Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 10, 2010 A story I am writing now. This story may be bad but I have intentions to fix it up anyway, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5958415/1/The_Return Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora shadow 0 Posted May 10, 2010 I think it is a great beginning. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted May 13, 2010 My latest story. A Xion x Oc fanfic ---------------------------------------------------------------- Name: Vaxin (Nobody) Somebody: Avin Rank: No. 15 Title: "The Dark Soldier" Appearance: Hair is similar to Cloud's from KHII except black. Vaxin has a scar going diagonally from his right eyebrow to his forehead. Yellow eyes. And a gray necklace with the Nobody symbol as a pendant. Occupation: Vexen's apprentice in the scientific arts. Primary job is Heartless removal with Axel, Roxas, and Xion. Limit Break: Eternal Darkness/ Fires multiple dark spheres that begin to consume the target(s) and expand, draining them of their life until they are completely consumed. Element: Dark Controls: special Nobodies called Soldiers that are covered in armor and carry straight swords and attack all enemies on sight. Nickname: Shadow Personality/Relationships: Quite most of the time, except for when talking to Marluxia or Larxene. Vaxin gets along with Axel, Roxas, and Xion very well. Wishes he could spend more time with Xion alone. Vaxin for some reason hates Xemnas and Saix. He gets along with all other members of Organization XIII. Weapon: A sword covered in Darkness that holds the power of the Keyblade. The sword is called Dark Revelation ------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1: New Member I have no real emotions. I cannot feel anything, for I have no heart. That's what Saix told me after another mission by myself to exterminate Twilight Town of a giant Heartless. I still don't know why I asked that idiot anyway. He's always treating me like I'm just some pathetic little kid. Whatever, as long as he doesn't take as far as Xigbar does and call me "runt" or squirt" I'll be alright. Anyways, Axel told me to go to the Round Room, something about an exclusive meeting for those who have gone to Castle Oblivion and actually could stand up there (unlike Roxas, who passed out as soon as he stepped inside). I guess its time for my official initiation. When I walked inside the Round Room everyone was sitting in their chairs, placed with the number of the member in mind. I cursed aloud, finally realizing something. They all survived the trip to Castle Oblivion! "Today, comrades, we celebrate the day that a new member has been chosen to wear the coat. Please welcome, No. XV, Vaxin." Soon all of the members in the room clapped loudly. I looked at Xion, No. XIV and she looked back at me in surprise. Roxas, No. XIII, noticed Xion and I and tugged on Xion's sleeves to see if she was alright, I think. Xion's snapped back to reality and teleported away using a dark corridor. Roxas did the same and I did as well. This was going to be interesting. The strange thing was, technically Xion is No. XV since I joined the Organization after Roxas. I guess it makes since though that I am No. XV kind of since No one but numbers I-XII knew of my existence until now. I wonder why Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 31, 2010 Really interesting story plz keep on writing :D [/size] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted June 1, 2010 Chapter 2: Light vs. Dark Roxas dashed towards me and swung his Keyblade at my face and I blocked with my sword. I jumped in the air, did a half flip, and lunged straight down. Roxas jumped back and rushed towards me with the stinger technique. I rolled out of the way and hit him in the air. He blocked and jumped down off the ceiling. I jumped up towards him and we both attacked, our swords being locked. "C'mon, that can't be the best you can do." Roxas said as we broke off of each other. "I expected more from the Keyblade Master myself." I touched the ground and dashed at full speed towards the grounded Roxas. He mimicked my movements and we both stroke at the same time, the impact causing us to float in the air for a second. Then Roxas and I attacked each other rapidly, our weapons clashing loudly with power. Klink! Clash! Klink! We fought using our full strength. I felt my sword hit Roxas' shoulder and his Keyblade cut my left cheek. Our attacks were in-sync. It was like we knew what the other was going to do and just matched. Someone had to break the vicious cycle. So I did. Roxas swung towards my leg and I blocked, flipped his Keyblade in the air, and spun around and slice him in his stomach. Roxas slammed into the wall and a small amount of blood came out his mouth, resting on his lip. I walked towards Roxas, ready to end our duel, when he stood up and yelled. Light radiated from his body and his Keyblade turned into a blade of light itself. Roxas swung his Keyblade fast and strong, barely giving me time to block and dodge. My body was being hit hard and I could hardly make out Roxas' movements. I back flipped away and he used the last part of his Limit, rays of light spun around him and then spread out. These were pretty easy to dodge, and the amount of energy required for this attack left Roxas wide open. I sprinted towards Roxas and hit him, full on, in the stomach with my left hand and slashed his face with my sword furiously. Then I saw a flash and next thing I knew I was in the air! "What the hell?" I said as I tried to recover. Roxas then jumped in the air really fast and slashed at me so quickly, it all felt like one big strike. I fell to the ground hard and knew I was in pretty bad shape. "Dammit, I let my guard down." I said quietly to myself as I prepared myself as I prepared to do my Final Limit. I focused all of my energy on the Key of Destiny and dark spheres appeared and clung to Roxas. Roxas was getting weaker and the spheres were getting larger, stealing his strength. As my Limit reached its finale stage, I saw Roxas appeared to be staring off into the distance. Suddenly I head a crash from the glass surrounding the arena and a blur of black and red swooped down and landed in front of Roxas. It was Axel. Axel destroyed all of the dark spheres and tried not to hurt Roxas himself, and then Axel threw his chakrams at me to break my concentration. I took the bait and jumped out of the way. Roxas fell to the floor, barely conscious. "Roxas? Roxas, are you alright?" Roxas barely moved. My Limit nearly killed him. "Ax-Axel? I can't Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted June 1, 2010 I'm interested in the story, keep writing. :D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted June 2, 2010 I'm hooked with this story! PLZ continue writing :D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
