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D You can ignore this crazy idea of mine: Icean reminds me from the wolves of an anime (wolf
  10. Cool! Can't wait to see it! You alway s write so well and have such great ideas :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  11. Thanks for all you said. I'm just a beginner, but that was my best and i'm glad you guys liked it. Check out my lates works - this is the first time I EVER try to copy a printed image O.O- My skills may inprove once I've just started a drawing course :D:D:D And, about what Keyblader and sis were saying, I do think men are great artists, not only in manga, but most painters and famous artists - not people we know who can just darw well, I mean, who earns living from their art - are men.
  12. Sorry it's taken too long to post it - I've lost my password recentlt and had to spend a few time away. But here now it goes. This chapter is not climax yet, so you may think it's a bit "slow". Anyway, hope you enjoy it. Thanks for al the coments.
  13. ME Behind a smile in my lips Behind a tear in my eye Words may turn into flowers or whips When they reach a place called my :
  14. For the ones who don't know about my existance, I am Gizelita's annoying twin sister. Well, you may have noticed I've spent a few time away and a day in "banned" section. Just for you to know: I didn't leave kh13.com . The truth is that I lost my password, my e-amil on my profile was wrong , so I couldn't get password recovery; and I was too ashemed of registering again because I used to 2 acounts in here and one of them was banned. On a beautiful day I rembered that even banned ones can enter this website, and try to comunicate with moderators and administrators on the "banned" section. That's what I did: the Namin
  15. Anyway I just love this story and keep curius about both: Brox and Erik. Just keep writing :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  16. The plot seems really good, there's no doubt, but your grammar - specially ponctuation and capital letters placement - should be watched in order to make it easier to understand. - I know I've already said it before, sorry. Problaby if you used Microsoft Word to type the text, and read it after you wrote, the problems would be over. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  17. Mistery.... the wolf, the assasins, are they connected or not, why and how? Please continue, I can't wait :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  18. At the end, my crazy idea for the title worthed something :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D I had tought Mal was adorable in both ways: personality and appearance - even with those eyes of diferent colours I still think he must be quite cute. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  19. I know! I know! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D You gonna hit my head with your Death Note - oops, I told everybody that you are Kira, that means you gonna hit my head twice and write my name in that cursed notebook for the 1000th time - HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!!!!
  20. A personal demon? Reminds Sebastian from Kuroshitsuji or Riuk from Death Note - ignore my crazy ideas - Anyway I'll be waiting for your next ideas to show up. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D You could just call your story " An evil world ", you know, "this" really reminds essays titles talking about the world where we live, but "An..world", makes us thinnk of a alternative reality - where the story will happen, I mean, it happens here on Eath, but an Earth controlled by the story's author . -you can ignore this other carzy idea of mine-
  21. This poem is truth itself. You can transform truth into words. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  22. I don't beleive it: Ron nad Seever are in the year 2010! This story keeps geting more and more interesting - and so unpredictable :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Plase write more :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  23. Sis told me yesterday to stop worring about what other's think about what I do, for example writing. So, I decided to type this thing I came up with some time ago. Hope you enjoy - if somebody ever decide to waste his/her time reading this rubbish- Introdudtion:
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