im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted June 10, 2009 cool! tats really good!!! juz look at xions wiki it explains everything i ruined the whole game for mahself and im proud of it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 1, 2009 that was vary good i actouly read all of it umm wens chapter 2 comeing out Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 2, 2009 i had to stop writing.........i told my sister and then she told my mom and my mom said i was being too obsessive soz yeah........ *sigh* but heh, at least you can tell i always get an A+ in my English Classes BTW this took me a week......and i wrote up the ENITRE second chapter but the day after i finished, i was forced to delete it...........and i took hours out of my life to type 6000 words of pure wonderfulness too.... and i made such a lovely entrance for Roxas' lines........(he talked to Sora alot in Ch.2..mostly cuz he was alone most of the chapter) i planned to go deep into the Organization's character through a series of Flashbacks through the story *sigh* but i guess thats ALSO down the drain....... BTW in case i didnt make it clear, Riku went into Dark Mode to save them. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 2, 2009 wowwww that sucks feel sarry for yay owell i can owas think of what happens after chapter 1 i proble should of sended the storys to Square Enix it might of been the story line of kingdom hearts 3 but im just blabing on and i shold shut up Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GoofyDonaldSora 0 Posted August 2, 2009 Man if I could write that much I get so many good grades in school damn my lazyness... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 2, 2009 im sooo bad at writeing its not funny Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 2, 2009 thanks yeah.....i wanted Sora to be angst the first chapter and then back to his normal self in the second.....yup.... BTW dont worry blabbing is good (YAY FOR RAMBLING) i liked reading it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora96 17,256 Posted August 2, 2009 good job too bad you cant do chapter 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 2, 2009 how about you pay someone to write the next chapter for yo hehehehe Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted August 2, 2009 omg i feel so bad for you!!!!!!! yeah pay someone to write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 2, 2009 we want to know wats next write write write Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 2, 2009 hmmmm i guess i shall secretly write the rest of it (why not? i mean why should i let this talent go to waste?) so OKAY! lets just try to get my creative juices flowing again (the next chapter should be posted somewhere near next week Oh sleep! how i did love your comfort! lol KIDDING! i like to stay up and write GET READY FOR DIGIMON AND BLEACH TO BE THROWN IN THERE!!! (YAY) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 2, 2009 thank you soo much you the bomb DigiMoon93 in the house Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 3, 2009 its 11:54 PM and i am now starting the story up again. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 3, 2009 and now its 8:29 and i bet your seelping anywas oright Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted August 4, 2009 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYZ!!!!!!!! i am jumpoing (jumping+boing=jumpoing ) for joy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 4, 2009 YAY! but i will say this I am Axel fear me NOW: You will be so berry berry happy OH and there is NO ACTUAL ending to each chapter, every one ends in something that connects to the next and Ch.2 will be shorter than 5500 words well im up to 2650 words i only have 2 scenes left and then i will write my author's note and then im done Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted August 7, 2009 ooooh why? this makes me jumpoing even more!!!!!! i cant wait till the next chappie is out!!!!!!!!! *insert more jumpoinging here* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 7, 2009 write FASTER I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted August 8, 2009 me too!!!! and i wanna know why im gonna be berry berry happy ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 10, 2009 ENJOY THE NEXT CHAPTER FRIENDS!!!! BTW i just noticed that i wont be able to fit in as much Disney.....awell.....they're racist towards KH anywayz lawlz Chapter 2 is below the dotted line its next to CH1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted August 10, 2009 wow you did i good job all though someparts i didt get [all though i figred it all out after reading it agine] vary dark thats for sure keep writing AND DONT TELL YOUR MOM OR SIS Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted August 10, 2009 LAWLZ thank u! it wasnt supposed to make sence til u read the ENITRE thing that was what i was going for Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted August 12, 2009 ah that was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so....axels gonna be in it sometime...!? *gasp* the person who saved sora??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites