Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 26, 2015 Korben ain't suspicious of Gabriel right? Just cuz he's making Cthulu in power armor on a co-project with the Doctor? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted September 26, 2015 I want to make a note that I'm a little bit obsessed over that random NPC girl that Mystic created. She has been made a central part to Vortludo's character growth in my mind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nero Kunivas 3,046 Posted September 26, 2015 Better a smart tyrant than a stupid "democrat' Although Korben isn't exactly a smart tyrant, a smart one would make sure the people are happy, so theres no opposition. Let the taken king, he'l unify everyone under his flag , everyone twisted to his will. Most are happy enough! Besides, he is trying to spread the word that The Order are fools to the populace. X3Also, the RP needs life! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 26, 2015 Aren't we waiting for mystic? shit the entire forum has been silent for a while now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nero Kunivas 3,046 Posted September 26, 2015 Korben ain't suspicious of Gabriel right? Just cuz he's making Cthulu in power armor on a co-project with the Doctor? Oh, not at all!Technically, [REDACTED] was involved in the locating of [CLASSIFIED]. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted September 26, 2015 I'm working on a post now. 1 Nero Kunivas reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nero Kunivas 3,046 Posted September 26, 2015 Aren't we waiting for mystic? shit the entire forum has been silent for a while now.Half-waiting, but you're not wrong about the quiet. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted September 26, 2015 The more I think about this, the more I wonder about why we're deposing such a ruler. Thanks for the break down. I needed it. I'll try to cool off the try hard wagon a bit. But flashy is how I work, and I won't stop doing that. Why would you hate spelling it out? Before you weren't giving me any advice, all you said was: Yuffie's pretty good at combat. And occasionally gave me compliments. If you want to teach, as you seem to want, then actually give advice that is possible to follow.Like I stated before, I feel it's best when the person figures it out for themselves, with a little background guidance of course. You're my charge, and I wouldn't train someone any other way than to let them grow as far as they can on their own. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted September 26, 2015 You are the worst sensei I wanted to note it here, but the Doctor does not use any human test subjects aside from willing volunteers from within the empire. He has developed his own software that allows him to test the prototypes of Tanzynite, giving him insight into the effects and drawbacks without actually harming anybody. So if your bio has something to do with being experimented on against your will... Not him. He has a strict moral code when it comes to his work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 Korben is certainly quite evil yet crafty with those Brothel prices. XDThat...would be interesting! You may make him. :)Also, Korben is suspicious of Ariana and all high-ranking officers due to Eclaire and Nolan. No Brothelling for him! He didn't say that when he forced Eclaire.Ooh, missed that first part. Okay, I can see that As for that second one... I mean, do we really know for certain whether magic is bad or not? Magic I neither good, nor evil. As is with the Force, or Pokemon, they inherently are not "evil" but are used by evil for nefarious purposes. Most are happy enough! Besides, he is trying to spread the word that The Order are fools to the populace. X3Also, the RP needs life!1.) Fools about to drop the most fire thing since nukes on you.2.) Once Viridem gets her ass to the War Room the Order can start the real fun. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 26, 2015 (edited) You guys are bringing in nukes? Time for Gabriel to bring out the metal gears and "The twins". This is no End-game, the order still has a lot of stuff to do before they're able to go full force against the empire, imo. Edited September 26, 2015 by Scrapmaster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted September 26, 2015 2.) Once Viridem gets her ass to the War Room the Order can start the real fun. Viridem generally doesn't do anything that is wanted of her. But she's having mercy for now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 (edited) Viridem generally doesn't do anything that is wanted of her. But she's having mercy for now.Siiiiigh.And Eclaire knows her Sexual Inductment and Pheromone Manipulation won't work on Viri. Siiiigh.Edit: Also, would Neena kill Chrysalis if she knew that Chrysalis never waneed to be injected with Tanzynite?Furthermore, who else is part of the Order of Lux? I have plans but I need to know who I can use for my glorious Rebellion. Edited September 26, 2015 by Sabre Lily Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted September 26, 2015 Okay, I'm officially back. I had very little access while away because we were in the mountains, but I may not be posting much until Monday because I have a lot of studies to cram in this weekend. Sorry, but I'll do my best to keep up. : ) Pretty much the new boss of the new DLC of Destiny, this guy doesn't kill, instead he captures most targets by pulling them between dimensions and breaking them towards his will in a matter of seconds, basically taking away their soul and making them serve him at all times. He has a whole army in his pocket dimension, consisted of demons, but he might take some humans, and assimilate them within his army. You'l see if im allowed to make him. Thats arianna, Korben would just order the magic users taken away for testing That character of yours does sound interesting. We could use some additional villains of interest. As for who's the true villain, both Ariana and Korben have been corrupted by tanzynite, both are tyrannical, and it's really hard to say who's more murderous and cruel at this point. While Ariana's crazy, Korben's cruel in his own right, only he might be more dangerous because he's fully sane. Ooh, missed that first part. Okay, I can see that As for that second one... I mean, do we really know for certain whether magic is bad or not? I think Sabre did a good job of explaining it. Magic isn't necessarily good or evil, but rather it depends on the user and each individual's take on the matter of magic. It's an inherited gift, not adopted, and thus it would be wrong to slaughter all of the magi outright because they can't help but possess such abilities. Korben is certainly quite evil yet crafty with those Brothel prices. That...would be interesting! You may make him. Also, Korben is suspicious of Ariana and all high-ranking officers due to Eclaire and Nolan. No Brothelling for him! As Korben should be. : P Ariana is . . . strange about Korben. She feels attached to him, wishes for his approval and affection, and yet at the same time wants to kill him and take over herself. She's very conflicted. She wants to love and be loved, but in doing so she just is kind of destructive and kills, as well as hates on people. I want to make a note that I'm a little bit obsessed over that random NPC girl that Mystic created. She has been made a central part to Vortludo's character growth in my mind. Glad she played such a role! I thought about making her apologize to Vortludo and regret her decision. Heck, perhaps she could even try to make it up to him somehow. Out of all your characters thus far I think I'm really enjoying Vort the most; he's got a cool personality that you can't help but love. Aren't we waiting for mystic? shit the entire forum has been silent for a while now. Whoops, hope no one was waiting on me. I wasn't able to check the site until yesterday on our way home, but it looked like not much had happened since I left so I figured there was no need to post. Please, carry on with the show, folks! I'm here now and would happily partake in some war action. : P Siiiiigh.And Eclaire knows her Sexual Inductment and Pheromone Manipulation won't work on Viri. Siiiigh.Edit: Also, would Neena kill Chrysalis if she knew that Chrysalis never waneed to be injected with Tanzynite?Furthermore, who else is part of the Order of Lux? I have plans but I need to know who I can use for my glorious Rebellion. I can try to rally a complete list, if you'd like, though with the new additions to the RP I'm a mite bit confused myself. As for my characters, Yevgeni is going to be joining the rebellion by following Vortludo and Slade, while Jadis is going to be recruited by Fiora. I know that Vort, Slade, and Fiora are already a part of the Order, and I think Henry's a freelancer. 1 Nero Kunivas reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 Okay, I'm officially back. I had very little access while away because we were in the mountains, but I may not be posting much until Monday because I have a lot of studies to cram in this weekend. Sorry, but I'll do my best to keep up. : )That character of yours does sound interesting. We could use some additional villains of interest. As for who's the true villain, both Ariana and Korben have been corrupted by tanzynite, both are tyrannical, and it's really hard to say who's more murderous and cruel at this point. While Ariana's crazy, Korben's cruel in his own right, only he might be more dangerous because he's fully sane. I think Sabre did a good job of explaining it. Magic isn't necessarily good or evil, but rather it depends on the user and each individual's take on the matter of magic. It's an inherited gift, not adopted, and thus it would be wrong to slaughter all of the magi outright because they can't help but possess such abilities. As Korben should be. : P Ariana is . . . strange about Korben. She feels attached to him, wishes for his approval and affection, and yet at the same time wants to kill him and take over herself. She's very conflicted. She wants to love and be loved, but in doing so she just is kind of destructive and kills, as well as hates on people. Glad she played such a role! I thought about making her apologize to Vortludo and regret her decision. Heck, perhaps she could even try to make it up to him somehow. Out of all your characters thus far I think I'm really enjoying Vort the most; he's got a cool personality that you can't help but love. Whoops, hope no one was waiting on me. I wasn't able to check the site until yesterday on our way home, but it looked like not much had happened since I left so I figured there was no need to post. Please, carry on with the show, folks! I'm here now and would happily partake in some war action. : P I can try to rally a complete list, if you'd like, though with the new additions to the RP I'm a mite bit confused myself. As for my characters, Yevgeni is going to be joining the rebellion by following Vortludo and Slade, while Jadis is going to be recruited by Fiora. I know that Vort, Slade, and Fiora are already a part of the Order, and I think Henry's a freelancer.A list would be extremely helpful, as I have an extremely large and personel needed plan to get this war started and going. More people j can use, bigger headache.> 1 Mystics Apprentice reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted September 26, 2015 A list would be extremely helpful, as I have an extremely large and personel needed plan to get this war started and going. More people j can use, bigger headache.> Gotcha. When I get a free minute I'll see what I can do. : ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 Gotcha. When I get a free minute I'll see what I can do. : )And you saving Chrysalis from Neena's throwing thingy, she's kind of terrified and not paying attention, just clutching Ari tightly during this hectic fight. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted September 26, 2015 And you saving Chrysalis from Neena's throwing thingy, she's kind of terrified and not paying attention, just clutching Ari tightly during this hectic fight. I figured this was the case with Chrysalis, which is why Ari just threw her down forcefully. Sometimes she's not, ah, the most gentle in her approach. Hopefully she wouldn't spring right back up and get stabbed . . . . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 I figured this was the case with Chrysalis, which is why Ari just threw her down forcefully. Sometimes she's not, ah, the most gentle in her approach. Hopefully she wouldn't spring right back up and get stabbed . . . ....Chrysalis is terrified of everyone now she's more likely to accidently teleport away than get up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted September 26, 2015 ...Chrysalis is terrified of everyone now she's more likely to accidently teleport away than get up. Hmm, interesting . . . . I like! That would probably infuriate Ari that she aborted the mission, no doubt. All-in-all I'm enjoying watching Chrys and Ari. I am wondering, however, if I should make Ari be more cruel or kind to the girl. Maybe she'd get some twisted idea to mother the girl and rule the empire with her. It's tempting, though it is deviating a little from my initial plan. Hmm . . . . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 26, 2015 Since Neena is after Arianna, I might as well have Henry look after the hiper dimension neptunia girl Peashy, help stop the girl from murdering an old lady. and I read somewhere that Henry's a freelancer, Rightly so, so it Mikhail, but Henry is up for anything that hurts the empire in any way, betray him though, he'l rip your spine out through your mouth...or break you in half, he doesn't take betrayal very well. Mikhail is eh, as long as he is paid, and he only doenst' work for the empire because they want him dead/test. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted September 26, 2015 Hmm, interesting . . . . I like! That would probably infuriate Ari that she aborted the mission, no doubt. All-in-all I'm enjoying watching Chrys and Ari. I am wondering, however, if I should make Ari be more cruel or kind to the girl. Maybe she'd get some twisted idea to mother the girl and rule the empire with her. It's tempting, though it is deviating a little from my initial plan. Hmm . . . . I meant to ask about that, but I forgot.I'd what your plans were but as Chrysalis is entering deep Stockholm Syndrome, she's getting closer to Ari. At first it'd mean zip.But Chrysalis isn't just Angel Blood Tanzynite enhanced. She's a half angel enhanced with Angels Blood. So that nearly doubles her actual power.Dunno how it'd influence Ariana but it has to count for something! Since Neena is after Arianna, I might as well have Henry look after the hiper dimension neptunia girl Peashy, help stop the girl from murdering an old lady. and I read somewhere that Henry's a freelancer, Rightly so, so it Mikhail, but Henry is up for anything that hurts the empire in any way, betray him though, he'l rip your spine out through your mouth...or break you in half, he doesn't take betrayal very well. Mikhail is eh, as long as he is paid, and he only doenst' work for the empire because they want him dead/test.I nearly made Purple Heart but here I don't see them as goddesses, moreso see them as supersoldiers. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 27, 2015 (edited) And there you have it, my villain and its host. hope he's alright. Name: Dex Marthur. Age: 19 Gender: Male Side: Criminal underworld. Appearance: Weapons: Able to conjure weapons, be them guns or sword through dimensions, so he has a whole arsenal available. Power status: "The Taken's host" Magic: "Taken lord's power" being posessed by Oryx, he gains the power Able to tear through dimensions themselves, and pull things out, or into them, able to abduct enemies and bend them to his control, stripping them of their will completely, without their soul and will, they cannot disobey, with this power, it severs as an extremely powerful version of darkness, but is white-ish grey in color, signaling more of a void archetype, this power is powerful enough to rip dimensions apart, let alone physical objects. It also allows him to drain one's power to recharge his own, and even heal himself, or transfer the energy stolen from the enemy in an attack, he can summon minions from his own pocket dimension to his will any time he wishes to do so, as their numbers are limitless, and he can take more and more enemies, to bolster the army even more. Tanzynites: N/A Tonics: Scamper speed and tough guy, brains and brains. Race power: Having swore allegiance to Oryx, he has become its new host, and attaining great power, as he follows Oryx's bidding and orders, as his its host, he can tear himself through dimensions as well, using it as a means of transportation or in battle, he is able to "Take" enemies by tearing them between dimensions as well, sending them to Oryx's domain, where they're broken from their will and soul, as their will is now Oryx's, they cannot disobey orders, as they aren't even alive anymore, and when killed they simply disappear. Alternatively he can make someone a sub-host, to act as a spy or sorts, this can be done even if the person doesn't realize he is a host or have never met Dex, even if he refused swore allegiance. Bio: Dex had a horrible life as a kid, his mother dying from birth and his father a raging alcoholic, he had hell in his life and ran in with several gangs as a result, running away from home to escape his father's clutches, he joined one of the many gang organizations around, he learned the way of the street, kill or be killed, act fast or die, he always strived to be significant, always hating to be ignored, always wanting to be relevant, he passed through a major existencial crisis during his time in the gangs, as such he soon got through the ranks of the gang from working hard enough "To be relevant", becoming a major enforcer of one of them, but it was until he was betrayed, shot in the back and left behind, that he realized how insignificant he was, and all that he wishes was to have a purpose, and...a meaningful existence, as he was bleeding out, he could feel himself being transported...to another dimension. Transported to another dimension, floating in a dark abyss, he came face to face with Oryx, the "Taken king" an ancient elder demon, an elder god to some, who was rumored to have been destroyed long ago. But they were just rumors, as even angels and demons themselves, stopped believing that Oryx existed throughout generations and milenias, and considering Oryx's unique power, void, and the ability to travel through dimensions, the angels and demons forgot about it as well, allowing the perfect chance for the demon to return, as they had no way to know what threat they were facing, Oryx gave Dex a choice, become his new host, or become of his Taken slaves, with the promises of revenge and "A meaningful existence", as Oryx's new host in this world, to help the "Taken king" achieve full power and glory once lost to him milenias ago, in exchange, Dex would get the relevancy he deserved, on the king's side, as its host. And as such, Dex accepted the offer, and turned into the new host of "The taken king", and soon established himself within one of the poor districts of the empire capital, Oryx having one objective in mind, "Take, the empire", utilizing a large net of "Unaware" Taken spies, he knows all that happens in and out, and plans his next move. Personality: Dex might show a lack of self esteem to some, allowing much of his personality traits to be ignored, but during his time with gangs and with Oryx, he became extremely manipulative and ruthless, and as he took more and more enemies to serve him, he became almost like a sadist, when engaged in combat he has a cocky grin on his face, he loves to explain to others their failure and whats wrong with them, highly critical of others, he doesn't trust anyone, other than Oryx, who he swore loyalty to. ORYX'S SHEET Name: Oryx Age: Since the dawn of existence. Gender: Male. Race: Ancient demon god. Appearance: Physical form Spectre form: Weapons: An army of Ancient creatures from mileniums past at his command, and several weapons he can pull between dimensions. Power status: Elder/god Demon. Magic: "Taken power" this power is much like void in many aspects, as it is extremely hard to be detected and felt, but it is even stronger, able to tear dimensions open, create weapons out of void energy, mimic elemental magic with "Void" based versions of them, with the same or in some cases, stronger effects. Race power: "King's grasp" Oryx has a particular way of doing things, instead of killing or capturing, he completely strips the "Taken" victims of their will and soul, making them follow only him, his liutenants and his host's orders, never capable of disobeying. He can appear in two forms outside of his host, his physical form and his spectre form, his spectre form is as a means of communicating, and fighting withouth himself having to be somewhere, and if his host wishes he can send them out to wherever they want, as the spectres cannot die, only be banished, as their power returns to Oryx. Bio: Barely any demon or angel or even any ancient being knows who Oryx is, only rumors that he was a tyranical god king during his time milenias past, able to tear dimensions apart for his own benefits, conquering the world, but soon beaten, and rumored to be destroyed, never returning back, until recently, when he awokened from his slumber, as he bid his time, to ensure that neither the demons or angels noticed his presence in the world, waiting for the percect opportunity. But it seemed as if the angels and demons had forgotten about him, which greatly pleased him as this allowed for the perfect comeback, of milenias past, with his ancienct, and forgotten as well, army at his command, he has acquired a host in a young boy named Dex, and is now in pursuit of power, with one goal in mind, "Take the empire, take the world." Personality: A true mastermind, Oryx knows how to manipulate, plan and act accordingly, he is quite evil and ruthless, always finding a way that benefits him, with more "Taken" for his army, he is the sole reason Dex is still alive, and as his master, Oryx orders him to do his bidding, which he does, like his many "forgotten" liutenants, which he aims to resuscitate, one by one. Oryx is not afraid to fight dirty, or capture innocents for his bidding, but he always chooses the most interesting or worthy to capture, as they are the best additions to his army. 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Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted September 27, 2015 And there you have it, my villain and its host. hope he's alright. Name: Dex Marthur. Age: 19 Gender: Male Side: Criminal underworld. Appearance: Weapons: Able to conjure weapons, be them guns or sword through dimensions, so he has a whole arsenal available. Power status: "The Taken's host" Magic: "Taken lord's power" being posessed by Oryx, he gains the power Able to tear through dimensions themselves, and pull things out, or into them, able to abduct enemies and bend them to his control, stripping them of their will completely, without their soul and will, they cannot disobey, with this power, it severs as an extremely powerful version of darkness, but is white-ish grey in color, signaling more of a void archetype, this power is powerful enough to rip dimensions apart, let alone physical objects. It also allows him to drain one's power to recharge his own, and even heal himself, or transfer the energy stolen from the enemy in an attack, he can summon minions from his own pocket dimension to his will any time he wishes to do so, as their numbers are limitless, and he can take more and more enemies, to bolster the army even more. Tanzynites: N/A Tonics: Scamper speed and tough guy, brains and brains. Race power: Having swore allegiance to Oryx, he has become its new host, and attaining great power, as he follows Oryx's bidding and orders, as his its host, he can tear himself through dimensions as well, using it as a means of transportation or in battle, he is able to "Take" enemies by tearing them between dimensions as well, sending them to Oryx's domain, where they're broken from their will and soul, as their will is now Oryx's, they cannot disobey orders, as they aren't even alive anymore, and when killed they simply disappear. Alternatively he can make someone a sub-host, to act as a spy or sorts, this can be done even if the person doesn't realize he is a host or have never met Dex, even if he refused swore allegiance. Bio: Dex had a horrible life as a kid, his mother dying from birth and his father a raging alcoholic, he had hell in his life and ran in with several gangs as a result, running away from home to escape his father's clutches, he joined one of the many gang organizations around, he learned the way of the street, kill or be killed, act fast or die, he always strived to be significant, always hating to be ignored, always wanting to be relevant, he passed through a major existencial crisis during his time in the gangs, as such he soon got through the ranks of the gang from working hard enough "To be relevant", becoming a major enforcer of one of them, but it was until he was betrayed, shot in the back and left behind, that he realized how insignificant he was, and all that he wishes was to have a purpose, and...a meaningful existence, as he was bleeding out, he could feel himself being transported...to another dimension. Transported to another dimension, floating in a dark abyss, he came face to face with Oryx, the "Taken king" an ancient elder demon, an elder god to some, who was rumored to have been destroyed long ago. But they were just rumors, as even angels and demons themselves, stopped believing that Oryx existed throughout generations and milenias, and considering Oryx's unique power, void, and the ability to travel through dimensions, the angels and demons forgot about it as well, allowing the perfect chance for the demon to return, as they had no way to know what threat they were facing, Oryx gave Dex a choice, become his new host, or become of his Taken slaves, with the promises of revenge and "A meaningful existence", as Oryx's new host in this world, to help the "Taken king" achieve full power and glory once lost to him milenias ago, in exchange, Dex would get the relevancy he deserved, on the king's side, as its host. And as such, Dex accepted the offer, and turned into the new host of "The taken king", and soon established himself within one of the poor districts of the empire capital, Oryx having one objective in mind, "Take, the empire", utilizing a large net of "Unaware" Taken spies, he knows all that happens in and out, and plans his next move. Personality: Dex might show a lack of self esteem to some, allowing much of his personality traits to be ignored, but during his time with gangs and with Oryx, he became extremely manipulative and ruthless, and as he took more and more enemies to serve him, he became almost like a sadist, when engaged in combat he has a cocky grin on his face, he loves to explain to others their failure and whats wrong with them, highly critical of others, he doesn't trust anyone, other than Oryx, who he swore loyalty to. ORYX'S SHEET Name: Oryx Age: Since the dawn of existence. Gender: Male. Race: Elder demon/god. Appearance: Physical form Spectre form: Weapons: An army of Ancient creatures from mileniums past at his command, and several weapons he can pull between dimensions. Power status: Elder/god Demon. Magic: "Taken power" this power is much like void in many aspects, as it is extremely hard to be detected and felt, but it is even stronger, able to tear dimensions open, create weapons out of void energy, mimic elemental magic with "Void" based versions of them, with the same or in some cases, stronger effects. Race power: "King's grasp" Oryx has a particular way of doing things, instead of killing or capturing, he completely strips the "Taken" victims of their will and soul, making them follow only him, his liutenants and his host's orders, never capable of disobeying. He can appear in two forms outside of his host, his physical form and his spectre form, his spectre form is as a means of communicating, and fighting withouth himself having to be somewhere, and if his host wishes he can send them out to wherever they want, as the spectres cannot die, only be banished, as their power returns to Oryx. Bio: Barely any demon or angel or even any ancient being knows who Oryx is, only rumors that he was a tyranical god king during his time milenias past, able to tear dimensions apart for his own benefits, conquering the world, but soon beaten, and rumored to be destroyed, never returning back, until recently, when he awokened from his slumber, as he bid his time, to ensure that neither the demons or angels noticed his presence in the world, waiting for the percect opportunity. But it seemed as if the angels and demons had forgotten about him, which greatly pleased him as this allowed for the perfect comeback, of milenias past, with his ancienct, and forgotten as well, army at his command, he has acquired a host in a young boy named Dex, and is now in pursuit of power, with one goal in mind, "Take the empire, take the world." Personality: A true mastermind, Oryx knows how to manipulate, plan and act accordingly, he is quite evil and ruthless, always finding a way that benefits him, with more "Taken" for his army, he is the sole reason Dex is still alive, and as his master, Oryx orders him to do his bidding, which he does, like his many "forgotten" liutenants, which he aims to resuscitate, one by one. Oryx is not afraid to fight dirty, or capture innocents for his bidding, but he always chooses the most interesting or worthy to capture, as they are the best additions to his army. I like the sound of the characters, as well as their bios, but I have a few concerns regarding them. I feel that Dex is going to be too overpowered if he has the ability to rip through dimensions as well as take complete control of others. If Kunivas approves, I'll give my go-ahead with the dimensional travel, but I don't like the idea of his ability to control others. That could be too devastating and detrimental to others. Also, regarding Oryx: I believe that Kunivas took the only elder demon and it probably wouldn't work for Oryx to have the same title. Perhaps you could make him a demon lord? 1 Nero Kunivas reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scrapmaster 1,731 Posted September 27, 2015 I can limit the ability to take over to non important NPCs, and if one has a strong enough will, they are flat out immune to Oryx's takeover ability. Forgot to mention that fact And also, heavy strain upon dimension travel, sickness and shit is common. 1 Nero Kunivas reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites