The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted May 4, 2014 Hey there everyone, how's it going? Well then, here are two more drawings of manga/anime women I made, and I think these ones look even better than the ones I made before! But, this is myself who's giving an opinion of my drawings, so I want all of you to be the judges! Let me know how these two drawings look! So then, here's a young woman seated, looking towards the distance. I think her hair is awesome. And in this other one, a young woman can be seen being happy. I really liked how this one turned out. Well then, those were the drawings! I hope you all found them to your liking, and let me know what you thought of them in the comments section below! I'll appreciate what you all have to say! Well then, until next time, Golden out! 3 Omega Ness, Dio Brando and TheWayToDawn reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Velvet Scarlatina 607 Posted May 4, 2014 Looking pretty good, actually. Still needs work, though. You should probably work on correct height, firstly; the average adult is usually six or seven heads tall, and children are usually four heads tall, sometimes taller or shorter. You should either make your people's heads smaller, or make their limbs longer to correctly match the right "head height". 3 TheWayToDawn, 『R』 and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lostmemory123 1,056 Posted May 4, 2014 A word of advice to you:LESS IS MORE! This is in more regards to that second drawing of yours where in the chest area you basically drew her entire chest,if she is wearing clothes,you wouldnt see her entire chest sticking out,youd only see lines indicating so,you got it right on the top one where the lines for her boobs arent all drawn. And thats some advice that I give to ya. 2 The Transcendent Key and 『R』 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted May 4, 2014 I really like the bodies on both of these! Hips don't lie, ayyy But I agree with Velvet on the head thing, though, more practice makes perfect! Nice legs on the bottom drawing, too Great perspective. I have a hard time doing things like that. I'll just add that I struggle with the head thing too so I know, it's hard 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HIrukina15 30 Posted May 4, 2014 A heed of advice? But the chest to down.. Um , how do i put it? Their not really as the same level as the body. I mean, the second drawing has one up one down so.. What i auggest Is that you make them in the same level, then add shadows below it. Im otw so i cant really give a pic of it. But i gotta say, the body is great you really know the legs and hips hu? I have a hard thing doing that. Keep it up 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheWayToDawn 775 Posted May 4, 2014 They're pretty good 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MarkXIIII 106 Posted May 6, 2014 How come your topic is called [...] I drew TODAY and your art sig is dated 2013?? 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
『R』 570 Posted May 6, 2014 A word of advice to you:LESS IS MORE! This is in more regards to that second drawing of yours where in the chest area you basically drew her entire chest,if she is wearing clothes,you wouldnt see her entire chest sticking out,youd only see lines indicating so,you got it right on the top one where the lines for her boobs arent all drawn. And thats some advice that I give to ya. . You seem like a critical judge! Looking pretty good, actually. Still needs work, though. You should probably work on correct height, firstly; the average adult is usually six or seven heads tall, and children are usually four heads tall, sometimes taller or shorter. You should either make your people's heads smaller, or make their limbs longer to correctly match the right "head height". I was just about ready to type the same exact thing. Like he put too much in that area. Other than that you did, really, really excellent. 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted May 6, 2014 Thank you for your comments everyone, I appreciate your feedback! I'll continue to hone my craft until I've improved my art! Again, thank you for your comments! How come your topic is called [...] I drew TODAY and your art sig is dated 2013?? My bad. X3 I meant to put Apri 29, 2014. This happens to me a lot when I do drawings, or when I'm writing in college. I sometimes write the wrong year, lol. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MarkXIIII 106 Posted May 6, 2014 Thank you for your comments everyone, I appreciate your feedback! I'll continue to hone my craft until I've improved my art! Again, thank you for your comments! My bad. X3 I meant to put Apri 29, 2014. This happens to me a lot when I do drawings, or when I'm writing in college. I sometimes write the wrong year, lol. No offense. I just noticed it. I keep living in the past myself when it comes to writing the correct date on my papers... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
