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  (Chapter one) The lake.

 

 

 

 

Kaitlyn! Samuel called from the kitchen. Kaitlyn got up opened her curtains and sighed. "Todays going to be a great day." She said as she twirled around her room. She put on a Black button up shirt and her favorite black pants. Kaitlyn! Hurry up, We have to go meet Nadia, Michael and Liza at the lake! Samuel screamed from bottom of the stairs. She rolled her eyes and put on her Leather jacket shielding her Wicka sign. Kaitlyn MacyMarie Mcallister! Come on. Were gonna be late! She grabbed her Daggar and her Blade as she ran down the stairs.

 

 

I'm here happy? She asked complainingly No. Were thirteen minutes late. Samuel said. I could tell he was irritated. We ran out the door and into the woods till we saw them. Nadia! Samuel yelled excitedly. Nadia turned quickly and ran to Samuel incasing him in a back breaking hug.

I walked past them and sat by the lake, Michael walked over and sat by me. What are you doing? He asked Questioningly. I looked at him as his eyes sparkled light blue. I smiled. Nothing. I finally answered Shyly. I had known Michael for Three Years yet I was always nervous around him. He smiled at me and then looked at the lake. I looked at Samuel and Nadia. Cute couple huh? I asked. Michael looked at me and smiled and I smiled back. All of a sudden a five dudes with snipers exited out aiming at us. The one at the head was My friend. I glared at him as i stood. Mark. Me, Samuel and Liza said at the same time. Yes, It's Indeed me. Mark said Innocently. He snapped his fingers and the four Guys behind him aimed at us. I looked at Michael as i mouthed: "Run. Run as fast as you can and don't look back....No matter what."  He looked at me I saw he wanted to cry and so no. But I yelled "Nadia! Grab Michael and Liza till me and Sam come find you guys." I looked at Sam for Support. He nodded and yelled. "Nadia. Please We don't want you to get hurt!" And they took off. Me and Sam took off our blades and Sam pulled out my sniper and threw it to me. He smiled. We started shooting. We took one...three....the fourth one...and then there was Mark he aimed a Ak47 at us. Get down, On the ground Now and drop the guns. He said sternly. I grabbed Sam's hand and looked at him. Then Mark shot Sam in his heart. I screamed. I took out my blade and threw it at mark as it cut his chest open as he fell i looked at sam. Sam! Sam! Don't leave me please... He looked at me. Katy.. He said slowly. He took off his locket. Our mother gave him that before she died in a house fire. Keep this...It will keep you safe..He said breathlessly. Then his head fell to the side. He was gone.....the person that had been not only my brother but my best friend...was gone..

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(Chapter Two) We meet Annabelle

 

I looked at the necklace. I looked back at Sam. I dropped on my knees and held Samuel's hand. Sam! Please! Answer me! I screamed, I shouted, I cried, I wasn't gonna give up. Then Michael and Nadia ran in. W-what happened to Sammy? Nadia asked Shakily. I looked up my eye burning with tears. He is gone. I said Fiercely. I looked at Mark's Lifeless body and rose to my feet. I walked over and examined the body. It's one of marks hired killers. Rage, Anger, Saddness, Depression and Revenge roared inside of me. I walked over and snatched the blade out making the unknown body flip over. I turned as Nadia was looking at Sam. I could tell she was Heart broken. But the saddness in her turned to anger as she stepped up to me. How could you let this happen?! She screamed. How could you let your brother die like this?

All the Emotions in me and she wanted to blame me for my brother's death? No. I am done being stepped on. I looked at her. You think I wanted this to happen to my brother? To my best friend? You are wrong. It's not my fault. I.....I stopped as Michael looked at me Emotionlessly. I don't know about you. But I am going to find Mark and I am going to kill him. Nadia and Michael looked at me as if I was speaking a foreign language. What? I said Fiercly. Michael stepped up beside me. I am going with you. You know. If it's okay with you.

I looked at him, It is okay with me. Nadia looked at us both and stepped on the other side of me, I'm with you. We walked through the forest, through the creek and stopped a mountain when we heard rustling. A girl with blonde hair pulled into a ponytail walked out. State your name. She said sternly. I stepped up. I am Katy Mcallister. Remembering the same girl asked my father the same thing when I was a wee child. The girl walked up to Me and Bowed. Lady Mcallister, It has been Several years. I looked at Nadia and Michael. They looked bewildered.

The girl looked at me. I am Annabelle. Your Half Sister..........

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  (Chapter Three) Nadia Discovers Her Powers.

 

I looked at her. Okay, I'm Being Played..Right? I asked as if she were crazy. Annabelle looked at me. I am the least one to play. She looked at my locket. Did Samuel give you this? She smirked at the name. Sammeh. I miss him, Haven't seen him in....Three months, Two days, Four Hours and......twenty two minutes. She smiled as if satisfied with herself. Nadia got mad and she walked up as me and michael grabbed her. Nadia, Calm down. A voice behind us said. We all turned as just Annabelle smiled weakly. It was Sam but he was glowing. Oh....my....god Annabelle said stunned. Samuel walked up and stood by Annabelle. Nadia got even more angry. She walked up and glared at Annabelle.
I don't like you. she said slowly. Then a strike of lightning struck out of the sky and hit Annabelle. Samuel looked at Nadia. Your power is electricity. Nadia looked at Sam. Sam looked at Annabelle. Are you okay? He asked Caringly. Yeah. She said Blushingly. Making Nadia angrier. She tried to shoot Annabelle with another lighting bolt ,but Samuel put his staff up and the lightning striked me, Knocking me out.

I woke up three hours later, Nadia and Annabelle were fighting while Michael and Samuel were fighting. I stood up and mumbled: Stop.... But no one would listen. Stop. I said a little louder. They still would stop finally i took a deep breath, and yelled "STOP." Then before I knew it, Water rised from the spring flowing through mountain,  Rocks rose from there resting spots, Fire roared from the torches leading up the moutains and The wind blew them all on the ground. Sam and Annabelle looked surprised. Sam stood up and helped Annabelle up.

 Sam Handed me a staff which quickly turned black and roared with blackened fire from the top of it.  Samuel Looked at me again.

You are...The Elemental.....But your strongest one....Is Black flames.... With that he disappeared again leaving a rose at Nadia's feet..

 

I lost him once....Now he was gone...again..How much more would I take?
 

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   (Chapter Four) Up the Mountain.

 

 

Sam! Come back! I screamed. What is a Elemental?! What does the staff do!? Why do you keep leaving!? I looked down at the ground when I heard a gunshot next thing I was down. The last thing I heard was Michael yelling "Katy!" And then I was out. I dreamed about myself, I think it was a Vision dream because I saw me and Michael sitting in a cave which behind it was a waterfall blocking our way out. I was sitting on the other side crying and he was asleep, or dead. I Tried to call his name ,but I couldn't find myself to talk. Then my vision self moved to the waterfall and sat down with a gutair and started playing a familiar. I thought for a minute then I figured out a song Sam used to sing me to sleep with....Iris.  Michael stood up. He walked over to me and sat down and started Singing Iris with me. Then a shooting star went by. He was just about to kiss me when....Nadia pushed me into the water. I sunk then floated up. Are you out of your mind?! I screamed. She sniffled a Laugh. I looked at Michael who glared at Nadia. Very Funny, Nadia. He said Halfheartedly. I couldn't help but laugh. He pulled me out and told me about Mark's Hunters and His police brothers and How Nadia almost fell into a deep hole. I am so glad she didn't. He said Sarcasticly. I looked at him and smiled. Nadia looked at us. I am going to find some food, You two stay here. She said strongly. He looked at me. You've been sleep for about five hours. My eyes widened. Five Hours?! Yeah. He said. I had noticed he was staring at the ground.

Whats wrong? I asked. Nothing....Its just.....Nevermind. Tell me. I pleaded. Nevermind I said. He said more angry then before. Michael, Please tell me. I walked up to him. I said nevermind! He pushed me down I hitting my head on a log. Ow......... Michael looked at me both Angry, Guiltily. I-I'm....I'm Sorry. I got up with tears in my eyes and my head bleeding. I grabbed my staff and ran. I didn't care where I was going but I was getting out of here. Michael ran after me yelling "Katy!" I ran faster and faster till I ran into Annabelle. What are you running from sister? She said grabbing her staff it turning into a sword. I looked at her as I fell back and I got back up and ran till a cave and i jumped through a waterfall in it.....My vision.....

 

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(Chapter Five) Annabelle falls in love with a god.

 

I walked through the cave slowly and saw three wooden log benches and a fire. I sat in a dark corner and noticed the blood coming from my head. I decided I had to make it stop. But I felt sleepy and fell asleep. When I woke up my shirt was torn and the piece that was torn was tied to my head. I looked around and saw Annabelle sitting by the fire. ...What Happened? I asked. I don't know, You tell me. She said sternly. So I told her about The gunshot, The fight with Michael, My head, And how I ended up here. When I finished, Her hair was up in flames. Seriously, Her hair was burning with white flames. I will kill him and bury his body in a pit of tar only to watch it melt to his worthless bones! She screamed. I looked at her wide eyed. She looked at me and looked down. Sorry....She said blushingly. Just then Michael rolled through the waterfall and landed infront of me. Annabelle's eyes raged with fury. She walked over and grabbed him by his collar. How dare you touch my sister?! She screamed causing water to freeze in midair. She picked him up by his neck making him turn blue. I started hurting then cramping when I finally pulled it together I didn't feel like myself. Somehow I stood up. Stop. I said but it didn't sound like me. They both stared at me. I finally looked at myself. My hair was curled. My clothes changed from a Black button up shirt and black pants to a black torn dress with a little fish net going down one side of my leg to my ankle. My eyes went from blue to black. Annabelle dropped Michael and Michael just stared at me. I walked over and helped him up. Annabelle looked me in the eyes. Oh god.... All of a sudden I dropped to the ground and A Teenage Boy walked out of the shadows wearing a black trench coat and black shirt and pants.. Hello Annabelle. He said smoothly pursing his lips. Annabelle just turned away from him. Hello Zakaria. She said coldly. Why must you be so formal, I have known you and your family for over Sixteen Years. He said smiling. Annabelle grinned. She walked over and hugged him as if he was a long lost friend. Katy. This is Zakaria, The god of death. My eyes became wide. Hello, My dear. He said slowly. Annabelle got so nervous she fell through the waterfall. Zakaria jumped through and grabbed her in his arms and brought her back up. He laid her down and stood up his trench coat swaying in the air. Annabelle. Why don't we go into the forest. She looked at him. Okay. She said excitedly. She shot a cold look at Michael. I'll be back for you. She said. They disappeared into a flash of black and white smoke. I looked at Michael and he was still staring at me. I got up and ran out the cave till I ran into Nadia. H-hey....I said. Hey, Whatcha runnin' from? She asked. Nothing. I replied. Stop lying. She said. I know something happened. So i told her about what happened. He is so dead. She dropped everything and walked away me following her. When we found Michael, He had a bullet in his chest. No! I screamed. I got by him. I had lost my brother......I Wasn't gonna lose Michael....

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  (Chapter Six) Most Insane Day Ever.

 

I stared at him. Michael! Michael! I screamed shaking him. I stood up my eyes went red. I looked at him and suddenly knew what to do. I waved my hands and black flames 

circled me. Water. Earth. Air. I called out making the elements circle me. I put my hands on Michael's chest. I give you, Life. He glowed with my power and next thing I knew I was out once again. I woke up and my hair was white, I was in a white silk dress and Michael and Nadia were hovering above me. I got up. Michael looked at me slowly. Katy....You gave yourself to save me. You are Insane, Mental and The most Caring girl ever. He picked me up and swung me around sitting me back on the ground. I looked around. Slowly my hair started fading back to blonde. I turned around and stood up. All of a sudden a Arrow zipped through the air, I pushed Them down. Stay Down. I said softly. I whirled my eyes around and saw where the arrow came from. I stomped my foot and a blast of fire shot where the arrow came from. I heard screaming. Who goes there? I said not sounding as myself. Three guys with snipers walked out. I waved my hands and shouted: Ma'yat! I don't know what that meant but it worked. The guys sunk into the ground. I turned around and heard another scream. Annabelle. It was her screaming. Before anything or anyone could do anything I took off into the trees for her. I followed the scream. Annabelle! Annabelle! I screamed out. I finally saw her. Annabelle. I ran to her and Zak was on the ground bloody. I looked at her. She had tears in her eyes. Help me. She said. She grabbed my hand and together we put our hands on Zak. We give you, Life. He started glowing and stood. Thank you, Katy. He said Slowly. Ahem. Annabelle said squinting at Zak. You too, Anna. He said smiling.  He leaned in and kissed her on the temple. I looked at Nadia. What is today? I asked. Um.....Monday, July 4th. We looked at the sky. I squinted and Fireworks started going off. Suddenly Samuel walked out of the woods. He looked at the fireworks. Hello Zakaria. Sam said coldly. Hello Samuel. Zak said even colder. Samuel Glared at Zak. Whats wrong with you two? Nadia Asked. Sam Sighed. Zakaria, Was in war with me when, He left me and Annabelle in the middle of battle with The Serpent. He Replied angerily. As Annabelle put her hand on his shoulder, Nadia steamed back up. More Fireworks went up and she had a idea. Independence Kiss Time. She said slowly. Everyone grab someone to kiss. She walked up and grabbed Sam and kissed him. I almost threw up. Then Zakaria Kissed Annabelle making her faint. I looked at Michael and kissed him. He looked Surprised. I blushed and walked to Sam. You need to stop leaving me, Dude. I said coldy. The sun went down and we all went back to the cave. Only to find us surrounded. This was never gonna end was it?

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It looks pretty good so far. I think one thing to work on is putting Quotation marks around their speech so the reading flows a bit smoother. Other than that pretty good! Nice job so far! :)

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(Chapter Seven) Zakaria and Samuel Create Godly Indifferences

 

Samuel looked at them. Are you guys going to go or do we have to use force? We are ordered to Kill The girl, And You. But We can't kill a god. They said demonicly. But we can kill her, She might be a goddess, But she doesn't realize it yet. Well her full potential so we can kill her. I looked at Sam. I am a g-goddess?! I asked feeling both scared and Excited. Yes.....He replied slowly. I looked at Michael. He smiled. The guys with guns aimed at Michael. No! I screamed. They shot and I jumped infront the bullet landing in my side. They set off another at me it hitting me in the stomach. No! Samuel and Michael Screamed. They set off another at Sam. I got up and jumped infront getting hit again. Sam waved his hands as did Zak and Anna soon the three guys turned into ice as Sam walked up and did a roundhouse kick and broke them. Then I was out. I dreamed again. I walked out of the cave and through the woods to the top of the mountain in my dream. I saw Annabelle, Sam, Zak and Someone else on four different trees. Cecilia, Gaurd the front. Annabelle said sternly. The unknown girl jumped from the tree and ran to the entrance which was a arch and shouted: May'ona. Making the arch cover with a shield. Then I woke up. I looked around and the only one I saw was Michael. He was watching me. H-hey Michael...I said nervously. Morning. He said.I can't believe you took a bullet for me twice. He said looking to the ground. It was nothing, Michael. Don't even think about it. I said softly.

I have too, Katy. That was the most Epic thing ever. And I really appreciate it. He said smiling. I got up and leaned against the wall. Where is everyone? I asked. Michael picked me up. I will show you. He jumped through the water fall and ran to a clearing. He put me down. I twirled around and all of a sudden Birds and butterflies flew, Flowers grew, and everyone ran out. Happy Birthday, Katy. They screamed. Thanks guys. I said slowly. This is Sweet! I screamed then a dark cloud over came us... Oh come on!

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   (Chapter Eight) Poison Rain 

I looked at the cloud. Zakaria grabbedhis staff from his back. He held it to the sky. No'Tala! He screamed. Nutella? I wondered. The sky just got darker and then started raining. One drop hit my arm and started burning. Poison Rain! Samuel shouted. Run! I wouldn't move. I stared at it. The rain kept burning into my skin. Katy! Michael screamed. But I was zoned out. My eyes turned back to black. Who has cursed they horrid rain here? I asked.Maaaaaark. It screached in the wind. I waved my hands and lightning flashed from the sky then the cloud was gone. Everyone started cheering again. When was it gonna end? I wondered. I was tired of this. I closed my eyes and pictured sacraficing myself to mark. I nodded my head and opened my eyes. I ran into the trees and through the woods. Everyone took off after me. I had remembered a volcano that stayed on the otherside of the mountain. If I could get there I could make The most Glorious sacrafice ever. I ran halfway up the mountain and Annabelle and Sam jumped out. I ran back down and Michael and Nadia jumped out. I tried to run the side of it but Zakaria jumped out and the other side...The girl they told to gaurd the front. Cecilia. She walked up to me put her hand on my temple and I passed out. In my dream I pictured her infront of me. Black hair. Gray robe. Yellow Belt. Purple Eyes. Looked like a M.M.A teacher. I finally woke up but I was sitting on top of the mountain by the arch from my dream. It was about eleven at night. Sam was sitting across from me. Welcome back. He said sarcasticly. Why did you try to run to the Volcano? He asked quickly. Because, I have put you guys through to much. I am going to sacrafice myself and you can't stop me. I had just noticed Michael and Nadia were listening. No. They both said. We forbid it. I rolled my eyes. I didn't ask permission. I said annoyed already. I hated when people tried to forbid me from doing things.I looked at the ground and stood. I waved my hands and air lifted me into the sky. It dropped me and I disappeared into the ground. When I finally stop falling I was on the other side of the mountain. Woah...

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  (Chapter Nine) Breaking news: Crazy girl jumps in Volcano."Woah." I said slowly. I looked around and looked at the volcano. I started climbing. Then I saw Nadia and Sam coming over the mountain's Horizon. I turned back around and started climbing again. "Hurry." I told myself in my head. Sam and Nadia Slid down the mountain on a log. I climbed a little higher. "Come on." I told myself in my mind. I climbed up higher and then I saw Michael. "Katy!" he screamed.I heard the Volcano rumble. "Oh gosh." I whispered. Broken rocks formed on the side of it as it erupted. Lava poured from it. I have a killer idea. I smiled slightly at the idea. Rocks fell as lava rushed torwards me. I jumped on each of the rocks, pushing my way up the lava. I finally came to the last rock lava was almost done. "Oh gosh." I thought. I looked at the lava. I had to take the chance. I took a deep breath. Now she will have to come down. Sam said smirkingly. I looked at the lava and jumped and landed above the lava. "Woah." I said slowly. I was at the top. "We'll never make it." Sam said sadly. "Maybe we can." Nadia said. She waved her hands and lightning struck them. Then It struck behind me and they were there, Behind me. I ran to the edge and remembered. I have my sniper somewhere. I looked around and forgot I dropped it when Sam was supposedly got killed. I closed my eyes and thought about it and it appeared in my hands. I took it and turned on Sam and Nadia. "Sam, Nadia, I wouldn't shoot you. But you are pushing me to it." I said sternly. Sam looked at me with his cold eyes and my sniper flew into the lava. I glared at him and he fell backwards. He came up again with Michael behind him. I frowned. I turned around and jumped. I knew I wasn't gonna make it but I smiled. My family would now be safe...

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(Chapter Ten) Sam, Katy, Who will win?

 

Michael ran up. No! Katy! He screamed. He ran to the edge and Sam grabbed him. Michael. I realize how much you care about, Katy. But, You can't save her. I can't allow it. Michael turned his head and glared at Sam. If you can't save your sister, Thats your problem. But I am going to save her or die trying. He said fiercly and shook Sam away. He then jumped in and grabbed Katy. I got you. He said squinting his eyes to the lava. Then they froze midstream, they were floating. They then landed on the side of the volcano. Are you crazy?! Sam screamed. You put yourself, And others in harm's way because of your stupid stunt. I had enough. I turned to him. You know, Ever since mom died you have been on my case about everything. If I had to I could take care of myself. Without you. I said angrily. He thought about it a minute. Okay. He said.

You think you can go without me. Go ahead. But know, When dad walked out, I was the only thing you had. He said as if he were royalty. I looked at him and he got blasted backwards. I haven't talked to you or depended on you for ten years, I think I have gotten pretty good at it. I said angrily. I turned around and and tried to walk away when he grabbed my arm. Then he whispered: You leave. You won't be alive by morning. They will find you, And I am not gonna help sense you can "be on your own." I looked straight ahead and shook his arm off mine. I turned around and slapped him. Never put you hands on me, Samuel. I screamed and ran down the volcano. As soon as I hit the ground I ran. Then I felt someone beside me. It was Michael. I wasn't mad at him but I wanted to be alone. So I ran faster. So did he then he tackled me to the ground.

I tried to struggle against him but he held me down smiling. I couldn't help but laugh. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see Sam and Nadia talking. I got up grabbed Michael's Hand and ran. I didn't know where I was going. But I didn't stop for anything.....As long as I was with Michael everything was Okay......For Now..

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(Chapter Eleven)  I have a Conversation with a wolf.We ran like a couple of little kids through the woods jumping in trees, Struggling to keep up with eachother. You can't keep up, Kat? Michael said challengingly. I looked at him Smirkingly.Hm..Maybe, Maybe not. I said chuckling under my breath. He looked at me and jumped into the trees. I kept running on the ground. Then I saw a wolf. Oh god!  I said soflty. I slid to a stop. Everything in my mind was telling me to run but something kept me from moving. Michael ran up behind it. Get! He said harshly. The wolf looked at me. As if saying Come to me, child. walked torwards it. No! Michael screamed. But it was to late I was already walking to it.Get on my back, child. We are going on a little journey.It said in my mind. Yes, Sir. I said Blankly. I sat on it's back and suddenly I was gone. Mentally that is. I saw myself standing in damp woods. I walked around. Hello? I called. Hello!? I called once more. Hello, Child. The wolf walked out from between two oak trees. I backed up. Uh........Hi.. I said slowly. I stood.Where are we? I asked slower. We are in...I would say Russia. I twirled quickly. Russia?! I screamed. Send me back! Now! I screamed even louder causing a few birds to fly away. Well. I can't till we talk. He said growling. We talked, Now take me home. I said Aggervatingly. No.We must talk about your future. He said Growling with each word. I know my future, I know I am gonna die in my future. I said softly. They are gonna catch me and kill me...and my family will be safe. I said so softly it could have been a whisper. No, They won't. They will never be safe. Ever. He said so harshly it caused tears in my eyes. Take. Me. Home. Now. I said trying to fight the tears back.

Look. He said angrily. If you kill yourself, Mark's Army won't stop till your family and friends are dead too. You need to stop him. Before it's to late...He said looking down.

Fine. I said. Just send me back. I closed my eyes and when I opened I was back. Before I did anything I convienced myself of one thing: No more emotion. Mark was going to die. Before anyone gets hurt.

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After reading the first chapter, I was a little freaked out. There's some structural stuff that's kinda weird but who knows. Reading this might even help my work get better... Or just leave me traumatized and entertained at the same time...

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