Sarrin 100 Posted April 20, 2010 Introduction: The world of Nabalia is boundless and full of secrets. Kingdom Hearts is a realm of unimaginable power. The Keyblade is a weapon created to protect this terrible power. The Heartless seek hearts to gain power, and the Nobodies seek to regain the hearts they've lost. An orphan boy holds the key that will determine the salvation or destruction of the world. Everything starts here... The Keyblades are making their move, and Kingdom Hearts has slept long enough Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted April 20, 2010 Good fan-fic intro. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 20, 2010 Thanks i was worried it wouldnt sound well ill be posting the first two chapters soon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted April 20, 2010 That sounded cool. Makes me want to read more. I haven't met you before, have I? My name is Ven's Roxas but you can also call me Kyoku. Hi! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 20, 2010 Chapter I: Meeting In an abandoned building, within the Sleeping City, two girls waited. The younger girl paced in a circle, while the older one sat upon a stack of crates swinging her feet back and forth. "Ugh! Whats taking him so long?!" the younger girl griped, "He should have been here ages ago!" The older girl hopped off the stack of crates, landing beside her younger companion, "Calm down Ceseal", she spoke soothingly, "I'm sure Riverd will be here soon. We'll just have to be patient." A dark corridor opened on the far side of the room. The man that emerged from darkness appeared as emotionless as a statue. Ceseal ran to him and wrapped her arms around his arm,"Riverd where were you?" she asked gingerly, as if all of her earlier aggravation was wiped away by his very presence. "I told you I'd be here soon", the man replied, "besides you had Elsie with you." He had remained completely emotionless. "Ya but my sister is so-", she was interrupted by him walking away from her embrace, "I'll be starting soon." he had walked past Elsie asking with his expression if she had done as instructed, "The city is clear." she replied on que. Another dark corridor opened a few paces from the group and Riverd had proceeded towards it, with Ceseal quickly behind him, "Riverd, why do they call this place the sleeping city?" He smiled at her question, "Because the sun never rises here." And with that the trio disappeared through the dark corridor and disappeared. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted April 20, 2010 It's really good, you write very well too. We could make a book named KH13's Fanfictions There are a lot of good writers around here. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emo/Yami 37 Posted April 20, 2010 It's really good, you write very well too. We could make a book named KH13's Fanfictions There are a lot of good writers around here. I agree. Very nice Sarrin. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 21, 2010 Chapter II: The boy and the Key With the moon hanging high in the sky, as it always did, the Sleeping City was completely lit and full of life. The teeming city seemed so vast from the apartment balcony, where Alan stood. He watched the city and all the people in it. Alan lived alone and thats how he liked it. No parents, no friends, nothing. Thats how it is when the world sees you as nothing more than orphan, but Alan didn't mind. He didn't care about anyone, not even himself. Time passed and the city grew quite, and Alan could feel an unsettling breeze. Countless balls of lights started to rise from the entire city and filled the air. "Look out!" a voice called out to him, but before he could even find where the voice came from, the balcony collapsed beneath him and he had begun to fall. He landed hard on the rooftop of the nearest building, and pain shot through his entire body. Alan gained his ground and turned around to see his collapsing home being covered by a swarm of black creatures. They're yellow eyes fixated on him, and they leaped towards him in a flurry of darkness. A bright flash of light scattered the creatures away from Alan. He felt a tug on the back of his shirt and realized that he was being carried through the air. The man holding him was jumping from rooftop to rooftop following the orbs of light that were all soaring toward the same direction. Alan watched in awe at the mysterious dark creatures following them, while he was wondering what the heck was going on? The man jumped from one of the rooftops down to the enormous freeway, that ran through the city, and started running at an incredible speed. He was joined by a girl who quickly turned to confront the creatures. She fought with a strange looking weapon, and with each swing the dark creatures dispersed into a cloud of black smoke and vanished into nothingness. "Whoa..." Alan spoke in pure awe , "Don't talk you'll bite your tongue." The man warned him but he didn't really seem to concerned. Alan noticed that he also carried a strange looking weapon, "Noticed it huh?" the man asked in a know-it-all manner. He released him and held the weapon for him to see, "It's called a Keyblade. It allows us to fight the Heartless." "Heartless?" Alan asked. "Those creatures you saw back there. Remember? Geez your dense." "...Keyblade?" Alan was having a hard time processing the information. He kept saying the same things in his head, this isn't real right? this is all just a dream right? this kinda stuff cant happen to someone in real life right? Right? An elderly man was walking towards them, and he was joined by the girl Alan had seen earlier. He noticed Alan and asked the man something with his expression and he shrugged in reply. His voice carried an essence of vast wisdom, "The Keyblade is a weapon of light. It was created in order to destroy all those who dare to defile the sanctity of Kingdom Hearts." The man had walked past him and called upon his own Keyblade, and stared at it with a glimpse of sadness in his eyes. A moments reprieve never lasts long and neither did this one. A horde of Heartless had surround them, and waited to make their move, "Isaac! Mina! Lets be quick about this!" the man ordered. They both nodded in reply and charged at the enemy. "My name is Thomas", the man had introduced himself with a bow, "you need to defend yourself, here take this." He handed him a wooden sword and went to face the horde. Alan was stunned. He didn't know what to do. All of a sudden his home was destroyed by strange creatures called Heartless, balls of light were flying through the air, and now some old man wants him to defend himself with a stick?! This is ridiculous, he thought to himself. A few feet away from him a small Heartless sat glaring at him. Alan was confused, he was frustrated, he was mad. He couldn't understand why, but he felt so angry just looking at the Heartless. Like a fire was burning in his heart, wanting nothing more than to make it disappear! He gripped the sword tightly and charged ahead, the Heartless charged as well. Alan raised his sword and brought it down full swing, feeling it hit its mark. Thomas, Mina, and Isaac witnessed a pillar of light erupt from the ground, and expand over the entire horde, blinding everything in sight with its radiance. ill be adding a synopsis to describe character appearances and other things within the next chapter Chapter III: Keyblade The tallest structure in the Sleeping City resembled a mountain made up of skyscrapers. Riverd and the two girls appeared at the highest point of the structure. Elsie starred at the starry sky, captivated by the breathtaking view. Ceseal whistled at the view of the entire city from the rooftops edge, and as for Riverd, he was staring intently at the moon, almost mesmerized by it. He summoned a broad sword like Keyblade covered in wrappings and thrusted it into the roofs surface. "Obelisk! Feast upon the hearts of this lightless city!" Obelisk made a somewhat rumbling sound that made the entire building shiver from the force. A violent violet aura enveloped the Keyblade, and filled the air with an unsettling breeze. Orbs of light rose from the city as it grew quiet. Countless lights. Countless hearts. Riverd, enveloped by the aura, spred his arms wide and basked in the glory of the ritual. "The Heartless are coming..." Ceseal muttered. Elsie looked into the distance and saw the encroaching darkness, "Any Nobodies?" she asked her sister, "Nope. They're to smart to come here." The girls Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted April 21, 2010 Very cool. You're a good writer. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 21, 2010 well now that all of the first three chapters are up id like to hear what you all think about it so far Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soulreaper52 9 Posted April 22, 2010 i think its awesome keep on going and m avorite part is when they start fighting the heartless Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nightwalker 0 Posted April 22, 2010 Awesomeness you're a good writer I'll be waiting for the next chapters Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Auxon 1 Posted April 22, 2010 Jealous :dodgy: Your writing is superior to mine Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 22, 2010 thanks for the support! ill try to have chapter four up as soon as possible the fights are about to began and things are going to get intense! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted April 22, 2010 I loved it!!! This story is unpredictale, has o good description and I'm curios about each one of the charcaters. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kulgris 0 Posted April 22, 2010 nice story! your a good writer cant wait to read more Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 22, 2010 if anyone has any questions id be happy to answer any of them Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VENROXAS 152 Posted April 23, 2010 Your getting me hooked on it and i dont ever really read thanks for the writing keep it up. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted April 26, 2010 Chapter IV: Chosen Alan regained his sense once he had entered the dark realm. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nightwalker 0 Posted April 26, 2010 Still amazing XDD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted April 26, 2010 I love this story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Geralt 4,874 Posted April 26, 2010 Thats cool Sarrin and I also agree with Gizelita Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted May 3, 2010 check out the latest work Kingdom Hearts: Hearts of Dusk Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted May 3, 2010 Soul of The Keyblade is not only a good story, it is also very well written, making us curious about the end. The introductions of both of Sarrin's stories forces us to read, promissing good plots. I'm loving them :P Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted May 4, 2010 chapter five is done and ill be putting it up soon and ill also begin working on the first chapter of Hearts of Dusk as well thanks for all the support Chapter V: Nights End A dark corridor opened on the roof. Riverd took quick notice of this. He pulled Obelisk from the ground and slung it over his shoulder. Alan stepped out of the darkness with the same emotionless expression he had before entering the darkness. He was gazing absently at Riverd, who had turned to face him, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites