Sora and Xigbar posing

[EminaiSai 89]

The details are a little off on their weapons, but I'm still proud of it.

Any suggestions to improve are greatly appreciated.

 

[Ghost 1,857]

It's amazing! The clothes are wonderful in how realistic they are, the legs and shoes are...going to give me an orgasm, and I absolutely love how you drew Sora's hair. The weapons are great, (Xigbar's is perfect), and I love how you drew his profile. The shading is really, really, reaaaaally good and I now want to learn how to shade like this.

 

Excellent work buddy, keep it up. d=(´▽｀)=b

 

**Edit** Oh right, I forgot to give constructive criticism. I'm not a fan of how Sora's mouth looks here, and maybe a little more emotion in his eyes (Xigbar's is good though). But other than that minor detail this is overall a really amazing picture and I see nothing more you need to improve on.

Edited May 21, 2013 by Ducky

[Oishii 3,987]

The only criticism I would give is that Sora's left hand looks strange, both in it's gesture and in proportion to the keyblade.  I think the handle is foreshortened too much, and that hand posture doesn't look like he's holding it.  I would almost like to see how this would look if the blacks of the shadows were as dark as the outline.  It seems kind of odd to me.

 

It's freaking incredible otherwise.  I commend you on drawing the chain.  Drawing a bunch of chain links is a pain

[EminaiSai 89]

The only criticism I would give is that Sora's left hand looks strange, both in it's gesture and in proportion to the keyblade.  I think the handle is foreshortened too much, and that hand posture doesn't look like he's holding it.  I would almost like to see how this would look if the blacks of the shadows were as dark as the outline.  It seems kind of odd to me.

 

It's freaking incredible otherwise.  I commend you on drawing the chain.  Drawing a bunch of chain links is a pain

 

Thanks for the advice! I'm still struggling with hands, so I'll get more reference pictures next time. Also, I'm afraid my pen died so I couldn't ink it as much as I could've. Again, thank you for taking the time to critique.

 

Also, for Ducky, yeah, now that I look at it more, Sora's eyes are little dim. The mouth is a bad habit of mine to put Chesire cat grins on everyone, so I'll watch out for that too. 

Edited May 21, 2013 by EminaiSai

[Britipinojeff 95]

sora's boots are so fabulous lol only problem with it is that the handguard on the keyblade is a little small, otherwise its amazing

[EminaiSai 89]

sora's boots are so fabulous lol only problem with it is that the handguard on the keyblade is a little small, otherwise its amazing

Thanks! I attempted foreshadowing on the hand guard, so it looks wonky. ^^ Gotta keep trying though.

[Ghost 1,857]

I don't care what ya'll say those are some Chun Li legs rig there. Some sexy attractive Chun Li legs. Mmmh

[Weiss 8,279]

By the gods

 

this is amazing

[Daniel Black 1,981]

The details are a little off on their weapons, but I'm still proud of it.

Any suggestions to improve are greatly appreciated.

 

OMFG!!! It´s awesome!! I like the shape and traces. The only detail I see it´s in Sora´s face. Out of it, hell yeah!!

[Britipinojeff 95]

Thanks! I attempted foreshadowing on the hand guard, so it looks wonky. ^^ Gotta keep trying though.

ya i could see that but like if the kingdom key was real then the hand guard would be enormous i made a 4 foot large oathkeeper that was proportional in size to an image in the game that was just enlarged. so the handguard was huge even with foreshadowing the kingdom key is gonna have a huge handguard

[EminaiSai 89]

ya i could see that but like if the kingdom key was real then the hand guard would be enormous i made a 4 foot large oathkeeper that was proportional in size to an image in the game that was just enlarged. so the handguard was huge even with foreshadowing the kingdom key is gonna have a huge handguard

 

Ooooh, okay. Time to practice then!

[Pretium 234]

Yay!! You Finally Posted Again. Awesome Pic!!

Edited May 21, 2013 by Pretium

[Aru Akise 2,540]

Sora looks evil! I loved those boots! Gotta give some ideas for Nomura, his outfits can't be as awesome as yours!

[SoraKH 793]

;o this is a masterpiecee! well done dude! I LOVE IT

just Sora's shoes... when did he change to boots?;p

Edited May 21, 2013 by SoraKH

[Whimsy-Mimsy 99]

This is incredible! The only thing I would maybe, possibly suggest is darkening the edge between Sora and Xigbar. Not quite as much as the outside outline, but just enough so that Sora's hair doesn't get lost in Xigbar's coat. Whether you do this or not, I still love it. Lots.