KeybladeWielderXIII 11 Posted February 28, 2014 (edited) Hello, I was wondering if I could get some feedback on a pitch proposal for Kingdom Hearts fan film. What do you guys think? I attached a .pdf Thanks! -Jordan KEYBLADE-A Kindom Hearts Fan Film-The Vision.pdf Edited February 28, 2014 by KeybladeWielderXIII Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MasterXemnas 2,285 Posted February 28, 2014 Fool. I read it, and your pitch is bad. Fan films are cool, but this sounds like bad fan fiction. And don't give links to other fan films to say they've gotten way with not being caught yet, that's just throwing them under the bus. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted March 1, 2014 It sucked. I hated it. It also lied about the heartless & nobodies, & it didn't even give the main character's nobody a proper name. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KeybladeWielderXIII 11 Posted March 1, 2014 Fool. I read it, and your pitch is bad. Fan films are cool, but this sounds like bad fan fiction. And don't give links to other fan films to say they've gotten way with not being caught yet, that's just throwing them under the bus. Thanks for reading it. I'm not throwing other fan films under the bus, that's ridiculous. I love those films. They already have millions of views. I'm not saying at all that its not right for them to make money. Just stating facts. The story is still in very early development stages. Was there a certain part that made it like bad fan fiction? It sucked. I hated it. It also lied about the heartless & nobodies, & it didn't even give the main character's nobody a proper name. Thanks for reading it. The story is still in very early development stages. Was there a certain part that made it bad? Do you hate the concept too? Why isn't Alix a proper name? The X means it's a nobody and then the human nam is the same without the X. Is it because the "s" isnt in there anymore? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted March 1, 2014 Thanks for reading it. I'm not throwing other fan films under the bus, that's ridiculous. I love those films. They already have millions of views. I'm not saying at all that its not right for them to make money. Just stating facts. The story is still in very early development stages. Was there a certain part that made it like bad fan fiction? Thanks for reading it. The story is still in very early development stages. Was there a certain part that made it bad? Do you hate the concept too? Why isn't Alix a proper name? The X means it's a nobody and then the human name is the same without the X. Is it because the "s" isnt in there anymore? Yes. It has to have all the same letters in there as the original name plus the X, otherwise it's not a good nobody name. Also, a heartless isn't what happens when a person is defeated by darkness, it's what happens when a person loses their heart. Also, what you said about nobodies is wrong, too. A nobody is what happens when someone with a strong heart & an unyielding will loses their heart, a nobody is the bi-product. & about the name, you should have called her Lixas. But what you did with her nobody name was like calling Sora's nobody "Xora" instead of "Roxas". Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MasterXemnas 2,285 Posted March 1, 2014 Yes. It has to have all the same letters in there as the original name plus the X, otherwise it's not a good nobody name. Also, a heartless isn't what happens when a person is defeated by darkness, it's what happens when a person loses their heart. Also, what you said about nobodies is wrong, too. A nobody is what happens when someone with a strong heart & an unyielding will loses their heart, a nobody is the bi-product. & about the name, you should have called her Lixas. But what you did with her nobody name was like calling Sora's nobody "Xora" instead of "Roxas". Fool. The x was only for the organization. Not all Nobodies do it. The x turned out to be a bad thing too. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted March 1, 2014 The x was only for the organization. Not all Nobodies do it. The x turned out to be a bad thing too. You're not getting the point. The letter that she didn't use was "s", not "x". Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MasterXemnas 2,285 Posted March 1, 2014 (edited) You're not getting the point. The letter that she didn't use was "s", not "x". Fool. Any sort of the name change was only for the organization. Outside the organization, if a nobody wants to be called something else, it's free game. Edited March 1, 2014 by MasterXemnas Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kittenz 4,281 Posted March 3, 2014 No, that's not how it works, you didn't create Kingdom Hearts, so that's not your choice. The name of the nobody always has to have all the same letters of the original person's name, plus the X. No exceptions. Um, Namine? She does not have an x BECAUSE SHE WAS NOT A PART OF THE ORGANISATION. You are wrong, and it does sounds like a bad fanfic. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
