Yang 1,859 Posted October 8, 2013 In the fall, I saw a girl who had hair like early morning sun that cast upon the classroom walls. I never met her gaze and I never saw her smile So I told my friends she was stone-faced and they told their friends. She sat two rows ahead of me but she never dared to speak to me So I told my friends she was quiet and they told their friends. In the winter, the girl did not show up to school as often as the normal person would So I told my friends she was lazy because she didn't come to school And they told their friends. In the spring, the girl didn't come to school at all because her best friend walked up to me before class And told me the girl with hair like morning sun had hung herself from her ceiling fan. So I didn't tell my friends and they didn't tell their friends. 4 Emrys, luka, Taeyeon and 1 other reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Neptune Vasilias 340 Posted October 8, 2013 Poor girl Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wisdomform 221 Posted October 8, 2013 It's a bit sad. but I do like your writing and this poem. 2 luka and Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_The Door To Light_ 1,507 Posted October 8, 2013 That really tugs at the heart strings :,( 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shard the Gentleman 2,891 Posted October 8, 2013 This is really good. It really shows how things spread fast, and the negative effects. You should write more often. This was really good, and I want to share it with my friends. Permission? 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yang 1,859 Posted October 8, 2013 This is really good. It really shows how things spread fast, and the negative effects. You should write more often. This was really good, and I want to share it with my friends. Permission? Yeah permission! 1 Shard the Gentleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saber Lily 1,543 Posted October 8, 2013 Wow. Just...wow. That was well written Yang. It really tugs the heartstrings. Awesome job. 2 Shard the Gentleman and Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XxBlossomingNobodyxX 298 Posted October 8, 2013 You write poems very well. Thats a very touching story! 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alexaclmn 97 Posted October 8, 2013 I gotta say, I enjoyed it. TYPE SOME MORE PLEASE!!! 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taeyeon 1,137 Posted October 9, 2013 That was great... Really, really great. I love the simplicity in this, you should write more when you have more time! 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emrys 3,192 Posted October 9, 2013 This is good. it made me feel all emotiony, which is a big deal.... for me 1 Yang reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites