KHUndertaleFan25 2,858 Posted August 12, 2016 Well, Elsa doesn't need any character development. She's doing exactly what i want her to do. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Axtwyt 500 Posted August 12, 2016 I'm sure somehow Johnny will get some sort of character development and some actual background.Sorry I haven't been keeping up real well. I've been busy with work, a puppy and writing the book Johnny comes from, so... 4 KHUndertaleFan25, Clouded Sun, kingdomhearts45 and 1 other reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 12, 2016 I'm sure somehow Johnny will get some sort of character development and some actual background. Sorry I haven't been keeping up real well. I've been busy with work, a puppy and writing the book Johnny comes from, so... Hey no problem! Good luck to you, and stop by to say hi at least every once in a while. You gotta do you before anyone else. Have fun! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 17, 2016 So I know we have a BUNCH of clans already in this freaking giant planet we call Orbis but...My brain won't stop creating. It won't... How are ya'll feeling about a Hawaiian Clan? Aloha or AloNaw? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 17, 2016 Yeeeeee! Let's do it! Even if they're not core characters it'll be cool to have em as NPCs Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 24, 2016 Name: Zion de Wynter Gender: Female Age: 19 Race: Unknown Appearance: Job Class (Optional): Paladin Clan: Technos, unless Cities is open Weapon (If any): Twin Blazefire Sabers (one red, one burnt orange) Personality:Bubbly and friendly, she has a perverted streak a mile long, but is quite nice aND falls for cute girls easily. Quite eccentric, she is fiercely protective of her friends and cherishes gifts that mean something. She can be a bit ditzy, but overall someone not to cross. Bio: Noone really knows where Zion came from. One day it was normal, the next someone ended up being flattened by a winged girl who claimed to have tripped on air. Struck with amnesia and only able to remember her name and a few words and phrases, she has incredible untapped power that manifests seemingly at random. She is sort of a nuisance at times, with her clumsyness, but hasn't really wrought any real ire from the people she lives around. She does have a bell collar so people know to watch the skies for falling girls, something she can't seem to run from - some guard will force her to wear it. Spells (If any): Dawnguard (shield spell) Dawn's Light (healing) Albion Strike (wide range light bolt bombardment) Powers: Flight Teleportation (can't remember long range, eyesight only) Extra: Zion is searching for her lost items, possibly her true weapons, as her Blazefire Sabers are not her true ones. Quite possible her powers manifest as she remembers things; keeps muttering about a gate she thinks she needs. Notes: Axel made me. 2 kingdomhearts45 and Clouded Sun reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 24, 2016 Name: Zion de Wynter Gender: Female Age: 19 Race: Unknown Appearance: Job Class (Optional): Paladin Clan: Technos, unless Cities is open Weapon (If any): Twin Blazefire Sabers (one red, one burnt orange) Personality:Bubbly and friendly, she has a perverted streak a mile long, but is quite nice aND falls for cute girls easily. Quite eccentric, she is fiercely protective of her friends and cherishes gifts that mean something. She can be a bit ditzy, but overall someone not to cross. Bio: Noone really knows where Zion came from. One day it was normal, the next someone ended up being flattened by a winged girl who claimed to have tripped on air. Struck with amnesia and only able to remember her name and a few words and phrases, she has incredible untapped power that manifests seemingly at random. She is sort of a nuisance at times, with her clumsyness, but hasn't really wrought any real ire from the people she lives around. She does have a bell collar so people know to watch the skies for falling girls, something she can't seem to run from - some guard will force her to wear it. Spells (If any): Dawnguard (shield spell) Dawn's Light (healing) Albion Strike (wide range light bolt bombardment) Powers: Flight Teleportation (can't remember long range, eyesight only) Extra: Zion is searching for her lost items, possibly her true weapons, as her Blazefire Sabers are not her true ones. Quite possible her powers manifest as she remembers things; keeps muttering about a gate she thinks she needs. Notes: Axel made me. YEEEEEEEAAAHH!!! Good to see you Liliy. Accepted! And just so you know, a little update on Clans. We recently added a clan called the Pinneas Clan where people like your character lives up in the skies, which are called Harpies. And just so turns out, one of the traits Harpies have are falling from the sky and losing their memories...Sometimes. So your character is a Harpy! I really should update that sign up post. XD' I'll let you know when you can post. And just as a reminder, here is a look at three more clans! The Pinnae Clan. A clan that lives on a sacred Island up in the clouds. Fairies and even Mermaids inhabit that island. The clan is made up of Humanoid people called Harpies, who develop white wings on their backs. A Harpie who has multiple wings is called a Prodigy. Their leader is Grand Highwind, a giant Harpie who watches over them. A Harpie can either live up in the clouds or live down near the ground, which is rare for a Harpie. The Pinnae Clan's style of combat is usually focused on combining Wind Magic with Martial arts, allowing them to create new and unique spells with physical combat and magic. Some Harpies are Bards, playing songs with harps, flutes, and even lutes that could boost speed and attack. Some Harpies are skilled in archery, rivaling the Anthros' skill in archery. For Prodigies, they are born with the ability of using Holy magic, but must learn how to control and utilize it first. Also, for a Harpie to live on land, the Harpie would have to fall down from the sky before his or her wings are even developed( or of course, just fly down there to check it out). If that Harpie can perform enough good deeds and prove it's worthiness, a bell will ring, and the Harpie will earn his/her wings, which may grow enough to allow him/her to fly depending on his/her actions. The West Clan. This clan is based on Old Western American novels, movies, and settings. This clan is usually placed in a old country styled town with horses, cowboys, cowgirls, bars, trains, wooden buildings, and such. The groups are mostly seen riding on their horses through the outside to explore, look for treasure, do jobs, or just do it. This clan's fighting style is either close and personal or long-ranged. Most of the members of this clan are Gunners. Gunners use different types of Ammo based on the elements like Fire, Ice, Wind, lighting, ect. Depending on the type of gun, the shots might be quick, but not strong or strong, but slow to shoot. Some members use their fists to knock their opponents out quickly. They depend more on upper body strength. Unlike other clans, the West Clan are quite cooperative with the Arabias Clan. The Pirate Clan. Of course, the Pirate Clan is well....Pirates. Although, this clan doesn't have a specific home. They mostly claim the Great Sea as their home. The members of this clan are most likely to be in a ship sailing across the ocean in search for treasure and more crewmates. The members follow the orders of their captain, doing what he or she commands. Any denial, and that crewmate will...*ahem* WALK THE PLANK, ARRG!! *ahem* I couldn't help myself. Anyways, this clan fights with sabers and guns. They are the only clan that is not familiar with any type of magic. They can adapt quickly to any environment, allowing them to quickly think and act fast. The Pirate Clan are Rivals to the Arabias Clan due to their similar desires to find or steal any type of treasure or "booty" they may find. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 24, 2016 Soooo. My entire sidearm for Zuon was...already done by Harpies, somewhat. Then after posting I found someone also using a Blaze fire Sabre so there goes my other part of said plot arc. And the only boots the Pirates and Arabia can never get is Zion''s 1 kingdomhearts45 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 24, 2016 Soooo. My entire sidearm for Zuon was...already done by Harpies, somewhat. Then after posting I found someone also using a Blaze fire Sabre so there goes my other part of said plot arc. And the only boots the Pirates and Arabia can never get is Zion''s Ayyyy good to see ya! It's been a while since we RP'd together (you might not remember) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 24, 2016 Ayyyy good to see ya! It's been a while since we RP'd together (you might not remember) If you changed your name, then I might not. 1 Clouded Sun reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 25, 2016 Just an update on my life. As some of you know, school has started for some of us for the past few days...And in my case, it sucks. Alot. So just so you know, I'm doing a schedule to at least update the RP once a day or night. This excludes weekends since I'm usually free those days. If I don't stay on schedule, it may be because I'm working, studying, dealing with stuff at home, ect. That's all. 1 KHUndertaleFan25 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 25, 2016 Got it. So story progression once a day? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 26, 2016 Just letting Team 2 know.... There is a high chance we might lose. XD' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 26, 2016 Lose? Lose what? I'm interested Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHLegendIII 709 Posted August 26, 2016 If Kelon loses to Zion, it'd be on purpose to keep his cover. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 26, 2016 If Kelon loses to Zion, it'd be on purpose to keep his cover. Haha. Haha. Ha. You clearly never have fought Zion, even without any of her godly powers. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted August 26, 2016 Haha. Haha. Ha. You clearly never have fought Zion, even without any of her godly powers. My Henry can beat her fine. Then again Henry is a badass. // Whats going on here? hm A final fantasy Rp? hmmm am I allowed to make OC characters? 1 Clouded Sun reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 26, 2016 (edited) My Henry can beat her fine. Then again Henry is a badass. // Whats going on here? hm A final fantasy Rp? hmmm am I allowed to make OC characters? What do you think Zion is? OCS are the name of the game Edited August 26, 2016 by Sabre Lily 1 Clouded Sun reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 26, 2016 My Henry can beat her fine. Then again Henry is a badass. // Whats going on here? hm A final fantasy Rp? hmmm am I allowed to make OC characters? If you want to sign up, you can. But we're kind of late into the story and I'm planning on closing the sign ups soon because of the amount of people we have here now. 1 KHUndertaleFan25 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted August 29, 2016 (edited) Too little technologicaly augmented characters. Lemme fix that. Name: Alexander Chanteh Gender: Male Age: 27 Race: Cyborg Human Appearance: A.P.C.S suit All purpose combat suit. Offer good protection with graphene plating and padded sections of the armor, as well as offering elemental resistance with dampeners and insulation. Physicaly enhances his already enhanced physical capabilities. Out of the suit Except with a full synthetic right arm and a synthetic eye implant on his left eye. He also has a Synthetic left leg. Job Class: Cyborg Ninja.Clan: Technos Weapon: Raikiri. The machete-like sword in his appearance image. High frequency, electric blade, capable of high cutting power and very fast swings. He can harness his suit's energy into it, allowing it to charge with even more lightning. It is capable of maitaining charge even underwater, without dispersing it through the water. Alternatively with his suit's Proton chargers, he can change the sword's element from lightning to pure energy, as shown in the appearance image. Using the wrist attachment to switch weapons Alexander can swith out to the: A.U.G.E.R Rifle Low recoil, high power rifle, prone to overheating, it doesn't fire bullets, but a highly powerful laser. Requires a charging time before fired, or else the shot will be much weaker. The Proton bomb: (since Technos get access to flashbombs, im putting a spin on it!) A weird weapon for him to have on his arsenal but its good to use while dodging. These bombs are light, and damaging. They explode on proximity to targets, about 2 meters away, the area of the blast is around 4 meters with its damage decreasing the farther you are from the center of the blast. It also creates a small area of effect dome-like structure, that slows targets caught inside of it, but the dome's areas is around 5 meters in lenght and width, its nothing to really worry about unless the target can't leave the area easily. Personality: Humble, takes shit from nobody, very outgoing type. Alexander is the first to oppose who he doesn't agree with and the last to backdown. He is hard to make friends with, as he holds a distrust for those he doesn't know, to an extent that he is easy to attack others should they annoy him much. But if you can manage to get through to him. You'l find a well humored man who simply has trust issues, he is loyal to a fault. To the point of even overly commiting himself and even putting his body at risk of shuttin down from how much he strains himself for others. Bio: Growing in a poor neighborhood in the city of Aquila, Alexander has had a gang life before, killing, murdering, stealing, none of those are strangers to Alexander, even should he not like it. Its survival, and nobody will help him but himself. At least until he and his gang were ambushed by security and litetally shot down. This caused Alexander to be shot in the leg and arm, and a bullet grazing his left eye, blinding him in it. Alexander was presumed dead on the spot and left. It was then...a Pro Technos scientists found him and took him in. And began the modifications to Alexander's body. And as such, He became a cyborg, something more than human. Augmented with a better eye, arm and leg, Alexander quickly recovered from the trauma and wounds, taking a distinct dislike to authority. The only person he care about then was the scientist who took him in and helped him, a red heared, green eye woman, about thirty or so years old, pretty. Money was low, and she was now alone and not with the other Technos scientists anymore, "Ana" was her name, wanting to help her, Alexander offered her help, he could easily do bounties and whatnot in the city and outside of it, and that was how His loyalty to her began. How long this would last? a few years before her sudden disappearance. Alexander came back with the money of a bounty only to find the lab empty, with no sign of her, neither any sign of struggle and fighting. Where had she gone? He didn't know... Alexander has been looking for her since, and he has, frankly, lost hope of finding her, he continues his work as a bounty hunter/Assassin with the suit she designed for him, studying technology and learning how to improve his arsenal. Spells Tech Attacks: The Proton Needles: Coming from an attachment on his shoulders. The best way to spend Proton energy accumulated in the fight, is to use it. The needles are made of pure energy, and are shot at and home in on the target, in bursts. He fires about 10 needles, five from each shoulder towards the enemy, the needles explode on impact as well as do damage on contact plus the small energy explosions. He can use his Visor to lock on and fire them at will. He needs visual sight of the target first before doing so. Proton Rush: Charging Proton energy, Alexander envelops himself in a large, powerfull ball of energy as he dashes forward at high speeds, coming out of the ball with an energy explosion and a heavy slash of his blade. Lightning discharge: His suit doesn't run only on proton energy, it runs on an advanced battery system, which powers it up. THis works more or less like a regular thunder spell, he can fire lightning at will, from his sword or fingers when wearing the suit, this allows him several electric slash combos in battle. Excelsium: Only usable when his suit is overcharged with energy. A last resort in order to balance out the energy readings, His suit flares up with Proton energy and electricity, uncontrolled, in this mode. Alexander's abilities increase heavily, his agility, strenght, reflexes, all of which are already naturally high are upped immensely, however. This spends the entire suit's energy and forces it to lockdown its functions until it can recharge. Can cause damage to the suit as well. Powers: Phoenix tissue stimulation system: His suit's systems stimulate his cells to heal faster, much faster than the natural regeneration, but slow enough to make a gunshot wound last for an hour or two depending on the caliber for example. Does not stop fatal or very heavy wounds. But it does keep him alive. It also increases his resistance to pain slightly. Proton Generator system: The more he fights, the more his suit's energy readings spike up, the more his suit glows, and the more powerful his passive abilities become, but this comes at a very dangerour drawback. Should he overcharge the suit, while his abilities will increase sure, his body is gonna begin malfunctioning as a result of the strain and radiation from the energy, can easily end up killing him should he not be careful with it. This forces him to spend the accumulated energy into attacks and his tools in order to balance out his energy readings. Remote Hacking system: Allows him to remotely hack electronics at range, this helps with things such as robots and whatnot. Also the reason why his many stealth missions end in success, this allows him to silently hack things from cover. Extra: He loves music, preferably rock.Notes: Not enough cyborgs or heavy technology characters...im here to change that Possibly gonna give him more augments as the RP progresses. Now...whats going on and how can I introduce him? Edited August 30, 2016 by Scrapmaster 2 kingdomhearts45 and Clouded Sun reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 29, 2016 (edited) Very very cool! He's like the guardian figure of everyone! And as a Cyborg-Ninja-Knight-Rifleman I'm feelin it. Edited August 29, 2016 by Clouded Sun 1 Scrapmaster reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kingdomhearts45 469 Posted August 29, 2016 Too little technologicaly augmented characters. Lemme fix that. Name: Alexander Chanteh[/size] Gender: Male[/size] Age: 27[/size] Race: Cyborg Human[/size] Appearance:[/size] A.P.C.S suit All purpose combat suit. Offer good protection with graphene plating and padded sections of the armor, as well as offering elemental resistance with dampeners and insulation. Physicaly enhances his already enhanced physical capabilities. Out of the suit Except with a full synthetic right arm and a synthetic eye implant on his left eye. He also has a Synthetic left leg. Job Class: Cyborg Ninja.[/size]Clan: Technos[/size] Weapon: Raikiri.[/size] The machete-like sword in his appearance image.[/size] High frequency, electric blade, capable of high cutting power and very fast swings. He can harness his suit's energy into it, allowing it to charge with even more lightning. It is capable of maitaining charge even underwater, without dispersing it through the water. Alternatively with his suit's Proton chargers, he can change the sword's element from lightning to pure energy, as shown in the appearance image. Using the wrist attachment to switch weapons Alexander can swith out to the: A.U.G.E.R Rifle Low recoil, high power rifle, prone to overheating, it doesn't fire bullets, but a highly powerful laser. Requires a charging time before fired, or else the shot will be much weaker. Personality: Humble, takes shit from nobody, very outgoing type. Alexander is the first to oppose who he doesn't agree with and the last to backdown. He is hard to make friends with, as he holds a distrust for those he doesn't know, to an extent that he is easy to attack others should they annoy him much. But if you can manage to get through to him. [/size] You'l find a well humored man who simply has trust issues, he is loyal to a fault. To the point of even overly commiting himself and even putting his body at risk of shuttin down from how much he strains himself for others.[/size] Bio: Growing in a poor neighborhood in the city of Aquila, Alexander has had a gang life before, killing, murdering, stealing, none of those are strangers to Alexander, even should he not like it. Its survival, and nobody will help him but himself. At least until he and his gang were ambushed by security and litetally shot down. This caused Alexander to be shot in the leg and arm, and a bullet grazing his left eye, blinding him in it. Alexander was presumed dead on the spot and left.[/size] It was then...a Pro Technos scientists found him and took him in. And began the modifications to Alexander's body. And as such, He became a cyborg, something more than human. Augmented with a better eye, arm and leg, Alexander quickly recovered from the trauma and wounds, taking a distinct dislike to authority. The only person he care about then was the scientist who took him in and helped him, a red heared, green eye woman, about thirty or so years old, pretty. [/size] Money was low, and she was now alone and not with the other Technos scientists anymore, "Ana" was her name, wanting to help her, Alexander offered her help, he could easily do bounties and whatnot in the city and outside of it, and that was how His loyalty to her began. How long this would last? a few years before her sudden disappearance. Alexander came back with the money of a bounty only to find the lab empty, with no sign of her, neither any sign of struggle and fighting. Where had she gone? He didn't know... Alexander has