Emo/Yami 37 Posted July 5, 2010 This is not a story, more lke a journal but the names are changed and things are more fantasy like. But really this is a journal. The 'story will be told by three people; Artemis, Zero, and Sora. This has nothing to do with Kingdom Hearts. --------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry#1(Artemis) The world is corrupt. People have no free will. I don't care what they say, freedom doesn't truly exist anymore. Hell, I don't even know what freedom is anymore. There are only two people I know that have a free life now. Zero and Sora/ Their always so happy, no matter what the situation is. If only I could be like them... If only I could be free... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxAs Is Wise 7 Posted July 5, 2010 So it's like collection of diaries/report? Sounds interesting Though I'm feeling a strong strong current of darkness (literally) by your current text alone already (It'll get much darker than that or not?) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted July 5, 2010 Depending on the point of view, it will either get darker or more carefree. My intention is for the entries to seem dark to the reader but you can tell, by the time I finish, what the theme is. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxAs Is Wise 7 Posted July 5, 2010 Hmm Ok, bring it on! I wanna know >.< you've made me curious Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted July 5, 2010 Entry#2(Zero) I feel like a volcano on the verge of eruption. All my hatred getting ready to explode on this world. I can see it, the world's end. People screaming in fear, millions of lifeless corpses littering the streets, an unstable atmosphere. Oh who am I kidding? This would never happen. The imbalance between light and dark would be the world's end. One will over throw the other and a great war of the Immortals would begin, resulting in the loss of humankind. I wonder why I'm thinking of such horrid thoughts? Probably bored. That's no excuse. Whatever life's never intresting around here. Al lthey ever do is tell stories about some strange comet. The old people say once the comet passes, the Goddess of Light, Serenity, and the God of Chaos, Doom, will pick warriors to fight for them and a great war wil be waged. Please, that'll never happen. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxAs Is Wise 7 Posted July 5, 2010 So it's all only his imagination or actually prophecy? Oh wait, don't tell me, I'm talking to myself Good story pls continue Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Protoman 1,974 Posted July 7, 2010 Really nice story. Pretty dark too. Can't wait to read more! Serriously though, I can't wait to see the end of this story .3. ... I'm in love with the name Artemis. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted October 31, 2010 Entry#3(Sora) Man, I had the weirdest dream! I was floating in a room full of darkness and there was some weird monster. It had black armor on and a black scorpion tail. It's face was hidden behind a skeleton mask. Wait, maybe that could've actually been its face. That's creepy. I wonder if the dreams I've been having actually mean something, Zero and Artemis have been talking about a lot of strange things. Like the other day, Artemis said something's coming to get everybody, and its not taking us to a party either. Zero also told me that their are things all over the world that people dismiss as nothing more than coincedence, like the buildings in that one neighborhood sudden;y catcing on fire but nothing nearby burning, but their in actuality signs of something evil. Long time since I last updated this. I guess this is one of the stories in the run for either a continuation or a cpmplete disregard. So I don't know what to think about all this. From both of their descriptions it sounds like we're all going to Hell or something. But that doesn't make sense because I thought only bad people go there. Something's not right, I need some time to think or else I'm going to get sick or something. Get sick? Geez I'm tired. Oh well, guess its time to go to sleep. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites