A song I made! (Non KH related)

[Kaneki Flesheater 83]

So, I'm making a video game with a couple of people at the moment, and basically... I started making music for it! 

 

So anyway, I wanted some brutally honest opinions on it. It's a work in progress, and the first proper song I've ever made. :S

 

Hope you guys enjoy!

 

 

Until next time,

Stay awesome!

                - VodkaOptic

[Awesome Sauce 634]

I thought it was okay, though the build-up is very long and the melody,  while catchy is a bit repetitive. Other than that, I liked it.

 

 

Mind you, I'm not an expert on music, so this is my opinion.

[Kaneki Flesheater 83]

Version, extended. c: