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  1. Antrium
    Wow, I love that motto for the Nobodies!
  2. Antrium

    hi

    Antrium replied to JWright's topic in General Discussion

    Great to have ya here! Hope to see ya around the forum and stuff!
  3. Antrium
    Nice to have you here Story!
  4. Antrium
    Absolutely amazing! I love this plot so far, I thought the last sentence was just such a amazing piece of bait for readers. This is really amazing Gizelita!
  5. Antrium
    I don't want you to leave!!!!!!!!!! I only got to know you for just a little bit but I loved our talks! I want you to know that I will always remember you and that I am putting you in my book so that everyone will know how awesome you are
  6. Antrium
    Nothing bad to say? Or is that it just good?
  7. Antrium
    Thanks to everyone who has been reading this, it means the world to me! Before I continue the next chapter I want to know everybody's theories and criticism. If you all have any suggestions on anything I could add to the next chapters, please tell me! Thank you so much!
  8. Antrium
    When I grow up, I would like to be a prosperous author who is married to the greatest girl in the universe *Looks at picture on desk* I would like to live out in the country and have a large house that has it's own lake and horse ranch. I would like to have a lot of money but not to spend on me, but to help out other people. Oh and kids of course!
  9. Antrium
    Thanks I know that this song is used alot but it is still a good song.
  10. Antrium
    K here is a vid I mad of Terra.
  11. Antrium
    Thanks butterflylexi, I know this is my unedited draft. not the real one.
  12. Antrium
    Chapter 5: just a Start Alexis diligently rubbed her wet clothe over the table as she hummed a sweet song. Only her and two men were in the tavern, the early sun light lit up the room. She finished her cleaning and headed behind the bar.
  13. Antrium
    Thanks, I am working on the next chapter now so it will be posted tonight or tomorrow.
  14. Antrium
    I really hope that happens... along with the titles, HUNTED, LEGACY, THE ASSASSIN CHRONICALS, TYRIN'S JOURNEY, DESPAIR AND REPAIR, NIAMI'S NOTEBOOK, ADEL'S DIARI, MATT'S JOURNAL.... and many other's lol
  15. Antrium
    This is a book lol. I have been pasting the chapters on here that is why they are so long.
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  17. Antrium
    That is good that you do not take any offense to this because we all know that you put your time into this project... I would love to see this comeback as a real story that we all can enjoy with no sexual themes or language. Personally i like Naruto and obviously I love KingdomHearts but my personal opinion is that give yourself a week or two and comeback and start a new thread with another or the same story.
  18. Antrium
    OK... the fact that you got so many replies to a insignificant piece of crap like this is insane! I mean you have no plot, no descriptions, and profanity. This part of the forum is for writer's who actually know something about using their words to entertain, not waste people's time like you have. All-in-All don't post anything unless you know what you are doing. Take what little dignity you have left and go on your way... please though when you develop this more come back and show us what you have made, K?
  19. Antrium
    Please, backhands do nothing. A good old fashioned paddling will fix him. You must be from the city boy. Get a real man to do it and he will know.
  20. Antrium
    I'm with Namine'15 on this, Gizelita. You put me to shame hands down with your plots and characters.
  21. Antrium
    I agree, great plot. Although your punctuation and grammer is way off. There is nothing wrong with this except for the fact that you make it very hard for your readers to understand what you are trying to say. If I was you I would proof read the next continuation before posting it. Like I said, great plot!
  22. Antrium
    Yeah good point both of them need a country BACKHAND. The kid needs to know who's boss and the mother needs to show her kid who is the boss.
  23. Antrium
    Only thing that this kid needs is a good old country BACKHAND! One good ole BACKHAND and he will know.
  24. Antrium
    Congratulations Sorage55! I actually thought you were like 20 lol
  25. Antrium
    Well yes almost everything in life is easier said than done. If we work hard on ourselves then we all can become better people.
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