Sigrun 1,064 Posted June 30, 2010 Note: this is my first fan fic so dont expect it to be good and some constructive criticism would be great (: Chapter 1: *Disclaimer: I don Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted July 1, 2010 this is prettyp good plz keep posting more :D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sigrun 1,064 Posted July 2, 2010 thanks *whew* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted July 2, 2010 just do me a favor and keep posting Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sigrun 1,064 Posted July 19, 2010 Equinox By Oath_keeper14 Chapter 2: *Disclaimer: I don't own any part of the kingdom hearts franchise, or any works of Square Enix, or Tetsuya Numoura* Srry it took awhile i had other projects at hand. enjoy chapter 2 Plz R&R --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the white room, Namine is drawing, Sora, Riku, and kairi together at the beach in the islands where they used to play. She felt a presence, and paused. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sigrun 1,064 Posted August 19, 2010 xions pov: as we head out inside the dark corridor there was pitch blackness and shades of deep purple. as we walked along i looked at her she had her hood on i wonderd if why she hasnt given her name or revealed what she looked liked. all i know that she is a very talented person and a fighter too. especally when we fought and i lost. she looked at me. "What?" she asked. "nothing. we should almost be at the world that never was." i looked away trying not to stare she was at least slightly taller than me but we have the same build and her voice sounded like a young woman. "xion," she asked " so,why did you go rouge anyway?" she asked. i bit my lip. "for all the things i done. i made many poeple suffer because of me and prevented sora to save poeple who needed him the most. if i didnt those people would have sufferd misery forever." i said. i tried to hold back tears, the guilt. "you read the prophesis. didnt you?" "yea, i take it riku didnt tell you." "Yea. hes still mad at me." "no hes not." i tryed to sound convincing "no it was my fault. If i didnt warn you, none of this would of happened." wait was she the one who- then the corridor opened a massive horde of heartless came charging right at us. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- i will add more as soon as possible srry for the inconvinience Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted August 19, 2010 srry for not commenting on the last chapter, anyways, both of them were good chapters, plz write more Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
