My poem for a special girl one day. kingdom hearts style

[xXMikey1stXx 206]

Here's a special kingdom hearts poem I'm saving for a special girl one. Please tell me anything.

 

A scattered dream

Is like a far off memory

When it was the day you said yes

I knew was bless

For I was a heartless

Having a heavy feeling on my chest

This overwhelming darkness was no mere threat

I became a nobody

Throughout the rest

But it was the day I met you

I had it all off my cheat

I found my light

You are my precious light

For like terra, I was trapped in darkness

You were like aqua

You help me through my darkness

But my final words

Will be left with these few words

"We share the same sky

One destiny, One goal

One beautiful smile at a time

For once, I was no longer a heartless

I was no longer a nobody.

When I met you,

I finally was a somebody too."

Thanks for being their for me too.

[Soul_Seeker 753]

Here's a special kingdom hearts poem I'm saving for a special girl one. Please tell me anything.

 

A scattered dream

Is like a far off memory

When it was the day you said yes

I knew was bless

For I was a heartless

Having a heavy feeling on my chest

This overwhelming darkness was no mere threat

I became a nobody

Throughout the rest

But it was the day I met you

I had it all off my cheat

I found my light

You are my precious light

For like terra, I was trapped in darkness

You were like aqua

You help me through my darkness

But my final words

Will be left with these few words

"We share the same sky

One destiny, One goal

One beautiful smile at a time

For once, I was no longer a heartless

I was no longer a nobody.

When I met you,

I finally was a somebody too."

Thanks for being their for me too.

 

Is she a Kingdom Hearts fan? I wouldn't push my own fandom too hard on a crush, if you know what I mean.

 

"I knew was bless"

I think you should change that to "I knew I was blessed".

It makes more sense and still rhymes.

[xXMikey1stXx 206]

Well thanks.

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

Wow, what a beautiful poem!  Nice work!  I'm pretty sure that special girl of yours you'll have one day will love this poem!

[EricBwn 86]

If she isn't a hardcore KH fan then she is going to be confused as hell, DO NOT EVER READ THIS TO AN ACTUAL GIRL. 

[Geotrix 862]

Yeah, not trying to down play the effort you put into this but I don't recommend reading this to an actual girl.

[xXMikey1stXx 206]

Lol it'll be awhile before I give it. And the girl will be introduce to kingdom hearts to kingdom hearts.

[Songbird Rebel 151]

Beautiful