Sora-Lover 25 Posted October 29, 2013 hey everyone i made more poems tell me what you think ^_^ Hurt no matter what you do i cant hurt you you can hurt me but i cant be mean cause i was taught the right way to be no matter how hard i try i cant be the bad guy so ill say goodbye cause this is not worth my time summer shining sun under the ocean making faces at the fishes mermaid style swimming everyone loves swimming really summer is the best season ever sea i jump with a sound of a splash i go deep deep down to the bottom of the ocean i look around and what do i see hundreds of fishes staring at me i make a face and they scatter which gave a good laughter but as i swim forward i feel so free so i know i at peace with the sea. silence silence its pure and sweet it helps me think but it usually gone in a wink i miss my silence because it so quite and i like it pure silence. blame they always blame me they are nothing but mean i am not loved i am always forgotten i am the cause of everything is this why im mean is this how ill will always be you tell me walk away what am i suppose to say when you walk away i cant make you stay cause that ain't the right thing to say so go on and walk away cause i ain't gonna run after you and say stay even though i don't want you to go i know you want me to feel alone. 2 MythrilMagician and Ruby Rose reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ruby Rose 8,591 Posted October 29, 2013 hey everyone i made more poems tell me what you think ^_^ Hurt no matter what you doi cant hurt youyou can hurt mebut i cant be meancause i was taught the right way to beno matter how hard i tryi cant be the bad guyso ill say goodbyecause this is not worth my time summer shining sununder the oceanmaking faces at the fishesmermaid style swimmingeveryone loves swimmingreally summer is the best season ever sea i jumpwith a sound of a splashi go deep deep downto the bottom of the oceani look around and what do i seehundreds of fishes staring at mei make a face and they scatterwhich gave a good laughterbut as i swim forwardi feel so freeso i know i at peace with the sea. silence silenceits pureand sweetit helps me thinkbut it usually gone in a winki miss my silencebecause it so quiteand i like itpure silence. blame they always blame methey are nothing but meani am not lovedi am always forgotteni am the cause of everythingis this why im meanis this how ill will always beyou tell me walk away what am i suppose to saywhen you walk awayi cant make you staycause that ain't the right thing to sayso go on and walk awaycause i ain't gonna run after you and say stayeven though i don't want you to goi know you want me to feel alone.Very nice! ^^ I personally like the Sea and Silence ones 2 Sora-Lover and King Demise reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MythrilMagician 6,963 Posted October 29, 2013 I like them all. 1 Sora-Lover reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alexaclmn 97 Posted October 29, 2013 Please do make more. 1 Sora-Lover reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora-Lover 25 Posted October 30, 2013 http://kh13.com/forum/topic/62167-random-poems-i-came-up-with/?do=findComment&comment=1228068 this is the other topic with more poems i made from before. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites