Cucco 1,907 Posted July 20, 2014 (edited) I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE I SHOULD KILL MYSELF #haiku Edited July 20, 2014 by Cucco 1 Hargleblargleboo reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ruby Rose 8,591 Posted July 20, 2014 "They call me Sokka, That is in the Water Tribe. I am not an oaf." "You think you're so smart, With your fancy little words, This is not so hard." "I calls it easy. Like I paddle my canoe, I'll paddle yours too!" "Squish, squash, sling that slang. I'm always right back at ya, Like my...boomerang!" 11 King Demise, Sora, Kittenz and 8 others reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zola 3,038 Posted July 20, 2014 You beat me, Ruby I also thought of Sokka And his haiku skills 6 Jilly Shears, Cucco, Kittenz and 3 others reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ceriraye 485 Posted July 20, 2014 What is a haiku? Did I learned it in school? Is this a haiku? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hargleblargleboo 979 Posted July 20, 2014 I can make haiku. Five seven five is the key. But I run out of... 3 Cucco, Ruby Rose and Ghost reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gamerazor247 877 Posted July 20, 2014 (edited) Two Black Rectangles November Twenty-Second November Fifteeth Bor-ed, bor-ed, bored Bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored I am really bored. Edited July 20, 2014 by Gamerazor247 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted July 20, 2014 I don't like haikus Mine were always really bad Really fuc.k this shit 2 MyDixieRect and Sora reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yuya Sakaki 5,212 Posted July 20, 2014 Gathering wishes Become a new shining star Take flight my Stardust! Peace! 1 Weedanort reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MyDixieRect 2,061 Posted July 20, 2014 Winner is the best And he has proof of this fact It can't be denied 2 Sora and Zola reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Power Jusho 1,783 Posted July 20, 2014 Kingdom Hearts III is Coming in 2016 Where is Half-Life 3? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade Master Xine 196 Posted July 20, 2014 Five, seven, then five. This is harder than I thought. Pretty sure I failed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kittenz 4,281 Posted July 20, 2014 These aren't Japanese poems sokka tried Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade Master Xine 196 Posted September 15, 2014 These aren't Japanese poems sokka tried That's not an haiku. Use seventeen syllables or else they're just words. 1 Kittenz reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weedanort 8,786 Posted September 15, 2014 Apparently haikus are a thing Danex and Squirting Demyx tried this before Butt I'm stil better than them at this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tigerruss 576 Posted September 15, 2014 I AM TWELVE YEARS OLDI LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVEI SHOULD KILL MYSELF #haiku Third line a bit longWhy would you do that CuccoAt least learn the rules Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aru Akise 2,540 Posted September 15, 2014 (edited) Third line a bit longWhy would you do that CuccoAt least learn the rules You think you are smart But you have made a mistake It is actually short. Hmm I used a syllable counter online, since I can't count syllables in English. Turns out it also doesn't Okay, a Haiku right from the roots then. 花火見る 弟の目が 赤青黄 Edited September 15, 2014 by SkyKeybladeHero 2 Kittenz and Cucco reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tigerruss 576 Posted September 15, 2014 (edited) You think you are smart But you have made a mistake It is actually short. Hmm I used a syllable counter online, since I can't count syllables in English. Turns out it also doesn't Okay, a Haiku right from the roots then. 花火見る 弟の目が 赤青黄 Third line a bit long 1 1 1 1 1Why would you do that Cucco 1 1 1 1 1 2 At least learn the rules 1 1 1 1 1575(I am just showing my count since you called me out on it, and because you stated you had to use an online syllable counter.)Though good job on doing a haiku in the language they were designed for.edit: oops I misread your message.... I will edit again.Edit: He had #haiku on the third line, which would add at least 2 syllables. Though now looking at it again, if I didn't count the #haiku, he actually had the proper form.I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD1 1 1 1 1I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE1 1 1 1 1 1 1I SHOULD KILL MYSELF1 1 1 2575 Edited September 15, 2014 by Tigerruss Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aru Akise 2,540 Posted September 16, 2014 Third line a bit long 1 1 1 1 1Why would you do that Cucco 1 1 1 1 1 2 At least learn the rules 1 1 1 1 1575(I am just showing my count since you called me out on it, and because you stated you had to use an online syllable counter.)Though good job on doing a haiku in the language they were designed for.edit: oops I misread your message.... I will edit again.Edit: He had #haiku on the third line, which would add at least 2 syllables. Though now looking at it again, if I didn't count the #haiku, he actually had the proper form.I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD1 1 1 1 1I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE1 1 1 1 1 1 1I SHOULD KILL MYSELF1 1 1 2575 Long, thin and green trees Useful and beautiful they are Hail, bamboo leaves. Did I count it right? It's freaking hard counting the syllables of a fonetic language u.u And in haikus that counting is even different then normal, for what I understood reading yours. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave 5,715 Posted September 16, 2014 Take note of the clowns The misfortune of their lives Is part of the joke 1 Zola reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hazimie 1,595 Posted September 16, 2014 Death and agony, Where hope and despair awaits, It's the dark blasters. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
marukyu 132 Posted September 16, 2014 i am marukyu i enjoy eating apples i am marukyu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
