heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 I have decided to make a story about Sora. This takes place after Mickey wrote the letter to Sora, Riku, and Kairi. They all go off to different places, but 2 out of the 3 of them will be tempted by the darkness. So without further or do, I shall start the prolague Prolague: Riku is sitting on the papou tree alone and Sora runs to join him. "Nothing's changed huh?" asked Riku "Nope, nothing will" said Sora "What a small world" stated Riku "But part of one that's much bigger" Sora said "Yeah" said Riku "Hey Riku... do you think it was the door to light?" asked Sora Riku jumps off the tree and touches the chest of Sora. "This" he said "This?" Sora asked "Yeah, it's always closer than you think." Sora smiles. "Sora! Riku!" Kairi runs to them "Hey what's up?" asked Sora "Look" said Kairi She shows them a bottle with a letter from the King. "From the King?" Sora asked as he grabs the bottle from Kairi Sora opens the bottle cap and gets the letter as he reads it to Riku and Kairi. "I wanted to tell you immediately, there were memories asleep inside you. And those memory fragments connect to the future. Sora, Riku, Kairi, the truth surrounding the keyblade, passes through numerous connections. And were inside your hearts. Sora, everyone connected to you is waiting for you. The only one who can heal their sadness is you. It is possible that your travels up until now, may have been easy in comparrison to what's next. Everything thought to be accidental, was really connected. It seems the door to a new departure, is already happening. The next chapter will probably be up by tonight. Kingdom Hearts does not belong to me. Thank you for reading the prolague Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted May 23, 2010 Nice this is a really good beginning!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 23, 2010 I like the beginning. I can't wait to see the rest. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 thanks, to u both! going to get working on it in about 15 minutes. the prolague has to do with KH2 ending and KH coded ending Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted May 23, 2010 Ur welcome! I luv stories like this so I'll be looking forward to every chapter! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 23, 2010 I enjoy reading fanfics, especially ones about darkness(that sounds kind of emo). Look forward to the chapters. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Chapter 1: Sora is sitting on the popau tree. "Sora" Riku approaches Sora. "Riku" said Sora "Have you decided?" asked Riku "Yeah." said Sora "I'm coming too, because Mickey adressed the letter to me" said Riku "OK" said Sora Kairi comes "Sora" said Kairi "Kairi" said Sora "I..." said Sora "Yeah" said Kairi "There are still sad people" said Sora "And everyone's waiting" "I have to put back everything that's connected to me" Kairi gives Sora her good luck charm. "Are you going Riku?" asked Kairi "Yeah, I decided to go because Mickey adressed it to me." "Then I'm coming too" "OK" said both of them. "If we're all going, then we must separate." said Riku "Wait guys, but first, we must develop a stragety, let's to see the King." said Sora "Alright" said both Kairi and Riku Riku summoned a dark portal and they all went into there. End of Chapter 1 Yes, most of this chapter is about Kingdom Hearts Reconnect. Next chapter will be up soon Note: I might not be able to write after the weekend because I have to study for final exams, but I will do what I can Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 I include previews of the upcoming chapter aren't I nice??? Chapter 2 Preview:Sora, Riku, and Kairi go to Disney Castle to talk to Mickey. They develop a stragety of who saves who. But who will they save????? Stay tuned! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 23, 2010 Can't wait to see who saves whom(grammar fail ). I hope you do well on your final exams. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Can't wait to see who saves whom(grammar fail ). I hope you do well on your final exams. Right now I'm brain storming 4 chapter 2 and also thanks for hoping that I will do well on my exams I really appreciate it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted May 23, 2010 This is great!!! Write more pls Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rue 3 Posted May 23, 2010 Yeah it's epic!! make it up now! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Chapter 2: Sora, Riku, and Kairi went through the dark portal and it led them to Disney Town. "QUACK!!!!!!!! Sora!!!!! Riku!!!!!!! Kairi!!!!!! Goofy, Sora, Riku, and Kairi are here" "They are ahuck?" "Hey Sora, Riku, Kairi!" said Donald "Hey there pals! AHUCYK" said Goofy "Donald Goofy!, Good to see you!" said Sora "It's been a long time" said Donald, "over a year" "Yeah, so how are you guys?" asked Kairi "Good" they both replied "Donald, Goofy, can you lead us to King Mickey?" Riku asked "Sure!" said both of them Sora Riku and Kairi followed them to King Mickey's throne. When they reached his throne, Sora talked first. "Your Majesty, it's good to see you again!" "Good to see all of you guys" "Your Majesty, do you have a plan in mind?" "Yeah" "OK, so these are the people who you need to save, Terra, Aqua, Ven, Xion, and Roxas" Mickey explained who they all were. "You must greet them all." "OK, I'll get out Roxas." Sora calls Roxas out. "Hey Sora" "Hey Roxas" said all of them. "OK, so I was planning to split all of you up." "Wait, I want Kairi to feel protected so, can she go with Riku" "Sure, as long as that's OK with Riku, is it OK Riku?" asked King Mickey "Yeah, in fact we should all just go together" "OK" said Mickey "We should save Aqua first, then Terra, then Ven, and finally Xion." said Kairi "Good idea Kairi." said Mickey, "in fact I'll come with you guys" "OK" said Riku "Bye Your Majesty, Sora, Roxas, Riku, and Kairi" said both Donald and Goofy. They all left to search for Aqua. When Donald and Goofy finally left a person with a black coat appeared out of a wall. "Fools! They think they can save us but they can't! In fact, I shall laugh! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA End of Chapter 2 Wow that took me long to brain storm! Anyways, who was laughing? It was one of the people they had to save for sure! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Preview:The person who was laughing will be revealed and we find out that the person is not alone. Who is it????????? If you want to find out, keep on reading! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 23, 2010 Thar last part reminds me of a certain parody story. Ah well, excellent job:)! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 @emo/yami nice new user name and also thanks for the compliment! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 23, 2010 thank you and your welcome! Your doing well, keep up the good work. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Before we start Chapter 3, I must make a note to everyone so that they won't be surprised. The main character will be the hooded figure instead of Sora, Roxas, Riku, Kairi, and Mickey. Now, I shall start the next chapter before I spoil too much for you all! Chapter 3: The hooded figure returned from Disney Castle to a place of what seemed to be The World That Never Was. When the hooded figure came back to what appeared to be The Round Room, another hooded figure approached it. "Master Xion, are we ready to begin the meeting?" asked the figure that approached it. The hooded figure took off it's hood. It was Xion! But instead of having her old blue eyes, she had yellow evil eyes! "Yes Aeleus, have you gathered all the other members?" "Yes, I gathered Dilan, Even, Ienzo, Ansem, Isa, Lea, and Vanitas" Xion sat in what was once where Xemnas sat. Dilan sat in Xaldin's seat, his nobody. Aeleus sat in his nobody's Lexeaus seat. Ienzo sat in his nobody's Zexion seat. Isa sat in what was once Larxene's seat. Lea sat in his nobody's seat, Axel. Even sat in his nobody, Vexen's seat. Ansem sat in what was once Xigbar's seat. And Vanitas sat in what was once Saix's seat. They all were 10 years older since their last appearance, except for Vanitas since Ven didn't age and he is the darkness of Ven. They all had yellow evil eyes. "We shall start the organization over again. As you all know, they must save Me, Roxas, Ven, Terra, and Aqua. So we have 9 members including myself. So, I shall start a plan. I shall go with Dilan to The Dark Realm find Aqua, Xehanort and Lea shall go to Castle Oblivion to find Ven, Vanitas, Aeleus, and Ienzo shall go to Keyblade Graveyard to find Terra, and Isa and Even shall go follow Sora to find Roxas." "ITS ANSEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" exclaimed Xehanort "Do you think that I give a garbage???????????" asked Xion Xion and Xehanort quarral a lot. "No, but" said Xehanort "Good then shut up!" interrupted Xion Finally, they all transported to the places where they had to go. Even and Isa decided to go with Vanitas, Ienzo, and Aeleus because they didn't know where to go. End of Chapter 3: I don't know if u were surprised by this but yes the person who was laughing was Xion. And also if this sounds somewhat familliar to you all, this comes from the April Fool's Joke that rho made with Kingdom Hearts 3. Even though it was fake, I thought it was very creative. rho's April Fool's Joke gave me a great idea on a story which is this one. Anyways, Chapter 4 will be on soon today. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Preview: Sora Riku Kairi, Roxas and Mickey run into Aqua or did Dilan and Xion find her first? Aqua might mistake somebody for somebody else. One of them shall be tempted by the darkness. Want to find out what happens? Continue reading then :shy: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VENROXAS 152 Posted May 23, 2010 Wow the story is pretty good so far keep it up. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted May 23, 2010 This is AMAZINGLY awesome!!! I'm loving it so far!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Chapter 4: Sora Riku, Kairi, Mickey, and Roxas had this device that let them track down anything in the world. So they typed in Aqua and they found out that she was in The Dark Realm. They used Mickey's star fragment to teleport to The Dark Realm. When they thought that the coast was clear, Dilan and Xion appeared. "Hello Sora, I will enjoy terminating you today and your friends and that traitor Roxas." said Dilan "Who are you???" asked Riku "I'm Dilan the somebody of Xaldin" "THE SOMEBODY OF XALDIN?????????????" asked Sora "Yes and to make sure my plan suceeds, I have an aquaintance." Xion appears. When Xion appeared, Sora, Riku, and Roxas thought she looked somewhat familliar... "You must be Sora" said Xion "Who are you?" Sora asked "HAHAHAHA if you think I'll just spill the beans of who I am, then you are stupider than you look" said Xion "SHUT UP" said Kairi "NO ONE TALKS TO HIM LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "Ahhhhhhhh you must be Kairi, that girl" said Xion All of the sudden, Xion turned into what appeared to be her final form when she faced Roxas. Then all of the sudden, she dissapeared. While she dissapeared, Riku was thinking. Where has he seen her before. He could've sworn that she looked familiar from somewhere. All of the sudden, Xion attacks Riku from behind and kills him! "RIKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" all of them shouted "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, that was only part one of my plan, now it's time to say farewell for now scardey weilders HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" said Xion as they dissapeared to the Round Room along with Dilan Riku was dead, his mouth was open with blood all around him. Meanwhile, Sora was crying. "Hey Sora, don't worry, after we find his nobody we'll get him back." said Kairi "Sora, we'll find a way to beat his nobody and then get his heart." said Roxas. "You're right guys" said Sora "Let's go and find Aqua" They walked a couple of miles until they found this women with blue hair. Aqua noticed them, but she noticed Sora in paticular. "VANITAS YOU ARE GOING TO DIE FOR WHAT YOU DID TO ME TERRA, AND VEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She took out Eraqus' keyblade and started attacking Sora. All Sora could do was defend himself with his Oblivion keyblade. A hooded figure came back. Sora...... I remember you......... from Nobody's place... Aqua.... This is Sora. "That's Sora?" She then looked at him closer. She realized that he looked some what similar to Vanitas, but Vanitas had black hair and Sora had brown hair, Vanitas also had yellow eyes but Sora had blue eyes. "Forgive me Sora, I'm Aqua" "Good to see you again Aqua!" said Mickey "Mickey! You were from 10 years ago, good to see you too." "Hey Aqua" said Kairi "Hey I remember you, didn't I meet you 10 years ago" "Ummm I don't remember, I was only 5" But then, Aqua had her attention on another person. "VEN!!!!!!!!!!!!" she said to Roxas as he hugged him "Aqua, that's Roxas" "OHHHHHHHH, sorry" "Its ok" Roxas said "Anyways Aqua, we need you to get back to Master Yen Sid's Tower, I'll teleport you" Mickey said "OK" she said And Mickey teleported her. End of Chapter 4: That was a long chapter it took me an hour to think. Anyways, Chapter 5 will probably be on later today Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 This is AMAZINGLY awesome!!! I'm loving it so far!! thank u 4 the compliment Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paopufruity 122 Posted May 23, 2010 I was laughing when Aqua hugged Roxas!! And I wasn't expecting an evil Xion. This is really good. I'm looking forward the next chapter! And I like the device that can track down anyone. I actually used something similar in one of my stories that I haven't posted yet. It was to track down any world! Haha what a coincidence! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 23, 2010 Preview: Sora Kairi, King Mickey and Roxas go to the Keyblade Graveyard to only be encountered by Aeleus Vanitas, Isa, Even, and Ienzo. Will Sora be so enraged that he will give in to the darkness. Keep on reading if you want to find out! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
