Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted March 25, 2014 Ok, I had this idea fro a story, kinda want to run it by you guys before I waste my time typing it up... There's a school for teenage guys called Vladimers, a posh, old world campus covered in vines off the Cali coastline. Seems normal on the outside, but inside, the students live in fear of beatings and even macabre leech bleeding from the headmaster, Prof. Toulon. One boy, 17 year old Ryan O'Connell, decides to get out, and hops the back fence during lunch hour: what's left of him is found the next day dumped on the front porch. Slowly, day by day, the number of students dwindle, as " Extra credit " assignments has the boys off into the woods at the side of the campus. A small group bands together, but they discover the campus is more insidious than anyone ever though. It's kinda based on the manga Hollow Fields and themes from the movie The Woods. Any feedback, guys? 3 Sandra_Nedelcheva1998, Kirby Maxwell Gingell and tlrpttmn reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ruby Rose 8,591 Posted March 25, 2014 And I thought public schooling was tough Creative idea, plus it's dark- I say run with it 2 King Demise and Philip Ellwell reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tlrpttmn 65 Posted March 25, 2014 Go through with it! 1 Philip Ellwell reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Caxkj 481 Posted March 25, 2014 (edited) I'm getting a "Slender" vibe here... do it. Immediately. I approve this. Edited March 25, 2014 by Caxkj Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted March 25, 2014 I'm getting a "Slender" vibe here... do it. Immediately. I approve this. Pitch approves: i'm honoured. And I thought public schooling was toughCreative idea, plus it's dark- I say run with it Thanks. and dark is what I do best. Go through with it! Ok! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MasterXemnas 2,285 Posted March 25, 2014 Fool. Go for it. 1 Philip Ellwell reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted March 25, 2014 Fool. Go for it. I will. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_The Door To Light_ 1,507 Posted March 25, 2014 Seems okay. Go ahead and try it out. Ironically enough, I'm starting to read 'Hollow Fields' myself. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted March 25, 2014 Seems okay. Go ahead and try it out. Ironically enough, I'm starting to read 'Hollow Fields' myself. I've only read vol 1, and it got me thinking about school's and students going missing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ceriraye 485 Posted March 26, 2014 Go with it and don't turn back Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
