Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 9, 2010 I <3 this. You're an amazing writer! Besides minor grammatical errors, this was great HAR HAR DERES AN ALEXIS IM PART OF DIS HAR HAR /shot Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 9, 2010 I <3 this. You're an amazing writer! Besides minor grammatical errors, this was great HAR HAR DERES AN ALEXIS IM PART OF DIS HAR HAR /shot Thanks butterflylexi, I know this is my unedited draft. not the real one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 11, 2010 Ah, I get it. My drafts are always full of that kind of thing And just call me Lex or Lexi ^^ Get some more chapters up soon! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 11, 2010 Thanks to everyone who has been reading this, it means the world to me! Before I continue the next chapter I want to know everybody's theories and criticism. If you all have any suggestions on anything I could add to the next chapters, please tell me! Thank you so much! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ReAcTioN BbS 0 Posted September 12, 2010 this is just amazing, keep it up Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 13, 2010 this is just amazing, keep it up Nothing bad to say? Or is that it just good? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 13, 2010 It's just that good ;D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 13, 2010 It's just that good ;D really? cause I think it may need some drastic work... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 13, 2010 Meh, you said it was just a rough draft, right? I see some spots that could be written over to be improved some, but discounting that, it's great <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 13, 2010 Meh, you said it was just a rough draft, right? I see some spots that could be written over to be improved some, but discounting that, it's great <3 Well of course but thanks for your response and criticism, like I said it means a lot to me! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 13, 2010 np ^^ GET ME ANOTHER CHAPTER UP >:] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 13, 2010 np ^^ GET ME ANOTHER CHAPTER UP >:] I will soon, lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 14, 2010 Chapter 6: An Apprentice, a Master, a Brother. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 14, 2010 I like this chapter! ;3 I hope Brox'll be okay D: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 14, 2010 thanks I worked really late last night to finish it for you guys. Only time will tell if Brox will recover Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted September 16, 2010 I think the same as Lexi, you're a genius. Your work with this story is just getting better. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 16, 2010 I think the same as Lexi, you're a genius. Your work with this story is just getting better. Thanks Gizelita, it means a lot to hear these things from people like you and Lexi. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 16, 2010 Why me? Post another chapter! 8D The suspense.. You asked for reccomendations, right? I have one, if y'all don't mind You don't have to use it, of course. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 18, 2010 Why me? Post another chapter! 8D The suspense.. You asked for reccomendations, right? I have one, if y'all don't mind You don't have to use it, of course. K give it to me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted September 24, 2010 O.K, All new chapters will be posted in a new thread so please continue there! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted September 25, 2010 Anyway I just love this story and keep curius about both: Brox and Erik. Just keep writing :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Antrium 10 Posted September 26, 2010 Hey new thread will be posted today with the new chapter and the rest of Antrium: REDEMPTION, so please follow it there! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted November 14, 2010 Chapter 7: River Bank Battle Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
