Text White Blizzard

[Giginha 22]

I know I haven't finished Dark Paths of Life or my fanfic yet, but this story wouldn't get out of my head, so I decided that writing only the introduction wouldn't be that bad.

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Introduction

 

That strange feeling took over my body while I watched all my friends fighting together against him, I couldn't move a muscle, my body wouldn't obey me. I wished to help them, those four people were so much to my life, I couldn't give up on them. But there was nothing I could do. I saw them being defeated, one by one. When at last only my younger brother, Laxus, was still there. Our enemy was way more powerful than him, but I had faith that he would be able to do it. My vision started to get blurry, I felt like I would lose consciousness soon, but I had to help my brother. Slowly everything turned dark, while I lost myself in the darkness.

 

I don't know how much time it took, but when I woke up the battle was over, we won, the pain that I could feel on my limbs was intense, but I overcame it and got up, searching for him. In the middle of the battlefield the bodies of fours brave warriors lied lifeless. I got to my knees closing my eyes in pain. How could it be that me, the one that had always been more powerful couldn't help the ones dear to me? My rage grew, I couldn't forgive myself, and it still is the same now, two years later. But now a new journey has begun, a new threat to our existence appeared, and I'll finally be able to repent for my sins

[Antrium 10]

Absolutely amazing! I love this plot so far, I thought the last sentence was just such a amazing piece of bait for readers. This is really amazing Gizelita!

[Giginha 22]

Thanks for the compliment Antruim. I hope you get satisfied with this new chapter, I guess you could count it as an explanation of the general enviroment of the plot.

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Chapter 1

[terraxaqua34 98]

write more please i like your story

[Antrium 10]

This is so good so far. I like your style and your vocabulary that you have chosen is perfect. Your characters seem unique and differ from each other (Which is amazing). All-in-all a great story so far.

[Sarrin 100]

100% percent awsome

its good to see that at least a few people have been working hard since i've been gone

keep it up Gizelita

[Antrium 10]

Gizelita is by far one of the best young writers in the world.

[Giginha 22]

Chapter 2