Text What is this thing you call writing?

[MajesticPenguin 14]

So I'm thinking of starting a story but I want to know if my idea is any good. All I have is the first sentence and a really rough outline of what I wanna do and where I want to go with the story. The sentence is -

 

"Let's try this again..." he muttered as he sobbed over his own lifeless, limp corpse.

 

I know it's hard to judge off just a sentence, but do you think you could tell me if this interests you at all?

[Varnish 319]

It sounds interesting. Does it have something to do with reincarnation?

[MajesticPenguin 14]

It sounds interesting. Does it have something to do with reincarnation?

 

Something along the lines of that. It's sort of a x amount of lives thing + reincarnation (ex. Tommy has 9 lives, he dies once, he comes back as a new person and now has only 8 lives.)

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Sounds interesting.

I'd read it haha