So I'm planning on maybe making a comic book/manga/graphic novel

[LordOfTheCastle 92]

And I just made a quick page about two of my characters looking through a room full of clothing, just because I had to make it short. (Read it -----> this way, because I'm not Japanese )

 

 

It's not my best work, but it took a while let me know what you think ^^

[Iamkingdomhearts1000 1,170]

It's alright but to be honest i think the artwork needs to be a little more polished and i don't really understand the storyline but all in all nice job :].

[EminaiSai 89]

Pretty good! If you add a bit of shading, it'll be much clearer on what's going on, especially with the trunk full of hats.

[LordOfTheCastle 92]

It's alright but to be honest i think the artwork needs to be a little more polished and i don't really understand the storyline but all in all nice job :].

 

Yeah I can do a lot better than this, I just wanted to get something out there

 

I chose not to shade it because i was going to do it on the computer, but i havent gotten around to it

 

Thanks though

Pretty good! If you add a bit of shading, it'll be much clearer on what's going on, especially with the trunk full of hats.

 

Thanks

 

The trunk actually did have shading in the back, but the scan didnt pick it up

 

I shaded this with pencil:

 

But it took almost a whole pencil to do that o.O so I'm gonna start doing it on the computer

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[Indecypher 495]

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This, would read.