MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 10, 2013 Sora....Sora! Are you really...? Let me in,tell me what you're thinking!! I don't get people.... YOU HAVE 13 DAYS Fail..... And face Non-Existence This is the intro to my new story!!! Sora is teamed up with Neku for 13 days in order live again,but is it all even real? Sora: Huh? Where am I? Neku: Stop standing there and move!! Sora: *summons keyblade* Neku:Let's go! Theme song~ 1 Rayo_Rojo reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Firaga 5,947 Posted February 10, 2013 Oh goody, a crossover. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 10, 2013 (edited) *Prolouge* ...And there Riku was, No where to run,no where to hide,no friends at his side. Joshua: Any last words Riku? Riku:....Who are you? Joshua: An angel. *bang* Edited February 15, 2013 by hawk I fixed it a bit that it's more readable Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 15, 2013 (edited) Day 1: Sorrow... *Sora wakes up in Traverse Town* Sora: Riku.....Why?..... Neku: Sora? Sora: What are you doing here? Neku:.... Sora: Oh, I see... Neku: Why are YOU here? Sora: Riku was killed...So i'm gonna bring him back! No matter how many times it takes!!! Neku: Hehe...Sora,make a pact with me. Sora: How? *pact sequence* Neku: There. Now let's beat Noise! Sora:How? Neku:Scan with your Player Pin.Focus. *Sora scans,battle* Sora: Isn't there a mission or something? Neku: Yeah,check your phone. Sora: "Defeat the Noise at the Third District. You have 12 minutes. Fail and face non-existence." Okay then, let's go--AGH!!! Neku: Ngh...There's the time limit. *They run to the Second district and meet...* Neku: Joshua! How could you! Joshua:.....*points gun* Don't you have something to do? (Meanwhile) Riku: Why?......Why?......Sora....Kairi...I'm sorry...*Riku sees Sora* Sora! *runs* Joshua:*shoots* Riku: Huh? *dodges* WHOA!! Joshua: Hmm...Things just might get interseting...*flies off* Chapter closed What do you think? Edited February 15, 2013 by hawk It's more readable in that way. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted February 15, 2013 Even though I don't know the whole storyline of TWEWY, this cross story sure sounds interesting. I can't say anything for now since it's so short, maybe if you post more I'll be able to tell more about what I think. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 16, 2013 (edited) Chapter 2: Confusion Sora: Well that happened...Wait! How am in the First District!? Neku: The mission was completed by other players. Sora: That can happen!? Neku: Yeah,but don't take advantage of it. Sora: Ok,is the mission here? Neku: No,not--Oh,never mind... Sora: What does it say? Neku: "Defeat the noise at the Second District". Seems too easy... Sora: Let's go! *runs off* Neku: Sora! *sees Noise symbol under Sora* Watch out! *pushes, erased* Sora(on ground): Neku.....why did you...? Neku: Ngh....I'll protect my friends...no matter what.... Shiki: I'm surprised to hear you talk like this,Neku. Neku: Shiki? No....Josh--*erased* Sora: Agh!! *flashback* Sora(Joshua): Any last words,Riku? *what am I saying?* Riku:....What are you? Sora(Joshua): An angel.*bang* Riku: No...not like this.... *reality* Shiki:Oh,Sora? Are you starting to see it now? *grows wings.changes back into Joshua* Joshua: "Only by allowing strangers in,can we find new ways to be ourselves". *flies off* Sora: What? (Meanwhile in Shibuya) Neku: ....Why?....WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING!?...Why?....what?.... *Chapter closed* (Unofficial preview) *A man in a black coat walks toward Joshua" ???:Why....? Joshua: Because....something BIG is going to happen... Neku: *grows wings* Sora: Narou Triame(Urano Metria hehe...) *Pronounced: Na-ro-u Tri-a-me (Tri=TREE,short "a" sound) Edited February 18, 2013 by hawk Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 18, 2013 (edited) Chapter 3: DisappearNeku: None of this makes sense! What do you wantme to do!? Joshua: Why are you here? Neku: As if I knew that. Joshua:*gasps* Things really are getting interesting.... (a bright light appears) Sora: I need a partner....but...how do I know who to trust...? Beat:Hey yo, I need I partner! Make a pact with me yo! Sora: Umm...okay...*pact sequence* Beat: Come on! We need to beat the game master! Sora:Already!? Something isn't right here.....I need to be careful...*starts running* Beat:Riku wanted me to tell you something,yo. Sora:Really? What? Beat:"Forgive me." Sora:I wonder why... Beat:Stop,we're here. Sora:Where is he? *A man in a black coat appears,summons keyblade* Sora:What? *summons keyblade* Beat:Here he comes,yo! *they fight,meanwhile* Neku:What was that light...WHAT THE!? Joshua(With wings):Neku,only one of us can leave... Neku:And it'll be me! Joshua:We'll see about that... *sora clashes his keyblade with the mysterious person* (kinda like this ^^^) Sora:Who are you? ???:*pulls off hood* Sora:*gasps* How did you....? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uFKpQcExxC8 Edited February 18, 2013 by MiontheDemon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 23, 2013 Chapter 4: Friendship? Sora:How did you...survive? Neku:Because...i'm(fizz)not(fizz)Neku... Sora:*gasps*Grrr...*slashes*Neku...where are you? Beat:I see the Game Master,yo! Sora:How can you tell? Beat:They have a special pin on them. Sora:*charges with keyblade* Game Master:Time Stop!!! Sora:That voi-- Game Master:*combo attack* Time Return!!! Sora:Huh? AGH!!! Beat:Get ready for a Beat-down!! Game Master:*disappears behind Beat,blasts him* Beat:What?Gah!!! Game Master:How can you forget me Sora? Sora:Ngh...That voice....there's no doubt about it.....Riku!! Riku:Oh,so you've figured it out?What a bore... Sora:Time Stop!!! Riku:Reverse!! Sora:No-- Riku:You fool,nothing can harm me with the Reverse spell.It turns your moves against you.Time Return!!!Sora:That's it!! AAAAHHH!!! *Final Form* Riku:What the!? Sora:Time Stop!!! Riku:Rever-- Sora:No you don't!!!*combo attack*Time Return!! Riku:GAH!!! Sora...Forgive me....*falls,fades away* Sora:*turns to normal* Riku...Forgive me...... Beat:Ngh....*floats up* Looks like i'm going home! Sora,See you soon! Sora:Yeah *tear falls down* See you soon......(cries) Ending 2- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted February 24, 2013 (edited) Preview (chapter 5,future ideas,etc..) Sora:*running* No you don't! Got ya now! Kairi:*summons keyblade* If this how it ends then so be it! Aqua:Ventus! Ven! VEN!! Terra:Riku,*summons keyblade* stop this madness! Joshua:So...this is how it ends.... Neku:Hah...huh...you...had it coming...Shiki... Sora:*throws keyblade,walks off* ???:Does The World Begin or End With Kingdom Hearts....Xehanort? Sora:KAIRI!!!!Kairi:SORA!!!!*clash*Sora: *blood falls* Looks like....you win....Kairi....*fallsKairi:This world....is this real!? Edited February 24, 2013 by MiontheDemon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted February 26, 2013 Seems interesting so far. A bit confusing at parts but an interesting concept. I do think it would be better to describe a bit of the environment to help the reader dive into the world of the story but it's your choice. Anyway, nice job so far. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted March 2, 2013 Seems interesting so far. A bit confusing at parts but an interesting concept. I do think it would be better to describe a bit of the environment to help the reader dive into the world of the story but it's your choice. Anyway, nice job so far. Thank you! I'll try that (could you tell me which parts are confusing so i can clarify them?) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted April 1, 2013 Chapter 5: Return? Riku:Falling....Darkness.....Light....Home....? Kairi:Riku....Is that you? *meanwhile* Sora: *walking slowly* So,back to square one.Huh? What's that light? Ventus:*holds out hand* Need a partner? Sora: I know you...but not your name.. Ventus: It's Ventus. *meanwhile* Aqua:Ventus... *flashback* Aqua: *grabs Ven and starts running* Hurry Ven!Ventus:I'm trying! Terra: *holds out hand* Hurry! Come on! Aqua:*jumps in portal* Ventus! Ventus: Nooo!!! *portal closes* Oh no *unversed attack him* GAH! *flashback over* Aqua:If I only held you closer... Terra:Come on. Let's go... *meanwhile* Sora: Really sounds sad... Ventus:Not really. But it's okay. Sora:Now let's find a way outta here! Ventus:(You've grown,Sora) *meanwhile* Roxas:Ventus....Sora...How...Return? I'll be there. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted April 21, 2013 Chapter 6: 15 minutes...part 1 Sora:Huh? What's this? *stares at portal* Ventus:This looks like....that portal.... Sora:You mean.... Ventus:Yeah.... Aqua:Ventus!! *Ventus turns around,gets hugged by Aqua* Ventus:Aqua? Terra:Finally! Sora:Huh? What's going on? Ventus,who are these guys? Ventus:Terra and Aqua.The two who were in my story. Sora:Oh...Wait a sec-Aqua!? Aqua:Sora? *she walks over to him* Aqua:You've grown. Sora:Hehe,so you've noticed. *flashback* Kairi:Hehe,so you noticed. Okay,we'll finish it together! I'll race you! Sora:What? Riku:Are you kidding? Kairi:Ready? Go! *flashback over* Sora:(Kairi,i'll come home...) *meanwhile* Kairi:So that's what happened...Well,at least you're home. Riku:Yeah...Let's just hope HE can make it home... *back to the plot* Terra:Ready to go? Sora:I have nowhere else to go,sure. *they walk towards the portal when a blast of light closes it* ???:Stop! I'm not letting go so easily! Sora:*looks up* What!? *he sees an orange-haired boy wearing an Organization XIII cloak and holding a keyblade* Neku:*jumps down* Sora....I can't let YOU win.... Sora:Terra,open the portal again...go inside and open it in 15 minutes okay? Terra:Okay,come on guys. *opens portal* Ventus:Be careful... Aqua:Sora.... *they all walk in the portal and it closes* Sora: Neku! I made a promise and I'm gonna keep it! Neku:*points keyblade at Sora* You're not the only one with promises....(Shiki....as soon as i defeat him we'll be together again) Sora:(Kairi...as soon as i defeat him we'll be together again) Neku:*charges at Sora* For Shiki!!! Sora:*charges at Neku* For Kairi!!! Ending 3-- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted April 21, 2013 Chapter 7: 15 minutes later Neku:*falls* Guh! Sora:Hah....ha....Had enough? Neku:You....idiot! *he gets up and charges toward Sora* Sora:huh.....Light Beam! *he points his keyblade at Neku and a light pierces through him* Neku:Gah! *he stops,drops his keyblade and it vanishes* Sora:Sorry...but you made me do this... *portal opens* Terra:Sora? Sora:Yeah...let's go...*he walks in and the portal disappears* *the portal appears in Destiny Islands* Terra:We're here. Sora:*gasps* Home!? Kairi:Sora! *she runs toward him and hugs him* Sora:I made it... Riku:Glad to see you made it. Sora:Hehe... Ventus:Sora.There's someone who wants to see you. Sora:*turns around* Who? *Roxas Xion Namine and Axel(Lea) walk to him* Sora:Guys... Namine:It's good to see you again! Sora:So i won? Riku:Yeah....Beat saved you....it just took a while.. Sora:Oh..well....let's celebrate! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