been looking for her since, and he has, frankly, lost hope of finding her, he continues his work as a bounty hunter/Assassin with the suit she designed for him, studying technology and learning how to improve his arsenal. Spells Tech Attacks:[/size] The Proton Needles: Coming from an attachment on his shoulders. The best way to spend Proton energy accumulated in the fight, is to use it. The needles are made of pure energy, and are shot at and home in on the target, in bursts. He fires about 10 needles, five from each shoulder towards the enemy, the needles explode on impact as well as do damage on contact plus the small energy explosions. He can use his Visor to lock on and fire them at will. He needs visual sight of the target first before doing so. Proton Rush: Charging Proton energy, Alexander envelops himself in a large, powerfull ball of energy as he dashes forward at high speeds, coming out of the ball with an energy explosion and a heavy slash of his blade. Lightning discharge: His suit doesn't run only on proton energy, it runs on an advanced battery system, which powers it up. THis works more or less like a regular thunder spell, he can fire lightning at will, from his sword or fingers when wearing the suit, this allows him several electric slash combos in battle. Excelsium: Only usable when his suit is overcharged with energy. A last resort in order to balance out the energy readings, His suit flares up with Proton energy and electricity, uncontrolled, in this mode. Alexander's abilities increase heavily, his agility, strenght, reflexes, all of which are already naturally high are upped immensely, however. This spends the entire suit's energy and forces it to lockdown its functions until it can recharge. Can cause damage to the suit as well. Powers:[/size] Phoenix tissue stimulation system: His suit's systems stimulate his cells to heal faster, much faster than the natural regeneration, but slow enough to make a gunshot wound last for an hour or two depending on the caliber for example. Does not stop fatal or very heavy wounds. But it does keep him alive. It also increases his resistance to pain slightly. Proton Generator system: The more he fights, the more his suit's energy readings spike up, the more his suit glows, and the more powerful his passive abilities become, but this comes at a very dangerour drawback. Should he overcharge the suit, while his abilities will increase sure, his body is gonna begin malfunctioning as a result of the strain and radiation from the energy, can easily end up killing him should he not be careful with it. This forces him to spend the accumulated energy into attacks and his tools in order to balance out his energy readings. Remote Hacking system: Allows him to remotely hack electronics at range, this helps with things such as robots and whatnot. Also the reason why his many stealth missions end in success, this allows him to silently hack things from cover. Extra:[/size] He loves music, preferably rock.[/size]Notes:[/size] Not enough cyborgs or heavy technology characters...im here to change that Possibly gonna give him more augments as the RP progresses. Now...whats going on and how can I introduce him? Hmm....I'm gonna be honest here... He looks dope as heck. I'll give him that. But...The thing is he feels like it's...Too much. Just from reading the profile, I can't help but feel that he's overpowered in this universe of Final Fantasy. I mean, those are just my opinions. I like that you're taking advantage of the whole Technology theme, but try to keep it to at least some control. In short, I just feel it's a bit too much power at the moment. I'm on the fence with him at the moment... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clouded Sun 1,232 Posted August 29, 2016 (edited) Hmm....I'm gonna be honest here... He looks dope as heck. I'll give him that. But...The thing is he feels like it's...Too much. Just from reading the profile, I can't help but feel that he's overpowered in this universe of Final Fantasy. I mean, those are just my opinions. I like that you're taking advantage of the whole Technology theme, but try to keep it to at least some control. In short, I just feel it's a bit too much power at the moment. I'm on the fence with him at the moment... Well, I think he's fine so long as he doesn't have all of these powers to begin with. Like maybe a select two or three relative to every other character's strengths would be cool, but the concept would stay as we progress, ya know? Like my character only really has one power and two weapons right now. I think that this RP will go on for a rather long time (wow, it's already been a month since we started), and it seems like everyone is into their character. So saving the bigger powers for later... Maybe? Just an idea. Edited August 29, 2016 by Clouded Sun Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted August 29, 2016 Well, I think he's fine so long as he doesn't have all of these powers to begin with. Like maybe a select two or three relative to every other character's strengths would be cool, but the concept would stay as we progress, ya know? Like my character only really has one power and two weapons right now. I think that this RP will go on for a rather long time (wow, it's already been a month since we started), and it seems like everyone is into their character. So saving the bigger powers for later... Maybe? Just an idea. What he said. Plus I haven't even begun having Zion remember her other attacks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites