Saber Lily 1,543 Posted May 1, 2014 Name: Evie de WynterAge: 15Gender: FemaleAppearance: http://images3.alphacoders.com/934/93467.jpgAlignment: GoodSide: BalancedPersonality: Quiet and distant, she was the one who mostly was alone, only a few close friends. Evie likes being with people...but only if she trusts them.Bio: Born in Twilight Town, she lived an almost normal life, especially when her Keyblade appeared. Living a somewhat better life, her family was attacked by the Decolored. In a burst of fear, Evie entered Dominion Mode, slaughtering most of the Decolor assassins while others escaped. Found by Keyblade Masters and their students, for show she was taken out and 'into protective custody'. In reality, the Masters took her to The Land of Departure. Stripped of everything except her Keyblade, given no dignity, modesty, or mercy, she's been, for one year, an experiment. Tortured and tormented, she's been turned into a lab rat for what is called the Light, and is losing hope of seeing freedom again. Wanting her abilities when in Dominion Mode,Keyblade: Ignition FairieSecondary Weapon (optional):Theme song (optional): Judgement Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted May 2, 2014 Tom13 and Oathkeeper136's new characters accepted. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PaperWeight 6 Posted May 2, 2014 First up... Name: Barca Tereo Age: 247Gender: MaleAppearance: Every inch of the man comes across as immaculate; the perfect man chiseled from marble and given the breath of life, and not a single scar adorning his sun-kissed skin. From his never-torn clothing to his piercing brown eyes to the fanned out bangs held up across his forehead. Short of stature, but solidly built, his broad, muscled shoulders build up to a thick neck. His chin is lightly dimpled, and the whole of his jawline bears the slightest amounts of 5 o'clock shadow, just enough to give him a rugged look, as if he were some sort of adventuring part-time-archaeologist/professor, which only serves to make his perfect white smile seem to shine all the brighter. His built chest and arms are squeezed into a black t-shirt which, despite being a size or so small (only to show off the defined, toned musculature beneath), bears a white insignia whose meaning has been lost in the ages this man has been stumbling drunkenly around the worlds, and is the same as the emblem he has tattooed on his shoulder blade, both covering his heart. The hem overlaps a thick brown leather belt, which carries no special significance, except that brown belts look good in just about everything. Except khakis. Which he wouldn't be caught dead wearing. Seriously. If he ever has to wear khakis, just firetrucking shoot him. Right in the face. Where was I? Jeans! Heavens be praised for those tough fabrics in all their wonderful shades of blue! The snags and tears and bits of fabric hanging out along the legs and pockets are entirely intentional. The pockets are entirely intact, their only contents an impossibly flat piece of technology which fits comfortably into his palm without worry of breaking or crushing its deceptively fragile shell, and a tarnished golden bracelet, whose origins are a complete mystery to everyone who has seen it, including the man carrying it. It does bear a crest, similar in design to those already adorning him, but of a different shape. The final piece of his perfectly assembled outfit is a simple pair of sandals, which have been known to range across the entire spectrum of seeable colors, and venturing into the unseeable! (These were eventually scrapped from his wardrobe due to the fact that no one could see them.) The only bit of Barca that will appear without meaning are a pristine white duster, the arms tattered just below his elbows, and the hem worn and shredded from a long lifetime of battles, accompanied by the worn handle of a katana, the blade broken off right at the hilt. Barca Tereo Alignment: Evil, straight up.Personality: From his appearance alone, anyone can discern that Barca cares a LOT about his appearance. He goes out of his way to preserve every piece he wears, and boasts the impressive record of not a single piece of his wardrobe being damaged beyond wearability. Messing up his hair is the fastest and easiest way to debilitate him for a minute, but beware! His blows will come faster and stronger, once he has fixed his coiffure. In conversation, his compatriots tend to find the man insufferable, his words most often aimed to denigrate and dripping with sarcasm, while his haughty demeanor refuses to allow insults to be given to him, generally leading to fisticuffs. He has also learned to take an appreciation from flinging his sandals off his feet at a target, enemy or friend, in a game he likes to call 'sandal-fu'. Despite not maiming or killing anyone, it is one of his favorite ways to pass the time, and his sandals always seem to magically reappear nearby, if not on his feet.Bio: Before the Keyblade Wielders came to power, before Sora struck down Xehanort in combat at the Keyblade Graveyard, before Terra, Ventus and Aqua found their way to their dire fates, there was a world; a simple blue green world that was pleasant enough to visit, with technology abounding and improving their way of life beyond their memory. It was a place of light and warmth and good people. As a boy, he was quiet, unassuming, and even into his teenage years, he was considered a model citizen. One morning, his eyes snapped open, and the tender gaze had changed one of malicious cunning. It was the day darkness came to his world. He waged his one-man war against his people, using their creations in demonic ways they never thought to imagine, choosing victims captured by his troops for his own wicked experiments, resulting in even more tortured beings to serve his cause. Eventually, at great cost, and with the help of a brilliant man from an unknown city, Barca was tricked into pressing an advance, and was imprisoned in a stasis chamber, and dropped into the hordes of dark creatures he had created. Left without their brutal leader, the Darkness overran the planet. The world was forgotten, and all of their advanced technology lost. Save for one man... The brilliant scientist, truly a mad genius from another world in another time, observed their destruction with keen interest. Upon his return to his own time, he returned to Barca's homeworld, only to find the darkness gone, the ruined cities only twisted metal spines and broken stones, and the stasis chamber resting comfortably in the middle of an empty plain. Before he had time to do more than open the chamber, skeletal fingers wrapped around the scientist's neck, the bones and fragile structures withing cracking under an unimaginable strength. Dusting his old clothes off, he made his way off the planet, leaving his ruined world and the bones of his only equal, forging into the new worlds, meaning to reclaim what he had lost.Weapons: First and foremost, he prefers to bring only his curled knuckles to a fight. He is proficient in a wide variety of weapon styles, but his fists are almost always going to be his tools of destruction. He's imbued himself with an unprecedented strength, able to take apart steel and brick and mortar with a single swing, send opponents flying with a lazy swipe, and even catch melee weapons without harming himself. If he seems to be fighting against someone of equal skill, he has the ability to call upon swirling flame in his right hand to redouble his blows and increase his movement speed, and creeping blue ice in his left to armor his body and surround his opponent in an unfamiliar chill (although the range of this tends to be limited by the size of the room, and its exposure to heat).Theme song: Judgement. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 First up... Name: Barca Tereo Age: 247 Gender: Male Appearance: Every inch of the man comes across as immaculate; the perfect man chiseled from marble and given the breath of life, and not a single scar adorning his sun-kissed skin. From his never-torn clothing to his piercing brown eyes to the fanned out bangs held up across his forehead. Short of stature, but solidly built, his broad, muscled shoulders build up to a thick neck. His chin is lightly dimpled, and the whole of his jawline bears the slightest amounts of 5 o'clock shadow, just enough to give him a rugged look, as if he were some sort of adventuring part-time-archaeologist/professor, which only serves to make his perfect white smile seem to shine all the brighter. His built chest and arms are squeezed into a black t-shirt which, despite being a size or so small (only to show off the defined, toned musculature beneath), bears a white insignia whose meaning has been lost in the ages this man has been stumbling drunkenly around the worlds, and is the same as the emblem he has tattooed on his shoulder blade, both covering his heart. The hem overlaps a thick brown leather belt, which carries no special significance, except that brown belts look good in just about everything. Except khakis. Which he wouldn't be caught dead wearing. Seriously. If he ever has to wear khakis, just firetrucking shoot him. Right in the face. Where was I? Jeans! Heavens be praised for those tough fabrics in all their wonderful shades of blue! The snags and tears and bits of fabric hanging out along the legs and pockets are entirely intentional. The pockets are entirely intact, their only contents an impossibly flat piece of technology which fits comfortably into his palm without worry of breaking or crushing its deceptively fragile shell, and a tarnished golden bracelet, whose origins are a complete mystery to everyone who has seen it, including the man carrying it. It does bear a crest, similar in design to those already adorning him, but of a different shape. The final piece of his perfectly assembled outfit is a simple pair of sandals, which have been known to range across the entire spectrum of seeable colors, and venturing into the unseeable! (These were eventually scrapped from his wardrobe due to the fact that no one could see them.) The only bit of Barca that will appear without meaning are a pristine white duster, the arms tattered just below his elbows, and the hem worn and shredded from a long lifetime of battles, accompanied by the worn handle of a katana, the blade broken off right at the hilt. Barca Tereo Alignment: Evil, straight up. Personality: From his appearance alone, anyone can discern that Barca cares a LOT about his appearance. He goes out of his way to preserve every piece he wears, and boasts the impressive record of not a single piece of his wardrobe being damaged beyond wearability. Messing up his hair is the fastest and easiest way to debilitate him for a minute, but beware! His blows will come faster and stronger, once he has fixed his coiffure. In conversation, his compatriots tend to find the man insufferable, his words most often aimed to denigrate and dripping with sarcasm, while his haughty demeanor refuses to allow insults to be given to him, generally leading to fisticuffs. He has also learned to take an appreciation from flinging his sandals off his feet at a target, enemy or friend, in a game he likes to call 'sandal-fu'. Despite not maiming or killing anyone, it is one of his favorite ways to pass the time, and his sandals always seem to magically reappear nearby, if not on his feet. Bio: Before the Keyblade Wielders came to power, before Sora struck down Xehanort in combat at the Keyblade Graveyard, before Terra, Ventus and Aqua found their way to their dire fates, there was a world; a simple blue green world that was pleasant enough to visit, with technology abounding and improving their way of life beyond their memory. It was a place of light and warmth and good people. As a boy, he was quiet, unassuming, and even into his teenage years, he was considered a model citizen. One morning, his eyes snapped open, and the tender gaze had changed one of malicious cunning. It was the day darkness came to his world. He waged his one-man war against his people, using their creations in demonic ways they never thought to imagine, choosing victims captured by his troops for his own wicked experiments, resulting in even more tortured beings to serve his cause. Eventually, at great cost, and with the help of a brilliant man from an unknown city, Barca was tricked into pressing an advance, and was imprisoned in a stasis chamber, and dropped into the hordes of dark creatures he had created. Left without their brutal leader, the Darkness overran the planet. The world was forgotten, and all of their advanced technology lost. Save for one man... The brilliant scientist, truly a mad genius from another world in another time, observed their destruction with keen interest. Upon his return to his own time, he returned to Barca's homeworld, only to find the darkness gone, the ruined cities only twisted metal spines and broken stones, and the stasis chamber resting comfortably in the middle of an empty plain. Before he had time to do more than open the chamber, skeletal fingers wrapped around the scientist's neck, the bones and fragile structures withing cracking under an unimaginable strength. Dusting his old clothes off, he made his way off the planet, leaving his ruined world and the bones of his only equal, forging into the new worlds, meaning to reclaim what he had lost. Weapons: First and foremost, he prefers to bring only his curled knuckles to a fight. He is proficient in a wide variety of weapon styles, but his fists are almost always going to be his tools of destruction. He's imbued himself with an unprecedented strength, able to take apart steel and brick and mortar with a single swing, send opponents flying with a lazy swipe, and even catch melee weapons without harming himself. If he seems to be fighting against someone of equal skill, he has the ability to call upon swirling flame in his right hand to redouble his blows and increase his movement speed, and creeping blue ice in his left to armor his body and surround his opponent in an unfamiliar chill (although the range of this tends to be limited by the size of the room, and its exposure to heat). Theme song: Judgement. ... I've never said this before for a OC sheet, but TL;DR... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted May 2, 2014 But it's so pretty Crona! Honestly it is a really nice OC Paper, accepted with open arms. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PaperWeight 6 Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) Well, that fills me up with the warm and fuzzies; thank you. Edited May 2, 2014 by PaperWeight 1 Javelin434 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 But it's so pretty Crona! Honestly it is a really nice OC Paper, accepted with open arms. But it's soooo loooooong. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted May 2, 2014 *slaps knuckles with ruler* Get crackin'! You ain't allowed to leave until you've read it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) *slaps knuckles with ruler* Get crackin'! You ain't allowed to leave until you've read it. ;__________________________________________________; Read it. Seems OP to me, considering he basically has a Super Saiyan form... Edited May 2, 2014 by Guest Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) Seems fine to me, no more overpowered than half the characters in the RP. Have you seen Zion at full power? Neena? Ryonne, your two, and riku's are definitely not going to be pushovers. Plus, he's straight-up evil, which is needed in the first place, and evil people are meant to be powerful. As long as he doesn't godmod or abuse his power, then I trust him with it. Edited May 2, 2014 by Yuffie Kisaragi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 Seems fine to me, no more overpowered than half the characters in the RP. Have you seen Zion at full power? Neena? Ryonne, your two, and riku's are definitely not going to be pushovers. Plus, he's straight-up evil, which is needed in the first place, and evil people are meant to be powerful. As long as he doesn't godmod or abuse his power, then I trust him with it. Eh, good point, however my characters ain't the best considering... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted May 2, 2014 Yeah, but even if they aren't the best, they're controlled by you, so that basically instantly raises their combat prowess by +10. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Arrowguns 466 Posted May 2, 2014 Wow, now that I think about it, there are a lot of powerful characters in this RP. I guess I'll have to make sure my characters are strong too. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 Yeah, but even if they aren't the best, they're controlled by you, so that basically instantly raises their combat prowess by +10. Thanks. My overzelous study of combat makes me an unstoppable force. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Reyn 1,755 Posted May 2, 2014 My characters seem overwhemlingly under powered now. Alexander is supposed to be that way, but Brandon and Emily seem pretty weak for Keyblade wielders. Oh well, guess ill just have them grow strong in the RP. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted May 2, 2014 Seems fine to me, no more overpowered than half the characters in the RP. Have you seen Zion at full power? Neena? Ryonne, your two, and riku's are definitely not going to be pushovers. Plus, he's straight-up evil, which is needed in the first place, and evil people are meant to be powerful. As long as he doesn't godmod or abuse his power, then I trust him with it. I'm touched you mention Zion first *tear* my nights been made before I even get out of work! And Zion will only get stronger... Reminds me Yuffie. For most of the RP, I'd say Zion and Neena would be stalemating every fight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted May 2, 2014 Wow, now that I think about it, there are a lot of powerful characters in this RP. I guess I'll have to make sure my characters are strong too. My characters seem overwhemlingly under powered now. Alexander is supposed to be that way, but Brandon and Emily seem pretty weak for Keyblade wielders. Oh well, guess ill just have them grow strong in the RP. First, sorry for the double post, but imnon mymphone so adding tonlast post...yeah no. Anyways. Having your characters grow as you roleplay them is the best way. Heres a little secret. Have you noticed I use Zion in almost every KH rp? Like, in a KH RP, It is rare I dont see Neena, or Javelin's Nocturne. This use has allowed us to empower them and grow their characters from their base forms. Using them a lot notnonly makes them our 'avatars' but also gives them that almost mythical quality. When you see Neena, you expect this ninja badass with a grudge against the Keyblade, ruthless and driven. You look at Zion, you expect this awe inspiring lesbian Keyblade Master who overwhelms with amazing power and skill. And when you see Cody "Waffles", Zero-Four Nocturne (so many names ;- you expect a Kairi fanboy cuddling a plushie...uhm...I mean this powerful guardian who will defend his friends and his Princess with his heart. You might seem underpowered, but the fact is you always make a new character from scratch. Try what we do, and using a character over and over again. They too will build up that mythic quality, allowing you to join the league of the badass and not feel underpowered. The price of having a signature character tho, is always woeming them into different typesnof roleplays in the KH Universe. But thats the fun part 3 Captain Arrowguns, Reyn and Javelin434 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Javelin434 3,164 Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) But it's soooo loooooong. Wait until you see his RP that me, Rikunobody, yuffie and Oath were involved in. *Cracks knuckles* Allow me to present what I consider the 'golden standard' for RPs: KH Lightfall Edited May 2, 2014 by Javelin434 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Javelin434 3,164 Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) First up... OOOOOOOOHH S**T! PAPERWEIGHT HAS JOINED THE RP! Seems fine to me, no more overpowered than half the characters in the RP. Have you seen Zion at full power? Neena? Ryonne, your two, and riku's are definitely not going to be pushovers. Plus, he's straight-up evil, which is needed in the first place, and evil people are meant to be powerful. As long as he doesn't godmod or abuse his power, then I trust him with it. Wow, now that I think about it, there are a lot of powerful characters in this RP. I guess I'll have to make sure my characters are strong too. Now that I read everyone else's post, you're right. I should prolly throw in my main OC so my characters can not die, but I'mma gonna hold off on that for now until needed. And if I do, I would prefer if people didn't call him OP: I prefer the term 'balanced.' Meaning, he will stand a chance against whatever anyone decides to throw at him, and it helps keep the RP interesting. [Remember Vanguard I, anyone? No? Darn...] And when you see Cody "Waffles", Zero-Four Nocturne (so many names ;- you expect a Kairi fanboy cuddling a plushie...uhm...I mean this powerful guardian who will defend his friends and his Princess with his heart. IN MY DEFENSE AND I QUOTE FROM THIS OC'S ROLE MODEL: "Names are for friends, so I don't need one." Therefore: Underneath it all, he technically has none ~(O.O~) Also: "This isn't even my final form." Edited May 2, 2014 by Javelin434 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arya Stark 1,337 Posted May 2, 2014 You know, I really wouldn't mind Lightfall getting a revive. That was going to be pretty fun, being evil, and Milo was a promising character (who I may revive for this rp actually). P.S. I was looking back at the first page, and noticed all the love I was getting! Thanks guys, on occasion I feel like a pest, butting into like every RP whether or not I'm wanted, so that all those indirect compliments pretty much wrecked those feelings! 2 Saber Lily and Javelin434 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Javelin434 3,164 Posted May 2, 2014 (edited) You know, I really wouldn't mind Lightfall getting a revive. That was going to be pretty fun, being evil, and Milo was a promising character (who I may revive for this rp actually). P.S. I was looking back at the first page, and noticed all the love I was getting! Thanks guys, on occasion I feel like a pest, butting into like every RP whether or not I'm wanted, so that all those indirect compliments pretty much wrecked those feelings! Nawww, you're awesome! I just haven't had the privileges of getting to interact with your characters enough. I'm really hoping to change all that though... Edited May 2, 2014 by Javelin434 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 Wait until you see his RP that me and Oath were involved in. *Cracks knuckles* Allow me to present what I consider the 'golden standard' for RPs: KH Lightfall Nope.avi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Javelin434 3,164 Posted May 2, 2014 Nope.avi Suit yourself. You're missing out on a LOT... [i'm pretty sure everyone involved can vouch for me on this.] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted May 2, 2014 Suit yourself. You're missing out on a LOT... [i'm pretty sure everyone involved can vouch for me on this.]I'm just unable to read anything like that without an inclination to, I normally don't read over RP's unless I was involved in them. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Javelin434 3,164 Posted May 2, 2014 I'm just unable to read anything like that without an inclination to, I normally don't read over RP's unless I was involved in them. Then you and I have the same mentality then. Ok then, carry on! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites