Shana told me she hates poems so naturally I had to write her one (aren't we just the best of friends? 8D)

[MyDixieRect 2,061]

(Golden with your experience you may provide me tips! )

 

Shana, oh, Shana, oh Shana,

You're so hot you might as well be from Habana

In fact you're so fine,

On a scale of 1-8

Baby, you'd be a 9.

 

Shana oh Shana oh Shana

Making men sweat more than a sauna

With your hair so deliciously red

You belong right in my bed

And perhaps you may give me...head? (teehee)

 

Shana oh Shana oh Shana,

So lean and sharp like a Katana

Cold as ice

Yet so deliciously nice

Now bitch go cook me some rice!

 

Shana oh Shana oh Shana

It looks like we're almost done

I wrote you this poem just for fun

Please don't kill me Xeveemon!

 

[Demyx. 10,064]

Such an amazing poem. :') Shana is so lucking to have him. 

[MasterRoxas13 340]

MasterRoxas13 review

 

This was the best thing I have seen. The passion, the love , the desire in this man heart for this woman is truly remarkable. From the rice to being nice, Winner has finally unleashed his potential to the world while showing the proof of his winnings , I give this poem a 15/10  

Edited October 15, 2014 by MasterRoxas13

[MyDixieRect 2,061]

  On 10/15/2014 at 9:54 PM, MasterRoxas13 said:

MasterRoxas13 review

 

This was the best thing I have seen. The passion, the love , the desire in this man heart for this woman is truly remarkable. From the rice to being nice, Winner has finally unleashed his potential to the world while showing the proof of his winning , I give this poem a 15/10  

 

That review is perfect! :') 15/10 would cry and use top heavy fractions again.

[Dracozombie 4,554]

That was so beautiful. ;_; I'm in tears by your mastery over the written word. The part about rice gave me goosebumps.

 

Shana, please accept this man as your husbando.

[HarLea Quinn 26,501]

Winner this was so beautiful I cried when I read it . Tears of Joy!

Edited October 15, 2014 by Flaming Lea

[Shana09 5,769]

 

The poem...it burns!

[MyDixieRect 2,061]

  On 10/15/2014 at 10:01 PM, Shana09 said:

 

The poem...it burns!

 

I know bby. It sets your soul ablaze! 

Edited October 15, 2014 by Winner's Proof

[AuraAce 1,126]

*Sniff* Right in the feels.

[Dracozombie 4,554]

  On 10/15/2014 at 10:01 PM, Shana09 said:

 

The poem...it burns!

 

Shana he wrote this rice poem from the bottom of his heart. Chivalry is most certainly not dead if he's serenading you with a beautiful piece of literature. Why not give him a chance (and some lovin'?)

[Firaga 5,947]

As a fellow poet, I must say, this is beautifully crafted.

[King Demise 2,359]

The definition of perfection 

[Soul Eater Evans 4,045]

How is Shana not a 10 : /

[Neptune Vasilias 340]

I feel somewhat violated...and I'm LOVING every moment of it

[Clouded Sun 1,232]

Awwww how cute. The rice part brought me to tears.

[Shulk 8,623]

This is the greatest work of art I've seen in all my life. Good job, Winner. You truly live up to your name.

[Weedanort 8,786]

 

TRULY EXCELLENT