Antrium 10 Posted July 5, 2010 To be honest I am here to say things I have always wanted to say... I wanted to tell you that I loved you and cherished you... How I would die for you... I would protect you. I would do anything if it meant you would be happy... I lay myself infront of you... I expose myself to you and let you see me for who I really am and not for what I was. If you can see my inner feelings, could you give me redemption? If you saw the demons I have faced... Would you still hold me? I am a sinner and yet I am a saint... I am the one who shows the light and sometimes brings the darkness... I am troubled and alone, or at least I was... Until I met you. You showed me the that I can tell you the darkest things and you do not judge me, instead you love me more because i am willing to tell you these things. If this is how it feels to be free of guilt, then let me be free and let me be shown to the world for who I am and not for who I was... Show me that I can have redemption with no retribution and no transcendent payments... I will honor my promise and I will protect you with my life, I will hold you when you get scared, I will be at your side when things start to crumble, and when you feel threatened... I will stop it. I will hold your hand when you need me to and I will make sure that you are taken care of... You are the only person for me... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EpiXauce 19 Posted July 5, 2010 This is amazing. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted July 5, 2010 This is amazing. I will admit it this is me and this is how I feel... I did not just make this up has I went along. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted July 5, 2010 This is very heart touching. I find it amazing.... You were able to turn your feelings into words and i praise you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted July 5, 2010 This is very heart touching. I find it amazing.... You were able to turn your feelings into words and i praise you Thank you, it is not hard for me to turn emotions into words... I find it as a way to release my inner thoughts and let me mind go free from all the things I may bottle up inside. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted July 5, 2010 this is very great and touches hearts of many different people :D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted July 5, 2010 And thats a good way to keep from getting stressed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted July 5, 2010 this is so amazing... thats probably one of the most beautiful things ive read in a really long time : ) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted July 5, 2010 this is so amazing... thats probably one of the most beautiful things ive read in a really long time : ) Thank you yet again, I try to release it all in a poetic way and I almost always do, unless I am ticked off then I cannot write, lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AurorasSky69 5 Posted August 5, 2010 This was a really good poem. Your really good at writing I have to say that ;D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted August 5, 2010 And he really is. It's so difficult to turn emotions into words and you just does it many times and I always love anything you write. This is one of the only times something I read really touched me. (The rest that touched me were everything you wrote till now ) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted August 5, 2010 And he really is. It's so difficult to turn emotions into words and you just does it many times and I always love anything you write. This is one of the only times something I read really touched me. (The rest that touched me were everything you wrote till now ) Thanks Gizelita... This was really something from my heart unlike most of the stuff I have put n lately. It has a lot of value to me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites