Kingdom Hearts: Revelations (Redo Sign Ups)

[Javelin434 3,164]

Wow, you did an amazing job of putting everything together. I would love to put in some input, but I'm afraid of being a burden- seeing how far everything's come.

Don't be a pansy. Go ahead and tell me

[Javelin434 3,164]

Update: Character Plot Points Added.  To Oathkeeper136: Oh my god, I'm SO sorry!!! I read the bio for Zion and flipped out and flagged it as possible plot twist so I can look at it in more detail later False Alarm!!!

[Lady Aleister 1,677]

We should give Silver some time. He has life outside of the internet and I believe he has been really busy lately.

 

He shouldn't be kicked off because he didn't look at this because he had to post on the roleplay that had gone ahead two pages from when he last typed or because he was starting to run late for something.

 

I have to go to school soon, and Zephyr knows about my plot twist that will be a surprise.

 

Give us the time that we will have.

[nick11h 63]

-Group confirmed

 

Also, after rereading your post, I've determined it would be much simpler not to list any plot twist at all.

 

The largest thing I might do, as stated before, is turn on some players who thought I was friendly.

Edited March 7, 2013 by nick11h

[Sikota Urinakano 876]

Young Xehanort, Dark Riku, Vanitas

Terranort, Dyme, Reneal

Ansem, Reloud, Malaria

Xemnas, Braig, Isa (Group confirmed by Zephyr_320)

 

Groups are okay with me!

[Zephyr_320 65]

now the only group NOT confirmed is the second one

Terranort, Dyme, and Reneal

[Zephyr_320 65]

This post specifically will be updated as I wrap my head around this... Mash refresh button as needed

 

Red = Trouble points, reason

Blue = People's input, possible problem point/fuzzy details

Green = Clear and Understandable

Bloobie and Redsy is BAD

 

Lights-

Raynd (Zephyr_320)

Rin (Gumi)

Nexomarc (cdgerrity) ***Plot Twist Detected

Zion de Wynter (Oathkeeper136)

Leatus (silver3drago)

Tom (Tom13) ***Plot Twist Detected. Confirmed and Cleared

Yuuka Gainborough (Sodom)

Four (javelin434)

Kelsi (Oathkeeper136)

Lyon Insua (Yuffie Kisaragi) ***Plot Twist Detected

Foreworth Sea (Sora's Baby)  ***Plot Twist Detected. Confirmed and Cleared

 

Darks-

Master Xehanort (Zephyr_320)

Young Xehanort (cdgerrity)

Terranort (rikunobodyxiii)

Ansem (cdgerrity)

Xemnas (Xaldin III)

Dark Riku (Nick11h) ***Plot Twist Detected

Braig (silver3drago) (Threatened to Leave, Changed mind later)

Isa (Xaldin III)

Dyme (Sora's Baby)

Reneal (Yuffie Kisaragi)

Malaria (Xaldin III)

Reloud (cdgerrity)

Vanitas (Zephyr_320)

 

 

Dark Group: (Status: Confirmation in Progress...)

 

Young Xehanort, Dark Riku, Vanitas

 

Terranort, Dyme, Reneal

 

Ansem, Reloud, Malaria

 

Xemnas, Braig, Isa (Group confirmed by Zephyr_320)

 

Neutrals-

Nexus (rikunobodyxiii) ***Plot Twist Detected. Confirmed and Cleared

 

Enemies:

Divided: Created by Nexomarc, defeating them creates Reformed

Reformed: mini-bosses that once defeated will restore part of Nexomarc's heart by removing some darkness. After a certain number defeated, heart is restored (Full light)

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Primary Plot Elements and Points:

Only a few worlds will not be consumed by darkness. Status: Confirmed

 

[*]Destiny Islands

[*]Traverse Town

[*]Twilight Town

​Princesses of Light are gone (Confirmation Needed)

 

Character Plot Points (Noteworthy):

 

Zion de Wynter (Oathkeeper136): As requested, wanted to point out that he can call in a massive light armada of whoop-a55.

 

Four (javelin434): Since Princesses of Light are gone, may bump into other Guardians. If opportunity presents itself to restore Kairi and possibly Sora and Riku, will disappear. (Still iffy on meeting other Guardians though...)

 

Foreworth Sea (Sora's Baby): I'm kind of -must kill Xehanort- so that's about it for me. Also I might 'kill' my character off and make them a Nobody. Also pointed out to taking out Dyme before becoming a Nobody (Confirmation from RP Host Needed)

 

Lyon Insua (Yuffie Kisaragi): May make it a plot point to find true home (Confirmation and Authorization Needed)

 

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Plot Twists: (Linear Story Rectification in Progress...)

 

Nexomarc Story Twist (cdgerrity): Nexomarc "harmonizes" with Syxac (sister, resides within him) to go into the double edge Keyblade and armored arm. After or during a battle with the one member of the thirteen darkness that stole his heart, his sister's body become whole, Nexomarc and sister become people again. Nexomarc is source of all enemies dubbed Divided and Reformed (Confirmed and Clear)

 

Nexomarc Personal Twist: Nexomarc's heart currently has darkness, will become whole light again after defeating certain numbers of Reformed. Nexomarc sister (currently residing in Nexomarc) will use 'Faith' to rebuild her body once Nexomarc heart is restored fully and gets defeated, restoring his original heart, thus bringing back sister and Nexomarc [actual] into existence. (Confirmation Needed)

 

Nexomarc Secondary Twist: (Corrected to Dark Riku as per Nick11 request)

 

Dark Riku Twist (Nick11h) (Reminder: Alignment: Dark): Prefer to pretend that I'm a free copy of the Dark Riku that Ansem made while possessing normal Riku in KH1 - Kind of like the replica in Chain of Memories. I pretend to be light (Normal yellow shirt and blue pants) towards certain players.  I'm going to pick a ton of fights, imitate the good Riku as a form of harassment, and serve as a stepping stone for the heroes of light to defeat and become more powerful. Wants to fight, will use keyblade to release Nexomarc heart. I will, of course, be betraying the light players I buddy up to at some point. (Confirmation Needed)

 

Nexus Twist (rikunobodyxiii): Works for the Organization, then Nexus is gonna switch sides. Still working out how to do that, so I might draw someone else into it. As more about the character is revealed, it'll make more sense. Terranort will actually be quite helpful for the story I want to do. (Confirmed and Cleared)

 

Lyon Twist (Yuffie Kisaragi): Make the world she came from be the darkness itself (Contradiction Detected: Home World identified as Traverse Town, possible that it isn't "Real" home world, may be Essential Plot Point to identify "real" home world). Make her father Xehanort or something controversial like that. Maybe have it so that she was originally born during BBS or the Keyblade War and when Xehanort started to mess with time travel, she was teleported forward in time to Traverse Town. Possible Explaination: Terranort met somebody since he was all mind confused and such then forgot when he became 'Ansem' or what have yeah (Insufficient Explaination)

 

Tom Twist (Tom13): Ventus's brother. When they were born, they were twins, they both needed to be separated, because Ventus' parents only wanted one child, so they gave Tom to someone else to raise, and as the years passed, Tom forgot about Ventus, at age 13, he was starting to experience some flashbacks of Ventus, and at 15, at one final flashback memory, he finally got to see the name of Ventus and his original parents. Near the end he a fight against Vanitas and has a full flashback and he remembers everything (Confirmed and Cleared)

 

Foreworth Sea Twist: Becomes a nobody (Confirmed and Cleared)

 

Zephyr_320: Has plot twist in store, undisclosed. Assuming easy to follow and understand. (Confirmed and Cleared)

 

This is all I got so far...

i confirm Dyme being taken out before Foreworth becomes a nobody

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

now the only group NOT confirmed is the second oneTerranort, Dyme, and Reneal

What can I do to help getting team two up and running?

[Zephyr_320 65]

we just need the three character's players to confirm the status of that group.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Lyon's preferred twist still needs a good explaination, Sora Baby alignment rectified. Still need confirmations

O_o why is it so hard!

i confirm Dyme being taken out before Foreworth becomes a nobody

This and yes I would like Dyme to be in team two.

[Javelin434 3,164]

O_o why is it so hard!

srsly, once the stories are cleared everything will work out.Go through the trouble now, save yourself the headache of going "wait... Wha-?" Later. And to everyone else, quit quoting the list!!!!!! It's unnecessary, just tell me what to correct! OR at least, quote the problem point. Makes it easier

[Sora's Baby 729]

O_o why is it so hard!

This and yes I would like Dyme to be in team two.

 

 

srsly, once the stories are cleared everything will work out.Go through the trouble now, save yourself the headache of going "wait... Wha-?" Later. And to everyone else, quit quoting the list!!!!!! It's unnecessary, just tell me what to correct! OR at least, quote the problem point. Makes it easier

Clear dyme in team two and btw I'd like to kill him off so write that down in the list somewhere.

Edited March 7, 2013 by Sora's Baby

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

we just need the three character's players to confirm the status of that group.

Terranort confirmed.

[Zephyr_320 65]

Clear dyme in team two and btw I'd like to kill him off so write that down in the list somewhere.

writing 'killing off dyme' is unnecessary since all the 13 darkness's will be killed off anyway. Unless said otherwise.

Lyon Twist (Yuffie Kisaragi): Make the world she came from be the darkness itself (Contradiction Detected: Home World identified as Traverse Town, possible that it isn't "Real" home world, may be Essential Plot Point to identify "real" home world). Make her father Xehanort or something controversial like that. Maybe have it so that she was originally born during BBS or the Keyblade War and when Xehanort started to mess with time travel, she was teleported forward in time to Traverse Town. Possible Explaination: Terranort met somebody since he was all mind confused and such then forgot when he became 'Ansem' or what have yeah(Insufficient Explaination)

 

This can be confirmed; the explanation can be explained in the RP

[Javelin434 3,164]

Ok to Rikunobody and Yuffie info. standby...

Rectified:

 

 Lyon Twist (Yuffie Kisaragi): Make the world she came from be the darkness itself (Contradiction Detected: Home World identified as Traverse Town, possible that it isn't "Real" home world, may be Essential Plot Point to identify "real" home world. Cleared Otherwise). Make her father Xehanort or something controversial like that. Maybe have it so that she was originally born during BBS or the Keyblade War and when Xehanort started to mess with time travel, she was teleported forward in time to Traverse Town. Possible Explaination: Terranort met somebody since he was all mind confused and such then forgot when he became 'Ansem' or what have yeah (Insufficient Explaination, but Cleared)

 

Group: Terranort, Dyme, Reneal

Edited March 8, 2013 by Javelin434

[Javelin434 3,164]

Ok, once the people can confirm the twists and groups, we are cleared for go

[Xaldin III 80]

I'm ready to screw everything up! Can Malaria get Castle Oblivion again, or maybe Ansem can get it? I believe Malaria can serve the plot as a selfish traitor again, but be caught in a steadily losing fight against those who know of his treachery and the Lights.

[Javelin434 3,164]

I'm ready to screw everything up! Can Malaria get Castle Oblivion again, or maybe Ansem can get it? I believe Malaria can serve the plot as a selfish traitor again, but be caught in a steadily losing fight against those who know of his treachery and the Lights.

Hahahaha This can be integrated seamlessly into the plot summary. You'll only screw it up if you go somewhere along the lines of: "I am your FATHER!!! To ALL of you!!! And the girl you like? She's your twice removed uncle auntie's sister's COUSIN!!! Mwhahaha!!!!! And about [the other] HER???? She's your sister....

[Xaldin III 80]

Hahahaha This can be integrated seamlessly into the plot summary. You'll only screw it up if you go somewhere along the lines of: "I am your FATHER!!! To ALL of you!!! And the girl you like? She's your twice removed uncle auntie's sister's COUSIN!!! Mwhahaha!!!!! And about [the other] HER???? She's your sister....

Oh man, thats a great idea! Marluxia was really a girl, and future Sora got it pregnant with every single character in this RP.

 

 

 

Even old Master Xehanort.

[Javelin434 3,164]

Oh man, thats a great idea! Marluxia was really a girl, and future Sora got it pregnant with every single character in this RP.

 

 

 

Even old Master Xehanort.

But Sora is with Kairi!!!! Unless... he was a PLAYA!!!

Edited March 8, 2013 by Javelin434

[Zephyr_320 65]

sorry Xaldin, Castle Oblivion was turned back into the Land of Departure

[Xaldin III 80]

Aw, okay. Can Malaria still be a traitor?

[Sora's Baby 729]

sorry Xaldin, Castle Oblivion was turned back into the Land of Departure

Really,epic!

[Zephyr_320 65]

Yes of course it's really only his nature lol but anywho guys... i am starting the RP

[Xaldin III 80]

Yes of course it's really only his nature lol but anywho guys... i am starting the RP

Gotcha. ^~^