Antrium
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It is very interesting... I do not know what to think of it just yet though.
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Here I am I stand in front of you My heart laying bare I walked a thousand miles Just to say this I love you You may be unsure about how you feel But I love you You say that goodnight quickly and hang up the phone I am willing to die and give myself up for you Why in the world does life do this to me? Why is it that I have to have a gun put to my head every time something in life goes right? Why is it that I did nothing wrong and all I get in return is punishment? I just want to hear you say to me, "I love you." That is all I want from this world. This is all I want from you... I pour my heart out at you every second of every day. And you give me almost nothing. Tell me why? tell me why I have to see my heart slowly get torn from my chest... I love you still... And I will continue to love you until the end of time. I love you- Tristan Cody.
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Yup see, she rocks beyond all! Now hurry up and give me more lol
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Dude, they look great... I have worn glasses since I was 6 and let me tell ya, in a few months you won't even notice you are wearing them. They like melt onto your face, lol
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You did awesome, Lexi! Thanks for judging Zexion and I will see ya all next round.
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In day I am man... At night an animal... So peaceful in the light... So shattered in dark... I tried to keep it at bay, but when darkness veils the earth... The Animal comes out, the carnage begins... Only you and you alone can save me from this Animal... Give me redemption from the beast and cleanse this sinful soul... Stop this Animal and show me the man I am... So I can be the man I need to be... Save me from this Animal... Oh Lord among lords, please save me from this Animal.
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Thanks for making me a judge. Just let me know when to pair the people up Antrium Thank you so much! I will contact you when
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Thanks Gizelita, it means a lot to hear these things from people like you and Lexi.
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Ok 9 contestants and counting.
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K then we have more people!
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Well actually I am planning on doing a poetry war rather than a story war.
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You will fairly rate three works from three different people and then decide who wins. The thread is called, "The Author War" and is in writing btw. Thank you!
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Ok so I have a thread known as the author war and I need people who are not participation to be my judges... any volunteers?
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thanks I worked really late last night to finish it for you guys. Only time will tell if Brox will recover
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Chapter 6: An Apprentice, a Master, a Brother.
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Sounds cool, who is your publisher?
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k 3 opponents! I was not aware that I was suppose to ask anyone if I could do this, so I sent a mod a message and I am currently waiting a reply. I will know within the end of the day I hope. Until then though just join in
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Sup? Names Antrium. I am like the author, lol. Glad to see ya here. Have fun and rock this forum.
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I am raging an author war against all writers, poets, and authors. The rules are simple: To sign up just say so below on the comments. You will be put against a random opponent. No Fan fiction allowed No profanity No racial, sexist, or other wise controversial subjects. If any writings are too large for posts and cause tons of scrolling to read them then it is best to just link others to the writings All are allowed to join in this event as long as you have something to post when needed. I am first to sign up so here we go... The battle of Authors has now begun.
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Not bad??? Hey this is almost a work of pure genius. Think about how she put her characters in a certain situation and how she brought out their attributes and characteristics in just a few sentences. She made me attached to them with little effort. Excluding a few minor flaws this is one of the best works I have seen from someone as young as her.
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This is so good so far. I like your style and your vocabulary that you have chosen is perfect. Your characters seem unique and differ from each other (Which is amazing). All-in-all a great story so far.
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I will soon, lol
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Well of course but thanks for your response and criticism, like I said it means a lot to me!
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really? cause I think it may need some drastic work...