Ghost 1,857 Posted November 2, 2013 And im actually peoud of this, for a first try o_o Usually when i mimic a game, anime, or manga's art style i just start with making up my own characters (thiugh, i dont consider them oc's since i inly drew them, and gave them no personality, name, etc.). When i get the hang of it though theeen hopefully ill be able to drsw some fanart of the characters, or something idk. Always fun. Anyways, what do you think? Im pretty proud of how she came out but i know i messed up on a lot. My only regret is that i should have made her sweater sleeves poofier...they look too much like bare arms ;_; i mean itll look fine once its coloured but...yeah lol Also anything in pencils just stuff i havent decided whether or not i want to keep, stuff that doesnt need outlining but only colour, etc. so that explains why its like unfinished haha I dont know much about the fairy kei fashion, but i tried to design an outfit in tht style for her...note the tried i actually used some clothes from style savy trendsetters but shhh dont tell sorry for making a threwd of this i just havent been able to draw anything in a while and im haply with this yay 6 Jilly Shears, Pretium, Marth and 3 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted November 2, 2013 Looks good... just... Her legs look a little tiny... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Elrandir 783 Posted November 2, 2013 Looks awesome. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted November 2, 2013 (edited) It looks really good Ducky! You got the anorexia right too! Just kidding, its really swell. The thing that kind of bothers me though is that her skirt looks like she is just wearing panties. Edited November 2, 2013 by Shana09 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted November 2, 2013 Looks good... just... Her legs look a little tiny...Yeah I like making chunkier girls but as Shana said everyone in the series is painfully skinny sooo...i tried If it eere up to me she wouldnt even have a thigh gap though tbh..Oh wait. It was up to me. Fffffffffffffffffff Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daniel Black 1,981 Posted November 2, 2013 Looks nice.. but the legs.... well without that, the face and torso looks right keep going! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted November 2, 2013 It looks really good Ducky! You got the anorexia right too! Just kidding, its really swell. The thing that kind of bothers me though is that her skirt looks like she is just wearing panties. LOL yeah, seriously shiki in particular, her waist really bothers me... Like to the point of maing me uncomfortable. Thank you! Her shorts are supposed to be bloomer-y. She just has like, 2 layers of shirts plus her sweater so thats why you can see some parts of the layers poking out, hehehe But yeah, i totally forgot that there are underwear that resemble this so maybe i should have thought it through...i really dont know a lot about fairy kei but, oh well Thank y'all, i appreciate the feedback a ton 1 Shana09 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted November 2, 2013 It looks really good Ducky! You got the anorexia right too! Just kidding, its really swell. The thing that kind of bothers me though is that her skirt looks like she is just wearing panties. I was going to say, but I didn't know if it was part of the art-style. Yeah I like making chunkier girls but as Shana said everyone in the series is painfully skinny sooo...i tried If it eere up to me she wouldnt even have a thigh gap though tbh.. Oh wait. It was up to me. Fffffffffffffffffff Hehe. It's just the need to bring her hip with out a little. She looks like she could never walk on those. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted November 2, 2013 I was going to say, but I didn't know if it was part of the art-style. Hehe. It's just the need to bring her hip with out a little. She looks like she could never walk on those.Yeah, im not used to drawing tall thin girls so this was weird for me. She actually had a tiny waist and wide hips under the clothes so i didnt wanna make them too big ; shes not me after all BA DUM TSSwow i just dissed myself god Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted November 2, 2013 Yeah, im not used to drawing tall thin girls so this was weird for me. She actually had a tiny waist and wide hips under the clothes so i didnt wanna make them too big ; shes not me after all BA DUM TSSwow i just dissed myself god I'm gonna quote (I thin its) Buster Rhythms here when I say She ain't got none unless she's got buns hun... /shottodeath Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jilly Shears 2,144 Posted November 2, 2013 I think in terms of the lineart stylization you've gotten pretty close to the art style, but yeah; girl should probably consider eating a cheeseburger or three, but maybe that's just endemic to Anime Shibuya. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ghost 1,857 Posted November 2, 2013 I think in terms of the lineart stylization you've gotten pretty close to the art style, but yeah; girl should probably consider eating a cheeseburger or three, but maybe that's just endemic to Anime Shibuya.THat goes for everyone in the game. I'm aware she's as thin as Twiggy but that's how most of the other characters look o.o Maybe dying and burning off all their food in battle has its downsides... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Revolart 431 Posted November 2, 2013 It look so awesome. Really cool. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pretium 234 Posted November 8, 2013 I Think You Captured The Style Really Well!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
