Sarrin 100 Posted May 19, 2010 The young mans mind wandered as he thought to himself, I saw it... I was there when it happened... It's the only thing I can remember, but it's the only thing I wish I could forget... I saw Kia kill them... I saw her slaughter all of them..., As the man sat there, in a pool of blood surrounded by lifeless corpses, he relived the entire scenario in his head... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted May 19, 2010 Can't wait to read the 1st chapter, this promise a for your new story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted May 24, 2010 Prelude: The Beginning of The End Alex sat at his desk trying to stay awake before classes begun, but it was proving difficult to keep his eyes open. He looked at the clock, "7:20..." he mumbled to himself. He tilted his head back and stared at the florescent lighted ceiling, and sighed, "What Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted May 25, 2010 Intriguing, I'm loving this story as much as the others. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted May 31, 2010 Once again, your intro is great and after reading only the first chapter I'm already curious. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted June 8, 2010 Due to graphic nature this passage it has been hidden. The contents may contain; descriptions involving nudity, vulgar language, gory details, along with many other things someone may find offensive. My intentions are not to upset anyone and I will consent to removing these contents if it is asked or required of me. Chapter I- The End Alex laid there in the pool of blood, which by now was also his own. Kia loomed over him, still grasping the desk leg protruding out of his head. She started pulling it out, and Alex shuddered from the searing pain. She removed it and plunged it into his chest, piercing his heart. She removed it again and plunged it into his stomach. She repeated this process, stabbing his torso over and over again. Eventually he could no longer feel anything, except for a slight vibration each time he was stabbed. He looked dead, he felt dead, and for all intent purposes he was dead. Upon seeing the gaping holes in his chest in stomach he realized he was no longer feeling any pain. Kia had disappeared, and so had everything else. All that remained was Alex and the pool of dark red fluid surrounding him. What Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted June 8, 2010 I liked this chapter, now I'm curious about the next one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted June 19, 2010 unfortunantly i will not be posting anymore chapters after attempting to post chapters 2 trough 5 i was imediatly requested to remove these contents and i did so im sorry to inform you of this but that is how it is Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Godot 513 Posted June 19, 2010 I really like it~! 8D *horror novel whore* You could try posting on another site (like FictionPress or deviantART), and then linking to it here. ;D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted June 21, 2010 What a pitty:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites