Nero Kunivas 3,046 Posted February 21, 2016 I WISH I HAD AN ORIGINAL CHARACTER. CURSE MY BRAIN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted February 21, 2016 There might be something wrong with Neena's feet there...the right leg has a left foot...and the left has a right... Still, not bad. Have mercy on Gabe Yeah, I'm terrible at drawing feet. At first I thought that I had it right, but then during the creation process I had to change the foot and, well . . . it's not too good. I intend to make Gabe and Yltriss' wedding portrait *without* feet. Nothing is too adorable for Neena She may be pure chaos and murder but that's why adorableness is such a great contrast ALSO YAY MYSTICS OMG SO GREAT Aww, thanks! I'm really glad to hear that you like it, and thank you for your kind words! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 (edited) Name: June Young Gender: Female Age: 19 Side: Neutral Race: Human Appearance: Weapon (limit of two): Experimental Weapon Life Protector: A huge buster sword formed of hard light. Experimental Weapon Death Giver: An advanced plasma rifle that can fire explosive projectiles alongside the high powered plasma ballistics. Both were acquired from the Black Market after being stolen from Imperial Labs Tanzynite tonics (limit of three): Chameleon, Houdini, Brains and Brains Tanzynite Instigators (limit of three--experimental Tanzynite has a limitation of one, and only with prior approval): Telekinesis, Satan's Touch, Pack-a-Punch Race abilities (nothing too great or powerful, please: basic enhancements preferable): None. Magic (if any--I’m not providing any strict limitations, but please don’t have every possible magic available. If I feel your choices are too strong I may ask you to reduce them): None. Personality: Obsessive. That's the only word for June. Obsessive. She is persistent and destructive, focused and determined. She will not rest until she is dead in the ground or until her goal is accomplished. Backstory: June Young was born in the slums of Langerdon. She was good friends with one girl, her name was Viridem. They were great friends when they were younger, their thoughts often similar in nature. Together, they breeded a distinct brand of hatred for the Imperials. However, as they grew older, there was something that got in the way of their friendship. June did not solely hate the Imperial regime. No, she felt that there were far too many people with far too much power. They were all so strong. And with strength came danger. June was convinced that she needed to off the strong ones, so that the weak minority might be able to thrive. Viridem didn't share this conviction, and they grew apart. Eventually, Viridem left. But June stayed. She was constantly at work. Constantly hunting for information, rumors, pictures. Any appearance of anyone strong she documented. She tracked down footage of their combat, listened to the stories. And she planned. For her whole life, she's been planning. Everyone has a weakness. And June has made it her life to know what that weakness is. But now the time for planning is over. The strong must die for the weak to thrive. Knowledge is power. Once June is accepted/denied I'll begin work on a post. Edited February 22, 2016 by Emerald Sustrai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 (edited) So shes's like Neena, but instead of going after people with Tanzynite, she's after anyone whos powerful (Ie: our characters). I like her. Henry: So im gonna have another woman hunting me, great. *shrugs* I WISH I HAD AN ORIGINAL CHARACTER. CURSE MY BRAIN. Make a Leper annd AAAAH SHIT ITS THE PROPHET...too bad he's dead I am steamrolling this game with this team, holy shit. Third boss this team kill already. Tolan pulled off an awesome 50 damage crit Edited February 22, 2016 by Scrapmaster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 June's a bit more psycho too, a combo of Cyler and Neena. She's far less justified than Neena is. She also doesn't care about collateral damage, so civis better watch out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 June's a bit more psycho too, a combo of Cyler and Neena. She's far less justified than Neena is. She also doesn't care about collateral damage, so civis better watch out. Henry: firetrucks sake -_- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 OBSESSED CHARACTERS ARE FUN OK Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 I know Im sure Henry'l like her too... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nero Kunivas 3,046 Posted February 22, 2016 Yay, more psychos. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted February 22, 2016 Name: June Young Gender: Female Age: 19 Side: Neutral Race: Human Appearance: Weapon (limit of two): Experimental Weapon Life Protector: A huge buster sword formed of hard light. Experimental Weapon Death Giver: An advanced plasma rifle that can fire explosive projectiles alongside the high powered plasma ballistics. Both were acquired from the Black Market after being stolen from Imperial Labs Tanzynite tonics (limit of three): Chameleon, Houdini, Brains and Brains Tanzynite Instigators (limit of three--experimental Tanzynite has a limitation of one, and only with prior approval): Telekinesis, Satan's Touch, Pack-a-Punch Race abilities (nothing too great or powerful, please: basic enhancements preferable): None. Magic (if any--I’m not providing any strict limitations, but please don’t have every possible magic available. If I feel your choices are too strong I may ask you to reduce them): None. Personality: Obsessive. That's the only word for June. Obsessive. She is persistent and destructive, focused and determined. She will not rest until she is dead in the ground or until her goal is accomplished. Backstory: June Young was born in the slums of Langerdon. She was good friends with one girl, her name was Viridem. They were great friends when they were younger, their thoughts often similar in nature. Together, they breeded a distinct brand of hatred for the Imperials. However, as they grew older, there was something that got in the way of their friendship. June did not solely hate the Imperial regime. No, she felt that there were far too many people with far too much power. They were all so strong. And with strength came danger. June was convinced that she needed to off the strong ones, so that the weak minority might be able to thrive. Viridem didn't share this conviction, and they grew apart. Eventually, Viridem left. But June stayed. She was constantly at work. Constantly hunting for information, rumors, pictures. Any appearance of anyone strong she documented. She tracked down footage of their combat, listened to the stories. And she planned. For her whole life, she's been planning. Everyone has a weakness. And June has made it her life to know what that weakness is. But now the time for planning is over. The strong must die for the weak to thrive. Knowledge is power. Once June is accepted/denied I'll begin work on a post. Accepted! So shes's like Neena, but instead of going after people with Tanzynite, she's after anyone whos powerful (Ie: our characters). I like her. Henry: So im gonna have another woman hunting me, great. *shrugs* Make a Leper annd AAAAH SHIT ITS THE PROPHET...too bad he's dead > I am steamrolling this game with this team, holy shit. Third boss this team kill already. Tolan pulled off an awesome 50 damage crit Henry just cannot get a break, can he? : P He should just, I don't know, keep them in a pumpkin shell or something. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted February 22, 2016 OBSESSED CHARACTERS ARE FUN OKSo wait.June is obsessed with killing strong people...so...if she kills everyone strong, does that mean she'll committ suicide when everyone strong is dead? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 She views herself as weak I mean, plain old human, with just tanzynite and some cool gear? Yeah nah. I should have specified what strength meant. It's just the really strong ones she's after, people like Henry, Ari, Eclaire, Oryx, etc. The weaker end of the spectrum she doesn't care about. I mean, if they get in her way, she'll end them, but she's not actively hunting them. So people like Stark, Isaac, the Caelum twins, Vortludo and Rufus aren't in her sights. Still has a file on them just in case, but they aren't as detailed nor do they have a specific plan. Her main strength once again comes from her knowledge of basically everyone and the ability to set things up for her favor. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 (edited) She views herself as weak I mean, plain old human, with just tanzynite and some cool gear? Yeah nah. I should have specified what strength meant. It's just the really strong ones she's after, people like Henry, Ari, Eclaire, Oryx, etc. The weaker end of the spectrum she doesn't care about. I mean, if they get in her way, she'll end them, but she's not actively hunting them. So people like Stark, Isaac, the Caelum twins, Vortludo and Rufus aren't in her sights. Still has a file on them just in case, but they aren't as detailed nor do they have a specific plan. Her main strength once again comes from her knowledge of basically everyone and the ability to set things up for her favor. If she breaks into Henry's apartment into the next post Yuffie, I swear to god So she knows Henry's abilties? well damn. well, maybe not about the newly made Chaos armor I dunno... Well...Henry can employ magma...but he never did before... Edited February 22, 2016 by Scrapmaster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted February 22, 2016 Dunno if she considered Jeremy strong before, but now he'd overpower her Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 Divine blood had him on her watch list of course. And the point of June isn't overpowering... It's careful manipulation and exploitation of their weaknesses, whether physical, mental, or emotional. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted February 22, 2016 Divine blood had him on her watch list of course. And the point of June isn't overpowering... It's careful manipulation and exploitation of their weaknesses, whether physical, mental, or emotional.Fair warning, threaten Fiora and uh, Eclaire won't play nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted February 22, 2016 Careful was the keyword there lol Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted February 22, 2016 Careful was the keyword there lolGood.Don't give me an excuse to use my threefold utter destruction finishing move I had planned for Unversed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 (edited) Good.Don't give me an excuse to use my threefold utter destruction finishing move I had planned for Unversed. Henry: Lets face it, Me and Neena are the most possible targets right now, being in Langerdon and all. I doubt June would try to kill someone when that person is either in a secure ship, base,or in a all out warzone... firetruck now I wonder what she'l use against me. Edited February 22, 2016 by Scrapmaster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shulk 8,623 Posted February 22, 2016 Lesson learned: If we need someone to die, just make them threaten Fiora and then sit back as Eclaire destroys everything. 1 Mystics Apprentice reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Unversed 168 Posted February 22, 2016 Seraphim Order side= Aqua's side of choice. Okay Sora's baby, If you still wanna get your foot in the door heres what I reckon you should do, You should copy & paste this entrance post for Aqua & just continue off of it, that way it will not only get you into the story but also have allow you to make your character do whatever you want from there on K hope this'll help you get started cause I can't really think of anything else haha Entrance for Aqua: Aqua entered through a door in her most enchanting dress which took some time to get ready, but being late is better than never showing up. Auqa walked in slowly, eyeing everyone within the room feasting on food & drinks, talking amounts themselves like good friends or comrades do. Aqua could see Kaspar treating his food rather odd, almost like he was what's to eat it but at the same time doesn't. Although this did take some of the tension off her shoulders allowing Aqua to easy up into feeling more at home around everyone else. So now that Aqua was feeling more easy going she walked over & sat down near Jynn & Riley. Hope you don't mind if White Heart joins Rufus's crew what with her heads on approach haha And finally, the present for Yuffie that has taken me forever to get around to: Neena Mors! I wasn't certain on her eye color, so I thought green complimented her complexion rather nicely. Also, I tried to use part of the design that you normally use for Neena in terms of her apparel, so hopefully it'll be a nice cross between originality and what you had initially for her style. Now then, Gabriel and Yltriss are next! I promise ya! Cool as drawing Mystic. I like the design on the ninja outfit the most Alright posted...Gabriels hard at work, Henry's getting sick of this shit. Maxis is 'helping' And Draksis decided to leave Cyler to Zanza as he went after the one thing he finds most interesting to go against right now...you guessed it, Chrysalis Fore reference Kalameet looks like this That dragon just makes me wanna have Sahail find Draksis all the more man haha Black dragon x2 = epic 1 Mystics Apprentice reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 Hands off the dragon . Kalameet is Draksis's And white heart huh?...gee I wonder what would uapoen if she met Gabriel. Would he try to upgrade her? Or would he be too shy to do so... 1 The Unversed reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted February 22, 2016 (edited) Ugh. Kunivas got himself suspended for a month again. Don't ask me how. But I'd guess its best just to give you guys a heads up. HE kindly asks for his characters to be controlled. I can take some, anyone else willing to help me out? Btw. Dream team fighting Rufus now and his crew now. Houndmaster x Bounty hunter combo is broken as all hell. Too much damage. Edited February 22, 2016 by Scrapmaster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vaude 536 Posted February 22, 2016 I knew piracy was never the way to go, but Rufus was so. Very. Insistent! Now look at him, an undead pirate lord that looks like it came from Pirates of the Caribbean with a bloated, harpooned whale as his ship. At the very least, he's kept thin from all of that rocktail soup Ol' Yella made him. Regarding Kunivas, hmm, I don't think I'll make a good candidate for Zanza or Shinobi, but Crota might be fun. Either Scrap or somebody else may have to fill me in on what he is like, however. No amount of Wiki-searching on my end would do much for getting the feel of a character. I am saddened to hear that he won't come back for a month, but I'll try to do Crota justice. As another form of heads-up, I'm going to be a little slow as well as of late for a number of reasons. I am working on a post at the moment, but it would probably take me a good number of days to reply next time. Also, I just discovered that most, if not all, of Sabre's characters are goddess-loving fanatics and bestowed with goddess powers. Interesting. On a similar tangent, how does Chrysalis have connections with fairies and have butterfly wings? I thought she was of angelic blood, but is she also of fairy descent? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted February 22, 2016 Also, I just discovered that most, if not all, of Sabre's characters are goddess-loving fanatics and bestowed with goddess powers. Interesting. On a similar tangent, how does Chrysalis have connections with fairies and have butterfly wings? I thought she was of angelic blood, but is she also of fairy descent?1.) Most of them saw Zion so they follow her. Because, like, they were backed by her for the entire first war so they are not fanatic but they believe in her strongly so their belief can rub off, and Zion can again return to the mortal world like Oryx can.2.) The magic Chrysalis uses is just who the magic oiginated from. Eclaire for instance uses Seals of the Goddess. Chrysalis finds more in common with the Fairy Queen/Goddess/Person and learned some of her Seals.Or. I'm using Anime Logic and the longer and more loud my attacks they are, the more powerful they are. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites