Text (Rated T) Sora's High School Adventure

[Toby 50]

Hey guys! I wanted to write a funny fanfic (Never wrote one before but I read a plenty of them) about Sora

and here it is. For now, I only have the intro, but I'll work on the fic later. The fic will be rated T for swearing (Will update if I get any other ideas).

I will update the chapters in this post and I will make new posts to notify of new chapters. Make sure to support by liking this post. By doing that, I'll know if people are interested or not and whether or not I should continue working on the fic  :lol: Make sure to post and share what you think of my fic, too!  ^_^

 

One day, Sora was defeating Heartless in Radiant Garden, when Leon spoke to him

about an experiment that Cid was working on. Leon brought him to the computer where Cid was,

and that's where Sora's new adventure started..

 

 

Chapter 1 - Cid's Mysterious Surprise

 

"Fire!". The Shadows that were surrounding Sora and his 2 companions Donald and Goofy were immediately blown away by the impact of his Firaga spell.

"No more Heartless? Heh, it gets easier every time, doesn't it, Donald and Goofy?"

Donald nodded triumphantly. "I'm still better at magic than you, Sora! You still have lots to learn!" The trio laughed, and after they stopped, Sora went into his trademark hands behind his head position like he usually does. "To be honest, I'm getting kinda bored of defeating Heartless all the time. All the other worlds that we sealed are safe, but Radiant Garden still has Heartless."

However, Goofy remembered that Radiant Garden has a defense system. "Well, Sora, you could just leave these Heartless to the Claymores, then you won't have to do anything and we can revisit worlds with the Gummi Ship, hyuck!"

Sora thought about that for a second, lowering his arms again, wondering what would be a nice world to go to.... "..Hey, do you think it's possible for all 3 of us to visit Pooh, or am I the only one that can jump in the book?".

"Let's ask Merlin!", Donald suggested. He thought about how it would be like to jump in the book. After all, he and Goofy never got the chance to see the Hundred Acre Wood. Sora and Goofy agreed with Donald, and the trio was about to walk to Merlin's house when Leon approached them. "Sora.", he said. The trio noticed him and turned around. "Hey, Leon! We were just about to visit Merlin, how are Yuffie and Aerith doing?". "They're fine." he said. "I have something to tell you, though. It's a message from Cid. He wanted me to tell you that you should hurry to the computer as soon as you could for a surprise." The trio looked at each other with curious faces. Judging by their faces, Leon knew they were curious and that they wanted to know what the surprise is. "It doesn't involve Heartless, though. I hope that doesn't make you any less curious." Sora returned to his trademark position and shaked his head. "Actually, we were just looking for something to do since we got bored of defeating them, so it's good timing that you tell us now." Leon smirked, and turned around. "That's convenient, Sora. Make sure to thank Cid in that case, since he's ridding you of your boredom. At least, I think so, since he was very.. excited about his surprise. You see, it's a new experiment that he started, and he finished it pretty quickly. Now, come on, follow me. We're going to the computer." The trio had all kinds of questions and were making up lots of possibilities in their heads. What could Cid be preparing for them? Will it be even more interesting than Pooh's world? Why does Cid suddenly plan to surprise them? While they were thinking about the possibilities and following Leon, they already reached Ansem's Study where the computer was located. None of them knew that this would turn out to be a unique and strange kind of adventure...

Edited June 17, 2013 by Toby

[Toby 50]

Chapter 1 has been added!

Edited June 17, 2013 by Toby

[Keyblader_95 1,410]

Nice work, keep writing dude I'm curious ;D Good luck for the continuation!  

[Toby 50]

Nice work, keep writing dude I'm curious ;D Good luck for the continuation!

Thank you This is the first time I wrote a fanfic so I'm glad you liked it

[Keyblader_95 1,410]

Thank you This is the first time I wrote a fanfic so I'm glad you liked it

You're going just fine, keep doing the things you wanna do

[Toby 50]

You're going just fine, keep doing the things you wanna do

Alright! Thanks a lot

[Keyblader_95 1,410]

Alright! Thanks a lot

Dw

[Toby 50]

Dw

You mean yw

[Keyblader_95 1,410]

You mean yw

Dw = Don't worry

[Toby 50]

Dw = Don't worry

I know but that seems kinda unfitting Your welcome sounds.. better. Don't worry just sounds.. weird for some reason, lol, since there isn't any worrying Anyway, let's stop flooding the topic, shall we? I hope I can get more chapters done later.

[Keyblader_95 1,410]

I know but that seems kinda unfitting Your welcome sounds.. better. Don't worry just sounds.. weird for some reason, lol, since there isn't any worrying Anyway, let's stop flooding the topic, shall we? I hope I can get more chapters done later.

Haha sure, good luck

[Toby 50]

Nice work, keep writing dude I'm curious ;D Good luck for the continuation!

I really don't know if I want to continue writing chapters. While other topics are being posted on frequently, mine is being completely neglected..

I guess my story is terrible and no one except 2 people like it. If that's the case, I should just stop then. There's no point in continuing if it gets about a 100 views

but no one even posts or likes the topic.

[EternalReckoning 1,135]

I really don't know if I want to continue writing chapters. While other topics are being posted on frequently, mine is being completely neglected..

I guess my story is terrible and no one except 2 people like it. If that's the case, I should just stop then. There's no point in continuing if it gets about a 100 views

but no one even posts or likes the topic.

a true writer doesnt give up until hes finished, your story is compelling and fairly original so far keep it up

[WolfTheDemon 414]

I really don't know if I want to continue writing chapters. While other topics are being posted on frequently, mine is being completely neglected..

I guess my story is terrible and no one except 2 people like it. If that's the case, I should just stop then. There's no point in continuing if it gets about a 100 views

but no one even posts or likes the topic.

 

I think you should continue. This story is very interesting, and I would love to see new chapters. ^_^ Trust me, I thought my stories would get low views and rates, but it takes some time. And soon, more people will like it. I'm one.

[Toby 50]

I think you should continue. This story is very interesting, and I would love to see new chapters. ^_^ Trust me, I thought my stories would get low views and rates, but it takes some time. And soon, more people will like it. I'm one.

I'm not so sure anymore..

 

a true writer doesnt give up until hes finished, your story is compelling and fairly original so far keep it up

I'm not exactly a true writer.. I mean, thanks for the compliment, but.. I don't know. If more than 100 people check the topic and not even bother to like or post, then that seems like people don't like it at all.

[Grotesquery 603]

I'm not so sure anymore..

 

I'm not exactly a true writer.. I mean, thanks for the compliment, but.. I don't know. If more than 100 people check the topic and not even bother to like or post, then that seems like people don't like it at all.

You need to start asking yourself why you're writing this in the first place. If you're doing it to just to please others or earn their approval, then you're doing it for the wrong reasons. Because no matter what you do, you'll eventually start losing motivation. Instead of simply growing complacent with what people do or don't say about your story, ask them to criticize it. If you want to make your story the best that it could be, then find out what people see wrong with it and strive to improve those factors.

 

Don't just give up; trust me, we all have moments when we lose motivation for one reason or the other. Try to find that reason, and ask yourself why you feel that way.

[Toby 50]

You need to start asking yourself why you're writing this in the first place. If you're doing it to just to please others or earn their approval, then you're doing it for the wrong reasons. Because no matter what you do, you'll eventually start losing motivation. Instead of simply growing complacent with what people do or don't say about your story, ask them to criticize it. If you want to make your story the best that it could be, then find out what people see wrong with it and strive to improve those factors.

 

Don't just give up; trust me, we all have moments when we lose motivation for one reason or the other. Try to find that reason, and ask yourself why you feel that way.

I did try to find out what they see wrong with it, right at the end of my introduction at the top. It says that I want people to post and share what they think of it. It's just.. If I write a story, there are 2 reasons why. 1. I'm pretty creative and I like letting out my creativeness and 2. I also want support from people, because that motivates me. However, I'm not getting much support at all. I'm okay with people not liking it, but they could at least post and notify me of things that I should do better. I want to continue this, however, and it's vacation.. So... Expect a new chapter soon. In fact, I just changed my mind. I'll continue making them. So, people, please give feedback if you want to check this fanfic out. Even bad feedback motivates me more than no feedback at all. Please, people. The more motivated I am, the more creative I am and the sooner you get chapters.

Edit: Crud, I broke my promise.. Well, it's vacation, so I'll see when I'll make a new chapter.

Edited July 9, 2013 by Toby