theneloyd 6 Posted July 31, 2013 (edited) This is a fan-comic about KH that I startet recently. Basically are the random and crazy adventures of the organizaton XIII, If you allow me I will edit this post always I finish a new page. If im doing something bad or you (the moderators) dont want me to do this please let me know and I'll erase this post. Now lets beggin ATENTION: there only are three pages at the moment, as i said i will add more when i finish more pages Chapter 1: The Heart's Taste Edited August 1, 2013 by theneloyd 2 Pretium and Shard the Gentleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted July 31, 2013 Awesomee!! I love it hahahahahah but you have some spelling mistakes. Other than that its great:) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
theneloyd 6 Posted July 31, 2013 Awesomee!! I love it hahahahahah but you have some spelling mistakes. Other than that its great:) Can you tell me which are the more severe mistakes please? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taeyeon 1,137 Posted July 31, 2013 Cool, loving the expressions. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jiraiya's Disciple 631 Posted July 31, 2013 Lol that was great Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pretium 234 Posted July 31, 2013 Awesome!! Can't Wait To See More!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 1, 2013 Can you tell me which are the more severe mistakes please?Happiness is with i and not with y! other than that its great! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
