Aang 649 Posted May 30, 2015 Hey boys, girls, and in between's! Aang here today, and I am attempting to create 3D modeled versions of characters in Avatar: TLA as well as LOK. I'm making Meelo to start, and I have completed a decent amount to this point. But, I need help with criticism, possibly help with proportions, shaping and overall opinions. This isn't final at all, and I need some criticism. Here is what I'm basing it off of: Here is my model: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AngelTheWeirdStranger 504 Posted May 30, 2015 Looks good but it's still at a really early age. As it is I can't distinguish anything that makes that model Meelo. It's a great start though. Please inform me when you finish it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cricket 1,180 Posted May 30, 2015 It looks really well so far, but I think you need to find thicker eyebrows and make the face more curvy since Meelo is still a child. I think the ears look fine though, but might need to be a bit larger as I remember Meelo had rather large ears, haha. the nose is pretty spot on and I don't think you need to change that, but the model just looks a bit too mature, like maybe mid to late teens. The model definitely needs to be a bit younger, but it is really looking great do far! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aang 649 Posted May 30, 2015 Looks good but it's still at a really early age. As it is I can't distinguish anything that makes that model Meelo. It's a great start though. Please inform me when you finish it! Thanks for your opinion! But is there anything specific you think I could work on? It looks really well so far, but I think you need to find thicker eyebrows and make the face more curvy since Meelo is still a child. I think the ears look fine though, but might need to be a bit larger as I remember Meelo had rather large ears, haha. the nose is pretty spot on and I don't think you need to change that, but the model just looks a bit too mature, like maybe mid to late teens. The model definitely needs to be a bit younger, but it is really looking great do far! Thank you very much! The model is intended for Meelo to be around 13-15 years old. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cricket 1,180 Posted May 30, 2015 Thanks for your opinion! But is there anything specific you think I could work on? Thank you very much! The model is intended for Meelo to be around 13-15 years old. Ah okay~ It is a very nicely done model for that age range of Meelo! I can't wait to see your finished model! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xer 670 Posted May 30, 2015 Looks good, but still missing them sweet features that make a character unique. Keep it going Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites