LordOfTheCastle 92 Posted January 10, 2013 And I just made a quick page about two of my characters looking through a room full of clothing, just because I had to make it short. (Read it -----> this way, because I'm not Japanese ) It's not my best work, but it took a while let me know what you think ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Iamkingdomhearts1000 1,170 Posted January 10, 2013 It's alright but to be honest i think the artwork needs to be a little more polished and i don't really understand the storyline but all in all nice job :]. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EminaiSai 89 Posted January 10, 2013 Pretty good! If you add a bit of shading, it'll be much clearer on what's going on, especially with the trunk full of hats. 1 LordOfTheCastle reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LordOfTheCastle 92 Posted January 10, 2013 It's alright but to be honest i think the artwork needs to be a little more polished and i don't really understand the storyline but all in all nice job :]. Yeah I can do a lot better than this, I just wanted to get something out there I chose not to shade it because i was going to do it on the computer, but i havent gotten around to it Thanks though Pretty good! If you add a bit of shading, it'll be much clearer on what's going on, especially with the trunk full of hats. Thanks The trunk actually did have shading in the back, but the scan didnt pick it up I shaded this with pencil: But it took almost a whole pencil to do that o.O so I'm gonna start doing it on the computer Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Indecypher 495 Posted January 10, 2013 *Fwap* This, would read. 1 LordOfTheCastle reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites